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The Gift

 

by Mystic

 

 

"Are you sure she's going to like that?"

 

"She told me so herself Jimmy."

 

"I don't know. She told you so?!"

 

"I guarantee you she told me so with her own mouth."

 

"And you wouldn't mind me giving it to her? Cause if you do I won't."

 

"All I want is for Lou to be happy is all. If that's what she wants then I don't see a problem with who she gets it from. Look, you'll be doing us both a favor. I won't have to agonize about this no more and Lou is happy in the end. I mean that's all that counts right?"

 

"Well...I'll think on it. Sounds like a mighty big gift to me."

 

"It is Jimmy, but worth it don't you think? Think of it as a gift from me to you. Everyone gets what they want and we're all happy."

 

So went the conversation between Jimmy and Kid as they rode home from Seneca one afternoon. Jimmy wasn't sure what to do. Kid's proposal, how could he pass that up?! He mulled the choices over and over in his mind. He had to admit it sounded like the perfect present but could he actually make the purchase? He convinced himself over the course of one week that it didn't matter what he thought, Lou was the one calling the shots here and all he wanted to do was make sure as Kid kept telling him, "It will make her so happy."

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"The picnic was wonderful Jimmy," Louise's beautiful smile beamed forth. "I've never gone on a moonlit picnic before."

 

He blushed, nodding shyly as he always did when she complimented him. Lou had that effect on him. She melted him like butter through those big, gorgeous eyes so anything she said made him react just the way he was right now.

 

Louise knew she had a measure of power, of control over him though subtle as it was. There was a certain connection between them; they both knew it was there and finally they would both act on it.

 

Her heart pounded as they entered the barn. Excitement coursed through her veins along with unmistakable fright. She knew what she wanted from Jimmy yet knowing he was well endowed scared her. This was so daring! It was the thing only saloon whores were known to do and Lou only hoped she could handle him; if she could actually go through with this!

 

His husky voice startled her, asking, "Are you ready?"

 

Lou swallowed the lump in her throat. Her clit had responded instantly for her though no verbal reply came. She nodded a reply instead. The jolt in her womanhood made shivers run through her. Her legs trembled underneath her, her fingers quivered as she grasped the ladder to the loft. His body grazed hers as they made the trip up to the secluded area. Lou's eyes grew wider with each step. She still had time to back out of this, she thought for a fleeting moment. But it was too late. Her body insisted, pushed her forth to climb that ladder and to step into the realm of the unknown.

 

"Are you sure it's safe up here Jimmy?" she asked him.

 

"Yeah it's safe."

 

"Okay." She proceeded ahead, finally to enter the loft.

 

Lou looked about warily, her nervousness doubling! She tried to slow down the furious beat of her heart but it was no use. Her chest heaved evenly with shallow breaths as her eyes scanned the loft. Her entire body felt like one, huge nerve.

 

"You nervous?" he asked.

 

"A bit." she nodded, turning to face him.

 

He rubbed her arms. This was still unbelievable. Here he was in the loft with Louise, and they both knew why they were there.

 

"We don't have to do this if you're having second thoughts."

 

She shook her head at once. "No, no...I want to. I really want to," she assured, her tiny hands lifting to play with the buttons on his shirt. "I think you were right in waiting for Kid to be out of town. I don't think I could've gathered the nerve at this point," she chuckled.

 

"Thought it'd be better this way. No distractions right?" he asked, bringing her small hands to his waiting lips. "We have the whole station to ourselves, just the way I knew you would want it."

 

Louise's heart thundered as she peered into those dark, brown eyes that melted her, that made her so hot and bothered on many occassions though she'd never admit it to Kid. Oh she had gotten her way this time and she would enjoy every wicked minute to her eternal delight.

 

Lou lost herself in his eyes as they beckoned her to let free of any lingering apprehensions. This night was for her. This night he was hers.

 

Jimmy wrapped her hands around his neck leaving them there as his slid down the sides of her body to her curved hips. He'd found himself staring at her ass alot lately, watching the womanly shape of her round bottom. He gave her a wanting squeeze; damn. The softness his hands now felt needed not be imagined anymore. Jimmy gave a deep breath of satisfaction and squeezed again.

