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**Thee's note:** I asked Engoa if I could place her comments
on this critic page about the new design from the e-mail she
sent me. She replied with this letter:
To: blaze@alltel.net
Subject: Oh wait i'm not , yet! THEE
Date: Wed, Jul 12, 2000, 7:15 PM
Thee this would be me being a
critic of your site and it starts
NOW
I'm gonna change my planets name
to Adriusxite so that i'll look better at
what i do then i am. Okay that's a lie, but it would be nice
to have the art
talent you do.
The "Eyes of Destination"
has two Daughters, yet only one has yet to effect
your entire site. And that would be your newest picture. And
oh how i envy
you. I am basically clueless on how to draw a face never mind
how to do it
on a computer. Eyes, well i sure can't make 'em as complex as
you.
I love the Mouse over stuff you
have done. The mouse follower is cool to.
Maybe one day i'll be as good as you. But then i'd be a wanna-be
and well
maybe i would like to be like you but i still like my own planet
more! Sorry
but it's true
And to think i have this all
to blame myself for, if i had never asked for a
planet, ...wait a second... if i hadn't asked for a planet i
would have
never gotten my planet and i would never get to sit down and
just marvel at
your pics and figure out exactly what things you did to get everything
done
that way.
You have come along way theeaira.
I wish i still had one of those first
planets you sent me, maybe i do. If you could only see what you
started off
as you would see that you have come a very long way. Come on
little round
balls of color with a ring around it. To making digital faces
and beutiful
arrays of of Space. Oh come on. You have long since been gifted
at Art,
Maybe not with a pencil and paper ( i have never seen a work
of art done by
hand by you) but you make the difference up with your digital
art skills.
Our worlds are beyond different.
Mine is written and maybe more detailed in
culture and ethics and how they think, and write. You though,
well you
explain your world through images. I think that's what makes
our worlds
different and each as enjoyable. If we were both equal our planets
i don't
think would be as interesting. They would be simiar it would
just be the
colors we decorated with. Thats all.
Many worlds have come around,
even one has drifted in yet, the two of us
still stand. Each as diverse and each as similar. We use the
same phrases
and sometimes even ideas. We take ideas from eachother without
even knowing
it. I only know this because after i read any book, if i am writing
well
some of the things i liked about the story "accidentally"
spill out into my
writtings.
End
Well clip parts out of that and
spell check it cause i wrote it on the spot
and some parts are just plain weak.
What i like most:
Your banner that says someting
like "don't like your world come to mine"
that's cool, something i wish i'd thought of first
You color scheme, it really does
all match, (something i also need to work
on, not that i'll probably ever get around to it)
The fact that my friend is going
to be some major computer artists and i'm
still gonna know her
Engoa
I don't care if you enclude any of this just don't enclude some
of the
really weak spots okay
**Thee's note2:** As for the "weak spots" in
the letter: I didn't find any. I left it as I got it. I hope
Engoa doesn't kill me... ;-)
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