"Sleepless Nights" By Shelly & Raven


"***** Special Edition *****

Why has the Colonel Dijon called upon 5ive, Backstreet and Nsync together..? It's a mysterious gatherin' at his secluded mansion.. deep in the bayous of Southern Louisiana..! Watch as the Colonel announces his intention of his millions..who are all present..! Immdediately.. there is greed and suspicion among everyone.. includin' the staff. The air becomes thick with anger and betrayal... As the drama unfolds to expose the killer before it stikes again!

Scott

It was Friday mornin' at 10:22 am...there was knock at the front door..and of course I wasn't up yet at this time of hour..so I decided to get up and answer the door..I got up off me bed..with me trackies on..and headed down the stairs towards the front door..I opened the door and there was the mailman standin' there..I said "Ello.." can I help ya..?" He said "I have a letta for Scott Robinson.." I said "I'm em.." the he said "Good..then ya could sign right here.." So that's what I did..and he handed me the letta..I thanked em and closed the door..just before I began ta open it..the phone rang.. I headed towards the phone and picked it up..and said "Ello.." It was Abs..

Abs

I had gotten up real early..and me girlie Ash came by with a letta in er hands..which she had gotten yesterday.. and I had gotten one this mornin' too..I rang Scott up ta see if he had gotten one too..? He told me that he was 'bout ta open it..so I had told em that I'll wait on the phone while he opens it and reads it out loud..cos basically Vix's and me letta was the same..except for the addy and the names..and so Scott's on the phone readin' it out loud..and comes to this point that we are all invited to go to Louisiana..there was a plane tix and with our names on it..I said to me mate Scott "Hey..this is a smashin' trip a little get away..and relax.." Scott said "Yeah..man!" Then I thought about me other mates..I wonder if J, Sean, Ritchie, Raven, Vix, Jade, Erica Emily and Kay had gotten one..?"

Ritchie

I've been tryin' ta call Abs for a while now..and I always got the busy signal.. so instead I called me girlie.. Raven..and er phone wasn't busy at all..it rang a couple of times..and then someone picked up the phone and said "elllloo.." in a low misty voice..I said "Mornin' sweetie..then she said "hi hun.." I asked Raven if I she had received a letta this mornin' or last night..?" Raven said that er parents musta looked through the lettas and still sittin' downstairs on the table next to the phone.." Raven said "hold on a min while she went down to go check it..(5 mins later) Raven came back and said that there is a letta for me..but who's it from..??" I said "I haven't gotta clue..?" hmmm...no return addy..?" So I heard er openin' it and then a moment of silent..then Raven said OMGosh!.." Ritchie were goin' to Louisiana..!!" I got a plane tix..I told er that I got one too.." Raven said that she'll call me back in 15 mins cos she wanna read over the letta..

Raven

After I had hung up..I read the letta again..and read over the plane tix..I called Ritchie up..and said "ello..is Ritchie home.." Then some one said "Hold on a sec..is this Raven..?" Hi..it's Dave..Ritchie's in the toilet could he call ya back..?" I said "Sure Dave.." I said bye..and hung up and called Ash up..the phone rang and Ash said in a cheery voice..Ash speakin'.."Hi Ash..did ya get the letta..?" Ash said I sure did.." and I'm so giddy..ta spend a a week with all me best mates..it said that a car will pick us up and take us to the airport and from there we get ta meet the Backstreet Boys and Nsync..and from there a boat will take us to the mansion.." I asked Ash are ya all packed..?" She said "Almost.." Okay then I'll see ya in 2 hours..I can't believe it today..?" Bye Ash..Bye Rave".. then Ritchie had called me back..and said "Raven are ya all pack yet..?" I said "Yah..meet me at me house..okay hun..?" Then Ritchie said "Okay..I'll be there in a couple of mins.." see ya.."

30 mins later...

