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The Gift
by Mystic
"Are you sure she's going to like that?"
"She told me so herself Jimmy."
"I don't know.
She told you so?!"
"I guarantee you she told me so with her own
mouth."
"And you wouldn't mind me giving it to her? Cause if you do I won't."
"All I want is for Lou to be happy is all. If that's what she wants then I don't see a
problem with who she gets it from.
Look, you'll be doing us both a favor.
I won't have to agonize about this no more and Lou is happy in the
end. I mean that's all that counts
right?"
"Well...I'll think on it. Sounds like a mighty big gift to me."
"It is Jimmy, but worth it don't you think? Think of it as a gift from me to you. Everyone gets what they want and we're all
happy."
So went the conversation between Jimmy and Kid as they rode
home from Seneca one afternoon. Jimmy
wasn't sure what to do. Kid's proposal,
how could he pass that up?! He mulled
the choices over and over in his mind.
He had to admit it sounded like the perfect present but could he
actually make the purchase? He
convinced himself over the course of one week that it didn't matter what he
thought, Lou was the one calling the shots here and all he wanted to do was
make sure as Kid kept telling him, "It will make her so happy."
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"The picnic was wonderful Jimmy," Louise's
beautiful smile beamed forth.
"I've never gone on a moonlit picnic before."
He blushed, nodding shyly as he always did when she
complimented him. Lou had that effect
on him. She melted him like butter
through those big, gorgeous eyes so anything she said made him react just the
way he was right now.
Louise knew she had a measure of power, of control over him
though subtle as it was. There was a certain
connection between them; they both knew it was there and finally they would
both act on it.
Her heart pounded as they entered the barn. Excitement coursed through her veins along
with unmistakable fright. She knew what
she wanted from Jimmy yet knowing he was well endowed scared her. This was so daring! It was the thing only saloon whores were
known to do and Lou only hoped she could handle him; if she could actually go
through with this!
His husky voice startled her, asking, "Are you
ready?"
Lou swallowed the lump in her throat. Her clit had responded instantly for her
though no verbal reply came. She nodded
a reply instead. The jolt in her
womanhood made shivers run through her.
Her legs trembled underneath her, her fingers quivered as she grasped
the ladder to the loft. His body grazed
hers as they made the trip up to the secluded area. Lou's eyes grew wider with each step. She still had time to back out of this, she thought for a
fleeting moment. But it was too
late. Her body insisted, pushed her
forth to climb that ladder and to step into the realm of the unknown.
"Are you sure it's safe up here Jimmy?" she asked
him.
"Yeah it's safe."
"Okay."
She proceeded ahead, finally to enter the loft.
Lou looked about warily, her nervousness doubling! She tried to slow down the furious beat of
her heart but it was no use. Her chest
heaved evenly with shallow breaths as her eyes scanned the loft. Her entire body felt like one, huge nerve.
"You nervous?" he asked.
"A bit." she nodded, turning to face him.
He rubbed her arms.
This was still unbelievable.
Here he was in the loft with Louise, and they both knew why they were
there.
"We don't have to do this if you're having second
thoughts."
She shook her head at once.
"No, no...I want to. I
really want to," she assured, her tiny hands lifting to play with the
buttons on his shirt. "I think you
were right in waiting for Kid to be out of town. I don't think I could've gathered the nerve at this point,"
she chuckled.
"Thought it'd be better this way. No distractions right?" he asked,
bringing her small hands to his waiting lips.
"We have the whole station to ourselves, just the way I knew you
would want it."
Louise's heart thundered as she peered into those dark,
brown eyes that melted her, that made her so hot and bothered on many
occassions though she'd never admit it to Kid.
Oh she had gotten her way this time and she would enjoy every wicked
minute to her eternal delight.
Lou lost herself in his eyes as they beckoned her to let
free of any lingering apprehensions.
This night was for her. This
night he was hers.
Jimmy wrapped her hands around his neck leaving them there
as his slid down the sides of her body to her curved hips. He'd found himself staring at her ass alot
lately, watching the womanly shape of her round bottom. He gave her a wanting squeeze; damn. The softness his hands now felt needed not
be imagined anymore. Jimmy gave a deep
breath of satisfaction and squeezed again.
