Commentary Added-- 8.15.06
In the original drawings, I write the text in with my pencil and go over it with font on the computer. Small font is practically unreadable smushed together, so I have to think of ways to incorporate long speeches into panels without eliminating someone's head. If I had to do the whole comic over, I would probably plan it better and not make so many rash decisions about who's going to be whom. Also, I would try to give some more people some dialogue. Everything seems to revolve around Shley--that's not what I was going for, believe it or not. |