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AUTHOR: Pandora

DISCLAIMER: TYR is property of MGM/Spielman.

PAIRING: Jimmy and Lou

FEEDBACK: mail@theyoungriders.com

RATING: NC - 17 HET

NOTES: This fan fiction is set in the season 2 episode “Color Blind” If you haven’t seen it, Kid and Lou have broken up and Lou has overheard Kid telling the others that it’s for the best. Kid also has a new love-interest in annoying “Southern” school ma’am Samantha Edgars. Jimmy and Lou are sent on a run to Willow Springs, where there is a fair in progress. They share dinner together and that’s where this fic departs from the episode. The disappearing trick, the gunman and the DC-villain-style attempted hanging don’t happen in this fic.

I don’t necessarily ‘ship Jimmy and Lou but I thought this episode was genuinely building towards sex when I first saw it (shared hotel room, wine, slow dancing etc.) and was disappointed with the ending. It’s as though it was retooled at the last minute. I felt that this was the episode where Jimmy and Lou shared the most chemistry.

After their night of wining and dining, Jimmy and Lou’s bodies were now pressed together, swaying to the music. A lone trumpeter serenaded them as they danced in the street. Jimmy was almost lifting Lou off the ground and that night she, in her tipsy state, had become very affectionate towards him. He felt so proud earlier that day as he escorted her down the street in her new blue dress. Everyone stopped to admire her and he had been on the receiving end of several envious looks. It had been so nice for both of them to be somewhere where nobody knew who they were.

After drinking wine at dinner and some very candid conversation, Lou leaned over and kissed him on the cheek. Right there in public! He felt rather awkward and would never admit that he may have blushed. She told him that he was a sweet man who made her feel like a new woman. The fact that she was distractingly womanly tonight had complicated things.

They had truly bonded the night before when they were camped out. Lou cried and he had comforted her over her recent break-up. She couldn’t forget overhearing Kid’s harsh words of dismissal and his attraction to the new school teacher in town was clear.  It was killing her that he was now interested in someone else. She hated this someone even though they had never met.

Jimmy had given her words of comfort. He felt they were rather inadequate but they seemed to stop her tears and it had brought them closer together somehow. Jimmy, perhaps aided by the wine, hadn’t realized just how close until this moment. He was presently pressed against her and could feel her breath on his neck as their collective body heat rose. There had been a slight, indefinable tension between them over the past few months and the sudden building of this was likely the cause of the changing state of his cock, which was growing steadily in his pants. He jerked Lou’s body back a little too quickly, ending their dance abruptly so she wouldn’t detect his hard-on.

“What’d you ruin the moment for Jimmy?” asked Lou softly, looking up at him. She looked disappointed. “I like dancing with you.” They met each other’s eyes and she quickly looked away. Jimmy and Lou shared a special metaphor for ‘dancing.’

“I just thought you’d want to see the rest of the fair is all,” said Jimmy, neatly evading the question.

“I don’t want to see anymore. I had a lovely time at dinner with you but I’m feeling a little light-headed. I think we should go to our room.”

“It’s probably just the wine,” he said. “Let’s head back and get you into bed.” 

“Oh, you’d like that wouldn’t you?” She said, giggling.

“Lou,” he said amused, “are you drunk?”

“I feel a bit funny but good funny,” she said. “But I need to lie down.”

As they walked back to the hotel, he realised he wasn’t really disappointed about missing the fair and it was clear she wasn’t either.

‘I think we should go to our room,’ she had said. He smiled at his good fortune that there had been only one room left in town. He quickly tried to erase that thought from his head, remembering that he had agreed to sleep on the floor that night. He knew that making a move on Lou was the wrong thing to do on many levels. Kid was like a brother to him and Lou was in a very vulnerable state right now. To make a play for Lou was the lowest thing that he could do but it was on his mind all the same. He had thought about what it would be like to fuck her thousands of times and now the opportunity had possibly arrived. How could he let it slip by? He would have to. 

He vowed to restrain himself and ignore the sensations rising in his pants and the signals that Lou seemed to be giving off. He had encountered enough women who wanted to sleep with him to know what the signals were and Lou was definitely emitting them. However, she wasn’t a random stranger. She was Lou - and she had been drinking. 

By the time they arrived back at the hotel, Jimmy had firmly resolved to keep himself to himself. With a grim determination, he declined Lou’s offer to go upstairs and told her he would stay in the bar for a while so she could get herself settled herself in the room. She ordered a bath refill. It was her second of the day but he made no comment. It was so rare to get such luxury and she deserved to be spoiled. She kissed him on the cheek again and whispered that she would see him soon. She started climbing them and his eyes followed her. She looked so different in a dress. Suddenly, she glanced back down and caught him staring at her. He quickly averted his eyes and turned towards the hotel bar. It was just the drink talking. She wasn’t inviting him up for anything more. Drink - that was what he needed. It sat down on the wooden bar stool and ordered a whiskey. Sarsaparilla was not going to cut it tonight. 