"I've been wanting to do this for a long time." he
confessed.
"Squeeze my ass?" she giggled.
"No...fuck you."
Louise gave a weak moan, his hot words stealing her breath
making her legs tremble, her heart quiver with excitement and fear. "Really?"
"For a very long time." he affirmed. "I don't think I would've ever told you
that."
"Why not?"
"You know how things are. You and Kid are together and hell, he's my best friend."
"Let's not think about Kid right now," she
whispered, kissing his chin softly.
"I only want you to have one thing in mind...Me," she smiled
wickedly.
"I can do that."
"Mmmhmm...I know you can. I've heard too many stories, I figured it was time for me to find
out for myself."
Lou didn't allow for a response. Slipping her fingers in his hair, she pulled his head down to
hers, kissing his lips softly. Jimmy's
heart slammed against his chest as he pulled her to his hard body. Her tongue broke the barrier of his lips as
she met his warmth. She had the
sweetest mouth he could've imagined! He
squeezed her ass a little more, their kiss deepening, intensifying as their
tongues danced sensually together.
He heard her whimper once he broke the kiss, his hand
crawling up to her breast. His lips
burned a trail of lust from her ear, to her neck resting just on her
collarbone.
"Mmmmm...oh Jimmy," she whispered breathlessly,
her fingers nested in his long hair.
Jimmy's eyes burned with fire, his fingers unbuttoning her
delicate blouse. He managed a few in a
row, not bothering with the others as his hand pushed the garment aside to
reveal a perked bud under a silken camisole.
Lou helped him along, untucking her blouse from her skirt, the last few
buttons undone by her fingers as Jimmy's wet mouth soaked through the silken fabric
of her camisole.
She lowered her head to watch him play with that nipple
through the silk, his hands coming to her shoulders to rid her of the blouse
completely. He untucked her camisole
and raising her arms, he slipped it from her slim body.
"Nice...very nice." he smiled, making her feel a
surge of confidence.
"Glad you like." came a crooked smile as she took
his hands, placing them over her tender breasts. Jimmy's hungering mouth devoured her small breasts, pulling on
her large nipples. He'd fantasized
sucking her nipples so many nights, sometimes he could see them peaking through
her longjohns and damn, if he didn't wish he could play with them as he was
now.
Lou's head fell back, enjoying the way he flicked her rosey
nipples with his tongue and drove her crazy as he ground them between his
teeth. She sucked in a breath, the
slight pain making her shiver with ecstasy.
Jimmy's own moans of delight drowned her in lust, sending
her into another realm beyond reality.
"Oh yes baby." she spoke to him. "Mmmm...that feels good."
It was enough for Jimmy to hear her telling him he was doing
good but she hadn't seen the half of what he would do to her tonight. He slowly lowered himself to his knees,
undoing her skirt from behind. It
dropped to her feet and she stepped from it.
Her boots and stockings came
next, being tossed aside carelessly.
Jimmy kissed her flat stomach, his hands feeling her bottom through her
undergarment. Her bloomers didn't stay
much longer, her smooth legs feeling the caress of his rough hands as he
slipped them off.
She separated her legs at his urging, her aching clit
throbbing so much it hurt. She gave an
audible gasp once his lips grabbed her button.
He licked her hot, steaming pussy with the full force of his tongue,
giving her what she wanted. He moaned over
and over again against her soft flesh, sliding two fingers inside to feel the
pure fire within.
Lou's legs shook as his fingers moved inside her and his
mouth kept sucking and beating her button until she squealed his name. He loved hearing that sound.
He left her shaking, stopping just before she got an
opportunity to climax and he knew she was puzzled by the look on her face. He stood and unfastened his pants, dropping
them to his ankles. He was bare before
her, his manhood so large and thick. "Oh
god," she called. "Oh
my!" she chuckled. Lou didn't
hesitate to take him in her hand.
"So nice and hard...just the way I like it." Jimmy's eyes closed, feeling her heated
touch on his throbbing cock. Louise
lowered her head to kiss the tip, the wetness of his penis touching her
lips. Her tongue teased his swollen
head, making him groan deeply. Jimmy
rid himself of his shirt and Lou once on her knees, did the same to his shoes
and socks.
