Change Of Heart
Author: Mara
Email: maraj_99@yahoo.com
Chapter 1:
The Meeting
***The Girls At Montana's House***
"Can you please hurry up Peggy"? asked Montana.
"Yeah, yeah I'm
coming" she answered back
. Nicole, Alyson and Mara just laughed at the
other two arguing. The five girls were planning on seeing a new movie
which was coming out tonight.
"I can't wait to see it, I heard The
Blair Witch Project is so wicked" said Mara. Finally Peggy was done so
they left.
***The Guys In J's Hotel Room***
"So guys, what do you wanna do tonight"? asked Rich.
Scott was looking
through the paper and suggested on a idea.
" How about we go see a
movie"?
" Yeah I heard that The Blair Witch Project was supposed to be
good" Abs thought aloud.
"Then lets go see it, there's one startingin
30 min and maybe we'll meet some fine looking birds" J smiled. The five
of them left.
***At The Movies, well in the theatre actually***
"Yo Alyson, dare me to throw some popcorn at that couple in front of
us"? asked Mara.
"Yeah yeah, I dare ya" Peggy laughed.
So she threw it
and it hit them then the couple turned around and gave the girls crap.
Nicole laughed out "That was great."
Montana turned around and spotted five guys laughing along with them.
" Hey, what the hell are you laughing at"? One guy with a eybrow ring
said
"Sorry 'bout that. By the way I'm J, whats your name"?
" None of
your damn bussiness" spat Peggy.
"Whoa, thats the fiestest bird I've
ever seen" laughed a guy with very nice eyebrows name Abs.
Well, after
the movie, the girls rushed outta the theatre as fast as they could. "
Let's go quick before those two come out"
*they were talking about the couple that they threw popcorn at*
Chapter 2:
The Confrontation
While leaving the theatre, J and Abs walked up to Peggy and
Montana.
"Why do you birds have such bad attitudes and dress like one of
the lads" they asked.
Before they could answer five girls whom Peggy
and Montana knew walked up and said "Why are you guys wasting your time
with these girls? They won't go for you." the first girl said.
"And why
wouldn't they"? asked a guy with a shaven head and tanned skin, his
name was Sean.
*nothing rude being said here* "Well because they are
lesbians" she smiled.
The girls laughed.
"Fuck you, you stupid bitch"
screamed Nicole.
Soon enough all the girls weere screaming and swearing
at each other.
A guy with spikey hair said " don't ya think we should stop this
cause in a way we kinda started it."? His name was Scott.
The guys
stopped the fight and told the other girls to leave now or else. So
they left.
J attempted to make conversation again.
He asked "whats your names
and if ya don't mind me asking, are you really lesbians"?
" Well you
guys seem nice enough and you got rid of those pieces of shit so I
guess we could talk to ya" Alyson said.
"Well i'm Alyson, this is
Nicole, Montana, L'mara who we call Mara and heres Peggy" she said
pointing to each girl.
"Cool" Abs said smiling at Peggy.
But she didn't
notice.
"So how old are you birds"? asked a guy with short
blondish-brown hair and very nice, blue eyes name Rich. Nicole answered
"I'm 17, Mara is 19, Montana here is 22 turning 23 in a few days, Peggy
and Alyson are both 20.
*Sorry but I made everyones age match up*.
Sean was curious so he asked again" are you really lesbians"?
The
other guys just gave him a look. Sean hoped that they would say no,
well he really didn't care about the others as long as the pretty girl
name Nicole said she wasn't.
" I dunno why but people think we are
lesbians because we hang out all the time with each other and we don't
really communicate with other people. We would like to but it's not as
easy cause we now have a reputation of being gay." said Mara calmy.
Montana finished off by saying "Which I find really weird because those
five girls hang out with each other just as much as we do but they
don't get called lesbians. But we don't mind anymore cause we're used
to it. We dress like this for security."
They talked abit more about the other five girls. Sean had an idea.
"What if you birds come along with us tomorrow to Wonderland"?
"Well..."Alyson started.
"Come on, it will be fun. Please." Scott
pleaded with puppy dog eyes.
"And y'all gotta gress like the beautiful
birds that you are" smirked J.
"Well, we'll see about that." Peggy
smiled at Abs but he didn't see.
"So is that a yes"? asked Rich.
"Yeah I guess" said Mara.
"Well, we
are staying in the hotel called The Mystic Deluxe and we are in room
555." explained Abs.
"Okay so what time should we come around"? asked
Nicole but her question was sort of directed to Sean.
"Ummm...How about
9:00am" said Scott.
Great I hate waking up before 12" laughed Montana.
Everyone said their goodbyes and left.
***At The Hotel In Abs Room***
"I can't wait 'till we go to Wonderland, I really like that one girl,
I think her anme was Mara" Scott said thinking about tomorrow.
"i
agree. That Montana girl was hot" J said thinking about her.
"Well it's
late and we gotta get up early so I suggest that we get some sleep."
Abs reminded them.
They all agreed and went to bed.
***The Girls At Montana's House***
"Omigod, Abs is sooo fine but he probably doesn't like me" Peggy said
getting into bed.
They were all gonna stay at Montana's house cause she
lived closes to the guys hotel.
"No way man,Sean is so cute. He's like
a big teddy bear" said Nicole laughing.
"Oh man Sean? Umm, I think J is
so hot, he's got this Mr.Cool attitude to him" Montana said happily.
"I
think is the best looking of them all. He has these really sexy eyes
and a cute smile" Alyson thought aloud.
All girls noticed Mara bing
quiet.
"So Mara who's your pick"? Mara blushed a bit
" Well I like the
spikey-haired guy, I think his name was Scott.
Mara was never one to
express her feelings about guys.
"What"? screamed Peggy, "he looks like
a dinosaur."
