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AUTHOR: PANDORA

FEEDBACK:mail@theyoungriders.com

RATING: ADULTS ONLY- Dirty f---ing scenes.

MAIN CHARACTER/S: JIMMY (Yeah!)and Lou

STATUS:Complete (Yeah!)

DISCLAIMER: I don't own Jimmy but I would like to.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: A million thanks to Mystic for kicking my ass and e-bitchslapping me. Thanks to cutlery for glancing over it and liking it. Thanks to my mother for breeding me in a gutter.


MUD

THE DAY AFTER

 

I wake up to the familiar view of the dim and dusty bunkhouse and rub my eyes.  I take a deep breath and release it. I feel a relaxed bliss throughout my body and especially in my balls, which had been begging for the kind of release that only comes from a good, down and dirty fuck. I reach down and scratch my nuts, listening to the rustle rustle sound. It was definitely down and dirty.

 

“Oh crap!” I sit up and try to focus my eyes and search my memory. “Damn! I finally did her last night. I can’t believe it. After all this time! I don’t fucking believe it!”

 

THE HISTORY

 

I had been avoiding Lou ever since I kissed that night when we were escorting Elias to his eventual death. I revealed too much of myself to her that night. My fears, my feelings, she did try to talk to me afterwards but she didn’t try too hard. She knew the offer was there and she didn’t take me up on it. She turned to Kid after Elias was hung. She knew I was the one in pain but she wanted him. She’ll probably always want him- at least that’s what I thought at the time. 

 

After we got back, I did my damndest to avoid her. I guess I was embarrassed so I played it cool and aloof.  It’s what I had to do to deal with things. If I ran into her when we were both alone, I would just leave and pretend I needed to do something. If she said she was confused and wanted to talk. I told her there was nothin’ to talk about.  Honestly, it was all I could do to rein the unbelievable urge I had to be with her, to have her. Kid be damned! Yeah I liked Kid, more than that, I loved him like a brother. He was my brother and you shouldn’t mess with your brother’s girl, no matter what. My head knew that fact but my heart and my dick remained ignorant.

 

The thing was, Lou was my friend too. And her friendship offered a little bit more than Kid’s ever could. Lou…well, I could tell her things…. things about me and my fears and my weaknesses and stuff. Her covert rejection on the day that Elias died had changed things between us. She turned to Kid. She still wanted HIM even after I’d kissed her, even after I’d told her things that I’d never told anyone, even after she had told me I was a better man than I gave myself credit for. The only way I could deal with her decision was to detach myself from her friendship, even her presence. This helped keep my urges under control, though they still throbbed from time to time. Times like when I’d see her dusty ass tucked into those just-too-tight pants, and when she bounced up and down on a horse, and when those giant brown eyes that were too big for her little self looked at me. Those eyes reminded me of our interrupted kiss and of the unfinished business between us.

 

One thing I’m good at is pushing people away. I’ve become an expert at not letting anyone know what I’m really thinking. When I first started at the express, I was bad tempered boy with a pretty high opinion of myself. I was outta control at times. I’ve tried to change, tried to keep my temper and impulses in check and control myself.  Teaspoon and the others helped me change, for the most part anyway. The problem is that if you don’t let things out, they’ve got a way of pushing themselves to the surface, no matter how much you try to stop them.

 

I’m not sure when exactly my feelings towards Lou began to change. I’m not sure on which particular day I fell in love with her. I’m not sure why I encouraged the Kid to ‘dance’ with her. I liked to lie to myself. I’d tell myself the reason why I never told her how I felt was because of my loyalty to Kid. Another favourite excuse was that I had no future to offer her. The truth was that I was simply afraid. I feared that, in the end, Lou would choose him over me. Seeing her turn to Kid when I was the one hurting showed me that she had made her choice. Despite that, I just couldn’t let the idea go. She has a way of making me feel...special, like I’m worthy of something better. It’s not just that I want to fuck her, though I do. I feel that she’s the kind of person I could bare my soul to, even the ugly parts, maybe some hidden parts.  I could tell her whatever I wanted and she would just accept it. I would do the same for her; we could lean on each other. There are certain things a man can’t tell another man, like how I always feel unsafe, hunted and exposed. How I feel at times that I’m not even whole and that a big chunk was ripped out of me long ago, and nothing was put back in its place. I realized now that I would never say these things to her. It was just a fantasy. Lou was lost to me. Her actions proved it. Sometimes her eyes seemed to tell me something different but I was not going to hope anymore.      

