Jezreel Goes to Visit her Father |
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[GM] As the echoes in the Symphony fade, Jezreel puts her sketchpad back into her backpack and begins walking back towards the subway. 'An Assignment!' she thinks, 'An actual, honest to goodness Assignment!' For a moment she considers heading home to tell her mom, but then she remembers that Dodai had said she would be teaching Internet safety classes all day. 'Okay then,' Jezreel decides. 'I'll go tell Dad first...' But demanding nothing less than total honesty from herself, she has to admit that she'd rather see him first anyway. After seeing Cozbi, she'll want the comfort and solace of her mother's arms. Decision made, she catches the train that goes to Smith and Smith's. When she reaches her stop, Jezreel makes a quick pit-stop in the restroom to check her appearance in the mirror. Seeing that wisps of her long dirty-blonde hair have escaped from the ponytail holder, she takes it down, runs a brush through it, and then again ties it up in a tight ponytail. She freshens up the very scant amount of make-up, pink lipstick and some light rouge, that Dodai allows her to wear. Jezreel then tucks in her black T-shirt into her faded blue jeans, knowing that Cosam always preferred a tidy appearance. As she does so, Jezreel smiles at the appropriateness of the bright orange caption: "Serve Heaven now. Ask me how." Jezreel considers taking her shoes out of her backpack and putting them on, remembering that ... even before... Cosam had preferred that his daughter wear shoes. "Going barefoot is beneath the dignity of a Seraph," he had told her on one snowy day when she had walking into the house sans footwear. And before she could protest, Dodai had pointed out that Jezreel was setting a bad example for her human peers. "You might not feel the cold," Dodai had gently chided her, "But a human child walking in the snow with no shoes would likely get sick..." Smiling at the memory of better times, Jezreel nevertheless decides against putting on her shoes. 'Now, of all times,' she tells herself, 'I must be True to myself.' Having stalled as much as she reasonably can, Jezreel puts her brush back into her backpack and begins walking towards Cozbi's. Feeling a bit nervous in spite of her excitement over her Assignment, Jezreel begins to sing to cheer herself up, "If you're happy and you know it, clap your hands..." This does much to raise her spirits, and she begins to skip along the street towards Smith and Smith's. OOGM: Nice. :) I like reading the stuff that you write about your character. It lends insight into both her and the NPCs that you've created. **********
[GM] OOGM: Did I ever declare what season it was? OOC: Don't think so; I could check.
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[GM] Smith & Smith's is on the corner of Granville and Georgia, a small little place practically tucked away. The entrance is a single door on the street with a set of stairs above which hangs a painfully bright bare light-bulb. The wooden steps and white-washed walls seem eeriely luminescent. It's not inviting, but it's not that repulsive either. Perhaps it's just thinking about it too much that's the problem.
[IC] He gives some thought to playing dumb: pretending to be a computer user with a system horribly beset by viruses, needing help, told by the guys at some place called KJ computers that the folks at Smith&Smith knew what they were doing. Damien's confident that he could easily get his older system screwed up badly enough that he could later show it to them as evidence of this story. He thinks he's been cautious enough in his hacking that there is no chance of anybody in there, should Cozbi in fact be there, of recognizing him as a hacker who's on to the Demon gang. Steeling himself, deciding that no matter how thin at least he's got a story to tell if pressed, Damien ascends the stairs. Ignoring the second thoughts that keep coming to him, he looks at the door. Does it say "open" or "come in" or anything like that on it? Does it look like the sort of place where customers just wander in? Or, does it look like he ought to knock? If there is any indication that he can just wander in, Damien will do so. Otherwise he will look for a doorbell, or, failing that, knock.