J

All of us were at Raven's house..with loads and loads of baggages..Abs was in the Kitchen snackin on carrot sticks and all..Ash was flippin' thought fashion magazine ish..Vix was playin with er hair..while Scott was brushin' the lints off his pants...I was watchin' Raven talkin' to Ritchie and Sean..Kay..was sittin' next ta me and pushin' me.. Emily was tellin' Sean a joke..Erica was pushin' Kay around and sayin' don't push me honey around.." As I watched everyone..doin' whatever they were doin'...Raven ask us last call for snackin'.." the there was a van that pulled up to the drive way.. and this bloke got out and knocked on the door..

Sean

I went ta open it and said "Aaaah..Raven.." Raven walked over towards the door...and said "Yah.." the bloke said is ya party all ready..?" Raven turned around and looked at all er mates..and said "Are ya mates all ready..?" We all said "YAHHH.." Let's go.." one by one we all grabbed our bags and headed towards the big van..of course me and Ritchie were the last one in cos...I had ta lock the door..and I knew that I won't be back until next week..

Abs

We were all so excited to be goin' on this little mini trip to Louisiana..and to a mansion too..I was wonderin hows it all gonna be..??" I had brought me cds with me just incase..I get bored at the manion..I could see that Scott was actin' nutta now..then again Scott's always acts like a nut..I looked over towards J..and knodded at em..and he knodded back with a grin..while Ritchie brought his walkman..and was listenin' to it..while Raven was talkin' to em..blab..blab..blab..then after that short ride to the airport..we all got off the van and unloaded our baggages..and Emily looked around there were people here and there and then there they were the Backstreet Boys and Nsync were standin' next to the plane talkin to one another...and of course we were in the same plane as they were..

A.J

"Hey..Hey..look over there Bri.." Look at that sweet thing over there..next to that ugly dude with the spike hair.." Man..she's so fine..I wanna make er mine.." Brian looked over towards me and I said "A.J..which girl are ya talkin' bout..?" There are 7 girls.." Then I said the one that looks like a model..with the long hair.. the one with the trakkies.." A.J..most of the girls are wearin' trekkies.." Shsssssss..."

Erica

I looked over at the Backstreet Boys..and smiled at em..and they smiled back at me..and then I went over towards where Raven and Kay was..they both were sittin' on top of er suitcase flippin' through Ash's fashion magazine ish..I said to Raven "Hey da ya wanna walk with me to say hi to the Backstreet Boys..??" Raven looked at me and then looked over towards the Backstreet and smiled and said "Sure..why not.." Raven

I gotten up and putted down the fashion magazine on top of the suitcase..and took a walk to meet the Backstreet Boys..I could see it that A.J was foolin' around with Brian..and of course A.J is cute..but not as cute as me sweetie Ritchie..but that's not the point right now..I could hear A.J talkin' to Bri bout us.. but I didn't quite get what he was sayin' to Brian..as Erica and I got closer to A.J and Brian..we said "Hi.. I'm Raven and this is me mate Erica and me those other mates over there is Aislinn in the blue trekkies, Vix in the black trekkies with blond hair, Emily with the black cargo with white stripes, Jade with the dark hair and Kay with the the shades on and ...so are ya all invited to the mansion too..?? Brian said "Hey..how did you know bout that..??" I told em that we all had gotten a letta ...Brian said "That's great then.." I said "Yeap..nice ta met ya.." then later on Kay came runnin' towards us..and said "Hey guys..what's up..??"..I saw and smiled at each of the boys..was very giddy ta have met em..

The announcer: Callin' all passengers aboardin' flight C5105 to Louisiana..

Brian

"Ohh..that's us..I'll see ya in the plane..and talk to you and Kay later.." Raven said "Bye to us..and waved to the both of us...as I was bordin' the plane with the rest of the group and Nsync..we got our seats and was sittin' behind us..and makin' a big racket...then Raven who was just comin' in the plane had er baggage with er..and so I leaned over towards the aisle and smiled at er..and she waved back at me and smiled too..

