How to Hatch a Dinosaur was broadcast as the concluding episode of the two-part adventure begun with The Ogg and I. As such, it did not suffer as much from being moved from its position as the third part of the original Egghead and Olga trilogy. There were, however, some interesting changes from the script, as well as some other points I would like to make.
In the opening sequence, the Boy Scout lost a line, that would have made even more sense at the conclusion of a third unsuccessful attempt at helping the old lady across the street.
Also, the script has the technician threatened by a knife, rather than a sword as shown. In addition, there is nothing in the script to indicate Egghead’s struggle carrying the radium case, compared to the relative ease with which the woman techie handled the container. This may have been a nice ad-lib by Vincent Price.
By the way, Ossip is the only Cossack to get a name in any of the episodes. None of them received a credit, despite their cries of “Mrozhky! (or Vlozhky!) Mrozhky! Hie! Hie! Mrozhky!” and the memorable line, “I love caviar.”
The original script had Olga, Egghead and the Cossacks lock the technicians in the laboratory. It then gave the technician the following lines:
COMMISSIONER GORDON
(touched)
Thank you, Chief O’Hara.
COMMISSIONER GORDON
But what is their larger scheme,
Batman?
BATMAN
I don’t know, Commissioner.
Robin and I were trying to consult
the Batcomputer about that.
Instead,
Barbara lost a couple of lines at the museum. The Neosaurus egg is described as being “inside a glass case.”
Barbara stops, looks at the egg and then back toward the stuffed model of a NEOSAURUS.
Later in the scene, Barbara lost a couple more lines and Jon Lormer lost a little joke. The professor observes that the Neosaurus egg is, “an interesting scientific curio, but hardly worth anything. Except perhaps to a paleontologist,
BARBARA
I suppose you’re right, Professor.
There wouldn’t be any point in
stealing it.
Egghead explains to Olga the meaning of enlightening. “Instructive. Informative. The young lady with the Professor thought I might steal the only eggsisiting Neosaurus egg in the Western World. Forty million years old.”
OLGA
All women change minds, Eggski.
And it doesn’t take forty million
years.
EGGHEAD
Eggsactly, Olga! That’s what was
enlightening. Nobody thinks I’m
stupid enough to steal it.
OLGA
Are you?
EGGHEAD
Often it is the clever man who
is thought a fool – by the
foolish . . .
OLGA
Sounds like old Bessarovian
proverb . . .
EGGHEAD
(proudly)
An eggsclusive Egghead eggspression!
The criminals have to deal with that glass case. Egghead (and Stanford Sherman) make a pun . . .
EGGHEAD
My scheme is so unusual, Olga,
it is beyond the imagination
of the average man!
OLGA
Average man? Olga, Queen of the
Cossacks, is not average man, Eggski!
EGGHEAD
(shhhhing her)
You don’t need to tell the whole
Museum!
OLGA
Am not telling Museum. Am
telling you!
EGGHEAD
Be patient, Olga. And let’s
roll this egg out of here. You
will find out the enormity of
my plan in due time.
OLGA
Due? Like in owing bills?
EGGHEAD
No, my dear. Due – like in
later.
ANGLE ON EMPTY EGG CASE
WE HEAR Barbara and professor Dactyl approaching.
PROFESSOR DACTYL
Thank you for your charming company,
my dear. Surrounded as I am by such
bones and fossils, it’s a pleasant
change to spend some time with flesh
and filigree.
BARBARA
You’re very gallant, Prof—
WIDER ANGLE - INCLUDE BARBARA AND PROFESSOR DACTYL
They have stopped in front of the egg case and are staring at it.
BARBARA
I should have known my hunch
was right.
PROFESSOR DACTYL
But who did it, Miss Gordon?
BARBARA
It bears the familiar marks of
a job by Egghead – Gotham City’s
notorious arch-criminal.
PROFESSOR DACTYL
But why on earth would anyone
want to steal a Neosaurus egg?
While on the phone with Alfred, a sentence of Barbara’s was cut:
As run, this is, once again, before they have stolen it. Even in the originally envisioned order, however, this makes no sense.