 

"I've been wanting to do this for a long time." he confessed.

 

"Squeeze my ass?" she giggled.

 

"No...fuck you."

 

Louise gave a weak moan, his hot words stealing her breath making her legs tremble, her heart quiver with excitement and fear. "Really?"

 

"For a very long time." he affirmed. "I don't think I would've ever told you that."

 

"Why not?"

 

"You know how things are. You and Kid are together and hell, he's my best friend."

 

"Let's not think about Kid right now," she whispered, kissing his chin softly. "I only want you to have one thing in mind...Me," she smiled wickedly.

 

"I can do that."

 

"Mmmhmm...I know you can. I've heard too many stories, I figured it was time for me to find out for myself."

 

Lou didn't allow for a response. Slipping her fingers in his hair, she pulled his head down to hers, kissing his lips softly. Jimmy's heart slammed against his chest as he pulled her to his hard body. Her tongue broke the barrier of his lips as she met his warmth. She had the sweetest mouth he could've imagined! He squeezed her ass a little more, their kiss deepening, intensifying as their tongues danced sensually together.

 

He heard her whimper once he broke the kiss, his hand crawling up to her breast. His lips burned a trail of lust from her ear, to her neck resting just on her collarbone.

 

"Mmmmm...oh Jimmy," she whispered breathlessly, her fingers nested in his long hair.

 

Jimmy's eyes burned with fire, his fingers unbuttoning her delicate blouse. He managed a few in a row, not bothering with the others as his hand pushed the garment aside to reveal a perked bud under a silken camisole. Lou helped him along, untucking her blouse from her skirt, the last few buttons undone by her fingers as Jimmy's wet mouth soaked through the silken fabric of her camisole.

 

She lowered her head to watch him play with that nipple through the silk, his hands coming to her shoulders to rid her of the blouse completely. He untucked her camisole and raising her arms, he slipped it from her slim body.

 

"Nice...very nice." he smiled, making her feel a surge of confidence.

 

"Glad you like." came a crooked smile as she took his hands, placing them over her tender breasts. Jimmy's hungering mouth devoured her small breasts, pulling on her large nipples. He'd fantasized sucking her nipples so many nights, sometimes he could see them peaking through her longjohns and damn, if he didn't wish he could play with them as he was now.

 

Lou's head fell back, enjoying the way he flicked her rosey nipples with his tongue and drove her crazy as he ground them between his teeth. She sucked in a breath, the slight pain making her shiver with ecstasy.

 

Jimmy's own moans of delight drowned her in lust, sending her into another realm beyond reality. "Oh yes baby." she spoke to him. "Mmmm...that feels good."

 

It was enough for Jimmy to hear her telling him he was doing good but she hadn't seen the half of what he would do to her tonight. He slowly lowered himself to his knees, undoing her skirt from behind. It dropped to her feet and she stepped from it. Her boots and stockings came next, being tossed aside carelessly. Jimmy kissed her flat stomach, his hands feeling her bottom through her undergarment. Her bloomers didn't stay much longer, her smooth legs feeling the caress of his rough hands as he slipped them off.

 

She separated her legs at his urging, her aching clit throbbing so much it hurt. She gave an audible gasp once his lips grabbed her button. He licked her hot, steaming pussy with the full force of his tongue, giving her what she wanted. He moaned over and over again against her soft flesh, sliding two fingers inside to feel the pure fire within.

 

Lou's legs shook as his fingers moved inside her and his mouth kept sucking and beating her button until she squealed his name. He loved hearing that sound.

 

He left her shaking, stopping just before she got an opportunity to climax and he knew she was puzzled by the look on her face. He stood and unfastened his pants, dropping them to his ankles. He was bare before her, his manhood so large and thick. "Oh god," she called. "Oh my!" she chuckled. Lou didn't hesitate to take him in her hand. "So nice and hard...just the way I like it." Jimmy's eyes closed, feeling her heated touch on his throbbing cock. Louise lowered her head to kiss the tip, the wetness of his penis touching her lips. Her tongue teased his swollen head, making him groan deeply. Jimmy rid himself of his shirt and Lou once on her knees, did the same to his shoes and socks.

