Authors notes.
Well well..I 've finished it. Didn't think I would have the
guts to do It but I'm posting it.
Before I write the disclaimer I would like to say:
I'm 13 years old so don't frill me about the story.
I'm totaly new to this.
I don't have any money. In fact I need money.
Rating: Hmm.. It's like the serie.
And last but not least. I'want comments.
Mail me at Minako_aino@swimmail.com or you can send
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In the year of our lord 19 May 2001.
Disclaimer:
I don't own them great Nako Taekuchi sama owns them.
Don't sue me.
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Zeus.
Min He ha ( Minako_aino@swimmail.com )
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Makoto's thoughts
I’ve always been alone. Ever since my brother was born I’ve been alone.
When my oldest brother died it was like a dream, finally I was
noticed.
Finally someone noticed me. But as all happy times must, it ended.
A cold winterday my little brother Aragorn was born. Now he was the one
in center, ’cause now he was the heir to the throne. Our mother is the
regent queen instead of our father, who died in the war against
Queen Beryl. Now my brother is going to be the king, King of Jupiter.
I’ll probably get married away with some ugly and old man. My name is
( if I didn’t tell you ) Makoto. Always I’ve been alone, I never had
a real friend. Someone I could trust.. But everything is different now.
My own mother doesn’t care. She cares only for my awful little brother.
I haven’t spoken with her in over 2 years. Just to get rid of me she
has sent me to be a part of Serenity’s court. Serenity is the princess
of the moon, heir to the throne over the Silver Millenum. She’s the
only one who’s been kind to me. Accept Minako, Amy and Raye. They’re
the daughters of the kings and queens of Venus, Mercury and Mars.
When we don't train I usualy sit in the gardens.
What I know now I’ve learned from Serenity and the outers. I’ve got
powers, great powers. We’re chosen to protect the princess and
the Silver millennia. But still, I am alone. All the outers think
I came to the moon ’cause I wanted to come there. I dont want a
mother who doesn’t care about me. What is it that I’ve done?
At least now it has begun to brighten up. We train twice a day.
It’s thanks to the training I’ve got friends. My best friend is
Shinosaki, he’s the one who met me first when I came to the moon
and it was he who helped me in the beginning. He came here exactly
like me but he volunteered. He’s going to be a bodyguard to Serenity.
Like I’m going to be. My powers are growing and growing and growing.
What if my mother could see me now. She and my so called brother
always thought that I was weak and fragile. I wonder what my mother
should say when she learns about this. But the years has gone by
and I’m no longer a little 12 year old girl, soon I’ll be 19.
My brother should’ve been 13 years old, but last night I
got a message. My mother is coming to get me, why doesn’t
Selenity, Serenitys’s mother know. I could only guess.
I’m going to get married with some old ugly man. Someone
I’ll probably hate. But if she thinks that she can make me marry
that man she can forget about it. I’ll never marry a old ugly man!
My mother was here now. I’m not going to get married away. Mother
is going to get me home now that my brother is dead. I’ve been
thinking of that, It seems like there is a curse on our family.
Only the women lives, the men dies horrible deaths. My brothers is
dead, my father is dead. At least now I’ve got her attention, but I
dont’want it. I want to stay on the moon, but that I can dream on.
I want to stay with Serenity, Minako, Amy,Raye and Shinosaki. Shinosaki
may not be the most handsome man in the world, but he’s always there
for
me whatever it takes. Soon I’ll have to go back to Jupiter. As it
wasn’t
enough they are going to have a grand ball, to my honor. The ball, the
last day with my friends and Shinosaki.
Chapter 1: The ball.
Everything was as it should be, everyone was preparing themselves
for the ball. But not me, I didn’t want the day to end, I wanted
to stop the time and live and forever in that day. Soon I had to
changes clothes. I have to admit that my dress was pretty. It was a
dark seagreen dress with thin black straps ( an. I'm not good at
describing things so don't expect any fancy). I took out my earrings.
Shinosaki gave them to me on my fourteenthbirthday. They're shaped like
rosese. Finally I had to go, It was time. The last day with Serenity,
Amy, Raye, Minako and Shinosaki. I went down the stairs and looked out
over the room. Beneath me was the throne were Serenity and her, no our
friends sat. I went down there and sat down. Everyone was so sad
that I would go, but I didn’t care. I looked around the hall, but
I couldn’t se Shinosaki anywhere.