“You sure are a lucky fella to have such a pretty lady lookin’ at you like that,” the barkeep said, “The little ones are always the best,” he added with a wink.

“Watch your mouth,” said Jimmy. “You’re talking about my wife,” he said in measured, menacing tones. However, he had no idea why he was saying it.

“Sorry mister, I didn’t mean anything by it. I’m real sorry. Here, have one on the house,” he said appeasingly.

Jimmy was not in the mood for trouble so he took the shot of whisky without a word. He thought about Lou upstairs, naked in the bath. He thought about being in there with her. Washing her. Forty-five minutes and three to five shots later, he finally went upstairs and took a deep breath as he approached the door. He was determined not to do anything with his ‘wife’. Besides, she was likely asleep by now, he told himself. After all, she had taken quite a lot of wine. He then remembered that he didn’t have a key and realized he would have to knock.

He tested the door handle and was annoyed that it turned and opened. It was downright dangerous considering she had been bathing. He entered the darkened room to see her new blue dress hanging on the coat table and the form of her figure in bed, under the covers. He looked around for his bedroll in the dark. Fumbling to locate it in his almost drunken state, he bumped into a wooden chair. “Ow!” he muttered. He did not want to wake up Lou. 

“Forget the floor Jimmy. There’s room enough for two in this bed,” uttered a not-so-sleepy voice.

So she wasn’t asleep!

“Yeah well, as nice as that sounds. I don’t think Kid would approve,” replied Jimmy a little too sharply.

“He doesn’t really approve of much though, does he? So what’s the difference?”

Jimmy chuckled at the truth of the statement.

“Except maybe that Samantha woman,” she added.  

Jimmy sighed, “You ain’t gonna talk about that again, are ya Lou. I’ve spent all day trying to cheer you up and I don’t want you to end another day in tears,” he told her with genuine concern.

“Then get in here and cheer me up a little more,” she said with a giggle.

“Lou, are you drunk?”

“Just get in this bed Jimmy Hickok and don’t be such a woman about it.”

He chose to ignore that statement for the moment and shot a question at her. “Lou, what the hell were you thinking leaving the door open while you bathed?”

“I thought you’d be straight up,” she said. He didn’t know what the heck she meant by that and decided not to explore it further. He looked around for his bedroll again to no avail.

“Just get in,” she ordered again.

With far less struggle than was strictly acceptable under the circumstances, he took off his guns, coat, hat and shoes and quickly climbed under the blankets in his shirt and pants - completely ignoring his earlier ponderings on the subject. Whiskey and wine were not a good mix in his stomach.

He had enough good sense left to lie on his side as far away from her as possible and closed his eyes and tried to think ugly thoughts. Teaspoon in a tub, that German housekeeper,that woman I killed in Benton

.

The last thought did the trick and the lust was finally out of his mind. With a final sigh, he drifted towards sleep. That is until he felt a hand slide up his right buttock, then onto his hip before slowly gliding down under his pants towards his cock. He felt a thrill but remained silent as the moment unwound. 

“It sounds like we both need some cheering up, Jimmy,” she whispered in his ear. She must have been referring to his sigh. 

The whisper was followed with a soft kiss on the neck.  He couldn’t stop himself from rolling over to face her and her expression was not quite as he expected. She looked cheeky and maybe even a little wanton and more importantly, she appeared to be naked. She planted a kiss on this lips and he obliged, cupping her head in his hands as he kissed her. He was restrained at first, just giving a few tender pecks before  building quickly to open-mouthed passion. He rolled her on her back and leaned on top of her. She was naked and he paused only to kiss her graceful neck before heading south to explore her breasts with his lips. He was only human, after all. Her nipples hardened under his touch and tongue. Her breasts were small and high but he already knew that. He had stolen glances often enough. She moaned and he stopped his ministrations to look up at her face.

“I’ve been wanting to get a good look at those for a while,” he said honestly as he made his way back up to her lips. This moment had been long overdue and he didn’t give Kid a second thought and they way they were probing tongues suggested that she wasn’t thinking about the Kid either. It felt so good to have her skin pressing against his. He felt powerful on top of her small body and her clear desire for him to touch her was turning him on. They came up for air after a minute or so and Lou continued the conversation.

“Well now that you mention it Jimmy, there’s something of yours I’ve been wanting to get a good look at for a while,” she said boldy.

“Lou!” he gasped, only half feigning shock but quickly obliged. He rocked back onto his haunches, his knees on either side of her and sat up. He was nothing if not obliging to a lady’s needs. He started unbuttoning his black pants.

“Not that!” she said alarmed. “I just meant your nipples,” and with that she wiggled and sat up and started to unbutton his shirt. He couldn’t help but leer at her breasts which looked rather bigger when she was sitting up.