 

Try as I did to resist her, the damn girl wouldn’t leave me alone. She kept wanting to ‘talk about it’ and I could tell she was upset about how awkward we were around each other. I just hope no one else noticed.  So yesterday she came to me again. “Jimmy, we gotta talk, why do....blah blah blah blah blah?”. Normally, I like to listen to her but not when she starts probing like that. I feel uncomfortable, like I’m going to say something embarrassing.  She always looks a little scared when she talks to me. Like she’s scared of how I’m going to react. I know it’s sick, but I like that...power. All I could do was try not to get drawn into her eyes. Damn she has big eyes! I said something cold to her, something about women being too emotional. I knew it would make her angry and leave and leave she did. I felt bad afterwards. I always do. She sulked during dinner and didn’t talk to me. I think Kid’s been noticing the tension between us. He kept looking from her to me.  I know he suspects something is up. I get the feeling Noah and Buck have cottoned onto me too, but they haven’t said a thing. Luckily Cody was entertaining us with a story during the meal so it wasn’t too uncomfortable. It was starting to worry me that my mask was being lifted, when I had been trying so damn hard to hide under it.   

 

So I decided to get outta there and go to bed early but, as is always the way, despite being physically tired, I couldn’t sleep. My mind kept going down a million paths guilt, uncertainty, fear, anxiety, and lust - all paths led back to Lou. My thoughts were interrupted when I heard movement below and the sound of Kid whispering in her ear. I new she wasn’t sleeping with him at the moment and I felt a little smug because I thought it had something to with me. At least I hoped it did. The thought of Kid and her having sex was really starting to bother me lately. I know he’s my friend and I know that they’ve already done it a bunch of times but it bothered me anyway.

 

 

THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM

 

I’m always restless when a storm is coming. Especially when it’s a humid night like tonight. I knew that I wasn’t going to fall asleep for a few hours yet. If I stayed here, I wouldn’t be able to resist watching Lou sleeping in the darkness. That would make me hard which would in turn make me want to rub myself. That wouldn’t do. So I got out of bed quietly and walked outside. The air was thick but starting to cool. I could see lighting flashing in the distance; the clouds were headed this way. It was a perfect night, even though it wasn’t. After a few minutes, a cool wind started to blow. It had been so hot during the day that it was a nice relief. I took a few deep breaths and looked up.  The moon appeared and disappeared under the gathering clouds. There was still a surprising amount of light. I could easily do a run on a night like this, even if it rained. I wandered away from the station a little bit, even though I had bare feet and was only in my long johns. Rain started to fall in light drops. I raised my face to the sky and opened my mouth to taste a little. I stood out there for about 10 minutes; I didn’t care about the wet. The sound was so beautiful. Sheets of lightning flashed and thunder echoed and growled, getting closer. The wind picked up and it was getting wilder.  Mud was starting to ooze between the toes of my bare feet. It was an electric night.

 

There I was, standing in the rain getting saturated. I needed to piss so I whipped it out and felt warm urine flowing out of me. It felt good. I finished up and my sweaty body started to cool as the rain soaked through the fabric. Hot droplets dripped from my hair and washed away.  It was a little eerie and I jumped out of my skin when I suddenly felt a hand on my shoulder and a low, quiet voice. “Watcha doin’ out here in the rain?”

 

The sheets of lightning lit out the sky and I could see in intermittent flashes of Lou. She looked like a ghost lit up by lighting. What did she want? “Damn Lou, don’t scare me like that, you’re lucky I don’t have my gun.” Lou looked around nervously.