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[SCENE] OOC: And Jezreel is definitely thinking about it quite a bit :)
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[OOGM - To Rob]
[GM] Running out of excuses to stall, Jezreel sighs and walks over to the counter to where the middle aged clerk with the floral shirt is sitting reading her book. She stands there patiently for a moment, waiting for the clerk to acknowledge her presence before speaking. Once the woman acknowledges her (or after about 2 or 3 minutes if the woman never seems to notice her), Jezreel politely says, "Excuse me, ma'am. I was wondering if you could help me. I'm looking for my father.... He works here. You probably know him as Dave-- Dave Smith." Her voice is very soft; her tone polite and respectful. ***********
[GM] Behind the counter is a pleasant-looking middle-aged woman wearing a floral shirt. She's leaning back in a chair reading a paper-back book. *********** [IC] The door to the computer shop opens, and an adolescent kid, hesitantly, walks in. He looks around the store with an appraising eye, as if taking inventory of the store's stock, seemingly making snap judgements about the store. His eyes linger on any displays of virus checking software, and on anything of a particularly uncommon or technical nature. The kid looks to be about 12 years old. He's 5'7" tall, and thin like a rail. He's wearing a faded pair of blue jeans, a black T-shirt with a picture of Darth Vader's headgear and the words "Star Wars," and dirty white sneakers. A digital watch is around his left wrist. His skin is pale, adorned with one or two zits. His sandy blond hair is combed straight, although several strans of it are currently awry. His lips are thin, and his nose is small. The dominant feature of his face are his blue eyes. In fact, the eyes themselves are probably quite normal, but they are behind metal-framed glasses with lenses so thick that the eyes themselves look abnormally large for a kid of his size. Upon first walking into the store, Damien looks at the girl for a few seconds. He muses that despite the best efforts of all the teachers at school, it was still uncommon to see a girl near his age interested enough in computers to come to a store such as this on her own. Looking away, he suddenly seems to remember something, and does a quick double take at her shirt, his eyebrows briefly being magnified as they lower to behind his glasses in thought. After another second or two of this Damien chuckles, deciding that the girl is probably from a churchy family and that the shirt is meant to be amusing. He forgets about it and goes over to looking at software. (This is all before the plump kid with the mouse, I'm assuming, since the girl was already there when Damien walked in.)
[Jezreel]
Caught up in her discussion with the clerk, Jezreel doesn't notice your
attention. (OOC: That and she's not used to having guys scope her out
[OOGM]
OOC: Greeting, Rob :) Look, we get to meet :) Here's that description
you requested.
[Jezreel]
The girl is wearing faded blue jeans and a black T-shirt which is tucked
neatly into her jeans. On the black field of the T-shirt are bright
orange letters reading, "Serve Heaven now. Ask me how."
And, somewhat odd considering the weather, she is barefoot.
When she speaks to the counter woman, the girl is very soft spoken; her
tone is polite and respectful.
OOC: Actually, it seems we look like a pair, eh? :) 'Course Jezreel
isn't wearing her glasses; she has them tucked in her eyeglass case in her
backpack...
[Damien]
[Jezreel]
OOC: Mysterious smile :)
OOGM: He he he...
OOC: Sure. Be that way. Pbbbbtt! {g}
OOGM: double-pbbbbt! {gg} he he he...
[GM]
"What?" The middle-aged woman suddenly sits up. "Did you say 'your
father'?"
[Jezreel] v
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[Jezreel]
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"You don't know David, do you?" she says. It's more of a statement than
a question.
[Jezreel]
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[Jezreel]
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[Jezreel]
"The man you know as David Smith is, in fact, my father. I don't see
him much lately. Not since..." Jezreel pauses a moment trying to decide how
to phrase this in a way that is both Truthful and yet still does not reveal
too much. "... not since my parents broke up." She says, wondering if that
sounds too lame.
[GM]
[Jezreel]
[Jezreel]
OOGM: Resonance Roll! Yee-dog! {clatter of dice} HOLY SHIT!!!! Okay, that's
a 1, 1, CD1... Oh, man... i can't believe this shit...
Ok, since half the action of this scene happens AFTER the Divine
Intervention and we've already role-played a fair amount, we've got to
create some sense of flow, meaning that the Divine Intervention can't
do everything I'd like... oh, well.
[Jezreel]
OOGM: Forgive me, guys, but I just finished my final paper and took my
final in Human Bio this morning at 8:00. I've had three hours of sleep,
so now I'm going to do a little ASCII art.
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[Jezreel]
OOC: But, not wanting to mess it up by typing on it, I'll just tell you
what she writes :)
IC: For a moment Jezreel considers writing the note in Celestial, as
she's not sure if she can trust the woman not to read it, but she decides
against it as that might create more problems than it solves. In her
fastidiously neat, almost gothic script, Jezreel pens:
"Dear Dad,
I dropped by to see you this afternoon (she puts the date and time in
parenthesis), but the woman behind the counter didn't believe I was your
daughter and wouldn't let me see you. I have some exciting news that I
think you would be interested in hearing!!! Please call me at home. The
number is still (she puts her home number)-- in case you've misplaced it.
Love,
P.S. {this last she *does* put in Celestial, just so that Cosam will *know*
she's telling the Truth} I love you, Dad..."
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[Jezreel]
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[Jezreel]
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--> "It's not that I don't believe you, dearee," says the woman, "It's just
that I think you're mistaken or confused or something." <--
[GM: Symphony]
[Jezreel]
"I don't know why my father never told you about me," Jezreel says,
shaking her head. "Maybe he thought it would be too hard to explain.