Ritchie

I was walkin' right behind Raven with me baggages and all I could hear Scott kept sayin' is "J's bad habit is.." then he stop ta find his seat so that he could put his baggage down..and chill..I saw this bloke who was tryin' ta pick me girlie up..I was wonderin'..hmmmm..naaa..I know she's not interested in em..so she kept on walkin'..and had passed em..down the aisle..Scott of course on the other hand was actin' like a nut..he was eattin' chips..J and Abs were sittin' across from me and Raven..while Scott, Sean and Erica were sittin' behind us.. Emily, Ash, J, Kay and Jade were sittin close to the cock pit.. after when every one had settled into their seats the stewardess came around with drinks and a snack.. ask us if we wanted..pop, water or juice..?? Of course with J's remarks..his answer would be that he would like ta have the stewardess..but he wouldn't dare say anythin' when his girlie Erica was there with em..Erica was the kinda of girl who is also like Raven..Erica was sweet and kind and down to earth and of course pretty..basically when I look around again at all the girls sittin' here today on this plane..they are all pretty and unique in there own ways..but as I looked at me watch..it said that the plane was suppose ta leave 'bout 10 mins ago..but as usual the pilot takes forever..just before the stewardess closed the door..there was another girl boardin' the plane..and she said "I'm sorry that I'm late.." the stewardess said that's alright.."

Faye (the Stewardess)

I looked at er plane tix and said "okay..Shelly..ya could take ya seats and the plane is bout ta leave.."

Shelly

As I had gotten to me seat...I was sittin' next ta this bloke..I introduce me self ta emm..I said "Hi..I'm Shelly..and he said "Hi..I'm Joey.." I asked em if this plane is goin' to Louisiana..?" Joey said "As a matter of fact it is.." So did ya get a letter too..?" I said "No..but I had gotten a phone call late last night..bout 11 pm..statin' that I'm the special guess in the Colonel's Mansion.." Joey said "Ohhh..cos we all had gotten letters.." I said "ohh..?"

Justin

Lance and I were goofin' off the next aisle down..and J.C was in front of me with his mini disc player..boppin' to the music..Lance was sittin' next to me readin' somethin'..I turned towards em and said "Lance..Man what are ya readin'..?" Lance said "hmmm..some magazine..that I found under the seats.." I looked at the front cover and it was all bout Nascar Racin'..Lance are ya into Nascar racin'..?" Lance said "Naaaa.." I'm more into tattoos and girls like er..I said "Who..?" That girl over there with the red hair..?"

Erica

I was talkin' to J..and this bloke looked over towards me..he had blond hair..he was the kind of lad that scares me..but then again most guys scares me..not when me big J is around ta protect me.. I always feel so comfy when J's around..he was sittin' next ta me with his walkman on and boppin' to the music that he had on...

Nick

I was just singin' to me self on the plane..and of course I had the whole seat to me self..I started singin' "All though lonliness is a friend of mine..I'm leavin' my life in your hands..people say I'm crazy and I am blind.." then the next think A.J who was sittin' in front of me said "Yo..Nick shut it!" I said "Ya want me ta shut it..?" Then A.J threw somethin' at me..and said "Yeah..man I'm tryin' ta catch a few winks.." I said "Make me.." then Brian said "Ya can all shut it..!" Of course Kevin didn't say anythin' cos he was ignorin' all of us..so I took out my GameBoy and started play Pokeman pinball..

Brian

"Haaaaaa...A.J is tryin' ta catch a few winks..with who..?? Hey maybe it's with that girl Raven..??"

Raven

I said "Hey peeps over there..? Who's callin' out me name..?" And don't make me come over there..!" Brian and A.J said "Ooohh..pleazze I want ya ta come down here.." and give us some.." I got up and walked towards A.J..and said "And give ya some what..?"

A.J

Raven was very sexy and slim..and I wanna do er..but I could see that she already had a boyfriend.. but I wanna know which one was er boyfriend..? Hmmm...that was the question that was goin' around in my head..she was bout ta leave..so I grabbed er hand and putted er down to me..

Brian

Nick and I was gigglin' behind the seats with our hands up to our mouths like little kids...we looked at each other..I could hear Raven sayin' that er boyfriend isn't gonna like this and that she's devoted to er boyfriend..then A.J said "Which one is ya boyfriend..?" Raven said that one with the blue dazzlers and the blond hair..then A.J said "Ohh..that gayin' lookin' one..?" Raven said "He's not gay.." He's very sweet indeed.." Then A.J said "How bout givin' me a chance..?" Raven said "No..and I gotta go.." She had a very sweet voice and that British accent of er's made it even more sweeter..

