Change Of Heart

Author: Mara
Email: maraj_99@yahoo.com
Chapter 1:
The Meeting


***The Girls At Montana's House***

"Can you please hurry up Peggy"? asked Montana.
"Yeah, yeah I'm coming" she answered back
. Nicole, Alyson and Mara just laughed at the other two arguing. The five girls were planning on seeing a new movie which was coming out tonight.
"I can't wait to see it, I heard The Blair Witch Project is so wicked" said Mara. Finally Peggy was done so they left.

***The Guys In J's Hotel Room***

"So guys, what do you wanna do tonight"? asked Rich.
Scott was looking through the paper and suggested on a idea.
" How about we go see a movie"?
" Yeah I heard that The Blair Witch Project was supposed to be good" Abs thought aloud.
"Then lets go see it, there's one startingin 30 min and maybe we'll meet some fine looking birds" J smiled. The five of them left.

***At The Movies, well in the theatre actually***

"Yo Alyson, dare me to throw some popcorn at that couple in front of us"? asked Mara.
"Yeah yeah, I dare ya" Peggy laughed.
So she threw it and it hit them then the couple turned around and gave the girls crap.
Nicole laughed out "That was great."
Montana turned around and spotted five guys laughing along with them. " Hey, what the hell are you laughing at"? One guy with a eybrow ring said
"Sorry 'bout that. By the way I'm J, whats your name"?
" None of your damn bussiness" spat Peggy.
"Whoa, thats the fiestest bird I've ever seen" laughed a guy with very nice eyebrows name Abs.
Well, after the movie, the girls rushed outta the theatre as fast as they could. "
Let's go quick before those two come out"
*they were talking about the couple that they threw popcorn at*

Chapter 2:
The Confrontation


While leaving the theatre, J and Abs walked up to Peggy and Montana.
"Why do you birds have such bad attitudes and dress like one of the lads" they asked.
Before they could answer five girls whom Peggy and Montana knew walked up and said "Why are you guys wasting your time with these girls? They won't go for you." the first girl said.
"And why wouldn't they"? asked a guy with a shaven head and tanned skin, his name was Sean.
*nothing rude being said here* "Well because they are lesbians" she smiled.
The girls laughed.
"Fuck you, you stupid bitch" screamed Nicole.
Soon enough all the girls weere screaming and swearing at each other.
A guy with spikey hair said " don't ya think we should stop this cause in a way we kinda started it."? His name was Scott.
The guys stopped the fight and told the other girls to leave now or else. So they left.
J attempted to make conversation again.
He asked "whats your names and if ya don't mind me asking, are you really lesbians"?
" Well you guys seem nice enough and you got rid of those pieces of shit so I guess we could talk to ya" Alyson said.
"Well i'm Alyson, this is Nicole, Montana, L'mara who we call Mara and heres Peggy" she said pointing to each girl.
"Cool" Abs said smiling at Peggy.
But she didn't notice.
"So how old are you birds"? asked a guy with short blondish-brown hair and very nice, blue eyes name Rich. Nicole answered
"I'm 17, Mara is 19, Montana here is 22 turning 23 in a few days, Peggy and Alyson are both 20.
*Sorry but I made everyones age match up*.
Sean was curious so he asked again" are you really lesbians"?
The other guys just gave him a look. Sean hoped that they would say no, well he really didn't care about the others as long as the pretty girl name Nicole said she wasn't.
" I dunno why but people think we are lesbians because we hang out all the time with each other and we don't really communicate with other people. We would like to but it's not as easy cause we now have a reputation of being gay." said Mara calmy.
Montana finished off by saying "Which I find really weird because those five girls hang out with each other just as much as we do but they don't get called lesbians. But we don't mind anymore cause we're used to it. We dress like this for security."
They talked abit more about the other five girls. Sean had an idea.
"What if you birds come along with us tomorrow to Wonderland"?
"Well..."Alyson started.
"Come on, it will be fun. Please." Scott pleaded with puppy dog eyes.
"And y'all gotta gress like the beautiful birds that you are" smirked J.
"Well, we'll see about that." Peggy smiled at Abs but he didn't see.
"So is that a yes"? asked Rich.
"Yeah I guess" said Mara.
"Well, we are staying in the hotel called The Mystic Deluxe and we are in room 555." explained Abs.
"Okay so what time should we come around"? asked Nicole but her question was sort of directed to Sean.
"Ummm...How about 9:00am" said Scott.
Great I hate waking up before 12" laughed Montana.
Everyone said their goodbyes and left.

***At The Hotel In Abs Room***

"I can't wait 'till we go to Wonderland, I really like that one girl, I think her anme was Mara" Scott said thinking about tomorrow.
"i agree. That Montana girl was hot" J said thinking about her.
"Well it's late and we gotta get up early so I suggest that we get some sleep." Abs reminded them.
They all agreed and went to bed.

***The Girls At Montana's House***

"Omigod, Abs is sooo fine but he probably doesn't like me" Peggy said getting into bed.
They were all gonna stay at Montana's house cause she lived closes to the guys hotel.
"No way man,Sean is so cute. He's like a big teddy bear" said Nicole laughing.
"Oh man Sean? Umm, I think J is so hot, he's got this Mr.Cool attitude to him" Montana said happily.
"I think is the best looking of them all. He has these really sexy eyes and a cute smile" Alyson thought aloud.
All girls noticed Mara bing quiet.
"So Mara who's your pick"? Mara blushed a bit
" Well I like the spikey-haired guy, I think his name was Scott.
Mara was never one to express her feelings about guys.
"What"? screamed Peggy, "he looks like a dinosaur."
Finally they all finished laughing at Mara. "Well what are we gonna wear tomorrow"? asked Nicole.
"Well I have no girl clothes really, so what am I supposed to do"? reminded Mara.
"Hey, why don't we borrow some of Sarah. We'll phone her tonight and then go over really in the moring and get dressed. They all agreed and went to bed.