Maybe he thought he was protecting me." She shrugs. "Maybe he thought he
was protecting you. I don't know really. Sometimes it's really hard to
understand why he does things anymore. Maybe you should ask him about it."
Then, her face falls, "He might even tell you the Truth," but her tone
doesn't convey much hope of that.
--> "David's out on business today, he might be in the end of the
week." <--
[GM: Symphony]
[Jezreel]
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[GM]
The middle-aged man is looking somewhat unfortable. He hesitantly grasps
an item from the selection of soft-core software and heads over to the
desk to make his purchase.
There is a singularly painful fact in this scene. It is painfully quiet.
To Jezreel perhaps this is not such a problem [player call], to Damien,
however, this just adds to the weirdness of the establishment.
[Jezreel]
[GM]
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Jezreel briefly wonders if she can use her "talent scout" Attunement to
just think of whether he'd be a good Soldier or not. She really doubts it
will be that simple, but decides to try it anyway, just to see what comes
of it. So, imagining the older boy as a Soldier, she invokes her Resonance...
OOC: No, I don't really expect that to work as being a Soldier's not
really a skill per se. Neither does Jezreel, really. But being so young,
Jezreel is still learning the boundaries of her own abilities, so trying
and failing is as educational to her as succeeding. And Dodai's guided her
enough that she sees the value in a little trial and error learning.
OOGM: Live and Learn, Trial and Error
OOC: Yeppers..
[Jezreel]
OOGM: BINGO!
OOC: Coolness!
OOGM: :)
[GM]
[Jezreel]
Now being certain that she must contact this boy, Jezreel says to the
clerk, "Excuse me a moment, please." Then she walks over to where the two
boys are talking. She wonders as she walks just what she is going to
say... 'I wish I had paid more attention to what Mom said human kids my age
are like...'
[Damien]
[Jezreel]
[Damien]
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[Damien]
[Jezreel]
[Damien]
Damien looks over at the girl to see her reaction to what he said. He then
looks at the shorter kid to see if he seems to be leaning more against the
mouse purchase, and wonders if perhaps he shouldn't just be more direct.
[Jezreel]
[Damien]
[Jezreel]
"Canned air is still your best bet," Jezreel says facing the plump boy,
"But if you can't afford it, you can often just open it up and shake a good
deal of crude out... And you can blow more out just with your breath. Just
be careful you don't spit," she adds. "Moisture is definitely a no-no."
[Damien:]
[Jezreel]
OOC: I am assuming with Jezreel's high TNs for Computer Operations and
Computer Programming that she can also tell what a lousy mouse the kid has
chosen...
OOGM: Oh, yes. That's not a high-quality mouse. {squeak}
[Damien]
[Jezreel]
Sure that her potential recruit is mad at her, but completely clueless
as to why that might be, Jezreel decides that the best course of action is
to find out what she's done to annoy him. "Have I done something to offend
you?" she asks with complete sincerity.
[Damien]
[That was in another post.... If the GM doesn't mind, let's assume that the
kid either unwisely takes Damien's advice and buys the game, or unwisely
ignores Damien's advice and buys the mouse. Poor kid has no wise choice
available to him. The kid wanders off, leaving Damien and this strange
little girl behind.]
[OOGM: Fine by me. I kinda liked the fly-fishing bit...]
[GM]
Seeming to recover a bit, the kid says a bit confusedly, "It's not too bad.
It sometimes stops going left, but then later it gets better."
[Damien]
[GM]
[Damien]
Damien's manner has something about it which suggests that he's got an odd
curiosity in the girl. Normally, he probably would have just walked away,
writing off the whole incident as "another dumb girl trying to pretend she
knows something about computers." (Ignoring, of course, that the whole bit
about compressed air actually made some sense.) However, having overheard
some of the girl's converstaion with the woman behind the counter, Damien
finds he wants to know more about this girl and her father. He's a little
hesitant to show it outright, however.
[OOGM: Hey, Rob, don't forget her shirt. :) It's a cool shirt.]
[OOC: Damien's already rationalized the shirt as a joke for a girl who's
from a churchy family. He hasn't yet thought about the implications of the
shirt in connection with who he suspects her father might be.] [And, for
Charybdis' benefit, I'd better add a mysterious smile at the end of that:]
O:)
[Of course, all of that is sort of hard to tell from the expression behind a
pair of coke-bottle glasses :) ]
[OOGM: Not to mention the fact that she's a Seraph... :]
[OOC: Damien probably can't hear her resonating, however. :) ]
[OOGM: Unless her body Resonates, too. Oh... what a neat Discord idea,
everytime you Resonate, you RESONATE as well. :) Neat!]
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