 

"Nice cock Jimmy." came the wicked statement, dark eyes looking up at him. He wore a sly grin, his cock so hard he needed her to take him now.

 

"Nicer in your mouth Louise," he replied arrogantly.

 

Louise waited no longer than a few seconds before taking him into her hot little mouth. There was a growl of release that came when he felt her mouth cave in around him. "Yeah...damn it...Mmmm..." he sighed, his chest rising slow as she blew him. He looked to see her mouth wrapped tight around him, those rosey lips he'd stared at so often across the dinner table, now gripped him like a suction cup. Her hand worked along with her mouth, stroking him long and hard. Jimmy's hand resting on her head, increasing the intensity of her wicked strokes.

 

"Take all my cock Lou...all of me," he requested, watching her sliding her mouth eagerly over him.

 

Lou disengaged. "I...I don't know...what do you mean?" she asked innocently, taking a breath and looking up into his eyes.

 

Jimmy gave her a crooked grin. "I'll show you what I mean."

 

She nodded and allowed him to do what was obviously a new experience for her.

 

He rested his hand on the back of her head telling her to open her mouth as he guided his stiff cock inside. "Just relax." he said and Lou's eyes went wide as he kept feeding her, sliding deeper and further until she felt him snug in her throat. He pulled out slowly, feeling the tip of his head so sensitive as it hit the cool air.

 

"Oooohhhhh..." she giggled. "I like that. Do it again!" she exclaimed. Of course Jimmy obliged, feeding her all over again. The sensation was awesome Lou thought! Feeling the restriction of him in her throat, brought her to the brink of climax but she fought it off. Lou seemed to enjoy this new sexual experience. She fed herself his cock, taking him deep until her mouth felt the nested field of his pelvis. She pulled back slowly, god it just felt amazing! It seemed that she couldn't get enough as she did so several times after, but Jimmy had to stop her. She almost made him come and he wasn't about to do that just yet.

 

She snaked her body up his, her breasts tickling his chest as her hands cradled around his neck. Lou conquered him with a wanton-filled kiss, her tongue demanding the same order from him.

 

Once she broke the kiss, she braved her request, the one she'd yearned to ask but was at the same time terrified to. She had never done this before but her body craved to experience it once and for all.

 

Her breath grazed his lips hotly. "Jimmy?" she called, pulling on his lower lip.

 

"Hmmm?" he replied, returning the favor.

 

"Fuck me now."

 

Jimmy growled his response, his mouth sucking the tender skin of her neck.

 

"I want you to fuck me in the ass."

 

His heart just about stopped. He wasn't sure if she would ask but hell she did. He raised his head, looking intently into her dark orbs. He felt his cock grow just a little bigger, pulling the skin tight so he felt the aching pain down to his balls.

 

"That what you want?" he asked, his hand sliding around to the back of her neck. She nodded, her eyes wide.

 

"Alright. Anything to make you happy."

 

Lou's heart pounded hard again and again. He would oblige her, but then she knew he would.

 

Jimmy knew Lou had a virgin ass, Kid had told him so on the ride from Seneca. It turned him on fiercely to know he would be the first to break her in, to make her know what she was missing all along.

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Jimmy stared down at Lou's bare ass. She rested on her hands and knees on the blanket. He rubbed her bottom with his large hands, and the anticipation was killing her on the other hand. Lou swayed her hips, her mouth slightly opened as his palms traveled her naked rear. Her engorged clit pulsated, begging for stimulation. Damn, this was too exciting, was Jimmy's thought. He knelt behind her. He could see her pussy glistening from her honey, and he knew she was very excited herself. He cocked his head to the side, her cheeks separated slightly but not quite enough.

 

"Get on your elbows Lou." he told her softly, rubbing her perfect back.

 

Louise obliged, lowering herself on both elbows. Jimmy smiled as she did since now he could see her so much better. Damn she was tight! He heard her moan in anticipation as he smeared his member with the lubricant she had brought along. His dick was stiff and he couldn't wait to put it in its rightful place. Jimmy's eyes were glazed with lust, his breathing deepening as he placed a little of the lube on her asshole. Lou whimpered, her ass flinching just a bit at this unknown touch. Her heart raced wickedly, at what was now lurking behind her which made her pussy hotter and wetter.

