half assed poetry

poetry is a wonderful thing. I use to write poetry in highschool, but it was the "i hate everyone and everything and no one understands me I'm going to eat worms and slit my wrists because no one would care" kind of poetry. Gladly I've matured onto reading real poetry and having an appreciation for it. My biggest influence is William Carlos Williams, who I don't know if I could ever compare myself to him, but here are some of the more recent poems I've written.
Wonderful

Wonderful
Comes in assorted boxes
Wrapped in ribbons and bows
Or even the Sunday comics
Delivered on any occasion
For any season
For any reason
No matter what the presentation
Or the ribbons of comics
The surprise that you know
Is inside all the boxes

Of course Boobytraps are like that too.
Three Haiku

Neptune's Titan

Waterbug lingers
doe-toeing across the pond
an aquatic feat

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Rustling Branches
tickling the passing wind
Rustling laughter!

Language Barrier

and he said to me
asalamalakim man
what ever that means!!?


The Battlecry of The Math Student Who Is Covered In a Mixture of Blood and Mucas That Has Been Expelled From His Nose While His Glasses Break At The Bridge And The Tape That Holds Them Together Sticks Instead To The Freckles On His Cheek And Pieces of Glass Become Embedded In His Curly Hair And He Can't Even Ask, "Why Me?" While He Is Being Kicked Over and Over Again By The Older Children Who Taunt Him and Harass Him and Make Him Wish He Was Dead So He Would Suffer No More.

Hey,
Someday
You will see
What's become of me
And I hope when you do
That you will feel sorry
For every single thing
You said and did to me
That brought me to my knees
But I'm on my feet
As you will see
Someday
Soon.
There Was a Fountain

There was a  fountain
with parallel streams
water
above
blurring
rising for the stars
and opposing glimmer
instead
falling
to earth
divided then  defeated
dropping with comrades
rising
they try
standing
again, on their heads
but not to push forth
instead
to reach
glimmer
thousand stars will dim
below the water  pillar

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