Chapter 3

***The Next Day***

"So, who wants to knock"? asked Montana.

Montana was wearing blue flares and a white tank top. Nicole was wearing black flares and a navy blue thick strap tank top.

Alyson was wearing white capris and a yellow halter top. Peggy was in jean capris with a baby blue baby tee. And Mara was wearing cargo pants and a red tank top.
"I'll knock" said Peggy feeling brave.
Sean answered the door.
"Hey, are you the same girls from the movies"? he asked kinda surprised by the way they looked.
"I bet he doesn't like me" thought Nicole in her head.
The girls said yes and then Sean let them in.
When the rest of the guys saw the girls they were surprised also. "Wow, you birds look great"said J who couldn't stop staring at Montana.
Everything got quiet for a few seconds so Scott said something "Well I kinda forgot who's who so can you please re-introduce yourselves"? Mara spoke up "I'm Mara, this here is Nicole and Peggy. And standing over there is Alyson and Montana." "Well sorry to break this up but don't ya think we should start to leave"?Rich pointed out. "Yah, I agree" said Abs who couldn't help but stare at Peggy. When she noticed, Abs turned away.
"Oh and one more thing, if ya don't mind can you not call us birds"? asked Alyson. " Yeah sure" they all agreed. They were gonna be riding in a van that the guys said they borrowed from some friend of theirs.*they didn't really borrow it* Once they got inside it was then Rich realized that they forgot to clean up the inside.
"Hey, look at all this 5ive stuff everywhere" said Alyson. There was cd's, posters, pictures and schedules evreywhere. "Wait, I've heard of 5ive they got some cool music. But i've never seen what they look like or their names" Nicole laughed as she said this. The girls thought that this was weird but they just decided to forget about it.
Rich, Sean, Abs, Scott and J just smiled at each other. When they arrived, the park wasn't that full because this was the weekend of a summer festival being held. "Hey, I wanna go on Drop Zone, please, who wants to go on with me"? Alyson pleaded. No one except Rich wanted to. " I'll go on with ya" he smiled. Just as they were about to leave Montana called out " Make sure to meet us at the pizza place just uo this path here."
They said yeah and left. J got together his courage and asked Montana something."Montana did you wanna go on The Vortex with me"? he hope she would say yes. "I'd love to" she replied. They left together. The others walked around a bit. Then they came across the ride called Jet Scream. "Does anyone wanna go on that ride"? No one heard so he asked again but only Nicole was listening. "uhh...that ride looks kinda.." before she could finish Sean grabbed her and brougth her in line. Abs, Scott, Mara and Peggy decided to go on The Fly.
"Peggy, um...uh..did you..um wanna sit with me"? Abs asked nervously. "Sure" was her reply. She was so happy that he asked her. "I guess it's just you and me" Mara said in a tone like she didn't care but inside she was bursting with joy.

Chapter 4

***Alyson and Rich at Drop Zone***

"This is a pretty long line,” said Alyson trying to make conversation. "Yeah, it's pretty, pretty like you" Rich said, he was now regrettingsaying such a cheesy line. "Thanx Rich, I like you to" she replied then turned her head so hecouldn't see her blush."I think you are very beautiful" Rich said sencerely. "Thank you very much, that’s very sweet" she smiled. Rich smiledleaned in and kissed her softly on the lips. She pulled away and smiled thenleaned up for anothr kiss but this one was more deep. ***J and Montana on The Vortex*** "Oh man, this ride really sucks" J said bored. They were on the still. "You can say that again" Montana said just as bored. "K, this ride realy sucks" laughed J. This made Montana laugh then smile when she noticed J staring at her.

They are off the ride now."What"? she asked uncomfortable. "Nothing, I'm just admiring how gorgeous you are" he answered backsweetly. She was blushing so she turned her head. He grabbed a hold of her andtried to give her a kiss he did but as soon as their lips touched she pulledaway. He looked hurt. Montana spit out her gum. "I just wanted to get rid of my gum" she smiled. He grabbed her again and they kissed for a long time.

***Sean and Nicole going on Jet Scream***

"Wow, that ride looks kinda scary" said Nicole nervously." Don't worry ,I'll be right there beside to you" he smiled. He reallywanted to kiss but he wasn't sure if or when he should do it. "What would you do if I kissed you right now"? Nicole thouhgt for a minute and said "I'd probably do this. She leaned up and kissed him lightly on the lips. He smiled then he kissed her againand slowly opened his mouth and let their tongues become one.*lol, thats nasty

****Abs, Scott, Peggy and Mara on The Fly***

Abs was siting with Peggy at the back of the first cart.* each cart had6 two-seaters* Scott and Mara sat at the very front. During the ride Mara looked back and was shocked. "Hmmm, they don't move slow do they"? Scott laughed when he saw Abs and Peggy making out.
"What"? asked Mara said when she noticed Scott looking at her. "I don'tknow why I came here" she finished. "What, I’m glad you came here. It's been fun so far. I think you are the most stunning bird...uh...girl I’ve ever seen" he said. "Well that’s besides Alicia Silverstone" he joked. They leaned incloser and closer. They were just about to kiss when they heard "whoo whoo, go Mara, go Scott" coming from behind them. "Of course" Scott said disappointed in not getting to kiss Mara. "Sorry buddy, couldn't resist" Abs said feeling bad for what they did.When the ride was over they went to go meet the others at the pizzarestuarant. It doesn't only sell pizza.