 

Jimmy soon positioned himself to enter. Her ass cheeks were spread wide so now he could guide himself and watch as he did. He teased her entrance with the tip of his head, the lube he'd spread on her mixing with his own. Suddenly Lou felt a slow push and she let out a surprised cry. His head began to enter. He growled with pleasure. Lou squeezed her eyes shut, the pain grabbing her. He waited a little until she was okay to proceed. He pushed into her more hearing her cry and groan in pain. He comforted her, telling her it was only temporary, the pain would be a thing of the past. She understood though the pain was striking. His words seemed to soothe her, and once she had quieted, Jimmy pushed ahead.

 

The sight was beautiful. His penis head in Lou's young, virgin ass. Jimmy sucked in a breath as he pushed a little more, soft and slow so as not to hurt her too bad. He knew if she got scared she would most likely stop and he didn't want that to happen. He'd waited to fuck Lou for so long, and now that she allowed him, there was nothing in this world he was going to do to screw this up!

 

He pulled back slightly, pumping softly to open her tight ass. She gripped him so tight but hell it felt so damn good! "OWW...OWW...OOOHHHH!" she cried, her eyes opening as she felt him push still futher, his penis halfway in as he informed her. "Shhhh baby...I know." he whispered as he began to stroke in her softly. Jimmy slid himself out of her, lubing his rod once again so the rest of the way would go smoothly. Her lips trembled as she waited for him.

 

"UUUHHHHHH...FUCK!!!" she cried out again as she felt him enter into her ass. "Uuuugggghhhh!!" she swallowed her cry, tears wetting the corners of her eyes.

 

"Just a little more Lou...just a little more. You're opening up real nice baby."

 

She panted, her breaths short and hard feeling his thickness withdraw once more.

 

He lubed himself for a third time, smearing a little extra on her asshole again to help him along and not cause her too much discomfort for the last couple of inches. This time, her ass accommodated him to the hilt. He alerted her to the fact but she figured he was all the way inside since she could feel his balls against her pussy. "OH JIMMY!" she cried out with a mixture of pain and pleasure, feeling his strokes in her ass. Jimmy gripped her hips as he worked in her, pumping at first delicately slow, a bit later his speed increased as her ass now worked him like a second pussy.

 

"OH YES! DAMN!" he cried out. "OOOH LOU! Sweet Lou! Damn you're so tight baby!" he gripped her tighter.

 

Lou screamed, feeling his cock pumping into her. "AAAHHHH! OOHHHH!!" Her jaws tightened as he fucked her, her body absorbing the pain which miraculously had now began to transform itself into something very pleasurable. Her small hands gripped the blanket, her eyes so tight she saw blinding flashes with each stroke of his cock.

 

She lowered herself down further, the side of her face pasted on the blanket. "Fuck me Jimmy! Fuck my ass! Fuck my tight ass!" she urged. Lou bit on the blanket as his strokes ventured to and fro into her ass. Euphoria rained around her. Jimmy fucking her in the ass just the way she had fantasized so many nights. Her ass stuck straight up in the air giving Jimmy better leverage as she took his dick stroke for stroke.

 

The sweat of lust coated them both. Jimmy's face contorted as his pleasure mounted. Lou's once smooth face was now crinkled, taking her lover's immense size to her own height of ecstasy.

 

"FUCK!!" Jimmy cried out. He dared to look down to see her ass swallowing him whole and that sight broke Jimmy at last!

 

Lou could feel his dick stiffen so much better in her ass than in her slippery pussy and she knew he was there. "I'm cumming!" he alerted her, as he jettisoned in her, christening her virgin ass.

 

Lou sucked in a breath as he pumped his cum deep into her asshole. "Give it to me Jimmy. Fill my ass with your cum...I want all of it," she grunted, as her own orgasm ripped her to shreds!

 

Her salacious urgency had made him relinquish every drop of his heavy load. He shook, giving her one last shivering pump.

