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                                   Vision of Escaflowne
                                        Episode 20
                                      "False Pledge"

                        Transcription and Event Descriptions by Brian Shea
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//Allen and Hitomi have just kissed on a bridge. Hitomi looks up at Allen and backs up.

Hitomi: Um... I...

Allen: Hitomi.

//Hitomi sees Van, who was watching. Van looks at them happily then walks away.

Hitomi: Van... 


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False Pledge

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//In the windmill, Van and Merle sit by a fire.

Merle: Geez, you got drenched.

//Merle takes off Van's shirt and hangs it up to dry. She dries his hair with a towel.

Merle: That's why I told you to leave a girl like her alone.

//Meanwhile, Allen brings Hitomi to her room.

Hitomi: Well, later then.

Allen: Hitomi. You'd better go to bed early, so you don't catch a cold. Princess Millerna's 
       marriage ceremony is tomorrow. Excuse me.

//Hitomi shuts the door.

//Meanwhile, the Vione is being repaired in Zaibach. Naria and Eriya duel with daggers. Naria's 
  dagger is knocked away. Eriya holds her to her chest, but is knocked to the ground. Naria beats
  her down to the ground.

Naria: That was close. You almost won.

Eriya: Damn it. But my luck was stronger last time.

//We see her and Folken from the last episode.

Eriya: Even now.

//Naria leans over her.

Naria: Damn it. What's with this cheeky way of talking?

Eriya: But I was the winner, don't you see?

Naria: Say what? Were Master Folken's lips warm? Let me feel it. 

Eriya: H...hey!

//Naria gets off of her. 

Eriya: Naria... I want Master Folken's love. I realize now... ...if we hadn't kissed, my dream 
       wouldn't have been destroyed. Although Master Folken provides us compassion, I didn't feel
       love.

Naria: But we're happy, aren't we?

//They remember from years before when they were children, forced to the edge of a cliff.

Naria: Our lives were supposed to end at that moment.

//Naria and Eriya jump off the cliff. Folken flies down and saves them, bringing them to safety.
  They back up against a wall and bite his hand when he holds it out.

Folken: Such a pity.. Your lives must have been hard. I'll give you new names. As of today, you 
        are reborn... ...to lead more fortunate lives.

Naria: We were supposed to have good fortune. 

Eriya: But we haven't defeated the Dragon.

Folken: It appears impossible to surpass the strength of his fortune at your current fortune 
        level.

//Folken comes in.

Naria and Eriya: Master Folken.

Folken: Naria, Eriya... ...if you wish, I can give you an even stronger fortune... ...absolutely
        incomparable fortune no one can surpass.

//Meanwhile, Millerna looks for something to wear.

Millerna: This isn't right, either. Strange... I know there's a more suitable one.

//Millerna looks at her wedding dress. The chair moves. Mister Mole is found inside when Millerna 
  looks under it.

Millerna: Mr. Mole...?!

//He gets out.

Moleman: Well, how can I put this... you seem to have lost your usual shining appearance... ...so
         I was worried.

//He gets a piece of jewelry out and puts it on her.

Millerna: H...hey. Th... this is...

Moleman: There're tons of valuables, but there's only one that suits you... ...I guess.

//He leaves. Meanwhile, in a Zaibach lab...

Folken: I'll replace your blood with Fortunate Blood. 

Naria: "Fortunate blood?"

Folken: From Lord Dornkirk's studies... ...we choose people with better fortune and survivability
        from all over Zaibach. Then we sampled fortunate DNA from their cells... ...and mixed 
        them, using the Fate Redirector... ...to create artificial blood. The risk is high. Even 
        the smallest mistake will...

Naria: I'm sure it'll be alright.

Eriya: Because we're fortunate.

Folken: Enhance fate.

//The room lights up, fortunate blood is implanted within Naria and Eriya.

//Meanwhile, in Palas preperations are made. Hitomi watches from a balcony.

Hitomi: I wonder if it's alright for Millerna...

//She looks at Allen and remembers what happened the night before.

Millerna: Hitomi.

Hitomi: Millerna.

Millerna: Say, Hitomi...

Hitomi: Not now.