***At The Restaurant***

"This is good pizza" said Alyson satisfied with her food. They allagreed that their food was good but expensive. Alyson along with Nicole andAbs

ordered pizza. Mara, Peggy and Rich got salad. While J and Scott had nachos. When they finished eating, they decided to go to the waterpark. "I think we should give our stomachs some time to rest" J pointed out. "Yes daddy" joked Sean.

***30 Minutes later***

The guys went to their change rooms and the same with the girls. "Wait, before we get to close to each other, do you have any secrets we should know about you guys"? J asked curiosly."Well no but how bout you guys"? "Nope were clean" said Rich smiling a half smile. All the guys felt badfor not telling the girls who they really were.

Chapter 5

***Outside The Changeroom***

When everyone was done changing Nicole suggested an idea.
"How about we go on Black Hole." *This is a water slide with the tubes attached and the water slide is a black tube so it's dark inside and you can't see anything* "Sure sounds good. So who wants to go with who"? asked J. He knew exactly what he was pulling. Everyone got really quiet. "Well Alyson, if you want i'll go wit ya"? asked Rich hoping she'd say yes. "Okay cool" she replied.*I know it's kinda obvious who asks who but hey* "Well if ya ask me I think that Abs should just go with Peggy considering they like each other and they have already snogged" smiled J. Abs didn't expect J to tell anyone that they kissed. Peggy was just standing there tryin gnot to blush cause everyone was looking at her. This made Sean and Scott burst out laughing. "Hey Sean I wouldn't talk, Nicole told me that use kissed to" Peggy blurted out. Scott kept laughing but Sean stopped cause now it was his turn to turn red. "Whatever, Montana do you wanna go together"? J asked "Sure,i'd love that" Montana said.

"Okay well I'm gonna go with Abs so we can get to know each other better" Peggy smiled. When they were leaving to get in line Mara said "I think they've gotten to know each other well enough."she was remembering the incident on The Fly. Nicole and Scott laughed. Sean got up his courage again and asked Nicole "Nicole did you wanna go with me"? "Okay." They left for the line.*While everyone was deciding who to go with they were still walking to the waterslide* So Scott and Mara continued walking in silence.

"The line is growing pretty fast" said Scott trying to break the tension between the two. Before they got on the ride."Umm..Mara can I talk to you"? "Yeah sure." Scott pulled her out of line and into a corner. "What did yo..." she was cut off before she could finish by Scott kissing her. He pulled away. "Sorry, I just wanted to do that in case I never get the chance again" he smiled sweetly. Mara smiled back and they got back in line.
*I'm not gonna describe the water ride and they did go on other rides, it's just that i don't wanna go into detail about all that*

***In The Parking Lot***

"Well, we had a great time, thank you for inviting us" the girls said as they got to the guys van. "No. Thank you. It wouldn't of been as much fun if you girls weren't here with us" thanked the guys back. So they all piled into the van and were on their way home. "What time do you have to bring your friends van back"? asked Alyson.

"What are you talking about"? aked Rich confused. Then the guys remembered what they had said earlier. "Oh, we gotta get it back to him tomorrow night" Rich corrected himself hoping that the girls wouldn't notice. All of them just forgot about except Nicole."Something weird is goingon here" she thought to herself. The four guys felt bad and hoped that they wouldn't find out. Besides, the girls trusted them now.

***Back at The Mystic Deluxe***

"Why are we stopping here"? Montana asked confused because they were at the hotel instead of her house. "I gotta go get something" Sean said gettin gout of the van. "Why don't I just get my car here? asked Montana.*She had drove it here but the guys wanted to take the van and on the way home they decided to just drive the girls straight home*

They waited and waited. Rich couldn't take it no more. "Alyson, I gotta tell you something."Okay"she said nervously. So they walked off to his room to talk. "Uhh, don't be long cause Sean shouldn't be much longer" Peggy reminded them before they left. "I can't beleive him, he's gonna blow our cover, man can't he ever keep a secret"? Scott whispered to J and Abs. "What secret"? demanded Nicole. She knew something was up. "We've got to talk to ya girls" Abs said quietly.

Chapter 6
The Truth

Just as the guys were about to tell the girls the truth Ritchie and Alyson came back smiling ang holding hands. "What"? thought Scott. Rich said "I just had to tell Alyson how I felt towards her, I think i'm in love with her. I know it's only been like a day but I now believe in love at first site." he smiled. The other guys sighed in relief. "Good thin gyou came back, we were just about to tell them who we were" Abs whispered. "So are you gonna tell us this secret or not" Nicole asked well demanded.

"It's not important anymore" Scott said hoping they would forget about it. "Whatever" Montana said very annoyed with all the whispering that was going on. Nicole looked at each guy but they couldn't look back at her. "I think she knows something" J said in his head. Finally Sean came back except he was empty handed. "What took you so long and what did you get"? asked Ritchie confused. "Well I went to get my watch but I forgot that I had it on already" Sean smiled foolishly. Everyone looked at him like he was crazy. "Well we have to get to Alana's so can we leave now"? begged Peggy who was also mad at the guys. So they left to drive the girls home.

***The Next Morning***

"Uhhh, I'm so tired"said Montana. "I don't wanna get up besides it's only 11:30am"Mara complained. She always complained when the others woke her up when she didn't want to be woken up. She and Montana like to sleep in. The other three were already up and were trying to wake up the two girls.

