(My new script it's original...and I hope to make sequels. This is not
very long and I hope to make the other ones better but this is still good!
N-JOY!)
NO/ONE DIRECTORS CUT.
BY . JOSH HERNANDEZ
THERE ONCE WAS A GIRL NO ONE LIKED.
BULLIED TILL SHE DISAPPEARED . HIDING IN THE WOODS A 6TH
GRADER CRYIN.
HER NAME WAS MONICA SCOTT.
SHE WOULD MAKE THEM PAY.
7 YEARS LAter ...........
DETENTION ROOM. BELLINGHAM HIGH......
SATURDAY SCHOOL 7:00 PM
16 students are in the commons for participating in a prank on the
principle.
MR. DUDIE: YOU KIDS BETTER STOP MESSING AROUND, I CONTACTED YOUR PARENTS AND
THEY AGREE THAT YOU SHOULD STAY AND CLEAN UP THE WHOLE SCHOOL. WHEN YOUR
FINISHED I’LL DROP YOU KIDS OFF.
There are 2 tables with 8 students at each table. The tables are labeled #1
and #2.
Table #1 has: Nick, Angie, Rebecca, Ruth, Leo, Donald, Sarah and Cassie.
Table #2 has: Brooke, Emily, Alexis, Michael, MIyuki, Casey, Luke and
Margaret.
Mr. Dudie separated these tables because each student has some sort of Feud
with each other.
MR.DUDIE: WE’LL START BY CLEANING THE WHOLE SCHOOL. TO MAKE YOUR JOBS FASTER
I’LL PUT YOU GUYS IN GROUPS.
Everyone starts asking question..
CASSIE: CAN WE CHOOSE OUR GROUPS?
MR.DUDIE: NO!
CASSIE: WHY?
MR. DUDIE: STUPID QUESTION...ANYONE ELSE?
Noone else raises there hand, mr. dudie wants everyone to get along so he
takes 6 sheets of paper and tears them up into little squares.
DONALD: WHAT R U DOIN?
MR.DUDIE: I’M GONNA GIVE EACH OF YOU A PIECE OF PAPER AND YOU’RE GONNA WRITE
YOUR NAMES DOWN AND I’LL PUT IT IN A HAT AND PICK GROUPS.
Everyone sighs.... mr. Dudie gets everyones piece of paper and shuffles them
in the hat.
He pulls 4 pieces out.
MR. DUDIE: GOING TO THE 500 WING: NICK, EMILY, LUKE AND REBECCA.
Mr.dudie pulls out another piece of paper.
MR.DUDIE: GOING TO THE 600 WING IS: BROOKE, CASSIE, ALEXIS AND MICHAEL.
MR. DUDIE: GO NOW!
Group 1 and 2 leave the commons...
Mr. Dudie : THE REST OF YOU WILL GO UPSTAIRS.. GOING TO THE 700 WING IS:
SARAH, RUTH, MIYUKI, AND LEO. AND GOING TO THE 800 WING IS KASSEY, MARGARET,
ANGIE, AND DONALD.
DONALD: THIS SUCKS I’M STUCK WITH THE PANSIES!
MARGARET: FUCK YOU...HIPPIE!
KASSEY: CAN’T WE ALL JUST GET ALONG?
MR.DUDIE: STOP! DEAL WITH IT DONALD. REMEMBER I’LL BE WATCHING IN THE
CONTROL ROOM, SECURITY CAMERAS ARE EVERYWHERE DON’T SCREW UP. IF YOU DO
THERE WILL BE CONSEQUENCES.
Group 3 and 4 leave the commons.
Mr.dudie leaves the commons.
EXT. CONTROL ROOM.
Mr. Dudie is watching all the monitors. He looks in camera 1 and sees group
1.
Bam!
MR. DUDIE: WHAT THE HELL!
MR. DUDIE TURNS AROUND AND WALKS TOWARD THE PRINCIPLE’S OFFICE.