“We’ll worry about the other later,” she said, undoing the final button. Her hands started roaming around his chest.  He knew it was the alcohol talking. Lou just didn’t say things like that. She was probably doing it to hurt Kid but at this point he didn’t really care. He couldn’t hold back any longer and, as she stroked and licked his nipples, he took off the unbuttoned shirt and pinned her on the bed before resuming their kissing. Her hard nipples gently brushed his chest and he glided his left hand down her body to her bare hip bone as the right hand held her scalp. He felt her hands roaming down to his back to his buttocks and he rolled off on his side and pulled off what remained of his clothes. She boldly pinned him down and straddled him, sitting on his thighs. She placed her finger on his nose and slowly roamed it downwards, playing with his lips for a moment. He playfully sucked her finger, which soon trailed down his neck, around both nipples and over his chest. She stopped to place a kiss on his navel and made a trail of short, kisses until she reached her prize. She was driving him wild but her lay still. Wanting to take control but wanting even more to see what her next move would be. 

“Now, let me take a closer look,” she said as though she were doing a medical examination. Holding his very hard, pulsing rod in her tiny hand and started rub the length of it. He knew she was impressed because he knew he had a fair bit of an advantage on Kid in that department. He couldn’t fucking believe that Lou was handling his cock and couldn’t help but gasp as her mouth went around it and started sliding up and down its length. The suction and friction made his blood rush from his head. 

After half a minute or so of licking and sucking, she said, “I’ve decided we’re going to do it my way tonight Jimmy. I’m going to mount you and ride you and you’re going to lie there and like it. Agreed?”

He nodded in acquiesce, extremely amused and aroused by this unexpected, but not unwelcome, turn of events. He thought briefly of stopping the encounter but it was the briefest thought of his life.  She stroked the hollowed crease from his hipbones to his cock as she slid up higher. He could see her pubic hair as she got up on her knees to angle herself. Her breasts looked far fuller from this position and her eyes were filled with anticipation. She started to sink her tight slit over his solid, throbbing cock and he moved both hands to her hips to encourage her on. She was hot and wet and he could smell that womanly sex smell already as he watched her slide down. At that moment, he couldn’t help but think of the barkeep’s comment. The little ones are the best. His thought was interrupted with a moan. He’d never her Lou make a sound like that. It was tinged with pleasure and pain and he felt her spread her legs farther apart to accommodate him.

She immediately started moving up and down as squeezing him with her walls on the upward motions. She leaned back which made it even tighter. She was a professional rider after all. The bouncing got faster and wetter and he felt a sick smugness that Kid’s girl was squeezing herself around his rod. He little tits were bopping up and down and she was moaning. He imagined Kid was watching from the corner and bucked up his hips at unexpected intervals, much to her delight.

“Oh Jimmy, I’ve wanted to fuck you for so long. You’re so much bigger than Kid.”

The K-word made him put his hand around her tiny hips and yanked her him off a little too forcefully. It was one thing for him to think of Kid, she shouldn’t even remember his name in such a moment.

“Jimmy, I’m sorry!” Lou protested. She was still on top of him and he shoved her aside and got off the bed leaving her there startled. He walked around to the foot of the bed and looked down at her. She looked up, a little distressed and embarrassed.

“There’ll be no mention of Kid in our bed. You got that!”

She nodded and with that, he suddenly grabbed her ankles and pulled her firm ass and dripping vagina towards him to finish the job his way. Still standing, he rested her ankles on his shoulders and crammed his cock back into her wet cunt. She looked up at him in shock and ecstasy and screamed a sex scream. She had never been taken this way before. He ploughed in and out of her quickly, moving a hand to rub her clit and tug at her pubic hair. He watched her watching him and it was the greatest view he had ever seen. Tits jerking around, mouth open, arms back in a wild manner. She had simply surrendered to being soundly dick-fucked by Jimmy Hickok and didn’t care what it looked like or what noises she made.

Suddenly, her eyes rolled back and she was moaning repeatedly, in a high, wavering pitch that got louder every time he nailed her. Her head was now moving from side to side and her tiny, taut body was jerking around more that it should. Her ass was now off the bed.  He continued to plunge into her deeply and roughly as he grabbed her knees for further control. His fingers were holding the kneecaps and his thumbs rubbing the back. It must have been a tender point for her because she lost all control and let out several high- pitched screams. He felt her cunt spasm around his cock in unison with the sounds before a heavy sigh that told him she had come. It was just in time too; he withdrew and took a couple of steps back. Looking around, he blew his load into the bathtub and watched it floating on top of the now tepid water.

He turned around took look at her. She was splayed out and spent on the bed. He edged his way up on the bed next to her and looked at her.

“Did you like it?”

“Yes,” she said.

“Do you want me to do it every night?”