"Lets go out to eat breakfast" said Peggy. "Yeah, how about Golden Griddle" suggested Nicole. This is a real restaurant. "MARA GET UP NOW" screamed Alyson in Maras ear. She shot up and screamed "Holy sh**, are you crazy." "Hey lets see what Montana's reaction is" said Nicole. So they all went over to where Montana was sleeping. "MONTANA GET UP NOW" they screamed in her face. She just rolled over and said to shut up. The girls laughed. "OMG, J what are you doing in here naked. That got her attention. She got and looked around "Where"? They laughed at her then dragged her outta bed. She finally agreed to get ready. ***30 Minutes Later***

"Okay, lets go" said Nicole as she pushed everyone out the door. They were gonna go to the Scarborough Town Center. So who is driving"? asked Alyson. "Well my car is still at the guys hotel so we can catch a bus and pick it up. They got o nthe bus and drove to hotel thengot her car. Montana drove a black Mercedes Benz.* the mall mentoned is real* ***At Golden Griddle***

"What would you ladies like this afternoon"? the waitress asked politely. They decided on the same thing. "Can we all get pancakes"?asjed Mara. "Okay then, won't be long. And with that she left. "I can't wait till tonight" Alyson thought outloud by mistake. "Whats tonight" asked Peggy curiously. "Oh well, Ricthie's gonna take me dancing. Nicole just rolled her eyes. "Whats you problem" Alyson asked Nicole when she saw this"? "Nothing" she replied. The girls sat and talked while they were waiting for their food.

***Back At The Mystic Deluxe***

"So what do you guys wanna do tonight"? asked Scott. "Well, I'm going dancing with Alyson so I can't do whatever you guys are doing" said Ritchie bringing it up again. "Holy g*d, how many times are you gonna bring that up.

We don't care anymore" J said irritated. "Sorry, I'm just excited." "Let him be. He's in love" Sean said concentrating on the word love. "Ha, she won't be in love with ya when she finds out that you lied to her" Abs reminded him. "IF she finds out and besides you guys are just as guilty also" Rich spat back. All the guys grew quiet. "Isay that we don't tell them unless they ask or something" Scott decided. "And what if they see us in a mag or something"? J said. "Then we explain that we didnt think it was impotant" said Sean and they all agreed except Abs. "Abs, are you in"? they asked. "Whatever" was his reply. Abs looked at the clock. "Hey, lets go or we wil be late for the autograph session at the mall" " Which mall was it"? asked Scott. "The scarborough town center. With that they left.

Chapter 7
The Truth

Chapter 7 part one

***At The Mall***

"Lets go to Dynamite" suggested Nicole. "Yeah, this is a good store. I wanna buy that long skirt and sweater i saw last week" said Montana. All the girls looked at her. "Since when did you start liking those clothes"? they asked. "For awhile now" she smiled. So they went into the store an bought some new outfits. They must have visited every clothing store in the mall. "Lets go to the foodcourt cause i'm starving" said Peggy. "Yeah, then can we go to HMV cause theres a new CD i wanna buy" Mara said.
"What CD"? asked Alyson. "Oh it's nothing." "Come on. Tell us" they all begged."Fine it's Planet Pop 2000" she said. They all looked at her like she was an alien. "Wow, little miss ganster rapper only here has changed her sytle in music" they all laughed. They had KFC when they got to the foodcourt.

***On Their Way To HMV***

There was a big group of girls screaming outside HMV when they got there. "What are you screaming for"? Peggy asked one of the girls. "Well 5ive are gonna be here for an autograph session" she said. Peggy ran back to the girls. "Hey, 5ive are gonna be here for autograph session, maybe we can get an autograph and see what they look like." So they waited in line until it was their turn. When they were almost up to the front Alyson looked over and saw who 5ive were. "OMG, those a**holes"

Chapter 8
The Truth

"What? Who?" asked Mara confused. "Look, thats 5ive, the guys we were with yesterday. They lied they said they had no secrets they said" said Nicole. I knew it she thought. "I wouldn't of been so angry if they would of told us straight out but they lied so that really pisses me off" yelled Mara. As the girls moved up in the line they came face to face with the guys.

J managed to say "hi. how are use today"? "You know, I thought you guys really liked us. I can't believe how nice guys like you could be such a**holes" screamed Peggy. They were causeing a scene and girls were looking at them. "Why are you yelling at 5ive? Who do you think you are?" one girl yelled.
"Oh shut up. Please" yelled Alyson. Just as the two groups of girls were starting to fight(not psyhical) Abs spoke up."Hey stop. Peggy we'll meet you and your friends after this okay"? "Get lost losers" Mara spat back. The girls took one last look at the guys but the guys couldn't make eye contact. "I'm tired of this sh**"said Nicole and they left.

***Back At Montanas House***

Alyson was crying because she really liked Rich and she thought that he really cared about her. "Hey Alyson, don't cry okay, you'll be alright" Montana said crying herself. "But your crying" she replied.
"Well I uhh poked myself in the eye" she laughed. Everyone laughed cause Montana never cries. "I can't believe that they lied to us" Mara said to herslf thinking about Scott and how he made her feel. "Thats why they had all that 5ive crap in the van" Peggy realized. Nicole just thought to herself "i knew something was up." Mara, Alyson, Peggy and Nicole got their stuff together and went home.