Recall that the Egg of Ogg was also in the hideout where the villains attempted to cook Robin and Commissioner Gordon. Egghead and Olga only made their escape by using Egghead’s tear gas eggs. In strains belief to think one of the Cossacks would have had the presence of mind – to say nothing of the strength – to scoop up the Egg and take it with him . . . on his horse!
The script gave Egghead additional lines as he prepared to zap the egg:
CLOSE ON EGGHEAD
He poises his hand over the firing button.
ANOTHER ANGLE
The respective vehicles are parked. Then the three of them move toward the warehouse.
CLOSER SHOT
The Cossacks are taking it on the collective ear. Batgirl and Robin are mincing them fine.
ANGLE ON EGGHEAD AND OLGA
OLGA
Don’t talk, do.
Egghead comes up behind Batgirl and grabs her, holding a scimitar (or whatever) which prevents an immediate counter-assault.
Egghead’s line, “Bring them in here so they can witness my triumph,” was moved from between his “patent on slimy tricks" line and Olga’s questioning of Batushka’s (Batnik in the script) whereabouts.
I love the way Price delivered, “A hungry Neosaurus, my little friends.” This single line reminds us he was one of the most accomplished actors in horror films of the time.
Batman’s explanation for why he didn’t simply joined in the fight was changed on the set. As broadcast, he expressed concern about one of the Cossacks being injured. The script’s explanation makes more sense. “If I’d joined you in the fight . . .
ROBIN
Gosh yes, Batman! You’re right!
(as Batman fidgets
in his costume)
But you’re going to have to
get out of those forty million
year-old threads sometime . . . !
I would have loved to have seen this! I bet Burt would have, too!
The tag for the Egghead and Olga trilogy was originally to lead into the Riddler episode. So, rather than Barbara’s birthday “party” and the phone call from Skip Parker previewing Surf’s Up! Joker’s Under! we would have seen:
INT. COMMISSIONER GORDON’S OFFICE
Commissioner Gordon at desk, Barbara opposite him.
COMMISSIONER GORDON
Fantastic and effective, Barbara.
We won’t be hearing from Egghead,
Olga and those Bessarovian Cos-
sacks until their parole board
meets. In about five years.
RIDDLER’S VOICE
(over intercom)
Riddle me this, Commissioner!
COMMISSIONER GORDON
(very surprised)
Riddle . . . ????
RIDDLER is at desk, talking over INTERCOM. As this is supposedly Commissioner Gordon’s secretary’s desk, a picture of the Commissioner should be prominent, a nameplate on desk reads BONNIE PATTERSON, etc..
COMMISSIONER GORDON’S VOICE
(over intercom)
Gloves? On ice?
RIDDLER
When a prize-fight’s fixed!
BONNIE’S VOICE
(interrupts over
intercom)
What, Commissioner?
COMMISSIONER GORDON
(flabbergasted)
Bonnie, I was just talking to
the Riddler on this intercom!
What happened?
BONNIE VOICE
(over intercom)
I don’t know, Commissioner. I
stepped out of the office a minute,
and nobody’s here now.
COMMISSIONER GORDON
(frustrated sigh)
Well, all right.
(to Barbara, as he
flicks intercom off)
I could be wrong, but I could
have sworn that was the Riddler!
If I swore. And he has some
felonious plan for fixing a
prize fight . . . !
BARBARA
(amused)
Well, Daddy, at least there’s
never a dull moment around here.
From 40,000,000 year old reptiles
to present day riddles in a matter
of minutes!
NARRATOR
AND HOW RIGHT SHE IS!!! NEVER A
DULL MOMENT FOR COMMISSIONER GORDON –
AND THE DYNAMIC DUO – AND GOTHAM CITY!
WITH THE RIDDLER BACK TO PUZZLE AND
PERPLEX THEM ALL!!! AS YOU’LL SEE IN
THE NEXT EPISODE . . . !!!
Riddle me this –
Were we ever shown the Cossacks on horseback?