TITLE : Eva A World Twisted
Author: Anthony Dantuono
E-mail Guyver4@prodigy.net
Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don’t own Eva or Jedi ideas
believe me I wish I did. If I owned Eva I might have Gainix
make some of the fan-fics I’ve read into real animated shows
Seven chapters have come and gone
Now the final one has arrived
This is it. The dark ending of the story.
I don’t particularly like dark endings
but I couldn’t help but write one since
the idea won’t leave my head
After this I plan on working
on SDAT CLASH with Jayson Deare and Kaoru Nagisa
Now I give you the final chapter
in my twisted series
Will there be a sequel? I don’t know
I don’t know what to do
Any one wants to write their own sequel to this series
or use any of the characters in their own fic be my guest.
Final Chapter
Twisted Destiny
The sun sank low over the horizon, but our heroes were in
no position to notice the beauty of a setting sun
They were in NERV HQ in America listening to
Anthony Draven tell the origin of Solanos
"Solanos is literally a demon. He was found in a frozen sleep
in the Appalachian mountains. With great effort he was brought back to
NERV in NY-2 the plan was if Angels would attack us, then we should use their
natural enemies, namely demons. S-project was the project that outfitted Solanos
with armor plating and a place for a pilot to sit hoping to bind him to our will
However when Solanos woke up, he proved to be uncontrollable, he killed the pilot
and almost destroyed NERV HQ. Before he could break free, the room his was in
was flooded with liquid nitrogen and bakalite. This combination was able to force
Solanos back into hibernation. However the explosion of the S2 engine and the
death of Christian released enough energy to awaken Solanos allowing him to
break free of his tomb."
"So now that he’s free how do we stop him?" asked Shinji
"Personally I recommend a full nine Eva attack!" said
Anthony
Misato spoke up. "I agree with the Fourth Child, However this is a battle
above and beyond the call of a pilot’s duty. So I asked for volunteers.
All pilots who wish to be involved with this say ‘aye’. Remember it’s OK
if you don’t want to be a part of this fight"
In unison nine young voice called out "AYE!"
Misato couldn’t have been more proud of her pilots
[ Back in Tokyo-3}
Commander Ikari’s office
‘Dr. Asista has failed" said the Sub-Commander
"Just as well, she was not suppose to kill the original
pilots. just replace them. She also unleashed a bigger threat"
"You didn’t know about Solanos. Did you?"
"No. Dr. Serwan covered his tracks well"
"What do we do now?" asked Nerv’s second in Command
"Solanos is as dangerous a threat as an Angel, it must
be dealt with as such. We must use any means necessary"
"Do you regret using the Lance now?"
[Back in the States}
At the Maracroft
Karou was looking out the window at the starts above
lost in thought
He felt a pair of arms wrapped around his chest and a head
lay on his shoulder
"Asuka" he whispered
"Tomorrow is going to be our hardest battle yet. We could very well die."
Asuka said softly
‘We could have died a long time ago. If I die tomorrow I have no regrets.
I love you and you know it. The only thing I would regret was ifI died without
telling you that, I love you"
He turned around so to look his true love in the eyes
"It doesn’t matter. I promise to come back to you after the battle, If you promise to
come back to me." said Anthony
They sealed the promise with a long quiet kiss.
[The next Morning at NERV HQ]
"Solanos hasn’t moved out of NY-2" reported Ritsuko
"We suspect he is not at full power so the now is the best time for
our attack. Each Eva will be armed with a bladed weapon and a rifle
you will be dropped on the outskirts of the city. You must close in hold Solanos
there and kill him"
"How?" asked Myna
"We have discovered that he posses a core like the Angels. Our best
chance is to pierce that core. However given the size of the target
it will not be easy"
"It will be a miracle" said Toji
"Toji, haven’t you learned by now?" asked Anthony
"Miracles are a part of the job"
Twenty minutes later found the Evas strapped to transports
heading for the dead city.
"Get ready for deployment" said the pilot of one of the transports
Then the Evas dropped
at the perimeter of the dead city
Each with a rifle and a bladed weapon.
quietly they moved into the interior of the city
At the center they found the demon sleeping
"Ready?" asked Shinji
"Let’s give him a wake up call." said Asuka
"I got it." said Anthony
Anthony moved closer to Solanos, his sword at the ready
He reached striking distance
Raising his sword he was about to strike the core, when Solanos woke up.