Finally they all finished laughing at Mara. "Well what are
we gonna wear tomorrow"? asked Nicole.
"Well I have no girl clothes
really, so what am I supposed to do"? reminded Mara.
"Hey, why don't we
borrow some of Sarah. We'll phone her tonight and then go over really
in the moring and get dressed. They all agreed and went to bed.
Chapter 3
***The Next Day***
"So, who wants to knock"? asked Montana.
Montana was wearing blue
flares and a white tank top. Nicole was wearing black flares and a navy
blue thick strap tank top.
Alyson was wearing white capris and a yellow
halter top. Peggy was in jean capris with a baby blue baby tee. And
Mara was wearing cargo pants and a red tank top.
"I'll knock" said
Peggy feeling brave.
Sean answered the door.
"Hey, are you the same
girls from the movies"? he asked kinda surprised by the way they
looked.
"I bet he doesn't like me" thought Nicole in her head.
The girls
said yes and then Sean let them in.
When the rest of the guys saw the girls they were surprised also.
"Wow, you birds look great"said J who couldn't stop staring at Montana.
Everything got quiet for a few seconds so Scott said something "Well I
kinda forgot who's who so can you please re-introduce yourselves"? Mara
spoke up "I'm Mara, this here is Nicole and Peggy. And standing over
there is Alyson and Montana."
"Well sorry to break this up but don't ya think we should start to
leave"?Rich pointed out. "Yah, I agree" said Abs who couldn't help but
stare at Peggy. When she noticed, Abs turned away.
"Oh and one more
thing, if ya don't mind can you not call us birds"? asked Alyson. "
Yeah sure" they all agreed.
They were gonna be riding in a van that the guys said they borrowed
from some friend of theirs.*they didn't really borrow it* Once they got
inside it was then Rich realized that they forgot to clean up the
inside.
"Hey, look at all this 5ive stuff everywhere" said Alyson.
There was cd's, posters, pictures and schedules evreywhere. "Wait, I've
heard of 5ive they got some cool music. But i've never seen what they
look like or their names" Nicole laughed as she said this. The girls
thought that this was weird but they just decided to forget about it.
Rich, Sean, Abs, Scott and J just smiled at each other.
When they arrived, the park wasn't that full because this was the
weekend of a summer festival being held. "Hey, I wanna go on Drop Zone,
please, who wants to go on with me"? Alyson pleaded. No one except Rich
wanted to. " I'll go on with ya" he smiled. Just as they were about to
leave Montana called out " Make sure to meet us at the pizza place just
uo this path here."
They said yeah and left. J got together his courage
and asked Montana something."Montana did you wanna go on The Vortex
with me"? he hope she would say yes. "I'd love to" she replied. They
left together.
The others walked around a bit. Then they came across the ride called
Jet Scream. "Does anyone wanna go on that ride"? No one heard so he
asked again but only Nicole was listening. "uhh...that ride looks
kinda.." before she could finish Sean grabbed her and brougth her in
line. Abs, Scott, Mara and Peggy decided to go on The Fly.
"Peggy,
um...uh..did you..um wanna sit with me"? Abs asked nervously. "Sure"
was her reply. She was so happy that he asked her. "I guess it's just
you and me" Mara said in a tone like she didn't care but inside she was
bursting with joy.
Chapter 4
***Alyson and Rich at Drop Zone***
"This is a pretty long line,” said Alyson trying to make
conversation.
"Yeah, it's pretty, pretty like you" Rich said, he was now
regrettingsaying
such a cheesy line.
"Thanx Rich, I like you to" she replied then turned her head so
hecouldn't
see her blush."I think you are very beautiful" Rich said sencerely.
"Thank you very much, that’s very sweet" she smiled. Rich
smiledleaned in
and kissed her softly on the lips. She pulled away and smiled
thenleaned up
for anothr kiss but this one was more deep.
***J and Montana on The Vortex***
"Oh man, this ride really sucks" J said bored. They were on the still.
"You can say that again" Montana said just as bored.
"K, this ride realy sucks" laughed J.
This made Montana laugh then smile when she noticed J staring at
her.
They
are off the ride now."What"? she asked uncomfortable.
"Nothing, I'm just admiring how gorgeous you are" he answered
backsweetly.
She was blushing so she turned her head. He grabbed a hold of her
andtried
to give her a kiss he did but as soon as their lips touched she
pulledaway.
He looked hurt. Montana spit out her gum.
"I just wanted to get rid of my gum" she smiled.
He grabbed her again and they kissed for a long time.
***Sean and Nicole going on Jet Scream***
"Wow, that ride looks kinda scary" said Nicole nervously."
Don't worry ,I'll be right there beside to you" he smiled. He
reallywanted
to kiss but he wasn't sure if or when he should do it.
"What would you do if I kissed you right now"?
Nicole thouhgt for a minute and said "I'd probably do this. She leaned
up
and kissed him lightly on the lips. He smiled then he kissed her
againand
slowly opened his mouth and let their tongues become one.*lol, thats
nasty
****Abs, Scott, Peggy and Mara on The Fly***
Abs was siting with Peggy at the back of the first cart.* each cart
had6
two-seaters* Scott and Mara sat at the very front. During the ride Mara
looked back and was shocked.
"Hmmm, they don't move slow do they"? Scott laughed when he saw Abs and
Peggy making out.
"What"? asked Mara said when she noticed Scott looking at her. "I
don'tknow
why I came here" she finished.
"What, I’m glad you came here. It's been fun so far. I think you are the
most stunning bird...uh...girl I’ve ever seen" he said.
"Well that’s besides Alicia Silverstone" he joked. They leaned incloser
and
closer. They were just about to kiss when they heard "whoo whoo, go
Mara, go
Scott" coming from behind them.
"Of course" Scott said disappointed in not getting to kiss Mara.
