Veryan Novel 1 Notes


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Guidelines
Rules
Schedule
Characters
Title Nominations
Actual Titles for Future Novels

Guidelines
  1. Length of Submissions:   The length is up to the author and that the time limit will control length

  2. Time in which to write submission:   Two days

  3. Period:   The Georgian period

  4. Wing it or Planned Plot:   Wing it and have fun doing so

  5. Correcting Anachronisms and Other Errors:   Errors should not be corrected, except by authors for the web site

  6. Seperate Site:   Veryan Novel at Yahoo! Groups

  7. Round 2 will hopefully be mostly devoted to refining existing plot and characters.

  8. Round 3 will focus on resolving the plot elements.

  9. Despite our best efforts, not all plot elements may be resolved and may be matters for subsequent volumes, possibly with Theo as the hero of one.

  10. The story is happening after MoM.

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Rules
  1. Have fun. This is supposed to be fun, not work and IT IS NOT A TEST. We are so lucky to have corralled each other into this expression of Veryan appreciation. Enjoy writing every word.
  2. We're aiming to reflect the Veryan aesthetic, so no obscenity, no excessive violence, nothing gross or morbid or lewd and depressing. We're trying to produce a Veryan novel in spirit, if not in writing quality.
  3. Do not trash anyone's work. It's a very tender thing to create something and offer it up to others to read, whether it's an email or a novel. For most of us, this will be the first time we've written a story since being forced to in grade school. Criticism, no matter how true, is not necessary. Ditto for unasked for writing advice. This isn't a writing class. Don't take it seriously and be supportive.
  4. Exception to Rule 3: In the event that one of us subsequently writes a New York Times bestseller, the rest of us may then resurrect this book and discuss how crappy her contribution was. Okay? Sign in blood here: __________.
  5. Be nice to Barbara. Thank you Barbara. What a great job you're doing and we appreciate it.
  6. When in doubt, look to Veryan's novels for inspiration. When totally stymied, look to Veryan's novels for ideas to lift - with subtle innovation, of course. Go to Veryan for guidance on language, punctuation, points of view (eg. she never uses first person narrative) and other elements of style.
  7. Aim for consistency with what's been written but don't beat yourself up if you goof: A subsequent writer might have a great way of explaining why the left handed hero fought the duel with his sword in his right hand. Or not. Relax.
  8. Don't ever worry about your contribution being too short.
  9. Be sure to use the correct format for the subject line: install mm.dd.yy

    Where mm.dd.yy is the date of your post. When entering a date of less than 10, leave only one blank space between the word install and the date. Uniformity allows our computers to sort the installments out for us in the proper order.

  10. Installments are due before you go to bed on your due date.

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2000 Schedule

Date Due, Author (19), and Subject Line

Round One
Round Two
Round Three
Monday, March 27th Marshainstall 03.27.00       Thursday, May 4thMarshainstall 05.04.00       Friday, June 9thClareinstall 06.09.00
Wednesday, March 29thClareinstall 03.29.00 Saturday, May 6thNonnieinstall 05.06.00 Sunday, June 11thNonnieinstall 06.11.00
Friday, March 31stSheelainstall 03.31.00 Monday, May 8thClareinstall 05.08.00 Tuesday, June 13thMarshainstall 06.13.00
Sunday, April 2ndNonnieinstall 04.02.00 Wednesday, May 10thSheelainstall 05.10.00 Thursday, June 15thNonnieinstall 06.15.00
Tuesday, April 4thToniinstall 04.04.00 Friday, May 12thPattiinstall 05.10.00 Saturday, June 17thPriscillainstall 06.17.00
Thursday, April 6thKristeninstall 04.06.00 Sunday, May 14thPriscillainstall 05.14.00 Monday, June 19thDovieinstall 06.19.00
Saturday, April 8thConnieinstall 04.08.00 Tuesday, May 16thJocelyninstall 05.16.00 Wednesday, June 21stLaura B.install 06.21.00
Monday, April 10thJeaninstall 04.10.00 Thursday, May 18thAnneinstall 05.18.00 Friday, June 23rdLaura H.install 06.23.00
Wednesday, April 12thAnneinstall 04.12.00 Saturday, May 20thKristeninstall 05.20.00 Sunday, June 25thConnieinstall 06.25.00
Friday, April 14thPattiinstall 04.14.00 Monday, May 22ndColleeninstall 05.22.00 Tuesday, June 27thColleeninstall 06.27.00
Sunday, April 16thHelen D.install 04.16.00 Wednesday, May 24thJeaninstall 05.24.00 Saturday, July 1stKristeninstall 07.01.00
Tuesday, April 18thToniinstall 04.18.00 Sunday, May 28thConnieinstall 05.28.00 Monday, July 3rdPattiinstall 07.03.00
Thursday, April 20thPriscillainstall 04.20.00 Tuesday, May 30thPatinstall 05.30.00 Wednesday, July 5thJeaninstall 07.05.00
Saturday, April 22ndJocelyninstall 04.22.00 Saturday, June 3rdJeaninstall 06.03.00 Sunday, July 9thToniThe End
Monday, April 24thColleeninstall 04.24.00 Monday, June 5thLaura H.install 06.05.00
Wednesday, April 26thLaura H.install 04.26.00 Wednesday, June 7thToniinstall 06.07.00
Friday, April 28thLaura B.install 04.28.00
Sunday, April 30thPatinstall 04.30.00