A shadow falled over me and a hand was put on my shoulder. We went
out on the dance floor, he danced wonderful. But the dance ended,
as everything has an end. We went out on the balcony, the earth
was on the sky. It looked like a big sphere of water and clouds.
We stood there and talked, after a while I got this funny feeling.
I removed the mans mask and saw Shinosaki look down on me.
( an. I'm not good at dialogues either but hey I do my best.)
- So you found out eventually, said Shinossaki.
- You know that I’ll be going soon, I saidd.
- I know, at least we got this one last niight together, said Shinosaki.
Chapter two : Letters.
It was time, I should go. I went to the transport booth and I was about
to press the button when I heard Shinosaki shout. In my hand he put an
envelope, then he pushed the button. After awhile I reappeared on
Jupiter and was greeted by my mother.
Mother was going to hug me and said :
- Welcome home daughter.
I didn’t hug her, instead I backed away. Mother thought that I was shy.
At least I had my old quarters. I was about to pack my stuff up when I
remembered the letter. I hurried to get the letter and opened it.
Inside was a letter and a ring. Even now I remember what it said.
Makoto,
we’ve only known eachother for seven years, still it feels like it's
been an lifetime. To ask you to wait for me is to much. We can’t be
together. Just remember that I will come to you, whenever you want.
Shinosaki.
The ring had a big emerald and tiny diamonds around it. It was big wet
spots on the letter, I wondered what it was. Finally I realized that
it was tears, my tears. I had to get dressed now. Instead of the dress
I had thought to have I took my fuku, but not the dirty one,
a clean one. I wonder what my mother should have said if I had taken
the
dirty one. I went down, mother was giving me a wondering eye, I ignored
her. We sat down and the food come in. It was delicious.
By the end of the dinner mother said :
- You know that you can’t wear that tomorrrow. Judge Osaka is coming
with his son to have lunch with us.
- Why should I care about that? Asked I.
- because it is appropriate for the betrotthed one to meet the one
you’re
getting married to, mother said.
- What, will I marry a complete stranger? I won’t do that! Ever since I
was born you’ve ignored me. Now you’re trying to get
me married away, I said.
Lightening started to form around me like a cloak, the sky seemed to
darkened a bit outside. I stormed up the stairs and took a long shower.
Mother can do what she wants, but I won’t do it. Never!
The Queens POV.
I knew she would take this hard. I did it myself, when I heard about
my bethrotning with her father. Well I guess she will get used to it.
I know that I’ve cared more about her brothers then her, but I’ve got
to look out for the safety of Jupiter and the Silver Millenia. Oh Zeus,
Why couldn’t we make peace.
Chapter 3 : Betrothed.
Instead of sleep long like I used to do, I went up early. I had just
finished dressing when my mother come in. She said :
- It’s good that you’re finished. Judge Ossaka come here very late
last night.
- Could you tell Judge Osaka and his son tthat I’m very sorry
that I can’t join you and have lunch with you, I said.
You should’ve seen my mothers look when I marched out. Her eyes
stood out a bit. The only spot where I could feel serene was
the garden, I loved the roses there. I went in the garden sometime,
until I came to the pond. Someone stood there, I tough I recognized
him. Him?? How did I know that? He turned around. Shinosaki,
It was Shinosaki, but what was he doing here? I approached him.
- What are you doing here? I asked.
- I’m here to se my fiancé, answered he.
- Are YOU Judge Osakas son? Questioned I.
I couldn’t believe that he was Judge Osaka’s son.
- Yes, didn’t you know that? Answered Shinno.
We sat down by the pond and talked to lunch time. Mother and
Judge Oska came and looked for us. On distance I heard mother say:
- What was it I told you. They look to gett along very good
if I may say so.
- I have to admit that they do, said Judgee Osaka.
- Well if you two would like to come alongg to the dining room
maybe we poor parents could get something to eat, Said mother.
Makotos thoughts
Never in my whole life I could have dreamed of getting
married to Shinosaki. Soon we’ll get married, it’s only
a week left. I’ve chosen a dress now, it’s light white.
Not creamy white or plain white, it’s as white as the first snow.
Chapter 4 : New enemies.
We had just finished talking about the wedding dinner and
the reception when a messenger stormed in shouting :
- Your highness! Your highness. Enemies haas appeared
by the green dessert.
- Who is it? Asked mother.
- We believe it’s Zeus, answered the messeenger.
- I knew he would come one day, said motheer.
- Who’s Zeus? I asked.
- Zeus is my half brother who believes thaat he’s the
rightful king, said mother.