"Sorry buddy, couldn't resist" Abs said feeling bad for what they
did.When
the ride was over they went to go meet the others at the
pizzarestuarant.
It doesn't only sell pizza.
***At The Restaurant***
"This is good pizza" said Alyson satisfied with her food. They
allagreed
that their food was good but expensive. Alyson along with Nicole andAbs
ordered pizza. Mara, Peggy and Rich got salad. While J and Scott had
nachos. When they finished eating, they decided to go to the waterpark.
"I think we should give our stomachs some time to rest" J pointed out.
"Yes daddy" joked Sean.
***30 Minutes later***
The guys went to their change rooms and the same with the girls.
"Wait, before we get to close to each other, do you have any secrets we
should know about you guys"? J asked curiosly."Well no but how bout you
guys"?
"Nope were clean" said Rich smiling a half smile. All the guys felt
badfor
not telling the girls who they really were.
Chapter 5
***Outside The Changeroom***
When everyone was done changing Nicole suggested an idea.
"How about
we go on Black Hole." *This is a water slide with the tubes attached
and the water slide is a black tube so it's dark inside and you can't
see anything* "Sure sounds good. So who wants to go with who"? asked J.
He knew exactly what he was pulling. Everyone got really quiet. "Well
Alyson, if you want i'll go wit ya"? asked Rich hoping she'd say yes.
"Okay cool" she replied.*I know it's kinda obvious who asks who but
hey*
"Well if ya ask me I think that Abs should just go with Peggy
considering they like each other and they have already snogged" smiled
J. Abs didn't expect J to tell anyone that they kissed. Peggy was just
standing there tryin gnot to blush cause everyone was looking at her.
This made Sean and Scott burst out laughing. "Hey Sean I wouldn't talk,
Nicole told me that use kissed to" Peggy blurted out. Scott kept
laughing but Sean stopped cause now it was his turn to turn red.
"Whatever, Montana do you wanna go together"? J asked "Sure,i'd love
that" Montana said.
"Okay well I'm gonna go with Abs so we can get to
know each other better" Peggy smiled. When they were leaving to get in
line Mara said "I think they've gotten to know each other well
enough."she was remembering the incident on The Fly. Nicole and Scott
laughed. Sean got up his courage again and asked Nicole "Nicole did you
wanna go with me"? "Okay." They left for the line.*While everyone was
deciding who to go with they were still walking to the waterslide*
So Scott and Mara continued walking in silence.
"The line is growing
pretty fast" said Scott trying to break the tension between the two.
Before they got on the ride."Umm..Mara can I talk to you"? "Yeah sure."
Scott pulled her out of line and into a corner. "What did yo..." she
was cut off before she could finish by Scott kissing her. He pulled
away. "Sorry, I just wanted to do that in case I never get the chance
again" he smiled sweetly. Mara smiled back and they got back in line.
*I'm not gonna describe the water ride and they did go on other
rides, it's just that i don't wanna go into detail about all that*
***In The Parking Lot***
"Well, we had a great time, thank you for inviting us" the girls said
as they got to the guys van. "No. Thank you. It wouldn't of been as
much fun if you girls weren't here with us" thanked the guys back. So
they all piled into the van and were on their way home. "What time do
you have to bring your friends van back"? asked Alyson.
"What are you
talking about"? aked Rich confused. Then the guys remembered what they
had said earlier. "Oh, we gotta get it back to him tomorrow night" Rich
corrected himself hoping that the girls wouldn't notice. All of them
just forgot about except Nicole."Something weird is goingon here" she
thought to herself. The four guys felt bad and hoped that they wouldn't
find out. Besides, the girls trusted them now.
***Back at The Mystic Deluxe***
"Why are we stopping here"? Montana asked confused because they were
at the hotel instead of her house. "I gotta go get something" Sean said
gettin gout of the van. "Why don't I just get my car here? asked
Montana.*She had drove it here but the guys wanted to take the van and
on the way home they decided to just drive the girls straight home*
They waited and waited. Rich couldn't take it no more. "Alyson, I
gotta tell you something."Okay"she said nervously. So they walked off
to his room to talk. "Uhh, don't be long cause Sean shouldn't be much
longer" Peggy reminded them before they left. "I can't beleive him,
he's gonna blow our cover, man can't he ever keep a secret"? Scott
whispered to J and Abs. "What secret"? demanded Nicole. She knew
something was up. "We've got to talk to ya girls" Abs said quietly.
Chapter 6
The Truth
Just as the guys were about to tell the girls the truth Ritchie and
Alyson came back smiling ang holding hands. "What"? thought Scott. Rich
said "I just had to tell Alyson how I felt towards her, I think i'm in
love with her. I know it's only been like a day but I now believe in
love at first site." he smiled. The other guys sighed in relief. "Good
thin gyou came back, we were just about to tell them who we were" Abs
whispered. "So are you gonna tell us this secret or not" Nicole asked
well demanded.
"It's not important anymore" Scott said hoping they
would forget about it. "Whatever" Montana said very annoyed with all
the whispering that was going on. Nicole looked at each guy but they
couldn't look back at her. "I think she knows something" J said in his
head.
Finally Sean came back except he was empty handed. "What took you so
long and what did you get"? asked Ritchie confused. "Well I went to get
my watch but I forgot that I had it on already" Sean smiled foolishly.
Everyone looked at him like he was crazy. "Well we have to get to
Alana's so can we leave now"? begged Peggy who was also mad at the
guys. So they left to drive the girls home.
***The Next Morning***
"Uhhh, I'm so tired"said Montana. "I don't wanna get up besides it's
only 11:30am"Mara complained. She always complained when the others
woke her up when she didn't want to be woken up. She and Montana like
to sleep in.
The other three were already up and were trying to wake up the two
girls.
