This is the second big project I did in a creative writing class I took year 2 in university. I thought this was a great summation of everything I'd thought of as a graphic storyteller, including trying to surround something, and not be forceful of an overwhelming goal. My prof felt that that meant she wasn't sure any of the really creative bits were intentional, and gave me an average mark. That was helluva disappointment, where I started doubting her mind being open to any extent.