- And now he wants "his" throne? I asked.
- Yes, it’s time to call the hundred, saidd mother.
Makotos thought's.
The hundred only gets called when it’s an emergency. I just hope
that they’ll not cancel the wedding, but they will certenly do
that. I must find Shinosaki now. I found Shinosaki in the rose
garden, he always liked roses.
- Zeus has attacked and mother has called The Hundred, I said.
- You know that I’ll have to get ready forr battle
then? Asked Shinosaki.
- No, you wont have to. Mother can spare yyou, I desperatley said.
- Do you think It’s fair to the men who’lll go into war. Don’t
you think that they would like to be abel to be
out of war? Said Shinosaki.
- Yes i belive so, I answered.
- You’ll both be out of the war, someone llaughed.
- Who are you, I asked.
- I’m Zeus, rightful king of Jupiter, He ssaid.
- Run Mako, Run, Shino screamed.
We run but Zeus launched an attack against us. I waited for
the impact, instead I layed on the ground with
Shinosaki over me.
- Shinosaki, I whisphered.
We’ll meet again, said Shinosaki.
Makotos thoughts.
I love you was Shinosaki's last words and I know that’s true.
Yet I can’t stop cryin’ over Shinosaki, I loved him. I
know that one day we’ll be reborn. Mother comes in
to my rooms.
- I know that It’s awful that Shinosaki diied, but
he’ll return, mother said.
- Is Shinosaki alive? I asked. I couldn’t belive
that Shinosaki would be alive.
- No sweetie. The energy Zeus blasted Shinnosaki with
makes him forget all that he ever has been through
and you, she said softly.
Will Shinosaki fight on their side? I thought. I
couldn’t belive that Shinosaki would betray us.
Chapter 5 : Attacked.
Makotos thoughts.
We’re preparing the planet for the attack. Everything was just
a nervus period when I feared that I would’ve to kill Shinosaki.
But as every happy times It was doomed to have an end. The
attack came on the day that would’ve been our wedding day.
I fought to find my mother. Even if she had cared more about
my brothers then me she still was my mother. I battled
through hall after hall untill I came to the throne room. Mother
was there with a sword on her throth, ready to slice it.
- Stop! I shouted.
- Well look what we’ve got here. The littlle princess is here
to save her "mother", said Shinosaki.
- Release her. Fight with me if you want tto fight someone, I replied.
- As you wish, your highness. That’ll be tthe last wish that’ll
be fullfiled, Shinosaki said and released mother.
Shinosaki moved against me with an sword and attacked me.
I jumped to the side and shouted :
Jupiter Crystal Power, Make up and changed to
Super Sailor Jupiter.
Shinosaki and I had trained with eachother before, so I
knew every move he would make. I parered hit after hit untill
I saw mother power up to attack Shinosaki. I throwed me infront
of Shinosaki and took the hit.
When mother saw that she said:
- No My baby, my little baby.
- Run mom save our people, I said.
I saw mom run out through the door that led to the north tower.
- Shinosaki? I whispered.
- I’m here, answeredd Shinosaki.
- Do you remember me? Asked I.
- I’ll never forget you beloved, said Shinnosaki.
- I love you Shinosaki. We’ll be reborn aggain, I said.
That was my last words. The death came to me silently.
Shinosaki POV.
How would I be able to live with out her. Never I could live on
with out her. I picked up my sword. It was blood stained, by her
blood. We had fought against eachother, but It wasn’t I that had
killed her. She gave up her life for me, so that I could live but
for what use? When I was about to put the sword through my chest
Serenity's mother came to me.
- You love her, don't you? she asked
- I'll always love her, I replied.
- I'll send you all to the future. You'll get a chance to live normal
lives.
- Won't you die then? I asked.
- I'll die then, without my daughter I've got no hope,
Selenity said with a sad smile.
- Moon Cosmic Power.
A with light spread around the whole solar system
and small spheres floated from every planet.
So they were reborn, they met a beutiful day at a park. She sat there
and cried because her parents had died in a plane crash. He comforted
her and always was there for her when she got dumped by a guy. They
were awaked again and regained there memories. They fought against
Queen Beryl and Metallica and they all died in the battle.
The only diffrence was that this time they fought together and not
against eachother. Again they were awakened to figth and so It all
continued, But in the sorrow of the chance to be a couple of normal
teenagers they had eachother.
Kind of sappy ne?? But onegai don't be mad at me.
I'm only 13 and this is my first try.
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