"Lets go out to eat breakfast" said Peggy. "Yeah, how about
Golden Griddle" suggested Nicole. This is a real restaurant. "MARA GET
UP NOW" screamed Alyson in Maras ear. She shot up and screamed "Holy
sh**, are you crazy." "Hey lets see what Montana's reaction is" said
Nicole. So they all went over to where Montana was sleeping. "MONTANA
GET UP NOW" they screamed in her face. She just rolled over and said to
shut up. The girls laughed. "OMG, J what are you doing in here naked.
That got her attention. She got and looked around "Where"? They laughed
at her then dragged her outta bed. She finally agreed to get ready.
***30 Minutes Later***
"Okay, lets go" said Nicole as she pushed everyone out the door. They
were gonna go to the Scarborough Town Center. So who is driving"? asked
Alyson. "Well my car is still at the guys hotel so we can catch a bus
and pick it up. They got o nthe bus and drove to hotel thengot her car.
Montana drove a black Mercedes Benz.* the mall mentoned is real*
***At Golden Griddle***
"What would you ladies like this afternoon"? the waitress asked
politely. They decided on the same thing. "Can we all get
pancakes"?asjed Mara. "Okay then, won't be long. And with that she
left. "I can't wait till tonight" Alyson thought outloud by mistake.
"Whats tonight" asked Peggy curiously. "Oh well, Ricthie's gonna take
me dancing. Nicole just rolled her eyes. "Whats you problem" Alyson
asked Nicole when she saw this"? "Nothing" she replied. The girls sat
and talked while they were waiting for their food.
***Back At The Mystic Deluxe***
"So what do you guys wanna do tonight"? asked Scott. "Well, I'm going
dancing with Alyson so I can't do whatever you guys are doing" said
Ritchie bringing it up again. "Holy g*d, how many times are you gonna
bring that up.
We don't care anymore" J said irritated. "Sorry, I'm
just excited." "Let him be. He's in love" Sean said concentrating on
the word love.
"Ha, she won't be in love with ya when she finds out that you lied to
her" Abs reminded him. "IF she finds out and besides you guys are just
as guilty also" Rich spat back. All the guys grew quiet.
"Isay that we don't tell them unless they ask or something" Scott
decided. "And what if they see us in a mag or something"? J said. "Then
we explain that we didnt think it was impotant" said Sean and they all
agreed except Abs. "Abs, are you in"? they asked. "Whatever" was his
reply. Abs looked at the clock. "Hey, lets go or we wil be late for the
autograph session at the mall" " Which mall was it"? asked Scott. "The
scarborough town center. With that they left.
Chapter 7
The Truth
Chapter 7 part one
***At The Mall***
"Lets go to Dynamite" suggested Nicole. "Yeah, this is a good store.
I wanna buy that long skirt and sweater i saw last week" said Montana.
All the girls looked at her. "Since when did you start liking those
clothes"? they asked. "For awhile now" she smiled. So they went into
the store an bought some new outfits. They must have visited every
clothing store in the mall.
"Lets go to the foodcourt cause i'm starving" said Peggy. "Yeah,
then can we go to HMV cause theres a new CD i wanna buy" Mara said.
"What CD"? asked Alyson. "Oh it's nothing." "Come on. Tell us" they all
begged."Fine it's Planet Pop 2000" she said. They all looked at her
like she was an alien. "Wow, little miss ganster rapper only here has
changed her sytle in music" they all laughed. They had KFC when they
got to the foodcourt.
***On Their Way To HMV***
There was a big group of girls screaming outside HMV when they got
there. "What are you screaming for"? Peggy asked one of the girls.
"Well 5ive are gonna be here for an autograph session" she said. Peggy
ran back to the girls. "Hey, 5ive are gonna be here for autograph
session, maybe we can get an autograph and see what they look like."
So they waited in line until it was their turn. When they were almost
up to the front Alyson looked over and saw who 5ive were. "OMG, those
a**holes"
Chapter 8
The Truth
"What? Who?" asked Mara confused. "Look, thats 5ive, the guys we were
with yesterday. They lied they said they had no secrets they said" said
Nicole. I knew it she thought. "I wouldn't of been so angry if they
would of told us straight out but they lied so that really pisses me
off" yelled Mara. As the girls moved up in the line they came face to
face with the guys.
J managed to say "hi. how are use today"? "You know, I thought you
guys really liked us. I can't believe how nice guys like you could be
such a**holes" screamed Peggy. They were causeing a scene and girls
were looking at them. "Why are you yelling at 5ive? Who do you think
you are?" one girl yelled.
"Oh shut up. Please" yelled Alyson. Just as
the two groups of girls were starting to fight(not psyhical) Abs spoke
up."Hey stop. Peggy we'll meet you and your friends after this okay"?
"Get lost losers" Mara spat back. The girls took one last look at the
guys but the guys couldn't make eye contact. "I'm tired of this
sh**"said Nicole and they left.
***Back At Montanas House***
Alyson was crying because she really liked Rich and she thought that
he really cared about her. "Hey Alyson, don't cry okay, you'll be
alright" Montana said crying herself. "But your crying" she replied.
"Well I uhh poked myself in the eye" she laughed. Everyone laughed
cause Montana never cries.
"I can't believe that they lied to us" Mara said to herslf thinking
about Scott and how he made her feel.
"Thats why they had all that 5ive crap in the van" Peggy realized.
Nicole just thought to herself "i knew something was up." Mara, Alyson,
Peggy and Nicole got their stuff together and went home.
***Mara At Her House***
"I need to relax, oh man i'm so tired from shopping" she said to
herslef. She decided to get into comfortable clothes and chat on the
internet. She logged on and went into TeenChat.*i know she is an adult
but it's cool to chat in teen rooms*
maraj_99: Hello, any males here age 19? press 99
johnjr_85 : 99
hackertwin: anyone from Ontario?