Erica

I saw Raven walkin' towards the toilet and so I went after er..behind close doors..I could hear er cryin'.. I really didn't know what ta do..J was takin' a quick nap..and it was a 4 and a half hour plane ride..so that didn't matter..right now I wanna help Raven out..I knocked on the door and said in a soft voice "Raven are ya okay..?" Then Raven opened the door slowly and asked me ta come in with er..she said that she has somethin' ta say.."

END OF PART 1....

** Special Edition **

Abs

I had saw Raven walkin' pass me and with er head down..then the next thing I saw was Erica goin' after Raven...I'm wonderin' what's happenin' here..? Ritchie had his eyes closed and with that music in his ears..he doesn't even know what happened..

Erica

As I got to the door..I knocked on it lightly and asked if Raven was okay.." she unlocked the door and said "I'm okay Erica..but come in so I could tell ya what had happened..Raven told me that she thought that bloke A.J was a nice guy..but it turned out that he wanted somethin for nothin'..and he called me sweetie GAY.." I said to er "Rave babes..don't listen ta what he says..he's full of it..he just thinks he's all that..Raven said to me "Well he is kinda cute..and sexy..but I can't think of em now.." Not when Ritchie is here..I do luv Ritchie very much..with all me heart and soul.." So I gave Raven a hug and said "Everythin' is gonna be all right.." and I went back to me seat..

Raven

After that little pep talk I was okay..I just wiped me tears and freshen up...and walked back towards me seat..Abs looked at me and asked if I was okay..? I told em everythin' is find..I thank Abs for carin'..and he said "Awww..it's nothin'..and said "I just wanna know if me mates are okay.." If me mates are not okay..then I'm not okay either.." I smiled at em and sat down and leaned on Ritchie's shoulders.. and just in time to..the plane was ready for take off..

Scott

I looked out the window and saw the buildings and the people were gettin' smaller and smaller..and Vix said ta me.."Whatcha lookin' at out there..?" I said "I was just lookin' at the people gettin' smaller and smaller..and then Vix said "Here ya want gum..?" I said "Sure.." then I went back towards me seat.. and this bloke with the blond hair said "Do you have any gum..?" I said "Yeah I do.." but it's me girlie's gum.." then I said "Hey Vix..can he have a piece of gum..?" She said "Yeah.." then he said "Girlie..??" What's a girlie..?" Then I said "My Girlfriend..." he said "OOhhh.." now I get it..you and your British slang.." He introduce himself "Hi..I'm Justin from Nsync..this is Lance, that guy with the superman tattoo is Joey and the guy with the dreadlocks is Chris and way over there the guy with the browish hair that's J.C...then I said "Nice ta met ya all.." I'm Scott, that's Ritchie with the blond hair, the big lad is J, the lad over there with the turtleneck is Sean, the troll over there is Abs..then Abs said "HEY! WHO ARE YA CALLIN' A TROLL..!!" I said "I was only jokin'...then we all laughed..I head back to me seat..

4 hours later....

J

The plane had landed and it was dark out there...we all went ta get our baggage...and there was 3 limos waitin' for us..the each of the driver had a sign that had the names on it..one said Nsync, the other one had Backstreet Boys and the last one had 5ive on it..which I guess that's our ride...I could hear the girls back of me sayin' "Ohhh..my..it's so dark out here..can ya hold me..then Nick the one of the Backstreet Boys was sayin' "Hey..guys I can't find my gameboy..?" Howie said "Don't worry Nick I have it in my hands.." Then Shelly the special guest was sayin' "This is gonna be a great weekend.."

Sean

After everyone had gotten in the limo..I rolled down me windows to see the airport..one limo after another left it's parkin' space and drove off towards the road..the airport was small with loads of lights everywhere.. planes were landin' and takin' off..it was beautiful..but this is another story..Louisiana was a pretty country...Abs asked me how I liked Louisiana..?" I said ta em "Not bad ya know.." Of course Ritchie was havin' the best time of his life..either that he had one ta many drinks on the plane..Vix on the other hand looked kinda angry..I turned towards Vix and asked er "Is everything is okay.." Vix said that she lost er earrings.." Scott looked down on the carpeted limo floors and saw somethin' shiny..