***Mara At Her House***

"I need to relax, oh man i'm so tired from shopping" she said to herslef. She decided to get into comfortable clothes and chat on the internet. She logged on and went into TeenChat.*i know she is an adult but it's cool to chat in teen rooms*

maraj_99: Hello, any males here age 19? press 99
johnjr_85 : 99
hackertwin: anyone from Ontario?
Justinluva: me
inluvwith5: me 2
maraj_99 : johnjr_85, i've talked to you before. your sick so i ain't cahtting with ya
hackertwin: you both PM me and we can start a conference
MEBSCOTT JUST JOINED THE ROOM
HACKERTWIN JUST LEFT THE ROOM
JUSTINLUVA JUST LEFT THE ROOM
INLUVWITH5 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
johnjr_85 : fine then, i don't wanna chat with you either
JOHNJR_85 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
mebscott : i guess it's just you and me
maraj_99 : yeah, a/s/l
mebscott : 19/male/england but i'm in toronto now

visiting my friends. And you?
maraj_99 : 19/female/toronto
mebscott : whats your name?
maraj_99 : whats your name?
maraj_99 : Mara for short
mebscott : are you serious?
maraj_99 : yeah, whats yours?
mebscott : scott
No one wrote anything for a minute.
maraj_99 : umm.. i gotta go. bye
MARAJ_99 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
mebscott : wait
MEBSCOTT JUST LEFT THE ROOM

***Alyson At Her House***

"Hello, Shelly? Anyone home?" Alyson asked when she got into her house. "Yeah, I'm just making a sandwich here in the kitchen" her younger sister replied. "Okay, I'll be in my room." She went to her room and turned on the T.V. She put on MuchMusic and caught the ending of MuchOnDemand. "Okay, we are gonna end the show with our last request from who"? asked Sook-Yin Lee.*she's a host* On the phone: "Umm..my name is Rich" "Where are you from Rich"? "Well i'm from England but i'm visiting friends here in Toronto" "Cool ,what did you wanna request"?

"UMM i'd like to see IT'S THINGS YOU DO by 5ive and dedicate it to a girl whom i love name Alyson" "Okay then. Bye Rich" End of phone of conversation. Alyson shot her head towards the T.V. when she heard her name. She watched the video in shock. "I can't believe him" she started to cry." I love him but I hate him." After the video was done she turned off the T.V. and phoned her two bestfriends. Nicole and Montana. 3 WAY- RING RING RING Nicole: hello, who's calling? Alyson: it's me ali, i'm gonna three-way with montana nicole: k Alyson: hello Montana: hi, who's calling? Alyson: it's me, ali and nikki Montana: Hey, what's up? Alyson: well, i've got something to to tell ya both Nicole: what? Alyson: Rich requested a song for me on MuchMusic Nicole: haha. Which song? i'm a loser by Rich Montana: lol probably was lol Alyson: shut up, he ain't no loser. it was by 5ive, IT'S THE THINGS YOU DO.

Montana: are you defending Rich? Nicole: you still like him? after everything he's done to you?
Alyson: yes. okay.i can't help it. besides, what they wasn't all that bad. maybe they wanted see if we would like them for them Montana: Oh please. anyway i gotta go, i've got something on the stove. bYE Nikki. Alyson:bye Nicole:bye Alyson: do you think she is angry at me caue I still like Rich? Nicole: i dunno. just let her cool off. it's been a tiring day for all of us.

Chapter 9
The Truth

***Montana At Home***

"Jake, are you hungry"? Montana asked when she went back to the kitchen. "Yes. But what are you making"replied her little brother."Sandwiches" "Okay then. Make mine ham." She continued watching T.V. when something on T.V. caught her attention. It was a live FIVE interview at MuchMusic.

**the interview**

INTERVIEWER: Hello. Here we are with 5ive. Please state your names.
ABS: I'm Abidin but call me Abs
SCOTT: Me be Scott *remember that*
RICH: I'm Richard but call be Ritchie SEAN: Sean here
J: I'm J
"G*d J, why do you have to be so hot"? Montana asked herself.
"Are those sandwiches done yet"? Jake asked annoyed that Montana was watching T.V. instead of making his food. His voice brought her back to reality. "Yeah coming" she replied but just stood there. She finally left and came back with Jake's food. **BACK TO INTERVIEW**

INTERVIEWER: So do you guys have anyone special in your life right now?
*all the guys looked sad*
ABS: Well i'm interested in a girl but we got off on the wrong foot.
SEAN: I have no girlfriend
SCOTT: Same here
Rich just shakes his head in response.
J: Montana, if your watching this, I want you to know that even though i've only known you for a bit I love you
All the guys look athim like he's crazy.
INTERVIEWER: So you guys have a new signle coming out, right?
RICH: Yeah it's call...
Rich was cut off by Jake changing channels. "Hey sis, the girl that guy was talking about had the same name as you" said Jake. "Yeah I know" she replied. Then whispered to herself "Lucky girl."

***Peggy At Home***

"Oh man, what a day" said Peggy who just walked into her house. She looked at the clock. It was 5:00pm. "Hey Ash, are you home"? No answer. "Guess not" she answered herself. "I'm starving.Lets see what's in the kitchen" said Peggy as she made her her way to the kitchen. Before she could even open the fridge there was a knock at the door. "Please don't be Abs, waut he doesn't even know where I live" she reminded herself. KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK She looked outt the peephole and saw who it was. "OMG, it's him. The guy i've had a crush on for like 3 years now" Peggy said o herself before opening the door. She got nervous. She opened the door "Hello."