Justinluva: me
inluvwith5: me 2
maraj_99 : johnjr_85, i've talked to you before. your sick
so i ain't cahtting with ya
hackertwin: you both PM me and we can start a conference
MEBSCOTT JUST JOINED THE ROOM
HACKERTWIN JUST LEFT THE ROOM
JUSTINLUVA JUST LEFT THE ROOM
INLUVWITH5 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
johnjr_85 : fine then, i don't wanna chat with you either
JOHNJR_85 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
mebscott : i guess it's just you and me
maraj_99 : yeah, a/s/l
mebscott : 19/male/england but i'm in toronto now
visiting my friends. And you?
maraj_99 : 19/female/toronto
mebscott : whats your name?
maraj_99 : whats your name?
maraj_99 : Mara for short
mebscott : are you serious?
maraj_99 : yeah, whats yours?
mebscott : scott
No one wrote anything for a minute.
maraj_99 : umm.. i gotta go. bye
MARAJ_99 JUST LEFT THE ROOM
mebscott : wait
MEBSCOTT JUST LEFT THE ROOM
***Alyson At Her House***
"Hello, Shelly? Anyone home?" Alyson asked when she got into her
house. "Yeah, I'm just making a sandwich here in the kitchen" her
younger sister replied. "Okay, I'll be in my room." She went to her
room and turned on the T.V. She put on MuchMusic and caught the ending
of MuchOnDemand. "Okay, we are gonna end the show with our last request
from who"? asked Sook-Yin Lee.*she's a host* On the phone: "Umm..my
name is Rich" "Where are you from Rich"? "Well i'm from England but i'm
visiting friends here in Toronto" "Cool ,what did you wanna request"?
"UMM i'd like to see IT'S THINGS YOU DO by 5ive and dedicate it to a
girl whom i love name Alyson" "Okay then. Bye Rich" End of phone of
conversation. Alyson shot her head towards the T.V. when she heard her
name. She watched the video in shock. "I can't believe him" she started
to cry." I love him but I hate him." After the video was done she
turned off the T.V. and phoned her two bestfriends. Nicole and Montana.
3 WAY- RING RING RING
Nicole: hello, who's calling?
Alyson: it's me ali, i'm gonna three-way with montana
nicole: k
Alyson: hello
Montana: hi, who's calling?
Alyson: it's me, ali and nikki
Montana: Hey, what's up?
Alyson: well, i've got something to to tell ya both
Nicole: what?
Alyson: Rich requested a song for me on MuchMusic
Nicole: haha. Which song? i'm a loser by Rich
Montana: lol probably was lol
Alyson: shut up, he ain't no loser. it was by 5ive, IT'S THE
THINGS YOU DO.
Montana: are you defending Rich?
Nicole: you still like him? after everything he's done to you?
Alyson: yes. okay.i can't help it. besides, what they wasn't all
that bad. maybe they wanted see if we would like them for them
Montana: Oh please. anyway i gotta go, i've got something on
the stove. bYE Nikki.
Alyson:bye
Nicole:bye
Alyson: do you think she is angry at me caue I still like Rich?
Nicole: i dunno. just let her cool off. it's been a tiring day
for all of us.
Chapter 9
The Truth
***Montana At Home***
"Jake, are you hungry"? Montana asked when she went back to the
kitchen. "Yes. But what are you making"replied her little
brother."Sandwiches" "Okay then. Make mine ham." She continued watching
T.V. when something on T.V. caught her attention. It was a live FIVE
interview at MuchMusic.
**the interview**
INTERVIEWER: Hello. Here we are with 5ive. Please
state your names.
ABS: I'm Abidin but call me Abs
SCOTT: Me be Scott *remember that*
RICH: I'm Richard but call be Ritchie
SEAN: Sean here
J: I'm J
"G*d J, why do you have to be so hot"? Montana asked herself.
"Are
those sandwiches done yet"? Jake asked annoyed that Montana was
watching T.V. instead of making his food. His voice brought her back to
reality. "Yeah coming" she replied but just stood there. She finally
left and came back with Jake's food.
**BACK TO INTERVIEW**
INTERVIEWER: So do you guys have anyone special in
your life right now?
*all the guys looked sad*
ABS: Well i'm interested in a girl but we got off on
the wrong foot.
SEAN: I have no girlfriend
SCOTT: Same here
Rich just shakes his head in response.
J: Montana, if your watching this, I want you to know
that even though i've only known you for a bit I love
you
All the guys look athim like he's crazy.
INTERVIEWER: So you guys have a new signle coming out,
right?
RICH: Yeah it's call...
Rich was cut off by Jake changing channels. "Hey sis, the girl that
guy was talking about had the same name as you" said Jake. "Yeah I
know" she replied. Then whispered to herself "Lucky girl."
***Peggy At Home***
"Oh man, what a day" said Peggy who just walked into her house. She
looked at the clock. It was 5:00pm. "Hey Ash, are you home"? No answer.
"Guess not" she answered herself. "I'm starving.Lets see what's in the
kitchen" said Peggy as she made her her way to the kitchen. Before she
could even open the fridge there was a knock at the door. "Please don't
be Abs, waut he doesn't even know where I live" she reminded herself.
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
She looked outt the peephole and saw who it was. "OMG, it's him. The
guy i've had a crush on for like 3 years now" Peggy said o herself
before opening the door. She got nervous. She opened the door "Hello."
"Hi, it's me Stan" he said walking into her house.
Peggy: Yeah I know
Stan: Yeah, right okay then
Peggy: Okay so what did you need?
Stan: Okay. You know that friend of yours name Sarah
Peggy: Yeah, why?
She was knda disappointed that he asked for her.
Stan: Well, do you think that you could ask her out
for me?
