Valkyrie Ria
This is one of my own works. Please tell me what you think so far.
  I stared at the books in front of me and yawned.  This school report on Valkyries, I knew,  would be the death of me. I left the books as they were on my desk and went to change into my night cloths. I glanced over at the clock by my bed as I began to change. Two A.M? Holy crap,  I had lost track of time and I had to be up at five to get to school. I sighed and finished buttoning up my flowered nightshirt. Then, after brushing my teeth, I snuggled under the covers.      
   Sleep came easily. It was invaded, however, like many nights before, by a strange reoccurring dream I've had ever since I learned of the valkyries a few years before. It starts off  quiet enough. I'm alone, floating in a vast white emptiness. Slowly I become aware that I'm dressed strangely. The dress I have on is white and flows to my ankles. It's held up by two tiny gold straps. I'm barefoot as well.  Gradually, I become aware that my back feels strange. When I look behind me, I discover white angelic wings that I seem to know how to use. Baffled , I look around. The whiteness covers the scene like a blanket. Then the voices start up. Three or four voices call to me ,beautiful and  melodious,"Ria,!"   Then for no apperent reason, the voices take on a more desperate and pleading tone. Scared, I call to out "Who are you?"  I look around frantically, searching the milky whiteness around me. "Where are you?"  They continue to call to me, pleading and desperate.
    I was startled awake by the awful buzz of my alarm clock. Muttering curses softly, I shut it off and lay there trying to wake up a little more. I guess the idea of the dream isn't too bad, but if you're the one dreaming it...it is awful.
    Finally I got up and got ready for school. I was very quiet so as not to disturb my mom and dad. As soon as I had applied my last coat of mascara I ran out of the house and jumped in my car.A few more months and I wouldn't

                                
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have to put up with  high school anymore.  I tossed my bag behind me to the back seat and took off .
      My first class was advanced algebra. I ran up the stairs to the math wing and ran through the door as the bell rang. I grinned and took my seat next to Kira, one of my best friends. She grinned at me. "Late again Ria., " she taunted.  I shook my head.
   "No, I was here when the bell rang." I smiled at Kira  as I heard the door shut. I looked up to see Mrs. Hill walking to the huge black board at the front of the room.  She began to drone on about X and Y.  I began to think about the dream. As I stared at the blank paper in front of me.
    " Have the dream again? " Kira looked at me a little concerned.  I nodded to her and  sighed.
To be continued...