OUR POV
We zoom in on the monitor which shows a person dressed in black w/ a white
mask, the figure sneaks in the back door of the school.
Mr. Dudie returns and sits in his chair.
Ext. 500 wing.
Nick is picking up trash from the floor, while Luke is staring at him.
Nick: what?
Luke: what? You got a problem!
Emily looks at Luke.
Emily: stop trying to act tough!
Nick: I don’t need a girl to defend me!
Emily walks in the science lab and slams the door. Rebecca helps Nick clean.
Luke: this sucks! I don’t wanna pick up fucking trash I want to go home!
Rebecca: The sooner we clean the sooner we go home!
Luke: Well hurry up and clean.
Rebecca: lazy ass. (Mumbles)
EXT. 600 wing.
Brooke and Cassie are talking about how they got in detention.
Brooke: So I punched him in the face for being stupid.
Cassie: Well I kicked a guy in the balls for sniffing me.
Alexis and Michael are listening about how Brooke and Cassie are lying about
how they got in detention.
Cassie: so then I......
Alexis cuts her off.
Alexis: You got In detention for calling someone “Poop”.
Michael: Yeah!, and Brooke got in trouble for farting in someones face!
Cassie and Brooke look embarrassed about how they lied
EXT. CONTROL ROOM..
Mr. Dudie is watching the monitors and sees that Luke is smoking. Mr. Dudie
nods his head.
MR. DUDIE: WHEN WILL THAT KID EVER LEARN!
Mr. Dudie turns on the intercom that connects to the 500 wing.
MR. DUDIE: LUKE YOUR ON THIN ICE FOR SMOKING IN SCHOOL, JUST WAIT TILL I GET
DOWN THERE!
Luke starts mooning the security camera, which Mr. Dudie can see on the monitor.
Insulted by Luke’s actions Mr. Dudie gets up and turns around coming face to
face with the figure.
MR. DUDIE: WHO THE HELL ARE YOU.
MR. DUDIE STARES AT THE FIGURE AND SMILES.
MR. DUDIE: I KNOW IT’S YOU LUKE!
The figure motions it’s head from side to side. Mr. Dudie turns around and
sees Luke still mooning the camera. Mr. Dudie knows it’s not Luke. He
quickly turns around when the figure lunges a knife deep in his head. Mr.
Dudie falls to the ground, the figure looks at the monitor and sees the 500
wing and Luke still mooning the camera. The figure leaves the room.
EXT. 500 WING...
Rebecca and nick stop cleaning and Rebecca walks toward Luke.
REBECCA: STOP IT!
LUKE: COME ON HE GETS WHAT HE DESERVES!
REBECCA: YOU DO KNOW THAT HE’S COMING OVER HERE TO GET YOU.
LUKE: I’D LIKE TO SEE HIM CATCH ME.
REBECCA: NICK YOU WANNA GO GET SOMETHING FROM THE POP MACHINE?
NICK: SURE.
Rebecca and Nick walk torward the door that leads to the lobby. When the
door opens.
Rebecca and Nick start to walk back when it opens all the way revealing the
figure.
They start to run torwards Luke scared.
LUKE: MR. DUDIE WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
NICK: I DON’T THINK THAT’S HIM.....COME ON LETS GO!
Nick runs the other way which leads torwards the assembly room.
500 wing...
LUKE: MR. DUDIE STOP ACTING LIKE A RETARD!
Rebecca starts crying. She keeps on yanking Luke to run with her.
The shape walks closer to Luke and pulls out a knife. Luke starts
backing away slowly.
LUKE: PLEASE DON’T!
The shape raises the knife and with one good swipe decapitates Luke.
[REBECCA, ANGIE, LUKE, EMILY]
REBECCA: NO!!!!!!!! (CRIES)
Rebecca runs torward into the science lab and locks the door. She starts
barricading the door with desks. Emily is just staring at her.
Emily: what are you doing?
Rebecca: someone just killed Luke!
Emily: stop trying to scare me! (Panicking)
Rebecca starts to pull Emily away from the door.