Scott

I looked down and picked up this shiny thing..and of course me girlie said "Ohh..Scott I luv ya..ya found me earrings.." I handed it em to er..and she was so happy that she kissed me and then putted er earrings back on to er ears...

Lance

All the cars pulled along to one side of the road..and stopped..I looked around to see what was going on..I said to Justin "Hey man..what's going on here..??" Why did we stopped.." The driver said "Were here..and he had gotten out of the car to open the doors for us..I said "What do you mean were here.." there's nothing out here but water.." the driver said "There will be a boat to come and pick you up and take you to the mansion.." I looked out the window and said "Man..It's creepy out here..!" Plus the roads were wet...and it's gettin' kinda foggy..I really can't see a thing.." then the boat honk..which it was so loud..that it made Justin, Joey and every one jump a bit..of course J.C didn't jump cos he still had that music blastin' in his ears..I walked up to J.C and tapped on his shoulders..and he letted out a scream..and he jumped..J.C said "MAN!! LANCE DON'T DO THAT TO ME..YOU NEARLY GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK!"...I said "Sorry man..I didn't mean to.." which I was laughin' out loud now.."

Raven

I looked around and held on to me sweetie..I was kinda scared...Shelly was with me other mates gettin' er baggage..and talkin' to Kevin of the Backstreet Boys.." I could here most of the guest were kinda freaked out with this trip across the water to the mansion..Ritchie looked at me and said "Hun..are ya scared..?" I said "Yeah..I am.." then he putted his arms around me..and kept me warm and comfort me..each of the girls did that and each of the lads putted there arms around there girlies..

Erica

"Ohhh..it is scary out here.." I was lookin' for me sweetie J..I went to get me baggage and J was hidin' next to the limo..jumped out and scared me...I screamed so loud..and everyone turned there heads towards me..and J said "Ohhh..Erica I'm soo sorry that I've done that.." the he hugged me..and said "I'll never do that again.." I was nearly in tears..Raven, Vix, Abs, Scott and Sean came over to see if I was okay..which of course I was I punched J on the arms lightly..as the boat got closer and closer..the bloke on the boat threw over the rope for the other bloke to tie around the thingy..it took bout 3 blokes to help everyone on to the boat...

Shelly After every had gotten on to the boat..Nick the Backstreet Boys and his mates were talkin' bout recordin' studio and was wonderin' if the mansion had one of those..?? I was next to this girl..I introduced me self to er and she introducer er and er boyfriend to me..she said that Ritchie is the most sweetest lad ever..and where's his heart on his sleeves..I said "Awww...that is sweet.."

END OF PART 2...

*** Special Edition (Part 3) ***

Brian (Backstreet Boys)

As we all gotten on to the boat..I looked around and said to Nick "Man..this is real creepy.." Hey Nick do ya remember the time when we did that vid shoot of Backstreet's Back with all that creepy stuff and that rats, and cobwebs..and all..?" Nick looked at me and said "Man that was creepy.." A.J looked our way and laughed and pointed his fingers at Nick..and said "I remember when you were all wrapped up as a mummy hahahahahaha...haaaaaaa.." Nick slapped A.J's finger and said "Hey that's not very funny..!" I said "Okay..it wasn't funny then but now it's funny..hahahahahaha..." There was fog everywhere..I couldn't see a thing except for A.J's bright red jacket and Nick's bright blue jacket..

Scott

It was one of those creepy nights..Vicki was cold so I had wrapped me arms around er to keep er warm..Raven was walkin' back and forth the boat..first she walked to the other end of the boat and then she walked around to wear Nsync was then she walked back to where Ritchie was standin' and then she walked to where Ash and Abs were... I said to Raven "Why are ya walkin' back and forth..?" She said I just wanna see how the other side of the boat was.." Ritchie said "Rave..stop it..and come stand with me.." then she said "hmm..nope" with a giggle and then she walked over to where Ritchie was.." and Ritchie wrapped his arms around er to keep er warm..and then the both of em was foolin' around..pokin' at each other..