"Nice cock Jimmy." came the wicked statement, dark
eyes looking up at him. He wore a sly
grin, his cock so hard he needed her to take him now.
"Nicer in your mouth Louise," he replied
arrogantly.
Louise waited no longer than a few seconds before taking him
into her hot little mouth. There was a
growl of release that came when he felt her mouth cave in around him. "Yeah...damn it...Mmmm..." he
sighed, his chest rising slow as she blew him.
He looked to see her mouth wrapped tight around him, those rosey lips
he'd stared at so often across the dinner table, now gripped him like a suction
cup. Her hand worked along with her
mouth, stroking him long and hard.
Jimmy's hand resting on her head, increasing the intensity of her wicked
strokes.
"Take all my cock Lou...all of me," he requested,
watching her sliding her mouth eagerly over him.
Lou disengaged.
"I...I don't know...what do you mean?" she asked innocently,
taking a breath and looking up into his eyes.
Jimmy gave her a crooked grin. "I'll show you what I mean."
She nodded and allowed him to do what was obviously a new
experience for her.
He rested his hand on the back of her head telling her to
open her mouth as he guided his stiff cock inside. "Just relax." he said and Lou's eyes went wide as he
kept feeding her, sliding deeper and further until she felt him snug in her
throat. He pulled out slowly, feeling
the tip of his head so sensitive as it hit the cool air.
"Oooohhhhh..." she giggled. "I like that. Do it again!" she exclaimed. Of course Jimmy obliged, feeding her all over again. The sensation was awesome Lou thought! Feeling the restriction of him in her
throat, brought her to the brink of climax but she fought it off. Lou seemed to enjoy this new sexual experience. She fed herself his cock, taking him deep
until her mouth felt the nested field of his pelvis. She pulled back slowly, god it just felt amazing! It seemed that she couldn't get enough as
she did so several times after, but Jimmy had to stop her. She almost made him come and he wasn't about
to do that just yet.
She snaked her body up his, her breasts tickling his chest
as her hands cradled around his neck.
Lou conquered him with a wanton-filled kiss, her tongue demanding the
same order from him.
Once she broke the kiss, she braved her request, the one
she'd yearned to ask but was at the same time terrified to. She had never done this before but her body
craved to experience it once and for all.
Her breath grazed his lips hotly. "Jimmy?" she called, pulling on his lower lip.
"Hmmm?" he replied, returning the favor.
"Fuck me now."
Jimmy growled his response, his mouth sucking the tender
skin of her neck.
"I want you to fuck me in the ass."
His heart just about stopped. He wasn't sure if she would ask but hell she did. He raised his head, looking intently into
her dark orbs. He felt his cock grow
just a little bigger, pulling the skin tight so he felt the aching pain down to
his balls.
"That what you want?" he asked, his hand sliding
around to the back of her neck. She
nodded, her eyes wide.
"Alright. Anything
to make you happy."
Lou's heart pounded hard again and again. He would oblige her, but then she knew he
would.
Jimmy knew Lou had a virgin ass, Kid had told him so on the
ride from Seneca. It turned him on
fiercely to know he would be the first to break her in, to make her know what
she was missing all along.
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Jimmy stared down at Lou's bare ass. She rested on her hands and knees on the
blanket. He rubbed her bottom with his
large hands, and the anticipation was killing her on the other hand. Lou swayed her hips, her mouth slightly
opened as his palms traveled her naked rear.
Her engorged clit pulsated, begging for stimulation. Damn, this was too exciting, was Jimmy's
thought. He knelt behind her. He could see her pussy glistening from her
honey, and he knew she was very excited herself. He cocked his head to the side, her cheeks separated slightly
but not quite enough.
"Get on your elbows Lou." he told her softly,
rubbing her perfect back.
Louise obliged, lowering herself on both elbows. Jimmy smiled as she did since now he could
see her so much better. Damn she was
tight! He heard her moan in
anticipation as he smeared his member with the lubricant she had brought
along. His dick was stiff and he
couldn't wait to put it in its rightful place.