EMILY: LET ME......
The door starts shaking .then a knife stabs the door then again and
again.
EMILY: AHHHH!.
Rebecca and Emily run to the corner of the room and hide.
REBECCA: I JUST WANT TO GO HOME!
The door stops shaking......
ETC. 800 WING...
Donald is picking up trash from the floor and Kassey is asleep, Angie and
Margaret are laying on the ground looking up at the skylight. The rain is
falling hard on the skylight.
Donald just stares at Angie and Margaret.
DONALD: WILL YOU PANSIES COME OVER HERE AND HELP ME.
ANGIE: JUST DO IT SO WE CAN GO HOME
Donald starts getting mad.
DONALD: MARGARET COME AND HELP ME.
MARGARET: ASK KASSEY!
DONALD: KASSEY IS ASLEEP AND BESIDES HE WONT BE MUCH HELP BUT YOU GUYS CAN
HELP.
ANGIE: JUST GIVE US 5 FUCKING......
Suddenly the window next to Donald shatters . Angie and Margaret get up and
stare at the broken window. Donald starts to walk closer.
ANGIE: GET AWAY FROM THERE!
MARGARET: DONALD IT’S NOT SAFE LETS JUST GET MR. DUDIE!
Donald starts walking closer not listening to anything the others have to
say. He sticks his head out the window. Donald sees nothing and is about to
leave with Angie and Margaret when the figure pops up and pulls Donald out
the window throwing Donald off the roof. Angie and Margaret saw what just
happened they start to run away when the figure climbs through the window.
They run to the 500 wing.
[ DONALD, ANGIE, MARGARET, KASSEY]
EXT.500 WING...
Angie and Margaret are running torwards the 500 wing. They run torward the
doors and walk in. Angie starts to run when Margaret sops.
MARGARET: PLEASE GIVE ME A SECOND.
ANGIE: WHO THE HELL WAS THAT!
MARGARET: WHERE’S KASSEY?
EXT. 800 WING..
Kassey wakes up and sees the figure standing over him.
KASSEY: DONALD?
The figure whacks Kassey in the face with a hammer.
[ DONALD, ANGIE, MARGARET, KASSEY]
EXT. 700 WING..
Miyuki, Sarh, Leo and Ruth are sitting on the floor at the end of the hall
talking. Leo and Ruth are talking while Ruth and Sarah listen
RUTH: SO THEN I SAID “UTTER? I THOUGHT YOU SAID BUTTER!”
Leo starts laughing, Miyuki and Sarah just stare at Ruth being stupid.
Miyuki scoffs and rolls her eyes.
MIYUKI : YOU GUYS ARE SO FUCKING STUPID!
RUTH: YOU ARE SO NEGATIVE!
LEO: GOOD ONE RUTH!
RUTH: LEO!
MIYUKI: I AM SO GLAD YOU DIE FIRST RUTH!
RUTH: WHAT?
MIYUKI: NOTHING.
Screams are heard from far away. Ruth and Leo get up.
LEO: WHAT WAS THAT?
RUTH: WANNA GO CHECK IT OUT.( SCARED)
MIYUKI: CAN ME SARAH STAY HERE?
RUTH: SURE ME AND LEO DON’T WANT YOU GUYS TO COME ANYWAYS!
SARAH: CAN YOU JUST LEAVE! YOUR GIVING ME A HEADACHE.
Ruth and Leo walk off into the other hall.
EXT. CORRIDOR
Ruth and Leo are in the Corridor and see 2 doors on opposite sides. Ruth
knows there gonna split up so she chooses the door on the right side.
RUTH: I’LL GO IN THIS ONE.
LEO: OKAY..... BE CAREFUL.
Ruth rolls her eyes and walks in the door.
Ext. History Room.
Ruth starts walking forward into the class. She desperately wants to go
home. She walks torwards the desk and sees Nick laying on the ground dead.
He has an arrow stuck in his head. Ruth backs away in tears.