Millerna: But, I'm not sure if I should live with Dryden.

Hitomi: Such a... it sounds like a Narita divorce.

Millerna: "Narita divorce...?

Hitomi: In other words, it's just marriage blues.

Millerna: "Marriage blues...?"

Hitomi: Anyway, I don't read fortunes any more.

Millerna: Please, read my fortune to help me.

Hitomi: What if it results in a bad fortune again?

Millerna: Whatever the outcome, I'll trust it, so...

//Later...

Hitomi: Three of Serpents.. The Hanged Man...Moon...

//Hitomi thinks to herself.

Hitomi: "Tension, Sacrifice and Hesitation..." As I thought, she's anxious about this marriage of
        convenience... ...and she wants to be free from pressure.

Hitomi: You're nervous because of your marriage... ...has been suddenly decided after various 
        circumstances. But you shouldn't be shortsighted. Ace of Birds... Five of Fish... The 
        Demon and the Five of Beasts... 

//Hitomi thinks to herself.

Hitomi: If she proceeds with this marriage... ...she'll grieve because of someone close and get 
        involved in some sort of trouble.

Millerna: Hitomi...?

Hitomi: There'll be some minor difficulties in your married life, and... She flips over another 
        card.

Hitomi: Lovers...

//She sees Allen and Millerna together. The cards fall from her hand.

Hitomi: What was that?

Millerna: What's wrong?

//She sees them again, then stares at the tower card in her hand.

Hitomi: The Falling Tower...? That means this marriage is wrong. If I tell her this result, I'm 
        sure she'll cancel the marriage. But if she does...

//She sees Allen and Millerna together.

//Hitomi sees the L'Imperatore card in the pile on the ground.

Hitomi: L'Imperatore...? The sign of fortune. If I lean towards that card... ...I might be able 
        to draw its fortune. 

//She holds them next to each other. Her pendant sways.

Hitomi: That's right. If the power of my wish works... ...I should be able to draw a better 
        future. I'm sorry, but if I wish strongly... ...it should be possible to change fate. 

//The pendant swings to L'Imperatore and Hitomi puts it on the table.

Hitomi: Don't worry. This card indicates good fortune. That means you'll be happy in your 
        marriage to Dryden.

Millerna: Happy... with Dryden...


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Eyecatch

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//The wedding begins. A large crowd stands in the town square. Millerna arrives sitting in a 
  boat. Dryden appears as well on another one. They head together towards the town center. Van 
  and Merle watch from the windmill. Knights hold up swords as they walk by. Aston, Meiden and 
  Eries watch from a balcony. Allen and the other Knights of Heaven raise their swords as they 
  reach the alter.

//Hitomi stares at the card.

Hitomi: Millerna, grasp for good fortune.

Kio: What's that?

Hitomi: A good luck charm.

Gadeth: "Good luck charm?"

Hitomi: To hope that Millerna and Dryden will be happy.

//Millerna and Dryden bow their heads.

Priest: Embraced by the sun, moon and this rich land of wind and water... ...sagacious children 
        of Asturia... ...today, on this holy day, a new... 

//The Vione begins transporting away from it's current position in the clouds.

Dornkirk: Upon the seperation of the Dragon and the girl, the probability density has stabalized.
          Now is the greatest opportunity to capture Kanzaki Hitomi, the key to fate redirection.

Folken: But what if the Dragon becomes influential again... 

Dornkirk: If that happens, dispose of the Dragon. 

Naria: Don't worry, Master Folken. Our fortune is now unequalled.

Eriya: We'll capture Kanzaki Hitomi.

//The Fate Redirector light up, as does their veins. Escaflowne's cockpit opens. Hitomi has a 
  vision of Palas in ruin.

Hitomi: Oh, no.

//Lightning strikes a tower.

Hitomi: No... ...it's just like the original reading...

//Dryden puts the ring on Millerna's finger.

Ort: That tomboyish princess is now a married woman.

//Hitomi sees her vision again.

Hitomi: No. This marriage mustn't...

//Hitomi runs away.

Gadeth: H...Hey...

//A beam from Escaflowne's energist appears, causing the Vione to appear in the sky above.

