This is a preview of a story that I have been wanting to do about Raye.
I use the Japanese last names because there is really no point in making
up new last names that no one will remember anyway. For the inners and other
characters I will use the English first names but for the outers if they
appear I will use the Japanese names. The reason for that is that there
are no outer senshi in the NA version and I have found that the characters'
personalities in the different versions are not the same. I, myself, can
tell the difference between the stories that are told by people who just
use the Japanese names even though they have only seen the NA version to
the people who have actually seen the Japanese or another version of it.
I had planned on doing a series about this. The idea is the lives
of the senshi before they met Sailor Moon and how she changed their lives.
All the characters belong to Takeuchi Naoko and DIC and Kodansha and
every other company or person who owns it. I am using them without
permission and I really don’t want to be sued. The story idea is mine and
I am sorry if it is like someone else’s I have read a lot of them but I
have not read any like this one before. So read it and enjoy it. Please
don’t send me hate mail about it. Only constructive criticism and good
comments allowed (not that that will stop anyone) If you don’t like it
tell me why and maybe I will be able to fix it.
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Raye’s Story by Mara
*Freak* the word followed the dark haired girl all the way to the
bathroom.
She leaned against the door trying to hold back the sobs. I can’t let
them get to me I have to be strong. She looked at her reflection in the
mirror. Her hair fell down below her waist. It was so dark it looked
almost black or a dark shade of purplish brown. She was average height
and had brown eyes. Tears welled up, blurring her vision. *What’s so
bad about me that nobody even wants to be near me?* But she already knew
the answer to that. Raye Hino, the freak. Don’t get to close of she’ll
steal your soul. She can pluck the thoughts right out of your head if
you’re not careful. *But it’s not trued!* She wanted to cry out but it
wouldn’t do any good. They wouldn’t believe her anyway. She stubbornly
wiped her tears out of her eyes and exited the bathroom; it wouldn’t do
to be late for class.
She walked slowly down the hall of T*A private school dreading
her next and last class. Meredith Pickard, the reason for
her sudden retreat to the girl’s bathroom, was in that class and she
always found some way to publicly humiliate her. Raye didn’t think that
all the others would be so mean if it wasn’t for Meredith.
Raye slowly opened the door of her classroom and stepped inside.
She hoped she could just sit down unnoticed but she didn’t count on it.
“Miss Hino”, the teacher stated loudly.
Raye winced slightly. “Yes Mr.Greegor?” she asked quietly.
“Your late Miss Hino. Please stay after class.”
As Raye moved to her seat she saw Meredith lean over to the
girl next to her and whisper loud enough for everyone to hear. “She
was probably putting a curse on someone.”
Raye stared straight ahead refusing to give them the satisfaction
of knowing she heard or cared about the comment or the hushed laughter.
She felt tears come into her eyes again but ruthlessly refused to
shed them. She sat silently through the rest of class wishing she
were back home.
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