Ruth starts to back away when she bumps into someone. Ruth turns around and
comes face to face with Leo!
Ruth: oh my god Leo!
Leo: what’s wrong.
Ruth sees someone behind Leo.
Ruth: watch out!
The killer pulls out a machete and swipes Leo’s head off. The killer makes
his attention torward Ruth.
Ruth: please don’t kill me!
Ruth runs to Nick and pulls the arrow out of his head. She gets it and
starts running torward the killer.
Ruth: you asshole!
Ruth raises the arrow and stabs the killer in the stomach. The killer looks
at the arrow in there stomach.
Ruth: oh my god!
The killer pulls it out and tosses it to the floor. The killer raises the
machete and brings it down hard on her shoulder. Ruth falls on the ground
crying. The killer raises the machete again in her stomach then again then
again.
[ LEO, MIYUKI, SARAH, RUTH]
Ext. 600 wing.
Brooke and Cassie are walking around without Alexis and Michael. Cassie is
smoking a cigarette while Brooke is trying to use her cell phone.
Brooke looks frustrated she walking around everywhere to get bars on her
cell phone to call home.
Brooke: dammit! I can’t get more than 3 bars on this stupid thing.
Cassie: I think it’s cool how we are all stuck in school overnight and it’s
raining so freaking hard out.
Brooke walks away to get bars on her phone. She walking but she’s not
looking where she’s going , she keeps on walking while looking at the
phone.
Brooke: yes! 4 bars just need1more.
Brooke keeps on watching the phone the 5th bar starts to appear.
Brooke: yes!
Brooke walks further till she bumps into something. She looks up from her
phone to see the killer.
Brooke: ahhhh!
Brooke starts backing away then bumps into the wall. She’s trapped!
The killer raises the machete when Cassie jumps on the killer’s back trying
to help Brooke.
Brooke watches as Cassie is on top of the killer.
Cassie jumps off and now the killer is paying his attention to her. She runs
to a chair and breaks it over the killer’s head. The killer doesn’t respond
to the attack. The killer picks Cassie up by the neck with one hand. Then in
the other he raises the machete and impales her to the wall.
Brooke: no!
Brooke runs to the nearest classroom and locks the door. She sees the desk
and slides under it. She hears the door starting to break down.
Brooke pulls a chair in front of herself to avoid being seen. The killer
walks in the classroom and looks around. Brooke hears footsteps coming
closer to her hiding spot.
Brooke: please god. (Under breath)
The footsteps stop Brooke hears nothing. Has the killer left? Brooke sighs
with relief then sticks her head out from the teachers desk. BOOM. Brooke
turns to see the killer standing on the desk. Before she can scream the
killer slams the machete in her face.
Ext. Corridor
Angie and Margaret are in the same Corridor that Emily’s group was in.
Angie looks around and sees a large window that shows perfect view of the
moon.
Angie sees Margaret sitting on the floor by the shadows.
Angie: Margaret get up we have to go.
Margaret is crying
Margaret: I have to rest we’ve been running for quite some time.
Angie: get the fuck up bitch!
Margaret: no!
Angie turns around away from Margaret and walks to the big window.
Angie: I don’t want to be alone.
Angie starts crying.
Margaret is about to get up and walk with her when a hand comes out
from the shadows and pulls her in.
Margaret (muffled): help! Ahh!
Angie turns around and sees that Margaret is gone.
Angie: Margaret!
Angie steps away from the window and the moon light shines into the shadows
letting Angie see Margaret’s decapitated head!
Angie: AHHHH!
An arm goes over Angie and pulls her in a room.
Angie: let me go!
Emily tries to calm her down
Emily: shhh! It’s okay were hiding.
[ DONALD, ANGIE, MARGARET, KASSEY]
Ext. 600 Wing
Int. Classroom 7B
Michael is sitting on one of the students desk and he pulls out a cigarette
and lights it.
Michael: oh...that’s better.