Peggy: What"
She just slammed the door in his face "I don't believe this. This just
isn't my day" she laughed as she said this. "I gotta phone Mara"
***Nicole At Home***
~~this is still the phone convo~~
Nicole: Well I gotta go, bye, nice talkin to ya
Alyson: Okay bye
It was now 6:00pm and Nicoles brother wanted to use the phone. "I'm
getting off, hold ya horses" Nicole said annoyed. "I wonder if Mar is
online right now" she thought to herself as she walked into her room.
She turned on both the T.V. and the computer. "Lets see whats on
MuchMusic."
~~the interview with five~~
INTERVIEWER: Well, lets thank FIVE for joining us
today and we hope you come back soon
5ive: Bye
Nicole looked for Sean and found him. "Man I wish you weren't such a
a**hole. Your so hot and sweet" she thought to herslf. She realized
that she still had feeling's for him. "Why me"? she asked God. She got
back to her computer and she logged into TeenChat.
~~Chatroom she's nic17_99
NIC17_99 just joined the room
maraj_99: Hello nicole, how are you?
nic17_99: Hi, im good. How 'bout you?
maraj_99: good also
MEBSCOTT just joined the room
maraj_99: guess what?
nic17_99: what? tell me please
maraj_99: i was in here earlier and some guy had a
screen name called MEBSCOTT, he's 19, male and comes
from England but is visiting Toronto
nic17_99: you don't think it could be him? do you?
maraj_99: i dunno but i left
nic17_99: hey sorry but i gotta go, its already 9:30
and i'm tired
*TIME FLYS WHEN YOU CHAT*
nic17_99: okay bye, i'm gonna stay for abit
MARAJ_99 just left the room
mebscott: hey nicole is that you?
nic17_99: yeah, who are you
mebscott:uhh.. scott
mebscott: you already know who i am
nic17_99: yeah i do but i was trying to pretend i
didn't
mebscott: do you hate me?
nic17_99: sorry but i gotta go, bye
mebscott: wait
NIC17_99 just left the room
MEBSCOTT just left the room
***Ritchie On His Way Home***
"Oh man, I can't wait ot get home" Rich thought to himself. He yawned
and looked at his watch. "Wow, it's 10:05pm already. I wonder if Tanya
is up still" Ritchie drove to her house.
Chapter 10
The Truth
***At Tanya's House***
When he got to Tanya's house he hesitated. "She could be asleep" he
thought to himself. Ritchie knocked anyway. "Hello Rich. Why didn't you
tell me you were in town"? she asked. "I've got to talk to you. It's
important" Ritchie said and then started to cry. "Oh. Don't worry Rich.
Come on inside, let's talk" she said giving him a hug. He knew that she
would always be there for him, she was like a sister and he was like a
brother to her.
"Now tell me what the problem is" she asked. Rich explained "Well I
met this girl name Alyson and she is so nice and beautiful. Except I
never told her who I really was and when she found out that I lied she
got really angry." Tanya listened to him cry and talk on and on about
Alyson. "See, I think that I love her.
What should I do"? he asked
calming down abit. "Personally I thin you should give her a day or two
to cool off then go and talk to her. Tell her why you lied to her"
Tanya said. "Then buy her a dozen roses but send her one each day." she
added smiling. "Well I requested a song for her on MuchMusic" Ritchie
said. "Did she see it? What song?" "I'm not sure if she saw but I
requested IT'S THE THINGS YOU DO" he smiled.
They sat and talked for an hour about life and stuff.
"Well thank you so much. I don't know what I would do without you"
Ritchie thanked Tanya for her advice. "Me either and good luck" she
said laughing. He got into his car and went to buy some flowers.
***Scott In His Bedroom***ooh i like that, j/k
"I dunno what to do. I'm gonna phone Callie. I hope she is up it's
already 11:30pm" Scott thought to himself. He got up fom his bed and
went to the phone.
RING RING RING
*phone conversation*
CALLIE: Hello
SCOTT: Hey, it's Scott
CALLIE: Oh. How are you?
SCOTT: I'm good. And you?
CALLIE: How has life been?
SCOTT: Well lately not good. That's why I phoned. I
really need to talk to you about...
CALLIE: a girl (she laughed)
SCOTT: Yeah. See I met this girl and we started off
really good and I didn't tell her who I really was
cause she didn't know. So when she found out she was
really pissed off. (do i have to block that out?)
CALLIE: Well why don't you just apologize?
SCOTT: I ain't got her number and I don't know where
she lives but I know where her friend lives.
CALLIE: Get her number, call her and tell her why you
didn't tell her the truth in the first place.
SCOTT: Okay, I'll find out tomorrow. It's late now. I
was thinking of buying her something but she might
think i'm trying to buy her back.
CALLIE: Get her flowers or candy or buy her something
that she likes.
CALLIE: What does hse like? What kinda stuff is she
into?
SCOTT: Umm...actually I don't know anything about her.
All I know is her name because I've only spent one
day with her.
CALLIE: Scott you gotta find out stuff about her. Ask
one of her friends, if they'll talk to ya. Find her a
gift that evry girl would like
SCOTT: Like tampons?
CALLIE: NO
SCOTT: I'm joking
SCOTT: Thank you very much. You've always been there
for me. What can I do for you?
CALLIE: You can not call me so late (she laughs)
SCOTT: What time is it?
CALLIE: 11:30pm. Scott I'm going to bed so I'll talk
to you tomorrow. Good luck.
SCOTT: Bye and goodnight
CALLIE: Goodnight
Chapter 11
Part 1
***Abs At Home With Tracy***
"Ha. I beat you again. Two in a row" Tracy teased. "Abs, whats
wrong"? asked Tracy concerned. "What do you mean? Nothings wrong" Abs
lied. "Well, I never beat you at this game and you look sad. Whats
wrong"? asked Tracy again putting down the video controller. "Well,
your my bestfriend and I really need your advice on something"Abs said.