Justin (Nsync)

I looked at those two love birds..the girl that was walkin' around the boat..I kept on lookin' at her..but she didn't notice me lookin'..PATHETIC!! And I shook me head..and nugged Lance with me elbow..and he said "What..!" I said I was just checkin' out that girl that was walkin' around the boat..what's her name..?" Lance said "hmm.. I think it's Shelly..nope I dunno..?" Why don't ya go over and talk to her..?" I said "Naaa.." She's pretty.." then Lance said "Yeah she is but she's got her man with her.." so I wouldn't try anythin' foolish..!"

J.C (Nsync)

"Yoo.. J.C called Joey.." I turned around and said "What's up..?" Joey said to me that there is a dead body floatin' in the water..!" I freaked out and said "WHERE?" And of course Joey was tryin' to scared the freakin' shit out of us.." Man..Joey I'm gonna kick ya freakin' ass..!" Chris came over and said "Joey that's not nice..!" Joey looked at Chris and said "What do ya know bout bein' scared ya dred lock mon..!" Then I said "Hey..! Hey! Now guys stop fightin'..!"

15 mins later the boat got closer and closer to the mansion...An island in the swamp..Colonel Dijon's estate an run down old mansion is visible in the background..

Sean

One by one we all looked at this mysterious house with a big shadow over it..and I looked around and everyones mouth dropped open..I said "So what do ya think of it..?" It was dark and creepy lookin'.....there was a was a scarey lookinowl sittin' in the trees..in the front of the gate it had a sign with Misty Acres Plantation.. Emily was holdin' on ta me so tight..

Ritchie

The boat had slowed down and was driftin' towards the dock and I held on to me girlie..Raven looked at the waters and said "Ritchie there's alligators here..!" With a frighten look on er face..Erica letted out a scream she thought she had seen a hand in the water..J comfort er..and..but when we all looked in the water there was only alligators swimmin' around...and seaweeds..maybe it was the moonlight that was playin' a trick on ya..and the reflection off the alligators back..as we all got off the boat and the blokes helped us unload the baggages off the boat to the dock.. Abs took a big sigh and said "Are ya all really ta meet the colonel..Kevin who didn't say a word before on the plane and on the ride here now said "Nope lets turn around and head on home..!" I said "Come on..were all here now and there's no turnin' back..and plus the boat is gonna..and plus the fog was gettin' thicker..let go in.."

Shelly

I looked back and there was no sign of the boat..or maybe the boat turned off the engine and drifted away and with all the heavy fog we couldn't see it..I picked up me bags and walked with the rest of em..and the owl in the tree made this owl noise..and with the winds howlin'...it made seems like some one was screamin'..but it's all in the mind...I kept on walkin'..

Erica

I looked at me watch and the time is 7pm..J and I walked up to the front door..and knocked on it..then the door opened slowly..and the butler said "Yeaaaahhh..in a scarey misty kinda voice..the butler looked like Frankenstein and Dragula..

Jeeves (Butler)

"Aghh..you must be the guest that Colonel's been waitin' for..?" I'll show you all to your rooms..and when you're ready I'll show you around.." Raven whispered into J's ear and said that he walks like a zombie..or somethin'..!"

J

I turned to Raven and said "Yeah..ya totally right..and he looks like one to..that's even scarier than this place.." I grabbed the rest of me bags and headed on up to the rooms and on the way up..Ritchie, Scott and Abs kept on lookin' at the chandeilier..it kept on movin'..and looks bout to kill someone too..we kept real close to the walls while we were walkin' up..on the way up the left stairs the top was a closet..how strange and on our right side of the stairs there was another stairs that leads up..maybe to the attic..but it was dark and gloomy..

A.J (Backstreet Boys)

"Man..Bri..I'm roomin' with you and Nick...And Kevin and Howie..the quiet ones said "Hey I wanna room with all of ya.." What if somethin' happen to us..?" Nick looked around the rooms..and it seems okay.. Nick didn't notice that pictures of the horse's eyes had a hollow look at em..Brian looked at em and the eyes started to move..and they all ran outta the rooms..and Kevin said "Maybe it's all in ya imagination..?" So we all went back to the room and check it out again..and nothin' happened..