Jimmy's eyes were glazed with lust, his breathing deepening as he placed
a little of the lube on her asshole.
Lou whimpered, her ass flinching just a bit at this unknown touch. Her heart raced wickedly, at what was now
lurking behind her which made her pussy hotter and wetter.
Jimmy soon positioned himself to enter. Her ass cheeks were spread wide so now he
could guide himself and watch as he did.
He teased her entrance with the tip of his head, the lube he'd spread on
her mixing with his own. Suddenly Lou
felt a slow push and she let out a surprised cry. His head began to enter.
He growled with pleasure. Lou
squeezed her eyes shut, the pain grabbing her.
He waited a little until she was okay to proceed. He pushed into her more hearing her cry and
groan in pain. He comforted her,
telling her it was only temporary, the pain would be a thing of the past. She understood though the pain was
striking. His words seemed to soothe
her, and once she had quieted, Jimmy pushed ahead.
The sight was beautiful.
His penis head in Lou's young, virgin ass. Jimmy sucked in a breath as he pushed a little more, soft and
slow so as not to hurt her too bad. He
knew if she got scared she would most likely stop and he didn't want that to
happen. He'd waited to fuck Lou for so
long, and now that she allowed him, there was nothing in this world he was
going to do to screw this up!
He pulled back slightly, pumping softly to open her tight
ass. She gripped him so tight but hell
it felt so damn good!
"OWW...OWW...OOOHHHH!" she cried, her eyes opening as she felt
him push still futher, his penis halfway in as he informed her. "Shhhh baby...I know." he
whispered as he began to stroke in her softly.
Jimmy slid himself out of her, lubing his rod once again so the rest of
the way would go smoothly. Her lips
trembled as she waited for him.
"UUUHHHHHH...FUCK!!!" she cried out again as she
felt him enter into her ass.
"Uuuugggghhhh!!" she swallowed her cry, tears wetting the
corners of her eyes.
"Just a little more Lou...just a little more. You're opening up real nice baby."
She panted, her breaths short and hard feeling his thickness
withdraw once more.
He lubed himself for a third time, smearing a little extra
on her asshole again to help him along and not cause her too much discomfort
for the last couple of inches. This
time, her ass accommodated him to the hilt.
He alerted her to the fact but she figured he was all the way inside
since she could feel his balls against her pussy. "OH JIMMY!" she cried out with a mixture of pain and
pleasure, feeling his strokes in her ass.
Jimmy gripped her hips as he worked in her, pumping at first delicately
slow, a bit later his speed increased as her ass now worked him like a second
pussy.
"OH YES!
DAMN!" he cried out.
"OOOH LOU! Sweet Lou! Damn you're so tight baby!" he gripped
her tighter.
Lou screamed, feeling his cock pumping into her. "AAAHHHH! OOHHHH!!" Her jaws
tightened as he fucked her, her body absorbing the pain which miraculously had
now began to transform itself into something very pleasurable. Her small hands gripped the blanket, her
eyes so tight she saw blinding flashes with each stroke of his cock.
She lowered herself down further, the side of her face
pasted on the blanket. "Fuck me
Jimmy! Fuck my ass! Fuck my tight ass!" she urged. Lou bit on the blanket as his strokes
ventured to and fro into her ass.
Euphoria rained around her.
Jimmy fucking her in the ass just the way she had fantasized so many
nights. Her ass stuck straight up in
the air giving Jimmy better leverage as she took his dick stroke for stroke.
The sweat of lust coated them both. Jimmy's face contorted as his pleasure
mounted. Lou's once smooth face was now
crinkled, taking her lover's immense size to her own height of ecstasy.
"FUCK!!" Jimmy cried out. He dared to look down to see her ass
swallowing him whole and that sight broke Jimmy at last!
Lou could feel his dick stiffen so much better in her ass
than in her slippery pussy and she knew he was there. "I'm cumming!" he alerted her, as he jettisoned in her,
christening her virgin ass.
Lou sucked in a breath as he pumped his cum deep into her
asshole. "Give it to me
Jimmy. Fill my ass with your cum...I
want all of it," she grunted, as her own orgasm ripped her to shreds!
