This was an exercise for a writing class. It was my first attempt at writing in script format.
LUNCH
In a nice, warmly lit restaurant, a woman – ANNE – sits
alone at a table for two, sipping a cup of coffee.
A man – MAX –
approaches and sits in the remaining chair.
MAX: I’m here.
ANNE: You’re late.
MAX: Sorry. Traffic…
He flags down the
waiter and orders a drink.
ANNE: How have you been?
MAX: All right. Why did you call, Anne?
ANNE: I wanted to meet so we could talk. I thought you should hear it from me.
MAX: Hear what? What’s up?
The waiter arrives
with Max’s drink.
WAITER: Here you are, sir.
MAX: Thanks.
The waiter leaves
their table.
ANNE: I’m getting married.
Max looks
surprised, and sets his glass down on the table.
MAX: Married. You’re getting … married. Wow.
ANNE: What? What’s that look for?
MAX: It’s a surprise, that’s all.
ANNE: Look, I just didn’t want you to hear it from someone else.
MAX: What’s he like?
ANNE: He’s great.
MAX: That’s it? Just great?
ANNE: Cut it out, Max.
MAX: C’mon, I’m just curious about the guy. Especially since the last time we talked you said you weren’t ‘cut out’ for marriage. What’s changed in the past two years?
ANNE: A lot.
MAX: I guess.
ANNE: Let’s not fight. God knows we’ve done enough of that. Let’s just have some lunch.
Max reluctantly
nods. They order lunch, and their food soon arrives.
ANNE: The wedding’s in April.
MAX: Why so far away? Ten months.
ANNE: I wanted to take it slow this time. Plus, I wanted to have it in the spring.
MAX: You always did love spring … and flowers.
ANNE: Yeah.
MAX: Remember that time we went to the city garden, and you picked all those flowers even though you weren’t supposed to?
ANNE (smiling): I tried to hide them in my coat but got caught –
MAX: And that old guy with the hose kicked us out.
They laugh fondly
at the memory, but the laughter soon dies.
ANNE: I’m sorry, Max.
MAX: What for?
ANNE: I don’t know. All of it.
MAX: (pauses) I know. Me too.