Kay

I roomed with Raven, Ash and Scott...and our rooms were close to the stairs..the other rooms were taken by Backstreet and Nsync...there were 10 rooms on the second floor..and another stairs that leads up to the attic..which we ain't gonna go up there..Shelly roomed with Vicki and Emily, Erica and Abs..J, Sean and Ritchie roomed down the hall to our left..Lance, J.C and Joey roomed across from us..and A.J, Nick and Brian roomed two doors away from us...Howie, Kevin, Justin..room next to Scott's room..and each room had a huge paintin' of a different kind of horse..

Ash

I said to Raven "This place gives me the shivers..and the creeps..Raven looked out the windows and said the same thing ta me..Raven said "Ash come quick take a look at this.." I came walked over towards er and she said "Look in the hedge garden..could ya see that there is a shadow in there..?" I looked and said "Rave there's nobody in there but a small statue.." Rave said that she did see a shadow in there.." Scott said I think all this made ya see things.." I said "No.. Scott it's true this place is givin' me the creeps..Kay was facin' the picture of the horse and then she said "Agghh.. mates the horse's eyes seems ta be hollow..should a picture have horse's eyes..?" I got up off the bed and said "Yeah it should have it..then the next thing I looked at it and it seems ta be okay.."

Raven

"I wonder how's Ritchie and me other mates are doin'..?" I walked out of the room and I saw A.J freakin' out..like he's just seen a ghost or somethin'..?" I asked em if he's okay..and he just looked at me like he seen a dead body in the bathroom...A.J said that this is the most creepist place that he's been..he said that he rather stay in a hotel or somethin'..he told me that he just went to go freshen up..and he looked in the mirror and the back of the mirror he saw a dead body in the bath tub..so he looked in the bath tub and there was nothin'...I said ya must have been seein' things.." then he said "No..it's true..I haven't been drinkin' or seein' things..I swear.." then I walked towards Ritchie's room and I heard a howlin'..but the funny thing is that we're on the second floor and all the windows are closed..I think.. I saw Ritchie sittin' on the bed and I walked in and said "Hi Rich..how's everythin' with ya..?" Ritchie, Sean and J all said that they heard somethin' and they didn't know what..?" Then the next thing Ash, Scott and Kay came into the room and said that we thought we seen a shadow outside the hedge garden..I said "We didn't drink...and were all sober..so why..?"

Abs

We all should go down stairs and meet this colonel bloke..J said "That would be a smashin' idea and say ello ta em for invitin' us to his humble mansion...Ritchie got up and Raven was right behind em..and Sean walked out of the room first then Scott and then J..Lance was headin' towards the stairs and he heard someone up on the roof..and held out his arm and said "Ssssshhh..in a whisper kinda of voice to us..and said "Did ya guys hear that..?" And we all looked at the chandelier and it was swingin' back and forth..then Scott whispered to us and said "I know we won't be gettin' any sleep tonite..!"

Vicki

We walked close to the wall again like the same way we came up..and head towards the dinnin' room..where everyone was.. we were all seated in the dinnin' room with a bit of food..cooked by Celie the colonel's personal chef..and then the colonel was wheeled into the room by his maid..she had long blond hair..

Colonel

I came into the dinnin' room wheeled by my personal maid Britney..I introduced er to everyone in the room..there was the colonel's newphew, niece, and his sister-in-law..Clarence his account..Wil..the Colonel's doctor and loads more which he didn't even introduce us too..and said "Thank You all for comin' on short notice....this is gonna be one of those murder clues..and to see who survives at the end will win a 2 year contract of my recordin' company..well since ya all are the best bands in the world..but only one band will get it..Good Luck to ya all..and then I told Britney that "I'm tired and wanted to go upstairs.."

Scott

After that little speech he had made..we all had this weird look on our faces..and continue to talk among our selves..with Vicki askin' me "Hun..what was that all bout..and with Vix lookin' at the pictures of the horses again..and this time it in the dinnin' room..and with the same eyes too.. END OF PART 3...

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