"Well I met this great girl name Peggy. We spent the whold day
together at Wonderland then we kissed and everything. Then the next day
she saw me at a autograph session thing at the mall." "So whats the
problem"? Tracy asked confused. "I didn't tell her who I really was"
Abs finished almost crying. "Oh well why not"? "Because I wanted to see
if she liked me for me."
Abs just sat there. "So you want my advice"? she asked smilimg. She
loved helping Abs with his "female" problems. "Yes" Abssaid in a little
kids voice. "Okay. Have you thought about apologizing"? she asked.
"Well I tried to yesterday but she stormed off. I don't know her number
or even know where she lives" Abs said getting all sad again. "Well I
know where her friend Montana lives." "Then you should first try and
get her number off her friend" "But I'm pretty sure her friend hates me
too" Abs said thinking about yesterday.
"Well if you find out her number or address talk to her and tell her
why you didn't tell her the truth" Tracy explained. "Thank you so much,
your sucu a great help" Abs said giving Tracy a hug and a kiss on the
cheek. "It's really late and i'm tired so i'll give you a call
tomorrow" Tracy said yawning. Abs agreed and left to go home.
"I hope I get back Peggy" Abs said to himself. He drove home and got
into bed.
***At Home With J***
"J, what do you think you were doing earlier? You can't just say I
love you to some girl, whom you just met, on national T.V. " Sean
yelled at J on the phone. "Well I do love Montana. I can't help it and
I know you love Nicole because I saw the way you looked at her
yesterday and earlier today" J replied. "Okay, I do have strong
feelings for her but I didn't annouce it on T.V." Sean answered. "You
do realize the amount of rumours that are gonna start now"? J was
silent. "Well it's late and I'm tired so I'm gona go to bed" Sean said
sleepily. It was midnight now.
Wel last left off with Sean and J talking on the phone. If you don't
remember just ask me to send you chapter 11 part 1. I also need the
characters in my story to email me telling me their nickname or
whatever they like to be called.
Chapter 11
Part 2
***J At Home*** continued.
"Oh man. I really miss Montana so much. I think I have her number.
But I'll phone her tomorrow" J said aloud to himself after getting off
the phone with Sean.
He walked to his room and phoned his best mate. "I think i'll phone
Heather. She is usually up late" J said picking up the phone. RING RING
RING
*PHONE CONVO*
Heather: hello, Heather speaking
J : hi, it's J. I need to talk to ya
Heather: hi, yeah sure. what's wrong? Are you crying?
J : well i'm not crying it's just that i got
something in my eye.
she laughs
J : today i met the most beautiful bird
ever, well besides you. he laughs.
J : well anyway we were having a great
time, we spent the whole day together but
then she found out i was in a band. I should
of told her in the first place.
Heather: that's what i would of done
J : what should i do?
Heather: apologizing would be a good start. And you
have to respect her feelings right now
towards you. You lied so she might not trust
you for awhile.
J : I know, that's what i'm afraid of because i
really like her alot, in fact so much
that i think i love her. SNIFF SNIFF
Heather: well don't start crying. It's gonna be
okay. Your a lovable guy and she'll forgive
ya. Promise.
J : OK
Heather: Why don't you phone her tomorrow
and talk to her.
J : Yeah i'm going to. Thanx again for
eveything.
Heather: What are best mates for. Bye and
goodnight.
J : Goodnight
*END OF PHONE CONVO*
^i know it's late but no one can sleep just in case you wondering why
it's so late and everyone is still up
***Sean Getting Ready For Bed***
"Why can't I sleep"? Sean asked himself. He was tosing and turning in
his bed. "All I can think about is Nicole. I should of told her the
truth up front" Sean thought to himself. He got up to go to the kitchen
to get himself a drink.
When he was heading back he thought he heard a knock at the door. He
ran to the door. "Nicole" was the first that came from his mouth. There
was no one there.
"I must be going crazy" he sighed to himself and went back to bed.
***The Next Day*** finally :0)
The five girls decided yesterday that they were gonna meet at Golden
Griddle again for breakfast.
***At Golden Griddle***
"Hi.How are you doing"? asked Montana when she saw the other four
girls entered the restaurant. "Hi. Were good. How about you"? they
answered. They sat down and got ready to order their food. "So what
would you ladies like this morning"? the waitress asked. "Uhh. Montana,
Nicole and I would like bacon and eggs. Mara and Peggy would like bacon
with an omelette" Alyson replied politely.
"Well I can tell it's not gonna be my day" Nicole groaned. Then of
all songs they had to play on the radio, they played Until The Time Is
Through by 5ive. Peggy and Mara just groaned. Alyson just started to
cry and ran off to the bathroom. Montana followed after. "See I knew
it. Today just isn't my day" Nicole said when Alyson left the table
left the table.
They just sat there in silence until Alyson and the food came to the
table. "Are you okay" Mara asked when Alyson came back. "Yeah, i'm
okay" she replied. They ate my food in silence.
***5ive At J's Hotelroom***
"I feel so bad" Rich said almost crying. Scott just sat in silence in
a corner alone thinking about Mara.
"You know. I think we should go visit them and apologize" J suggested.
"Where are they then? You already phoned Montana's house and their was
no answer"
Abs pointed out.
Sean spoke up, "Well I remember overhearing Peggy and Nicole talking
about meeting up again at Golden Griddle for breakfast." "You dummy.
You knew this and you never said a thing. Let's go." Scott yelled half
way out the door. "Wait there buddy. I remember passing like a million
of these places on the way into Toronto" J said. "Yeah but wouldn't
they go to the nearest one to their place. Montana lives not to far
from here"Abs said. "Then lets check out the nearest one and see if
they are there" Rich said feeling alot better. So they left as soon as
they got ready.