“Yes,” she said.

“Will you scream for me like that every night?”

“I will Jimmy.”

Satisfied, he lay down on the bed beside her, knowing that he now possessed her. As he calmed down post-fucking, he started to be himself again and felt a little tender towards her.

“I hope I didn’t scare you Lou,” he whispered softly, kissing her on the cheek. “I’m only like that in the bedroom. You have to know I’d never do anything bad to you.”

“Maybe you scared me a little but I trust you,” she answered earnestly, “but I think I might have scared myself. I’ve never felt that feeling before, that…not quite like that. With Kid….”

He looked at her with sudden menace and she clapped her hand over her mouth.

“You don’t need a Kid anymore Lou.”

“I know, Jimmy,” she said firmly. “And I don’t want him anymore either.”  Satisfied with the truth of her answer, he pulled her towards him and put his arm possessively around her. She fell asleep in his arms. Her smile as she slept told him that she felt safe in his arms. He was worried he’d scared her with his aggressiveness. It was something he couldn’t control in an aroused state. Being drunk didn’t help.

The next morning involved another round of firm fucking followed by an awkwardly silent, small breakfast. They both had hangovers from the previous evenings alcohol and neither felt like talking about the obvious. On the ride home, Jimmy tried to ride beside, or ahead of Lou. Whenever she was in front, he couldn’t help but watch her little ass bounce up and down and recall her riding his cock, the cheeky little minx. When it was time to camp, they couldn’t leave each other alone under the stars and they sucked and mauled each other in the firelight. Jimmy showed her a few more positions she had been missing out on and Lou was a quick, and energetic learner.

After a little reassurance from Jimmy that it was OK to talk about Kid, the poor girl confessed that she hadn’t known what it was like to be properly fucked until now. She explained that Kid treated her like a child’s fabric doll. He always wanted missionary position and quietened her if she spoke or made too much noise. Occasionally he let her go on top but only if coerced. He’d often say that what they were doing was wrong afterwards. Yes, it was loving and soft but not satisfying in the long term. The more he worshipped her, the more respect she lost for him.

She said that, in contrast, Jimmy made her feel like she was being ripped apart at the seams and coming hard and repeatedly was a new experience for her. Her explanation of her sex-life with Kid made him understand why she had wanted to be in control the previous night. While he preferred control, he thought it only fair she get a turn. After all, he had already won the contest and it had been his rivalry with Kid that had made him act so. He passed a length of rope to her and asked her to tie his wrists. She had her way with him beneath the moon and he had loved it. Their horses seemed rather twitchy that night.

They had fucked her every which way by the time they reached Rock Creek and the soreness as she dismounted her colt was apparent. Fortunately, in her line of work, no one would likely notice. He felt rather spent himself and was looking forward to a meal and a rest. They hadn’t discussed when or how to tell Kid of their new status. Jimmy didn’t like lying but it thought it was best left to Lou to tell him.

Naturally, Kid came wandering out to greet her. 

“How was the ride?” he asked Lou tentatively, “Did everything go OK?” It was clear he wanted to make amends. They had not left on good terms.

“Everything went great,” she answered truthfully.

“Good. I’m, I’m really glad you’re back Lou,” he said sincerely, “I want to explain to you about the conversation you overheard.”

“Kid, I don’t care about the school teacher. We’re not together anymore and we’re both free to see other people,” she said coolly.

“But Lou, that’s just it. I realize that I don’t want to see other people.”

“Well maybe I do,” she stopped and looked up at him and handed him the reigns. “Now if you don’t mind, I’m going to clean up.” He looked startled and she stormed off to get changed, glancing at Jimmy as she passed.

Jimmy walked over to the stables with him.

“You don’t really think Lou wants to see someone else, do you?” asked Kid.

“I don’t know Kid, maybe, in time. You wanted to, didn’t you?”

“Samantha’s gone now and I was a fool,” said Kid sadly. “It made me realise how much I love Lou.”

Jimmy was curious to know more about the situation with Samantha but felt so tired and guilty that he didn’t ask any follow-up questions just now. 

“I would leave Lou alone for a while,” advised Jimmy. “She’ll talk to you when she’s ready.”

“Maybe you’re right Jimmy. You’re a good friend,” said Kid. Giving him a pat on the shoulder. “Go and get some rest, I’ll take care of the horses.”

“Thanks,” said Hickok quietly. Kid’s words had stung and it was clear he had no idea what was coming.

Jimmy suddenly felt badly for him. Kid and Lou hadn’t been good together but he clearly still loved her. Jimmy didn’t want to hurt his friend but he couldn’t lie to him either. Explaining to him would probably be one of the hardest things he would have to do but it would have to happen soon, just not today.

(NOTE: I know the ending didn’t resolve things with Kid. This was intended solely as a nookie fic. I don’t have the attention span for much else. ;-)

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