"Hi, it's me Stan" he said walking into her house. Peggy: Yeah I know Stan: Yeah, right okay then Peggy: Okay so what did you need? Stan: Okay. You know that friend of yours name Sarah Peggy: Yeah, why? She was knda disappointed that he asked for her. Stan: Well, do you think that you could ask her out for me? Peggy: What" She just slammed the door in his face "I don't believe this. This just isn't my day" she laughed as she said this. "I gotta phone Mara"

***Nicole At Home***

~~this is still the phone convo~~ Nicole: Well I gotta go, bye, nice talkin to ya Alyson: Okay bye It was now 6:00pm and Nicoles brother wanted to use the phone. "I'm getting off, hold ya horses" Nicole said annoyed. "I wonder if Mar is online right now" she thought to herself as she walked into her room. She turned on both the T.V. and the computer. "Lets see whats on MuchMusic."

~~the interview with five~~ INTERVIEWER: Well, lets thank FIVE for joining us today and we hope you come back soon 5ive: Bye Nicole looked for Sean and found him. "Man I wish you weren't such a a**hole. Your so hot and sweet" she thought to herslf. She realized that she still had feeling's for him. "Why me"? she asked God. She got back to her computer and she logged into TeenChat.

~~Chatroom she's nic17_99

NIC17_99 just joined the room
maraj_99: Hello nicole, how are you?
nic17_99: Hi, im good. How 'bout you?
maraj_99: good also
MEBSCOTT just joined the room
maraj_99: guess what?
nic17_99: what? tell me please
maraj_99: i was in here earlier and some guy had a screen name called MEBSCOTT, he's 19, male and comes from England but is visiting Toronto
nic17_99: you don't think it could be him? do you?
maraj_99: i dunno but i left
nic17_99: hey sorry but i gotta go, its already 9:30 and i'm tired
*TIME FLYS WHEN YOU CHAT*

nic17_99: okay bye, i'm gonna stay for abit
MARAJ_99 just left the room
mebscott: hey nicole is that you?
nic17_99: yeah, who are you
mebscott:uhh.. scott
mebscott: you already know who i am
nic17_99: yeah i do but i was trying to pretend i didn't
mebscott: do you hate me?
nic17_99: sorry but i gotta go, bye
mebscott: wait
NIC17_99 just left the room
MEBSCOTT just left the room
***Ritchie On His Way Home***
"Oh man, I can't wait ot get home" Rich thought to himself. He yawned and looked at his watch. "Wow, it's 10:05pm already. I wonder if Tanya is up still" Ritchie drove to her house.

Chapter 10
The Truth

***At Tanya's House***

When he got to Tanya's house he hesitated. "She could be asleep" he thought to himself. Ritchie knocked anyway. "Hello Rich. Why didn't you tell me you were in town"? she asked. "I've got to talk to you. It's important" Ritchie said and then started to cry. "Oh. Don't worry Rich. Come on inside, let's talk" she said giving him a hug. He knew that she would always be there for him, she was like a sister and he was like a brother to her. "Now tell me what the problem is" she asked. Rich explained "Well I met this girl name Alyson and she is so nice and beautiful. Except I never told her who I really was and when she found out that I lied she got really angry." Tanya listened to him cry and talk on and on about Alyson. "See, I think that I love her.

What should I do"? he asked calming down abit. "Personally I thin you should give her a day or two to cool off then go and talk to her. Tell her why you lied to her" Tanya said. "Then buy her a dozen roses but send her one each day." she added smiling. "Well I requested a song for her on MuchMusic" Ritchie said. "Did she see it? What song?" "I'm not sure if she saw but I requested IT'S THE THINGS YOU DO" he smiled. They sat and talked for an hour about life and stuff. "Well thank you so much. I don't know what I would do without you" Ritchie thanked Tanya for her advice. "Me either and good luck" she said laughing. He got into his car and went to buy some flowers. ***Scott In His Bedroom***ooh i like that, j/k

"I dunno what to do. I'm gonna phone Callie. I hope she is up it's already 11:30pm" Scott thought to himself. He got up fom his bed and went to the phone.

RING RING RING
*phone conversation*

CALLIE: Hello
SCOTT: Hey, it's Scott
CALLIE: Oh. How are you?
SCOTT: I'm good. And you?
CALLIE: How has life been?
SCOTT: Well lately not good. That's why I phoned. I really need to talk to you about...
CALLIE: a girl (she laughed)
SCOTT: Yeah. See I met this girl and we started off really good and I didn't tell her who I really was cause she didn't know. So when she found out she was really pissed off. (do i have to block that out?)
CALLIE: Well why don't you just apologize?
SCOTT: I ain't got her number and I don't know where she lives but I know where her friend lives.
CALLIE: Get her number, call her and tell her why you didn't tell her the truth in the first place.
SCOTT: Okay, I'll find out tomorrow. It's late now. I was thinking of buying her something but she might think i'm trying to buy her back.
CALLIE: Get her flowers or candy or buy her something that she likes.
CALLIE: What does hse like? What kinda stuff is she into?
SCOTT: Umm...actually I don't know anything about her. All I know is her name because I've only spent one day with her. CALLIE: Scott you gotta find out stuff about her. Ask one of her friends, if they'll talk to ya. Find her a gift that evry girl would like
SCOTT: Like tampons?
CALLIE: NO
SCOTT: I'm joking
SCOTT: Thank you very much. You've always been there
for me. What can I do for you?
CALLIE: You can not call me so late (she laughs)
SCOTT: What time is it?
CALLIE: 11:30pm. Scott I'm going to bed so I'll talk
to you tomorrow. Good luck.
SCOTT: Bye and goodnight
CALLIE: Goodnight

Chapter 11
Part 1

***Abs At Home With Tracy***

"Ha. I beat you again. Two in a row" Tracy teased. "Abs, whats wrong"? asked Tracy concerned. "What do you mean? Nothings wrong" Abs lied. "Well, I never beat you at this game and you look sad. Whats wrong"? asked Tracy again putting down the video controller. "Well, your my bestfriend and I really need your advice on something"Abs said.