Roaring in protest he swung his claw sending Unit-04 flying backward
three city blocks
"Shit! He’s awake" shouted Toji
"Damn it" said Misato as she watched the battle from NERV HQ
"Major! We’ve just been informed that a squadron of planes has
been dispatched from Tokyo-3" reported one of the American lieutenants
‘Are the brining weapons for the Evas?" asked Misato
"No Major they’re armed with N2 mines. They’ve informed us
that their orders are to dropped the payload on NY-2"
"WHAT! How many mines?" asked Misato
"About a hundred" reported the Lt.
"Who the hell ordered them?" shouted Ritsuko
"Commander Ikari" reported the Lt.
"Goddamn him!" shouted Misato
"How long before they get there" asked Kaji
"About two hours"
"Can we communicate with the Evas" asked Misato
"No Major. We are unable to contact the pilots"
"Shit. They have two hours to defeat that thing and
get the hell out of there" said Misato
" Kaji though bitterly
Back at the dead city
‘Evasive action" shouted Rei
the Evas split up to take refugee behind buildings
Asuka and Hikari opened with a volley of rifle shots
The shots hit home. But barley made a dent in the monsters
armor
‘Well the thing doesn’t have an A.T. Field at least"
said Kensuke
‘Yeah, but that thing’s armor is as strong as ours" said Myna
"Shinji use your rifle and aim for his eyes’ shouted Hikari
The rifle shots landed on the head. Solanos shook his head an
roared
"All that did was irritate him" said Asuka
"Let’s try something else" said Anthony
He charged Solanos with sword drawn
Slicing into Solanos’s side just below the arm
The armor plates were cut away. Roaring in surprise
Solanos reared his leg and kicked Eva-04 into a near by building
Asuka attacked with Eva-02. Her ax was able splinter more armor plating
Solanos’s tail shot out sending Unit-02 into the air,
Asuka came down about a block away
Myna hurled her spear hoping to catch the red core
the demon veered to the left at the last second and the spear splinter more armor
"Well we’re pissing him off" said Shinji
"Damn lot of good it does us!" shouted Asuka
By now one hour had passed.
[Back at the commander center]
"Major, we’ve just picked up a large object coming out of a lunar orbit.
It’s heading straight for the city." reported the Lt.
"Is it an Angel?’ asked Misato
"No It appears to be non-organic, made of metal"
"It’s the Lance! The Lance of Longinus is returning to Earth!"
exclaimed Ritsuko
[In the battle zone]
Asuka shouted orders
"Shinji you and Toji distract Solanos with cover fire.
Kensuke you and Myna assist them. The rest of us will try for the kill"
"Roger" came the reply form all pilots
The blasts rocked Solanos’s head
Distracting him as the others attacked
Attacking points they hit already hoping to cripple the demon
Most of them struck and moved. However, Karou was to slow.
Solanos grabbed him in it’s oversize claws and hurled him into an office building
the building collapsed on top of Unit-05.
"KAROU!!" shouted Shinji
"I’m all right Shinji. My A.T. Field saved me" answered Karou as he dug his way out
Suddenly a huge object landed ten meters to Eva-00’s right
"What is it?" asked Anthony
‘The Lance of Longinus!" exclaimed Rei
‘The what?" asked Hikari
‘The most powerful Eva weapon ever! It was found with the First Angel"
explained Rei.
Solanos let loose a ray of energy from it’s mouth
"Shit! Everyone mover you asses" said Anthony
Eva’s took shelter behind buildings. Eva-07 , that had Kensuke in it"
was grazed by the beam causing Kensuke to drop to the ground withering in pain
"AAhhh" he screamed
"Kensuke!" shouted Myna
"I’m OK but watch that beam" Kensuke replied
"He’s not at full power. It’ll be a while before he can use it again"
said Anthony
"We have to use the Lance, NOW!"
"Who used it last time?" asked Karou
"Rei did" said Asuka
"OK Rei, It’s your show!" said Anthony
[Back at the commander center]
"Thirty minutes before the bombers get here" reported the Lt.
