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Taken from Dale "Gruel" Kulas's feedback page found at: http://kulasd.tripod.com/other/feedback.htm

"My buddy Rich, who writes reviews under the alias "kn1gh7" got the overall Review of the Day winner with his review of Wizardry8(PC) "

04/20/2003 rotd topic.

Here is what Ursil had to say..... kn1gh7 comes out of nowhere! On another day it wouldn’t have won, but I don’t want this statement to take away from a fine review either.. Witty throughout, with a catchy and descriptive intro that conjures up images of D&D geeky goodness and keeps the references coming throughout the review. It’s extremely thorough and caters to both fans of the series and newbies. (Speaking as a newbie to this series myself, I was never lost in this review).

4/21/2003 RotD, kn1gh7 got the runner up spot with his review for Masters of Orion 3(PC)

Here's Smoking Simian/Ashy's comments..... kn1gh7 is first up with a review of Master of Orion III. He's really shaping up to be a good reviewer, and I especially like that because I gave him Rookie of the Day some time ago, and it's nice to see one actually progress. There are a few chunks in the review that I didn't like, but most of it shines through as a rather well-done piece

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From: antseezee | Posted: 9/19/2003 2:36:40 PM | Message Detail

OK, I'm only going to read the FFTA review, but here goes my first critique: As you and your clan become more popular and deadly people begin to flock to your clan begging to join.

- Run on sentence. If you start something with a preposition, make sure you put a comma, and finish it with a correct ending segment.

In Example: the monk has more range movement, and evasion vs. a black mage who has limited movement, and almost no evasion against an incoming attack. - Try to avoid using several ands unless absolutely necessary. Kind of sounds run on.

I was definitely pleased with your graphics section. Plenty of detail and accuracy. You also explained the battle system to extreme detail, which is good.

By the way, you do need a fair amount of improvement on grammar and sentence structure. But I'm pretty sure most people can get by the errors. [6/10]

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Hulk, The

Editor Comments: Post it Rich. Good job. We need an overall score. It says Tinkered with a few bits of grammar that were overlooked and posted it. Serious Rich, really good work! - todd I corrected a couple more grammar errors that were missed too. -Dale

 

Wizardry 8

Editor Comments: Rich this is your best review ever! Great work and thanks again, for participating in Yahoo groups editing system! -Gruel

 

Master of Orion 3

Editor Comments: Great work, and thanks for your participation in the Yahoo groups editing system. -Gruel

 

BloodRayne

Editor Comments: I sent Gruel my comments on why rejected - Liver Great review Rich. Very informative, and plenty of touches of humor thrown in to keep the reader interested throughout the review. There were some spelling and grammar errors throughout the review, but most of them were minor problems that I patched up with ease. Some sentences were construced odd, and I swapped some words around to make them flow better. Still a great review, and I hope I get to edit your future efforts! -Gruel