"Well I met this great girl name Peggy. We spent the whold day together at Wonderland then we kissed and everything. Then the next day she saw me at a autograph session thing at the mall." "So whats the problem"? Tracy asked confused. "I didn't tell her who I really was" Abs finished almost crying. "Oh well why not"? "Because I wanted to see if she liked me for me." Abs just sat there. "So you want my advice"? she asked smilimg. She loved helping Abs with his "female" problems. "Yes" Abssaid in a little kids voice. "Okay. Have you thought about apologizing"? she asked.

"Well I tried to yesterday but she stormed off. I don't know her number or even know where she lives" Abs said getting all sad again. "Well I know where her friend Montana lives." "Then you should first try and get her number off her friend" "But I'm pretty sure her friend hates me too" Abs said thinking about yesterday. "Well if you find out her number or address talk to her and tell her why you didn't tell her the truth" Tracy explained. "Thank you so much, your sucu a great help" Abs said giving Tracy a hug and a kiss on the cheek. "It's really late and i'm tired so i'll give you a call tomorrow" Tracy said yawning. Abs agreed and left to go home. "I hope I get back Peggy" Abs said to himself. He drove home and got into bed.

***At Home With J***

"J, what do you think you were doing earlier? You can't just say I love you to some girl, whom you just met, on national T.V. " Sean yelled at J on the phone. "Well I do love Montana. I can't help it and I know you love Nicole because I saw the way you looked at her yesterday and earlier today" J replied. "Okay, I do have strong feelings for her but I didn't annouce it on T.V." Sean answered. "You do realize the amount of rumours that are gonna start now"? J was silent. "Well it's late and I'm tired so I'm gona go to bed" Sean said sleepily. It was midnight now.

Wel last left off with Sean and J talking on the phone. If you don't remember just ask me to send you chapter 11 part 1. I also need the characters in my story to email me telling me their nickname or whatever they like to be called.
Chapter 11
Part 2

***J At Home*** continued.

"Oh man. I really miss Montana so much. I think I have her number. But I'll phone her tomorrow" J said aloud to himself after getting off the phone with Sean. He walked to his room and phoned his best mate. "I think i'll phone Heather. She is usually up late" J said picking up the phone. RING RING RING

*PHONE CONVO*

Heather: hello, Heather speaking
J : hi, it's J. I need to talk to ya
Heather: hi, yeah sure. what's wrong? Are you crying?
J : well i'm not crying it's just that i got something in my eye.
she laughs
J : today i met the most beautiful bird
ever, well besides you. he laughs.
J : well anyway we were having a great
time, we spent the whole day together but then she found out i was in a band. I should of told her in the first place.
Heather: that's what i would of done
J : what should i do?
Heather: apologizing would be a good start. And you have to respect her feelings right now towards you. You lied so she might not trust you for awhile.
J : I know, that's what i'm afraid of because i really like her alot, in fact so much that i think i love her. SNIFF SNIFF
Heather: well don't start crying. It's gonna be okay. Your a lovable guy and she'll forgive ya. Promise.
J : OK
Heather: Why don't you phone her tomorrow and talk to her.
J : Yeah i'm going to. Thanx again for eveything.
Heather: What are best mates for. Bye and goodnight.
J : Goodnight

*END OF PHONE CONVO*

^i know it's late but no one can sleep just in case you wondering why it's so late and everyone is still up

***Sean Getting Ready For Bed***

"Why can't I sleep"? Sean asked himself. He was tosing and turning in his bed. "All I can think about is Nicole. I should of told her the truth up front" Sean thought to himself. He got up to go to the kitchen to get himself a drink. When he was heading back he thought he heard a knock at the door. He ran to the door. "Nicole" was the first that came from his mouth. There was no one there. "I must be going crazy" he sighed to himself and went back to bed.

***The Next Day*** finally :0)

The five girls decided yesterday that they were gonna meet at Golden Griddle again for breakfast.

***At Golden Griddle***

"Hi.How are you doing"? asked Montana when she saw the other four girls entered the restaurant. "Hi. Were good. How about you"? they answered. They sat down and got ready to order their food. "So what would you ladies like this morning"? the waitress asked. "Uhh. Montana, Nicole and I would like bacon and eggs. Mara and Peggy would like bacon with an omelette" Alyson replied politely. "Well I can tell it's not gonna be my day" Nicole groaned. Then of all songs they had to play on the radio, they played Until The Time Is Through by 5ive. Peggy and Mara just groaned. Alyson just started to cry and ran off to the bathroom. Montana followed after. "See I knew it. Today just isn't my day" Nicole said when Alyson left the table left the table. They just sat there in silence until Alyson and the food came to the table. "Are you okay" Mara asked when Alyson came back. "Yeah, i'm okay" she replied. They ate my food in silence.

***5ive At J's Hotelroom***

"I feel so bad" Rich said almost crying. Scott just sat in silence in a corner alone thinking about Mara. "You know. I think we should go visit them and apologize" J suggested. "Where are they then? You already phoned Montana's house and their was no answer" Abs pointed out. Sean spoke up, "Well I remember overhearing Peggy and Nicole talking about meeting up again at Golden Griddle for breakfast." "You dummy. You knew this and you never said a thing. Let's go." Scott yelled half way out the door. "Wait there buddy. I remember passing like a million of these places on the way into Toronto" J said. "Yeah but wouldn't they go to the nearest one to their place. Montana lives not to far from here"Abs said. "Then lets check out the nearest one and see if they are there" Rich said feeling alot better. So they left as soon as they got ready.