 

 “Jimmy this looks like it’s going to be a pretty big storm. I think you should come inside.” This annoyed me. She was always giving advice like that. Reminded me of Kid. Why the heck did she follow me out here anyway? I looked at her, about to tell her as much but no words came. I looked at her eyes and they were different, I didn’t want to misread them so I looked down. Bad mistake. I lingered too long on the hard nubs of her high tits through the long johns. They were getting wetter. She almost seemed naked. Did she purposely choose such a small size? The white fabric clung to her tightly except for a little space down below where her dick should have been. Fuck she looked good. I was getting hard as I looked back up to her face. She knew I was looking at her with fucklust and as the lightning flashed, I saw the lust reflected in her eyes and it shocked the hell out of me. Her hair was wet and tousled. Steam came from her mouth as she breathed out and raindrops ran down her cheeks.  The moment felt not unlike the night we had kissed and my throbbing cock reminded me of our unfinished business.

 

RIDERS ON THE THE STORM

 

Lightning flashed once more and lit up the sky. Thunder roared. It was nature’s cue. Suddenly, I was sure of it. She was here to fuck me.  I reached out and touched her face. I grabbed her jaw firmly and crushed my lips down hard over hers. I had to do it hard and wide or she would have felt me shaking.  I drew back, gazed at her, steadily, unwaveringly and ran my hand down from her jaw to her breast, lightly squeezing her nipple between my thumb and my finger. She gasped. I grabbed her other cheek with my free hand and kissed her again, quickly but firmly. I was in charge here. Well that’s a lie. My dick was in charge. For a second I thought she would stop it, slap me, whatever, but her tongue probed into my mouth and I lost all non-bodily thoughts.

 

Lips, tongue, hair, teeth, jaw. I grabbed her hair and she reached for my face with one hand. Her tits pressed against me as I felt her other hand pop open the long johns and take my dick. I groaned or something as she pulled it out, fast and furious. I ran my hand across her breasts and sucked her neck, marking her. I reached up to the shoulders of her long johns and yanked them down until her breasts were bare. They were looking up at me. I licked and sucked one, then the other and Lou was grabbing my ass and moaning. I liked the sound and it coaxed me to reach down and find her mound. I had wanted to touch her for so long. She suddenly put her hands around my neck and jumped up, wrapping her legs around me, sucking my face, trying to push her cunt around my dick. I grabbed her ass to steady us but it didn’t work. We fell to the ground and I was on top of her, her legs spread underneath me. We shed whatever was left and before I knew it, my mouth was seeking her clit. I had to taste her to see if she tasted how she smelt.

 

I kissed her hip bones and her legs stayed open. I moved my tongue down her lips. She had surprisingly little hair on her cunt. It was cute, steam was pouring out of her. I licked my way to her clit and just as I reached it she said,  “Jimmy? What are you……? ooooohhhhhhh!” and I knew that no man had ever tasted her juices like that, smelt her scent like that, made her moan like that. I massaged my tongue and lips and gently with my teeth up and down and around until I felt her hips arched high, begging. I slipped two fingers in her hole to find it sticky and wet. My cock wanted in. It had been waiting too long.  I moved my face back up before she had a chance to come. I wanted her to save something for later.

 

LATER

 

Her nipples are a little darker than I thought they’d be. I try to engulf her whole breast in my mouth, I rub and pinch the other and hear her say something but the thunder muffles her voice. She starts dragging her nails lightly down her back and she softly begs and calls me “Jimmy, oh God Jimmy!”  She seeks out my mouth and eats it again and again. We feed on each other and she turns me over and I’m on my back, lying in mud. Her back is muddy too. I kiss her a bit more and then I whisper two words in her ear “My turn”. I slowly encourage her head to move down south and she figures it out, suddenly she is licking my head and shaft and her mouth is around my cock. Fuck it feels so good.  I place my hands on her scalp and guide her a little farther down and she gags a little. She looks up at me and I see she is abandoning the idea and she moves up a bit and straddles me. I don’t mind that something else is unfinished between us because I am about to explode and I know it’s too soon at this point.  It starts to rain harder as she rises up and positions herself. It pours harder than my dick when she moves down in one fell swoop, enclosing me. She stops and groans for a minute, getting a comfortable fit. She molds around me and starts to move up and down quickly, like the expert rider she is. I lean forward with my muddy hands and put them on her narrow hips, her breasts bounce up and down trying to catch the rhythm. It seems appropriate that we are dirty. I try to slow her movements, even though I really want her to gallop. I find her clit and don’t even need to do anything because her movements rub it against my finger. It doesn’t take long for her to cry out and stiffen as she clamps around my cock and comes. Damn, she’s quick! She breathes out heavily; I echo my earlier words “My turn.”