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Characters (In Order of Appearance)
Miss Anne Tillbury
25 year old spinster governess. Brown eyes, chestnut hair, slender yet nicely curved figure. Pleasant features. Low, distinctive voice. Notoriously vivid imagination (according to Lady Brookfield). Lacks decorum (according to Phipps.) Usually knows what to do - has good governessy tone of voice. Anne has just run into Theo while escaping from the coach.(4/8) Anne has a sister. The last time se was knocked unconscious was when she accepted her sister's dare to ride their father's prize horse. She failed. She still has the sapphire.(4/12) She's writing a novel.(4/12) Her loving parents considered her amber-flecked brown eyes her best feature.(4/12) Her parents died of a fever in India.(4/12) Anne's Uncle is Sir Paul Tilbury - a rich hunting man with estates in India. He was the one who recommended her to the Brookfields. He considers her father to have been "a disgraced fortune-hunter." (4/16) Anne decides during the carriage ride to return the sapphire to the Marquis. (4/16)

Flora Havershaw
20. Brilliant blue eyes, blonde curls, creamy complexion. Beautiful, expensive habit. Gives Anne a sapphire belonging to her -? Impulsive, romantical, talkative. (Aunt Flora - deceased. Cousin Louise - fond of Cervantes - rich.)

Theo Havershaw
fair-haired, blue-eyed like his sister. A well-turned calf and a good turn of speed. Formerly heir to his father the marquis, now declared illegitimate. Attempting to reform his frivolous nature into a more sober, thoughtful one. (So far, it's not working.) (4/6) Anne considers him an Adonis - with a bad habit of calling her "ma'am" and thinks he's a few years younger than herself. (4/12) Theo mentions that this is a matter of national security - and calls the stone an emerald. He says he must have it back by Sunday or "there'll be the devil to pay."(4/12) Resides at No 8 Berkeley Square.

Miss Rossiter and Mr. Falcon.
Miss Rossiter gave Anne her calling card.

Balder
part Great Dane, part Irish wolfhound, part klutz. Belongs to the Havershaws.

Ronnie Brookfield
golden hair, stammer. Do not be fooled by the angelic exterior!

Phipps
butler to the Brookfields. Short, portly, and tyrannical.

Lady Brookfield
the "dragon" specializes in malicious gossip. Easily cowed by noblemen. Can be carelessly kind (to Flora, at least.) Is better than Anne's other employers. Resides at No. 3 Grosvenor Square. (4/12) Has a barely fashionable grasp of French. (4/12) Lady Brookfield is in hysterics when Anne and the marquis return to the house, accusing Anne of endangering Ronnie, and ordering her from the house or be sent to prison. (4/16)

The Wicked Marquis
James Havershaw, Marquis of Seaforth, the Havershaws' Uncle James, he inherited the title when they were declared illegitimate. A handsome man, given to flushing bright red. Capable of fisticuffs. Currently suffering from a gunshot wound. (4/4) Was leafing through "Moral Values and the Beneficial Effect Said to Be Held By Them Over the Health of the Human Body" by the Reverend Mr. Doolittle while waiting to interview Anne in the Yellow Salon. (4/12) Slightly above middle height, with broad shoulders,well-muscled calves and a slim waist, dark curly hair that resists taming, and long grey eyes. Is accustomed to the effect his looks have on susceptible females. Has a sense of humor.(4/12) He tells Anne that he's involved in "a crucial task for his majesty's government" and that her refusal to share what she knows is dangerous. When Lady Brookfield comes into the Yellow Salon, and decides to stay as chaperon, he whisks Anne away for a carriage ride.(4/14) Anne puts his age at 30 or 31.(4/16) His wound is perhaps more serious than the graze or scratch he admits to.(4/16)

Three masked intruders
One growls. The second says Pip, Pip in a high voice, is too free with his pistol, and doesn't mind hitting females. The third is silent. Proven to be Cockney. The largest one is now shot (4/8)

Martin
Theo's groom/manservant. Morpheus and Slumbery are the horses.

Lord Daventry
David was Theo's closest friend, and is Flora's beau (true love? Who knows - yet.) Has an estate east of London.

Mrs. Coopersmith
Lady Brookfield's housekeeper - skinny but effective

The Star of the Sea
the sapphire. Last seen in Anne's possession. (4/2) Still in Anne's possession after her abduction and rescue. (4/12) She secured it in the pocket of her favorite green dress before going to sleep. (4/12) She's inspecting it when Bastet arrives and startles her. (4/12)

The Star of the Sea
the emerald. Theo tells Anne it's been in the family since Richard the Lionheart gave it to the family for their part in the Crusades. (Perhaps a less than convincing delivery.) (4/12) The stone that Theo is talking about is an emerald. (4/12)

The Guardians
if the sapphire is discovered missing, the Guardians will kill them all, according to Uncle James (4/10)

Bastet and Boadicea
large, regal, yellow-eyed black cats who honor Anne with their attentions.

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Title Nominations

  1. Desire's Deceiver
  2. Something Sapphire
  3. Dear Dissembler
  4. False of Heart
  5. Being the First in the Memoirs of the Guardians

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Actual Titles for Future Novels

  1. The Emerald's Execution (starring Theo and whomever; and re-introducing Kadenworthy)
  2. The Diamond's Deference (starring Kadenworthy, of course)
  3. The Gallery of Guardians (starring Jacob and Flora!)

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