***Back With The Girls***

The girls were just done eating. "Umm, can we please have the bill" asked Peggy when the waitress returned. She returned the bill a few mintues later. "Well since Mara and I payed for the bill last time, you three got it this time." Peggy smiled. Alyson sighed, "Fine, it's no biggie." On their way out Montana spotted five familar faces. "OMG. Look it's them." The other gour looked and gasped. "Quick, run to the car quietly so they don't see us" Nicole said kinda laughing. They started to speed walk towards the car. Just as they were at the car they heard their names being called. Five guys ran up to them. "Why are use running from us? We just wana talk"? Rich said almost crying. When Alyson saw his face she had to turn away. Scott grabbed Mara to go talk alone.

***Mara and Scott Talking***

"Mara. I am really sorry I hurt you. I love you so much that it hurts me to see you hurt" Scott said pleading for her forgiveness. "I love you too much to lose you." "Well you should of thought of that before you lied to me" Mara yelled back. "And my name is L'mara, don't call me Mara." She started to cry herself. She ran away from him and got into the car. Scott just stood there crying.

***Sean and Nicole Talking***

"Nicole. I wanna talk to you" Sean pulled Nicole over to the side. "Nicole I love you so much and I'm so sorry I hurt you. Please, you have to forgive me.I know we just met but I really care about you alot" Sean said just wanting to kiss her and hold her in his arms. "Well.." she smiled and Sean thought to himself that she forgave him. Then she saw how the rest of the girls were acting and she stopped smiling. "I can't. Not yet anyway, I still don't forgive you" she walked to the car and got in with Mara. Sean walked over to where Scott was.

Chapter 12

***Ritchie and Alyson Talking***

"What do you want"? Alyson asked really pissed. Sean and Scott tried to get Nicole and Mara from the car. "I want to apologize for hurting you. I really care about you alot. I love you" Rich said. Alyson just stared at Rich trying to read his face to see if he was telling the truth. "I dunno. You really hurt me alot. I mean, we even asked if use had any secrets. You lied and I dunno if I can trust you again" Alyson said letting out all her emotions. Ritchie walked up to her, smiled and she looked at him like he was crazy but then she smiled. She leaned in and he leaned in then they kissed. First the kiss was soft but gradually became more passionate and deep.

They pulled apart, "Don't tell my friends or yours...yet" begged Alyson. "Don't worry I promise, you can trust me" he smiled and gave her a hug goodbye. Alyson walked back to the car. She watched as Sean and Scott gave up on getting the girls from the car.

***Abs with Peggy***

"Abs, please leave me alone. I don't wanna see you again. Ever." yelled Peggy. She tried to walk away but Abs grabbed her, "Stop, don't walk away please." "Why? so you can lie to me again" she asked crying. "No listen, I didn't lie. The real reason I kept 5ive a secret was becaue I wanted to know if you loved me for ME" Abs cried. She didn't know what to say, "Of course I love you for you. I wouldn't of been so angry if you would of told me the truth in the first place." Abs looked stunned. " You love me?" he asked. "Uh..um..well maybe...yeah I do" Peggy said blushing abbit. "I love you too" he smiled back.

"Peggy, let's go now, were leaving" Mara yelled from the car. "K, I'm coming" she yelled back. "Abs, I have to go. Maybe I'll see ya around or something" Peggy said as she walked towards the car. "Wait, I'm confused. Do you forgive me or not?" asked Abs. "I dunno. Bye" she replied and continued walking to the car. "About time" laughed Nicole.

***Montana talking with J***

"Montana why aren't you returning any of my calls? I'm really sorry." J said. "Yeah well you should be sorry. You lied to me and you expect me to just run back into your arms?" Montana asked starting to cry. J just stood there thinking. "I saw you guy's interview last night" she said. "Did you? Well, did you watch it all?" J asked. "I only caught the part where use were asked if you had girlfriends. I heard you say you loved me" Montana said starting to cry again.

J watched her quietly, "it's true. I do love you?" "Your making this really hard you know" Montanasaid wiping away her tears which were coming down harder. "You think that you the only one frustrated. Well your not. It's hard on me too. I love you and the fact that knowing the one girl whom I love love hates me, well it just kills me" J said crying madly now. "Well I'm sorry J but you lied to me and you hurt me so I can't be with you, not yet anyway" she replied.

The other four girls were in the car waiting for Montana. Alyson got into the drivers seat. She drove towards Montana and called "Montana, were leaving come on now. "Okay i'm coming" she replied and walked towards the car. J grabbed her arm hard and pulled her back and yelled "Wait." "Let me the fuck go now J" Montana swore at him. "Let her go you jackass" screamed Alyson. "Butt out of this" he yelled back. Ritchie ran over and pulled J off of Montana. She ran over to the car and got in. The five girls drove away from the guys in hurry. "What the hell do you think your doing? Just because you don't care what happens between you and Alyson doesn't mean I don't care 'bout Montana" J yelled and swung at Rich. "Whoa J take it easy man" Scott said trying to clam down J. "Leave me alone, all of you" was his reply. He got into their car and drove back to The Mystic Deluxe.

"I don't believe him. He just left us here" Abs said getting anygry. " What an asshole." "Hey man, lay off, he's having a hard time right now" Sean said sticking up for his best mate. "Well excuse me but we are all having a bad time but you don't see us freakin out like him" Abs shot back. They just sood there thinking of a way to get back to the hotel. "How about we get a bag or catch the bus?" asked Ritchie. They all agreed and left the parking lot. They talked about the girls thw whole way home.