"The pilots will defeat Solanos, we have give them more time!" exclaimed Misato
[At the battle ground]
"How are we going to keep Solanos still?" asked Asuka
With a crash Anthony plunged his Eva’s hand into the ground and pulled cables up
"Titanium steel cable! Used for power line for NERV. It’s also reinforcement for the city
We can use this to bind Solanos while Rei gets her bead on his core!"
Each of the Evas ripped cables up from the ground.
"Spread out! Bind this son of a bitch!" shouted Toji
Rei took the Lance and stood out of the way behind the building
The other throwing the cables like lassos
and roped Solanos.
Myna and Toji’s lassos caught the right claw.
Shinji and Asuka caught the left claw.
Karou and Kensuke caught to tail.
Hikari caught the neck and Anthony caught the mouth.
Solanos began to thrash against the cables
Suddenly Asuka and Shinji were pulled up and
thrown into some buildings
"Damn it!" shouted Anthony
Myna and Toji were next to be sent flying
Solanos roared and whipped his tail send those Evas
crashing into he ground
‘Hikari release the ropes." shouted Anthony
‘Now what?" asked Shinji
"We try to pin him down with rifle fire"
Solanos had a different idea. HE reached down and grabbed
Eva-02, he began to crush it
"Aaaagggrrhhh" screamed Asuka
"ASUKA!" shouted Anthony
The planes were now just five minutes from the kill zone.
"The pilots aren’t going to make it" said Ritsuko
‘Can they survive those mines" asked Kaji
"I don’t know" answered Ritsuko
Misato said nothing but just watched to screen
her eyes damp and her complexion pale with fear.
Anthony forced Eva-04 towards Solanos
sword drawn
"Let her go" Anthony ordered
Slicing into the armor
Solanos roared and grabbed Eva-04 in his claws
‘Damn it" muttered Anthony
Solanos roared and continued to crush the Evas
"Rei.." choked Anthony
‘Throw me the lance!"
Rei tossed the Lance
to the Fourth Child
"Now you die! Bastard!" Anthony said
as he thrust the Lance into Solanos’s core.
Solanos roared in pain, dropping the cripples Evas.
Anthony tried to stand up only to collapse into a
near by building. HE glanced up at Solanos, who was
thrashing in pain as it died. Looking passed Solanos he
saw a squadron of fighter planes. More importantly he saw
them release many familiar devices. N2 mines
Anthony bowed his head and whispered to himself
"It’s over."
As with everyday the sun burned the sky red a it rose again.
As with everyday it cast an eerie red light on the graveyard
Instead of one figure standing in front of four grave stones
we find three figures in front of one large double grave stone
The red light was enough for Shinji to read the inscription on the stone
‘Here lies Anthony Draven and Asuka Langley Sohryu’
‘Died as two of Earth’s Greatest Heroes’
Shinji looked at the final inscription on the stone
He wasn’t sure how to feel about it
‘Rest now sweet children, the Lord holds thee’
As he read it he thought of the condition of Team Eva
He and Rei were the least injured. HE had a broken arm
Rei was walking on crutches, due to a broken leg.
Karou was in a wheelchair possible permanently
Kensuke and Myna were critical condition barley alive
Toji and Hikari were each in a coma, alive but simply not
responding
Shinji turned to looked at Misato
The pain of the last few days was evident on her face
Shinji pulled Anthony’s lightsaber from his side and placed it on the
grave. Around his neck Shinji wore Anthony’s gothic cross
Shinji pulled his own lightsaber from his side. Igniting it
he held it vertically parallel to his forehead in salute.
Shutting it off he looked at it. Shinji had every intention of shoving the
lightsaber directly into his father as soon as he got back
though Shinji
His father had caused him so much pain. HE swore to himself that
as soon as he got back, he would put an end to the pain...permanently
End
Final Chapter (dark ending)
We’ll there it is the end of the sereis
Which ending was better? Light or dark
Let me know I need to know
Keep your eyes open for SDAT Clash
which works with the light ending
but it’s not really a sequel
If you want to write you own sequel
to this series using either ending be my guest
Right now I’m going to work on SDAT Clash
A World Twisted meets What the Hell Happened To Evangelion
Be sure to read it.
I want to thank few people by name
Yuji Icana
Jayson Deare
Kaoru Nagisa (One who wrote Eva Less)
Wen Won
Cheng Chow
Until then
Bye
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