ON SHIEKHS AND SPIES IN HAWAII [PG-13]

Author: rj-chan

Genre: Adventure - Humour (Non-Yaoi)

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Prologue : Part 1 : Part 2 : Part 3 : Part 4 : Part 5 : Part 6

Recommendation:

-cocacola_lover-
This fic will be the death of me. I would either die from all the suspense and anticipation (darn those cliff hangers) or from laughing.

-zero-
A plot with twists unlike any other, this combined with the author’s trademark wacky humor. I’d say this is a must read for those seeking a humorous adventure fic.

 

Main Characters

The Critique

Akira Sendoh Ayako Hiroako Koshino Ryota Miyagi Mito Youhei Noma Takamiya Sauchiro Souchiro Jin Nobunaga Kiyota (Presently there is not enough chapters for sufficient analysis on the characters)

(still incomplete but we’ve decided to post a few things because people seems to be viewing this page a lot) Cocacola_lover: A SD newbie will definitely be a bit confused initially, not only were there plenty of characters involved, almost all of them are also merely secondary characters in the SD series. But, you don’t need to be a SD fan to enjoy this one. The fact that most of the characters involved are not fully developed in the series gives the author some leeway to tailor their personalities for the story. The title caught my attention, definitely hints the originality of the plot/twists and so far I’m not disappointed. Zero: The author has abundant imagination and humor. Humor is definitely her forte, I found myself laughing a lot through all the chapters however, something seems to be missing in the delivery of the supposedly suspenseful scenes. There is a lack of descriptions that could have somehow bring the readers into the scenes or at least let us see it in the author’s/character’s eyes. The abrupt, straight to the point writing style may work very well with humor scenes but the action/suspense ones needs details to fully work. To the author’s credit she did do well in telling us the story. I’m just saying it could have been better