Van: That's my brother's...

//Naria and Eriya head out.

Eriya: They found us.

Naria: The Dragon revealed itself. Our fortune has definately been enhanced. 

Hitomi: Wait!

Allen: Hitomi...

//Hitomi runs down the aisle. Millerna closes her eyes.

Hitomi: No!

//Hitomi trips.

Hitomi: You mustn't kiss!

//They kiss. The sky darkens as the Floating Fortress blocks it out.

Millerna: What?

Dryden: An eclipse at a time like this?

Priest: How ominous...

//Naria appears above them in her Guymelef.

Soldier: What's going on?

Soldier2: Enemy attack! Enemy attack!

Allen: Zaibach

Dryden: Millerna.

//Dryden picks up Millerna.

Aston: Why is Zaibach...?

//Crossbows are directed at the Guymelef.

Royal Guard: Melefs are moving out!

//The Fate Redirector causes the bows to snap and the Melefs to collapse. Allen is unable to get 
  in his Guymelef.

Allen: Malfunction...?! At a time like this...?!

//Lightning strikes a tower, causing the rubble to hit more Melefs. Dryden jumps to safety but is
  hit himself.

Millerna: Dryden.

//Van heads there on Escaflowne.

Van: The castle is...

//Eriya appears behind him in her Guymelef.

Van: Not you guys again.

Eriya: I won't let you get close to Hitomi.

//She shoots at him, but Van dodges. Escaflowne turns around and lands on top of the Teiring, but
  when he swings his sword, the Fate Redirector causes him to swing to the side and fall off.

Van: What...?

//The lights go out of the energists and Escaflowne falls to the ground.

Eriya: This is the power of enhanced fortune!

//Hitomi sits in the wreckage, Millerna comes by with an injured Dryden.

Hitomi: Dryden.

Millerna: Hitomi.

Hitomi: Are you alright? Come on.

//They bring Dryden to safety. Millerna tears off part of her dress to use as a bandage.

Dryden: Damn, how pathetic.

Hitomi: Dryden.

Millerna: That should do it for now.

//Escaflowne crashes nearby.

Hitomi: Escaflowne?!

Allen: Van.

//The two Teirings arrive and surround it. Escaflowne collapses.

Van: What the...?

Allen: No!

Folken: From the Zaibach soldiers with enhanced fortune, to the people of Asturia... 

Van: Brother...

Folken: I repeat, from the Zaibach soldiers with enhanced fortune, to the people of Asturia...

Hitomi: Soldiers with enhanced fortune...? Fortune...

Folken: ...resistance is futile.

//Hitomi looks at her card.

Hitomi: Fortune... could it be because of this card...?

Folken: If you go against our fortune, you'll definately suffer from misfortune.

Hitomi: Because I used this card to switch fate... 

//She remembers when she did it.

Hitomi: Because I switched fates, this happened.

Folken: We demand only one thing. The girl from the Phantom Moon... ...Kanzaki Hitomi.

Van: What?

Folken: If you don't want to suffer further misfortune, hand over Kanzaki Hitomi at once.

Millerna: No...

Dryden: No, you shouldn't go, Hitomi...!

Millerna: Dryden.

Hitomi: Because I... ...because I falsely read the fortune...

Millerna: Falsely read...?

Hitomi: It showed that this marriage would go bad. But I thought I could change... ...I thought I
        could change it with the power of a wish.

Millerna: What do you mean?

Hitomi: The man most suitable for you is actually... ...Allen.

//We see a short flashback of him at the wedding.

Hitomi: But, I love Allen... ...so I didn't want to let go of my feelings. I changed the result 
        of the fortune telling and switched fates.

Millerna: Hitomi...

Hitomi: Everything is my fault.

//Hitomi gets up.

Millerna: Hitomi. Hitomi! 

//Hitomi steps into the open, Dryden starts coughing.

Millerna: Dryden... Dryden, hang on!

//Hitomi runs out in front of the Guymelefs.

Hitomi: I'm here!

Allen: What the...? 

Hitomi: I'm the girl from the Phantom Moon... ...Kanzaki Hitomi! 

To Be Continued...


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