A Day At Adventure Land (Chapters 1,2,&3)
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One day, Melissa and Michelle were at adventure land on Long Island. It was an ordinary sunny Saturday afternoon. So they thought.

Chapter 1

Melissa and Michelle were best friends since the 5th grade. They were at the time still best friends going to Stony Brook College. "Melissa? I wanna go on that ladybug ride 'cause I hate the blue one! It goes upside down!!" Michelle exclaimed. Melissa laughed. "What?! I didn't like it last time we were here!" Michelle stated. "Do you remember when we were last here?" Melissa asked. "Yeah.Wayne was in 4th grade and we were in 8th grade. I was so afraid to go in the crappy haunted house! Do you remember that lil' 4 year old who said I was a scaredy cat?" Michelle asked Melissa. "Oh yeah. Just like if it was yesterday." "Don't you wish we weren't in college!" They both laughed. Michelle was an 18 year old majoring in the performing arts. She was a tall brunette girl that was comical person. She was an all around person. Melissa was your average 19-year-old girl. She was a tall brunette majoring in the arts. She loved to draw. She was a professional. She loved being around people and loved to be happy with her friends. Now, Melissa and Michelle already survived the ladybug ride and the haunted house. Plus for the first time EVER, Michelle went onto the Pirate ship. It was the best experience. "Melissa! I wanna go on the Surf dance!" Michelle exclaimed. "But I wanna go on the Merry go round." Melissa replied as they were walking towards the Surf Dance. They decided to go on the Surf Dance. After they got off the ride, they were so hyper. "I'm gonna beat you to the Merry Go Round Michelle!!!!!! I so will!" Melissa screamed to Michelle. As Melissa was running to the Merry Go Round, she bumped into something. Michelle wasn't looking because she was laughing at Melissa. "Whoa. Slow down girl." The man said. Melissa looked up almost in a hysterical laughter moment until she saw a hottie standing in front of her. He looked Puerto Rican and was a total hottie, Melissa couldn't say anything. Michelle ran to Melissa. "Melissa you got-whoa I'm so sorry. Excuse my hyper- " Michelle said to the man until "Erik! Come on we gotta go on the- Oh I'm sorry about my friend here." A man ran towards them. He was a tall boy with blonde hair and was totally hot. "I'm Melissa. A-And this is my friend Michelle." Melissa said to the Puerto Rican babe. "Hi. I'm Erik and this is my friend Ashley." Erik said pointing to the blonde boy. "Hi." Michelle said. "Hey." Ashley said shaking her hand. "Hey." Melissa said shaking Erik's hand. "So what were you running to anyway Liss?" Michelle asked dumbfounded. "MICHELLE." Melissa said under her breath. "And what were you going to Erik?" Ashley said. "I was going to the Roller coaster!" Erik exclaimed. "The lady bug??" Michelle asked. "NO!! Did you go on that?" Erik asked. "Umm.I gotta go on the merry go round now okay? Actually No! I wanna go on the pirate ship again." Michelle said walking away. "MELISSA! Where the hell is the pirate ship?!" She screamed. They all laughed. "WHAT?" She exclaimed going to them. "Let's just go on the merry go round Meeshie." Melissa said. "MELISSA DO YOU KNOW WHO THEY ARE?" Michelle whispered. "Umm." Melissa thought. "THE O-TOWN BOYS!" Michelle whispered. Melissa looked at Michelle in shock. Then at the guys. Then back to the floor. "OH MY GOD." Melissa said.

Chapter 2

"What?" Erik asked going to her. "Are you guys in O-Town?" She asked. "MEL!!" Michelle exclaimed. "It's okay. Even though we thought you wouldn't recognize us." Ashley said walking to Michelle. Ashley was a total hottie to Michelle. "Sorry!!" Michelle said. "It's fine. Fine." Erik said. "Let's get on and stop moping!" Ashley said taking Michelle's hand and going to the ride. "Is it true that you and Michelle went on the ladybug

ride?" Erik whispered in Melissa's ear. "Yeah. Michelle hates hights." Melissa said out loud. "You guys are talkin about me!!" Michelle said to them turning around because she was walking infront of Melissa and Erik. Michelle was walking with Ashley. "We're talkin about the ladybug!!" Melissa screamed back. "Oh.Don't tell him!" "It's too late." Melissa said. "Do you love to torture me for your own pleasure?" Michelle asked sarcastically. Melissa giggled. "Cute." Erik mumbled. Melissa turned to Erik. " 'Cuse me? I didn't hear what you said." Melissa asked smiling. "I didn't say anything. You must've heard Ashley say something-" Erik was saying until "Now you're talking about ME?" Ashley interuppted. Michelle laughed hysterical. "I betcha they are talking about both of us at the same time!" Michelle exclaimed. Ashley laughed and so did Michelle. They liked eachother a lot but didn't want to say it after 15 minutes of meeting. They all went to the merry go-round. "Ok. If you guys don't wanna go on the ride, we'll just go on ok?" Michelle said as Melissa and she went on the line. "We'll wait." Ashley said. "Ok." Michelle said smiling. "DUDE HE IS HOTT SHYT!" Michelle mumbled to Melissa. Melissa laughed hysterical as they got on the spinny thing on the merry go round. They spun it and they were going SO fast! As they were on the ride: "WOW. These girls are really cute and fun aint they Ashley? ASHLEY? ASHLEY ANGEL WAKE UP!" Erik said giving Ashley a slap on the arm. He was gazing at Michelle. "What happened? I wasn't paying-" Ashley said until Erik interuppted and said smiling "OOOO who got the hotts for Michelle." Erik said nudging him. Ashley smiled. "Yeah.She's so cool." Ashley said sitting on the bench looking at the two girls on the spinny thing having a little too-much-fun on the merry go round. Erik started to laugh. Then Ashley did also. The girls

were already lauging so it was like they all were laughing.

Chapter 3

The girls got off the ride as they were dizzy like crazy. "Liss, you got the dizzy disease." Michelle said to Melissa. "Michelle we are still our chidish teeny selfs!" Melissa said to Michelle. Ashley and Erik walked over to the girls. "So did you girls have fun?" Erik asked pulling Melissa aside. "Yeah. Michelle didn't stop turning the circle thingy!" Melissa said to Erik looking into his eyes. She loved his beautiful chocolate brown eyes. They laughed. "I see that you are fasinated with the circly thing on the merry-go-round Michelle." Ashley said to Michelle as she was trying to get out of being dizzy. "It was a lot of fun." Michelle said. "What are we going to go on now guys?" Melissa asked. "THE BLUE ROLLER COASTER!!" Erik exclaimed. "And who's gonna join you huh?" Melissa asked. They went in a line with Ashley and Michelle. Erik looked at Melissa. Melissa got scared. "OH NO WAY!! I aint goin on that thing! I am soo afraid of that thing!!!" Melissa exclaimed. She looked at Michelle. "Why don't you ask Michelle!" Melissa asked him. "You want me to die?" Michelle asked. "Aww." Ashley said putting his arm around her. Michelle cuddled next to him. "Please, Melissa. Please please please!! I'LL DO ANYTHING!" He asked her on his knees. "Get up Erik!!" She exclaimed laughing. "Only if you go on with me." He said looking into her beautiful brown eyes. Her eyes felt like they went on fire. "Ok. I'll go on with you." She said smiling. He got up and hugged her and picked her up. "Yay!" He exclaimed. Ashley and Michelle smiled and giggled. Melissa laughed. Erik put her down. "Let's get on!" He exclaimed. He took her hand and they went to the roler coaster.

**Go on to chapters 4,&5**