 

 

MY TURN

 

 

I turn her over, mud oozing everywhere, and pin her under me. I can tell my weight is pressing her down so she can’t move. She is smiling now and wraps her legs and grabs my long, wet hair in her fists. She kisses me briefly and then licks my ear.  She knows her puny weight couldn’t fight me off and I like that she knows it. Not that she wants to fight me off. She says a little too loudly “Oh CHRIST Jimmy, shove it in Jimmy, now Jimmy NOW!”

 

I can’t believe it’s Lou fucking saying these words to me. LOU! I decide to oblige the lady, like a gentleman should. The only problem is, I have never been gentle. I enter her hard, and start bucking and hammering her, crushing her pelvis. She screams a little too loud so I put my muddy hand over her mouth and look at her wide brown eyes, wild with pleasure and pain. I go inside her right to the hilt and draw my dick three quarters of the way out, then back in and out and in…. My balls, which are burning like hell, are almost inside of her at times. After the shock, she starts to move under me and I let go of her mouth. The rain pounds my back and I pound my dick in her wet cunt. She starts to moan and move. “Jimmy, I  want you so baaad oh God.” I stay silent. She wants me! I suck on her neck while I pump. I feel her sliding under me. The mud provides friction and I know she’s never been fucked so hard. I bite into her neck a little too hard. She screams but it’s definitely with delight as well as shock.  Some of her blood enters my mouth and it’s mixed with the mud from her neck. I put my mouth on hers so she can taste the strange mix and I pump her harder.  I want her to bleed from both ends. Fuck she is so tight. Her pussy is clamped around me. Wet, hot, and full. Her ass is moving up and down and I feel her shudder inside. She gives a series of sharp quick moans and she fucking comes again. Hot juices fall around my dick and I feel a rush from my nads, I try to stop it but can’t and I groan as our liquids mix together and I explode my heavy load deep within her. It starts to drip out of her and probably slides down into the dirt somewhere making cum mud. We stay joined for a while, trying to comprehend what’s just happened, staring into each other’s eyes.

 

MUD

 

We slip apart and I roll off her. I notice the mud, our fuck mud, on the ground and I gather small handfuls. She’s lying there looking at me and I rub the warm and cold mud onto her cheeks and breasts, massaging her slowly with my hands as the rain falls on her skin. I make her dirtier and dirtier. She catches on pretty quickly and soon I feel her hand spread some in my ass crack. Soon we are rubbing each other with all the mud we can find and rooting around like pigs, our body parts slipping through each other’s fingers, trying to see in just how many places the mud will ooze into. The steady rain tries to wash it off but we keep spreading it everywhere: ears, cunt, arses, nostrils, foreskin, and hair. She surprises me when she takes eats a mouthful of mud and kisses me. It tastes like the earth; it tastes natural. We kiss some more. We roll around and she starts to paint my face with the mud. She looks at me lovingly and intensely and I feel her finger trace the shape of a heart with her muddy finger. She loves me! I stare at her muddy face and I try to convey how I feel about her with my gaze. She looks savage. At this moment, there is no language. Words do not exist. She has the look of a wild animal about to strike. I think she’s about to say something when suddenly a strange look crosses her face. As though clouds engulfed the moon and hid it. Like the wild animal she is, she flees. The lightning gives me one last glimpse of running figure her before the storm becomes a tempest.

 

THE DAY AFTER

 

Now it’s the next day and I’m lying here in the bunkhouse. I’m wondering whether it was just some kind of Lou-ghost I had been fucking in the mud. My sheets of still-moist dirt tell me that it wasn’t a ghost and that Lou, with the drawing of her heart on my face, had made her declarations. I understand why she fled; it’s the same reason I had been running from her.

Our masks had been lifted.

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