QUICKY FIC: A Roll in the Hay
AUTHOR: Skedaddle
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RATING: Strictly adults only. Extremely smutty and out-of-character barn sex. ;-)
MAIN CHARACTER/S: Jimmy and Lou
STATUS: Complete
DISCLAIMER: I don’t own these characters but since Spielman & co. don’t want to play with them, then I’m going to.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Kid/Lou fans ain’t going to like it. This fic is just a piece of trash that I wrote in about half an hour. It’s just for fun.
Lou chased after Jimmy who was going into the barn.
"Jimmy, we’ve got to talk about this."
"I don’t want to talk about it Lou. It happened over a week ago. Just forget about it."
"I can’t forget it until it’s resolved Jimmy."
"What’s there to resolve Lou? It was dark, you were nice to me and I kissed you. That’s all."
"There’s more to it than that and you know it."
"Yeah, well you’ve been flirting with me for months and it’s obvious that you don’t plan for it to go any further so I’d just as soon forget the whole thing." he said firmly and dismissively.
"Oh, don’t blame this on me. You flirted with me. You kissed me." she said accusingly.
"Yeah, you want me to do it again? Is that it?"
"No, I don’t"
"Then quit bugging me and quit following me around. I’m trying to leave you alone but you’re not making it easy."
"I didn’t know my presence bothered you so much." she pouted
"Don’t be daft Lou. You’re an attractive woman and I want you but I just don’t want the complications."
"You want me?"
"You know I do." He looked at her for a reaction. He was really putting himself on the line with the admission.
"Well you can’t have me Jimmy. Maybe things would be different if I wasn’t with the Kid....."
He got angry. "Kid! Kid! Kid! Is that why you’re doing this? To keep Kid on his toes? Is that why you hug me and kiss me just a little too tenderly when you think he might be watching, to make him jealous?"
"You arrogant bastard....Wha......", she started but he didn’t let her finish.
"Lou, if you ever get sick of slow dancing with the kid and want a man, then I’ll oblige. Otherwise I’d just as soon forget the whole matter."
"How dare you!" She raised her hand to strike him. He grabbed it mid-air and held her in his grasp.
"Let go of me," she yelled, but she couldn't look away from his passion-filled eyes. He rolled them, released her and turned to leave. She let her anger fly.
"You can’t just kiss me like you did last week and then act as if nothing happened. What is wrong with you Jimmy? Why do you keep running away from me? Why are you scared of me?
Jimmy was speechless. He hated being accused of cowardice but she was right. He was scared of her. His fear of rejection was overwhelming and he felt out-of-control in her presence. He tried to answer her question truthfully.
"Because I won’t be able to stop at just a kiss next time. When I'm with you I can't....I don't..." he suddenly became more agitated because he couldn't find the right words. He didn’t want her to see his vulnerablity. He lashed out.
"When you turned to Kid and let him comfort you after Mills was hung, you made your choice. Now live with it. Stop teasing me Lou, quit staring longingly at me from across the table. Quit wearing those too-tight long johns right in my presence and accidently walking in when I'm getting dressed. Don't brush past me, don't squeeze my shoulders, don't kiss me goodnight, don't make me talk about my feelings and for God's sake stop dangling yourself in front of me like a raw steak to a starving dog."
"You’re not a dog, you’re a pig!"
He ignored her interruption and continued with his speech."I know you want me to chase after you just so you can deny and deny me again. That’s what all this fuss is about isn't it? It's not enough that Kid pines after you, you want me to as well. You want me to say it again don’t you? Does it make you feel powerful, humiliating me like this? I want you Louise Mcloud. I’ve wanted you for a long time. Stop playing games with me and tell me once and for all. Do you want me?"
"NO!" She screamed. She hated his words and the fact that he saw her this way. She had only been half aware of it until now and his harsh words hurt. She had only ever been nice to him and she didn't deserve these accusations, even if there was some truth in them. Her intentions were never bad. "No, I don’t want you and you will never have me!" she said venomously, wanting to see him hurt.
"Alright then." said Jimmy. His face showed no expression at all. It was indifferent, blank. Lou couldn’t believe it when he reached for the barn door. She wanted a response and by God she was going to get one. She pulled his arm roughly and he turned to face her again, waiting angrily for her next move. She looked up at him and he met her eyes. She wanted to slap him or shoot him but the look in his eyes stopped her. She saw both love and pain in them. She didn’t know what to say. Her heart softened.
"Kiss me again Jimmy," she said in a soft but demanding voice. A voice full of longing.
"No Lou." he said firmly
"What do you mean ‘no’?" she said incredulously.
"I mean I won’t be able to stop at just a kiss this time. I plan to either leave the barn and go calmly back to the bunkhouse, or take you right here, right now. It’s your choice. What do you want?"
She only contemplated her choice for a fraction of a second. She realized her anger had turned into arousal and she couldn't fight it.
"I want a man."
Without hesitation Jimmy kicked the barn door shut. He grabbed both her cheeks in the palm of his gloved hands and kissed her with double the passion of their previous encounter. He simply placed his mouth on hers and gave it his all. He stopped briefly to let her breathe.