***Back With The Girls***
The girls were just done eating. "Umm, can we please have the bill"
asked Peggy when the waitress returned.
She returned the bill a few mintues later. "Well since Mara and I payed
for the bill last time, you three got it this time." Peggy smiled.
Alyson sighed, "Fine, it's no biggie."
On their way out Montana spotted five familar faces. "OMG. Look it's
them." The other gour looked and gasped. "Quick, run to the car quietly
so they don't see us" Nicole said kinda laughing. They started to speed
walk towards the car. Just as they were at the car they heard their
names being called.
Five guys ran up to them. "Why are use running from us? We just wana
talk"? Rich said almost crying. When Alyson saw his face she had to
turn away. Scott grabbed Mara to go talk alone.
***Mara and Scott Talking***
"Mara. I am really sorry I hurt you. I love you so much that it hurts
me to see you hurt" Scott said pleading for her forgiveness. "I love
you too much to lose you." "Well you should of thought of that before
you lied to me" Mara yelled back. "And my name is L'mara, don't call me
Mara." She started to cry herself. She ran away from him and got into
the car. Scott just stood there crying.
***Sean and Nicole Talking***
"Nicole. I wanna talk to you" Sean pulled Nicole over to the side.
"Nicole I love you so much and I'm so sorry I hurt you. Please, you
have to forgive me.I know we just met but I really care about you alot"
Sean said just wanting to kiss her and hold her in his arms. "Well.."
she smiled and Sean thought to himself that she forgave him. Then she
saw how the rest of the girls were acting and she stopped smiling. "I
can't. Not yet anyway, I still don't forgive you" she walked to the car
and got in with Mara.
Sean walked over to where Scott was.
Chapter 12
***Ritchie and Alyson Talking***
"What do you want"? Alyson asked really pissed. Sean
and Scott tried to get Nicole and Mara from the car.
"I want to apologize for hurting you. I really care
about you alot. I love you" Rich said. Alyson just
stared at Rich trying to read his face to see if he
was telling the truth. "I dunno. You really hurt me
alot. I mean, we even asked if use had any secrets.
You lied and I dunno if I can trust you again" Alyson
said letting out all her emotions.
Ritchie walked up to her, smiled and she looked at
him like he was crazy but then she smiled. She leaned
in and he leaned in then they kissed. First the kiss
was soft but gradually became more passionate and
deep.
They pulled apart, "Don't tell my friends or
yours...yet" begged Alyson. "Don't worry I promise,
you can trust me" he smiled and gave her a hug
goodbye.
Alyson walked back to the car. She watched as Sean
and Scott gave up on getting the girls from the car.
***Abs with Peggy***
"Abs, please leave me alone. I don't wanna see you
again. Ever." yelled Peggy. She tried to walk away but
Abs grabbed her, "Stop, don't walk away please." "Why?
so you can lie to me again" she asked crying. "No
listen, I didn't lie. The real reason I kept 5ive a
secret was becaue I wanted to know if you loved me for
ME" Abs cried.
She didn't know what to say, "Of course I love you
for you. I wouldn't of been so angry if you would of
told me the truth in the first place." Abs looked
stunned. " You love me?" he asked. "Uh..um..well
maybe...yeah I do" Peggy said blushing abbit. "I love
you too" he smiled back.
"Peggy, let's go now, were leaving" Mara yelled from
the car. "K, I'm coming" she yelled back. "Abs, I have
to go. Maybe I'll see ya around or something" Peggy
said as she walked towards the car. "Wait, I'm
confused. Do you forgive me or not?" asked Abs. "I
dunno. Bye" she replied and continued walking to the
car. "About time" laughed Nicole.
***Montana talking with J***
"Montana why aren't you returning any of my calls?
I'm really sorry." J said. "Yeah well you should be
sorry. You lied to me and you expect me to just run
back into your arms?" Montana asked starting to cry. J
just stood there thinking. "I saw you guy's interview
last night" she said. "Did you? Well, did you watch it
all?" J asked. "I only caught the part where use were
asked if you had girlfriends. I heard you say you
loved me" Montana said starting to cry again.
J watched her quietly, "it's true. I do love you?"
"Your making this really hard you know" Montanasaid
wiping away her tears which were coming down harder.
"You think that you the only one frustrated. Well your
not. It's hard on me too. I love you and the fact that
knowing the one girl whom I love love hates me, well
it just kills me" J said crying madly now. "Well I'm
sorry J but you lied to me and you hurt me so I can't
be with you, not yet anyway" she replied.
The other four girls were in the car waiting for
Montana. Alyson got into the drivers seat. She drove
towards Montana and called "Montana, were leaving come
on now. "Okay i'm coming" she replied and walked
towards the car. J grabbed her arm hard and pulled her
back and yelled "Wait." "Let me the fuck go now J"
Montana swore at him. "Let her go you jackass"
screamed Alyson. "Butt out of this" he yelled back.
Ritchie ran over and pulled J off of Montana. She ran
over to the car and got in. The five girls drove away
from the guys in hurry.
"What the hell do you think your doing? Just because
you don't care what happens between you and Alyson
doesn't mean I don't care 'bout Montana" J yelled and
swung at Rich. "Whoa J take it easy man" Scott said
trying to clam down J. "Leave me alone, all of you"
was his reply. He got into their car and drove back to
The Mystic Deluxe.
"I don't believe him. He just left us here" Abs said
getting anygry. " What an asshole."
"Hey man, lay off, he's having a hard time right now"
Sean said sticking up for his best mate.
"Well excuse me but we are all having a bad time but
you don't see us freakin out like him" Abs shot back.
They just sood there thinking of a way to get back
to the hotel. "How about we get a bag or catch the
bus?" asked Ritchie. They all agreed and left the
parking lot. They talked about the girls thw whole way
home.