Int.Classroom 8B
Alexis stops cleaning and sits down.
Alexis: ugh....better go get Michael it’s kinda scary here.
Ext. 7B
A figure comes behind Michael and raises a sharpened pencil.
Michael looks to the window and sees a reflection of the killer behind him.
Michael: Ahh!
The killer puts it’s hands over Michael’s mouth and raises the pencil then
brings it down slamming the pencil into Michael’s temple. The killer throws
Michael to the ground.
Alexis enters through the front door and walks to wear Michael was.
She sees him on the ground.
Alexis: Michael? Why are you sleeping?
Alexis reaches down to wake him up and feels wetness on her hand.
Alexis: what the?
A shadow lurks over Alexis.
Alexis turns around and comes face to face with the killer! The killer
Has a metal pole in it’s hand and slams it on her head killing her.
Ext. Restoom
Miyuki and Sarah are in the restroom.
Miyuki is on the counter and Sarah is in one of the stalls
Miyuki starts to make a grossed out face.
Miyuki covers her nose.
Miyuki: oh my god! Sarah what did you eat!?
Sarah sounds constipated.
Sarah: Ugh......I had tuna casserole and ate it all.
Miyuki: I’m gonna go into the hall for some fresh air.
Miyuki walks out into the hall. And walks to the window at the end of the
hall. The killer is seen behind Miyuki but the killer sneaks into the
restroom.
Miyuki stops looking out the window and walks back to the restroom. MIyuki
walks into the restroom and sees Sarah laying on the floor dead with an
ice pick in her eye.
The killer runs out of one the stalls and lunges at Miyuki. Miyuki dodges
and runs out of the restroom.
Ext. Commons
Rebecca, Angie, and Emily are out into the commons.
Rebecca: I tried the front door it’s locked!
Angie: id there another way out?!
Emily: ........the basement. It’s at the other end of the hall.
Ext. Hall
Miyuki starts to run as fast as she could she keeps on running but now
she can’t stop. She sees a window the one that you can see everyone in the
commons she can’t stop! She runs into the window breaking through it and she
lands on Emily.
Emily: help it’s the killer!
Angie and Rebecca: AHHHH!
Angie and Rebecca get metal poles and start beating Miyuki with it.
Miyuki is getting beaten.
Miyuki: ugh...stop
Angie and Rebecca start hitting Miyuki harder with the poles till Rebecca
sticks the pole in MIYUKI’s head.
Emily throws Miyuki off of her and Angie screams.
Angie: it’s Miyuki!
Rebecca: were murderers!
Killer: and so am I!
Rebecca turns around to look to see who said that and the killer brings down
a sledgehammer bashes her brains in.
Angie and Emily look at the killer.
The killer takes off the mask.
Angie: M......Monica?
Monica: that’s right. You think that you can terrorize me and not get away
with it.
Emily: so why?!...you kill everyone even those who never did anything to
you!
Monica: there’s plenty more who terrorized me but I’ll deal with them later
now it’s time for you two to die.
Emily grabs Angie and both run to where the basement is.
Monica: they think they can run away but they’ll soon be surprised.
Monica walks to where they ran.
Ext. Basement
Emily and Angie are at the foot of the stairs and both of them run down the
stairs and start looking for the exit door.
Angie: where’s the fucking basement!
Emily: oh shit.
The door opens upstairs and Emily and Angie can hear laughter.
Emily and Angie run to a dead end all they can do now is wait and watch.
Monica walks downstairs and sees to helpless not-so innocent girls
scared.....
Monica: you think you can get away with it. Bully whoever you want. Well
paybacks a bitch. So you know what I’m gonna do?
Monica pulls out a pair of hooks.
Emily: oh no!
Angie: please don’t.
Monica walks closer to them.
Monica: I killed all your friends....and now it’s your turn!
Screams are heard from outside the school....but they soon stop all you can
hear is laughter of the psychotic girl who was once bullied till she
dissapeared....But now she’s back and she’s still not done...
THE END