Her salacious urgency had made him relinquish every drop of
his heavy load. He shook, giving her
one last shivering pump.
Jimmy fell weakened to her side once his orgasm ran its
potent course, his brow beaded in the sweat of hard labor. Lou lay panting, enjoying the feel of her
new ass. "Oh Jimmy," she
whispered, breathing heavy. He kissed
her lips softly, running fingers through her dampened hair. She felt some of his cum oozing out of her
ass from the sheer volume he'd unloaded, making her moan satisfied.
She crawled into his open arms as he wrapped her damp body
against his. "Ooohhh, that was
unbelievable," she whispered.
Jimmy chuckled.
"I know what you mean."
Lou wore a feigned puzzled look. She wanted to know what was it that made him pursue her
tonight?
"Let's just say a friendly voice kept chirping in my
ear all day."
Just before leaving the station, Jimmy assured Kid he would
give Louise her gift tonight. The two
best friends exchanged knowing smiles and after a private goodbye to Louise,
Kid left, leaving matters in Jimmy's capable hands.
Lou thought about that chirping voice knowing full well its
source but playing the innocent made things so much more exciting. Hearing Jimmy's simple explanation made her
so insanely hot she came to life twenty minutes later.
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The loft was filled with one voice and one voice alone,
Lou's. Her legs were spread wide by
him. Jimmy's large hands cuffed her
ankles, holding her legs airborne as his amazing cock found a nice rythm in and
out of her steaming cunt.
He admonished her to look at him as he took her pussy. Lou did, raising her head to see Jimmy's
glistening cock covered with her passionate honey. She loved watching him take what he wanted, his thick penis
stroking her walls, beckoning them to bathe him in her orgasm.
But once again before she climaxed, her eyes suddenly bulged
when she felt him enter her ass.
"AAAHHH!! FUCK!" she
screamed in pain and ecstasy, her ass being fucked furiously. Lou took control of her own body, anchoring
her hands on the back of her thighs as she brought her knees to her
shoulders. Jimmy gave an audible groan
now that he moved nicely in her ass.
"Damn you're a sweet bitch," he smiled at her,
knowing she was loving every second.
Lou whimpered in response, her breath stolen once again as
she found no words fit to answer him.
He loved to watch her little face whince and gasp, her teeth biting her
lower lip as he pumped in her ass. He
couldn't help but smile in pleasure, seeing his little Lou take his cock in her
ass and pussy.
She gasped, a frown on her face when he left her tight ass
for her pussy again but soon he erased her troubled frown, replacing it with a
gaping mouth and lustful sounds of their pleasures flooding the loft. At last effort, after slamming her like
there was no tomorrow, her small body jerking under his, Lou gripped Jimmy's
shoulders, her legs wrapped tight around him as he unleased another storm of
cum inside her pussy this time.
Her shallow breath grazed the side of his face.
"Mmmm...young stud." she smiled, kissing his ear
softly. Lou whispered in his ear
something secret. Jimmy smiled. "Anytime," he replied and kissed
her softly on the lips, a long and lingering kiss.
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The next morning Lou greeted Kid as he rode in from town.
Once he was off his horse, Lou ran to him, throwing her arms
around his neck. She laid a big,
wanting kiss on him, a bright and shiny smile on her face.
"Thank you for my gift."
"Did you like it?" he asked, displaying his own
satisfied smile.
"I loved every inch of it!" she squealed.
Kid wrapped his arms around her waist. "I'm happy then," he said and
kissed her softly.
"What about you?
Did you like yours?" she asked.
"I loved every minute of it! Watching you get fucked in the ass was the best gift you could've
given me baby." he smiled wickedly.
"Did I make you cum?"
"Yeah you did you sweet little bitch." he
chuckled.
Lou giggled hearing him echo Jimmy's words. "Now that makes me happy. And you kept quiet," she teased,
knowing how vocal he was when he burst.
"I don't think Jimmy would've performed as well had he suspected
anything."
"I don't either but we'll keep that our little
secret."
Lou smiled. Her eyes
darkened as she stared into his blue orbs.
"Why don't you say we go try out my new ass?" she
asked naughtily.
Kid grinned.
"Now that's right up my alley."
The End
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