Lou’s whole body felt alive as he grabbed her hips. He got down on his knees in front of her and his hands wasted no time in unbuttoning her pants and he soon held his warm hands around her naked hips and nuzzled his face in her pubic hair until his tongue found her clitoris. Patience was not a trait associated with Jimmy, upon her first moan, he stopped what he was doing and simply tore at her shirt and lifted her underclothes until her saw her breasts. At the sight of them, he stood up again and held them firmly. They deserved a moment of reverence. He then squeezed both her nipples between his gloved fingers and thumbs. She grabbed his hat and threw it somewhere and ran her fingers through his hair as he sucked her nipples and kissed her neck. He suddenly stood back and she was forced to let go of his hair. She immediately missed the feeling of him in her hands. She felt silly for a moment because her pants were still around her ankles, her undershirt was over her head, but still clinging to her shoulders. She felt exposed. She looked at him as he fumbled with the buckle of his pants. She didn’t know what to expect from him and she had never been more excited in her life.
"Go climb on that bale of hay and kneel down on your hands and knees". He said, indicating over to a large bale against the barn wall. His tone was low and gravelly. Dangerous. She had no choice but to obey. She kicked her pants off and, not bothering to remove any more clothing, she knelt down on the hay. She could hear the horses snorting in their stalls.
"I said on your hands and knees Lou", he repeated firmly. She felt insecure but blindly obeyed. She would do anything for him if he asked. She was positioning herself when she suddenly felt his hands, now gloveless, cup her buttocks which were raised high in the air. She got a shock when she felt at least two or three of his fingers reach inside of her, testing her to see if she was wet enough. His hands then spread her legs a little farther apart before grasping her tiny waist firmly. Lou suddenly panicked. The memories of Wickes and the way he has just taken what he wanted were flashing through her mind. She felt guilty. Guilty because she wanted to let Jimmy take her. She looked around and caught a glimpse of his erect penis. It only struck her then what he was planning to do. She realised that the height of the hay bale she was kneeling on would enable him to take her from behind while he was still standing. She and Kid had only ever done it face-to-face or with her on top. Was this even possible?
Suddenly, he was filling her and she had her answer. It felt strange, maybe because the angle seemed to be opening up new areas of her insides that she didn’t know existed or maybe it was because he was a lot bigger than Kid ;-) He started pounding her deeply and she heard a voice cry out, it was hers. The barn wall that the hay was leaning against started to shake. She hoped the barn wouldn't collapse around them. The sheer force of him hurt her and she could barely comprehend where the fine line between pleasure and pain was. Jimmy was blurring that line. He was starting to take her to another world where Kid had never taken her. She wanted to please him so she began to push back harder to meet his thrusts. How could something feel so bad and so good at the same time? Jimmy felt her movements and it only encouraged him. He continued to hold her hips firmly and the force behind his thrust gradually strengthened. Their bodies moved and gyrated together as if they had finally found their true purpose. Jimmy was transferring all the lust and frustration he had felt this past year into her. He finally had her and it made him drunk with power. He no longer had control of himself, his body had taken over. Even if she begged him to stop now, he knew he wouldn’t be able to. Lou was all around him, tiny, tight, sweet, firm, hot, wet Lou. He suddenly felt her clamp around his penis as she started to shake, she moaned, quickly, sharply, uncontrollably. Her grip forced a rush from his balls to his cock and, still standing, his hands moved from her hips to her breasts and he clamped them and pulled her closer to him as he dumped his load into her as deep as he could. He rested in her just a little while before withdrawing.. She collapsed on to the bale of hay. Spent.
"LOU", a voice yelled. "Lou, where are you?"
Lou turned over and sat up. She looked at Jimmy, her eyes full of fear.
"Oh no, that’s the Kid!" Stricken, she pulled on her clothes and ran to the barn door, returning just for a second to kiss Jimmy. He kissed her back lightly and removed a few pieces of hay from her hair.
"LOU," yelled Kid again. He was closer this time. Lou ran from the barn. Jimmy watched her with mild annoyance but he was so damn satisfied that he decided not to say anything. She had loved it and he knew she’d be back for more.
She tried to be calm as she left the barn and walked towards Kid. Her heart beat at the thought of how they were almost caught. She hobbled slightly and could still feel their secret between her legs. The memory of him was still inside of her, his juices were mixed with hers. Kid was right in front of her now and looked at her dotingly. He leaned in to hug her and she winced as he pressed against her still tender breasts.
"Lou, where have you been? I’ve been looking everywhere for you"
Suddenly his whiney tone annoyed her. It was nice to be worshipped but it got tiresome after a while. She wondered if Kid could smell Jimmy’s scent on her. The scent of rough, animal sex. She wondered what his reaction would be if he knew.
"Kid, why were you looking for me?"
"I wanted to tell you that Rachel’s going away for a few days. She hinted that maybe we could use her bed to..., well to.....make love. As long as you wash she sheets", he smiled. His eyes were alive and he looked so sweet.
After the initial annoyance that he thought that she should be the one to wash the sheets, she suddenly felt a slight pang of guilt. She knew she couldn’t sleep with Kid after what had just happened. Or could she? She didn't want to hurt him and although she enjoyed Kid's lovemaking, Kid had never made her cry out like that, Kid had never made her quiver and lose herself. How could she go back to Kid after she had been fucked so completely and thoroughly by Jimmy? Then again, did Jimmy love her? Would he hurt her? Would he mind if she fucked him on the side while continuing her relationship with Kid?
She grinned wickedly. Kid saw it and thought it was because of his suggestion and he beamed back at her.
She was going to have to think about this. Who said she couldn’t have her Kid and eat Jimmy too?
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