The Walk

written by: Kerry Albright
I don’t remember how I ended up walking on that particular trail, but it seemed
like I had always been walking upon it. It had not taken long for the trail to
run into other larger trails, and I met many people also walking on these trails with me. Some of these people became my friends, and others I hardly knew. We all seemed to be heading somewhere, but whenever I asked, no one with me knew.
One day I came upon a man standing in the path as if he was waiting for me.
The man wore a white robe, and wore funny sandals. I asked him if he would walk
with me, and he did. I learned very much as I walked with the man, and I became
excited to tell others walking with us on the path. I asked one man what he
thought of the white robed man’s teachings. But he looked at me confused, and
said, “Are you crazy, there is no man in white robes walking with us?” I asked
another man, and he said, “Leave me alone, I am trying to find a way off of this
path.”
I was disheartened, and I went back to the man, and asked him why the others
could not see him. He told me that I was the only one that had asked for him to
walk with him, and that all the others would have to do was ask, and he would
walk with them as well. I did not understand very much, and my efforts on the
others were fruitless. The walk seemed long, and soon I found others that had
found the path I was walking on. They enjoyed listening to the man with the
white robes too.
Others however began leaving my path. Some of the men noticed
a side path that was laid in gold brick. They said goodbye to us, and took off
on the gold path. Not long after, my path became steep and narrow. Many in the
group decided they would take the path that was not as steep. However the
people that walked with the man in the white robes continued on the hard path
laid in front of them.
I began getting tired, for the path was so very steep. As I laid down to
sleep, the man in the white robes warned me of the dangers. I assured him I
would be alright, and nodded off to sleep. When I awoke I found myself alone on
the trail. It was becoming dark, and I could not see the path very well. For
some reason I had the feeling I was not on the same path as I had been on
before. The path actually became easier to travel, but I longed to talk with
the man in the white robes again. I continued on this new path, and wondrous
things were to be seen.
I soon saw a man in a dark suit beside the trail, as if
he were waiting for me. I did not want to walk with him, but he walked with me
anyhow. He told me things I liked to hear, and he promised me many things. As
I walked with him the road became increasingly darker.
I knew I had to get off of that path, it was not the path I belonged on.
I
wanted so badly to be on the path with the man in the white robes, but I had no
idea how to get back to him. I turned off of the path, and ran into the
wilderness. I ran, and ran, and I could feel the breath of the man in the black
suit upon the back of my neck. I was lost and I did not know what would happen
to me.
Finally I knelt in a small clearing, and cried. I saw the man in the black
suit getting closer, so I yelled at the top of my lungs. Please save me, do not
let it end like this! I saw the man in the white robes again standing at the
edge of the clearing, and I saw the man in the black suit pause.
“He is mine!” the man in the black suit yelled. “He has walked on my path, and
seen the forbidden fruits.”
The man in the white robes stepped closer, and calmly spoke, saying,
“This man may have done these things you say, but let him decide who he wants
to walk with.”
I was so confused, and although the things on the one path were wondrous, I
could not help but feel I needed to be with the man in the white robes. When I
had walked with him, I did not need to see all of the wondrous things in the
world.
When I walked with him I felt complete, and at peace with myself. The
man in black restated all of his promises, saying he could give me the world.
I stood in the meadow, and looked at each of these men fighting over me, and
all I could say was.
“Please Jesus, save me!”
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