 

Jimmy fell weakened to her side once his orgasm ran its potent course, his brow beaded in the sweat of hard labor. Lou lay panting, enjoying the feel of her new ass. "Oh Jimmy," she whispered, breathing heavy. He kissed her lips softly, running fingers through her dampened hair. She felt some of his cum oozing out of her ass from the sheer volume he'd unloaded, making her moan satisfied.

 

She crawled into his open arms as he wrapped her damp body against his. "Ooohhh, that was unbelievable," she whispered.

 

Jimmy chuckled. "I know what you mean."

 

Lou wore a feigned puzzled look. She wanted to know what was it that made him pursue her tonight?

 

"Let's just say a friendly voice kept chirping in my ear all day."

 

Just before leaving the station, Jimmy assured Kid he would give Louise her gift tonight. The two best friends exchanged knowing smiles and after a private goodbye to Louise, Kid left, leaving matters in Jimmy's capable hands.

 

Lou thought about that chirping voice knowing full well its source but playing the innocent made things so much more exciting. Hearing Jimmy's simple explanation made her so insanely hot she came to life twenty minutes later.

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The loft was filled with one voice and one voice alone, Lou's. Her legs were spread wide by him. Jimmy's large hands cuffed her ankles, holding her legs airborne as his amazing cock found a nice rythm in and out of her steaming cunt.

 

He admonished her to look at him as he took her pussy. Lou did, raising her head to see Jimmy's glistening cock covered with her passionate honey. She loved watching him take what he wanted, his thick penis stroking her walls, beckoning them to bathe him in her orgasm.

 

But once again before she climaxed, her eyes suddenly bulged when she felt him enter her ass. "AAAHHH!! FUCK!" she screamed in pain and ecstasy, her ass being fucked furiously. Lou took control of her own body, anchoring her hands on the back of her thighs as she brought her knees to her shoulders. Jimmy gave an audible groan now that he moved nicely in her ass.

 

"Damn you're a sweet bitch," he smiled at her, knowing she was loving every second.

 

Lou whimpered in response, her breath stolen once again as she found no words fit to answer him. He loved to watch her little face whince and gasp, her teeth biting her lower lip as he pumped in her ass. He couldn't help but smile in pleasure, seeing his little Lou take his cock in her ass and pussy.

 

She gasped, a frown on her face when he left her tight ass for her pussy again but soon he erased her troubled frown, replacing it with a gaping mouth and lustful sounds of their pleasures flooding the loft. At last effort, after slamming her like there was no tomorrow, her small body jerking under his, Lou gripped Jimmy's shoulders, her legs wrapped tight around him as he unleased another storm of cum inside her pussy this time.

 

Her shallow breath grazed the side of his face.

 

"Mmmm...young stud." she smiled, kissing his ear softly. Lou whispered in his ear something secret. Jimmy smiled. "Anytime," he replied and kissed her softly on the lips, a long and lingering kiss.

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The next morning Lou greeted Kid as he rode in from town.

 

Once he was off his horse, Lou ran to him, throwing her arms around his neck. She laid a big, wanting kiss on him, a bright and shiny smile on her face.

 

"Thank you for my gift."

 

"Did you like it?" he asked, displaying his own satisfied smile.

 

"I loved every inch of it!" she squealed.

 

Kid wrapped his arms around her waist. "I'm happy then," he said and kissed her softly.

 

"What about you? Did you like yours?" she asked.

 

"I loved every minute of it! Watching you get fucked in the ass was the best gift you could've given me baby." he smiled wickedly.

 

"Did I make you cum?"

 

"Yeah you did you sweet little bitch." he chuckled.

 

Lou giggled hearing him echo Jimmy's words. "Now that makes me happy. And you kept quiet," she teased, knowing how vocal he was when he burst. "I don't think Jimmy would've performed as well had he suspected anything."

 

"I don't either but we'll keep that our little secret."

 

Lou smiled. Her eyes darkened as she stared into his blue orbs.

 

"Why don't you say we go try out my new ass?" she asked naughtily.

 

Kid grinned. "Now that's right up my alley."

 

 

The End

 

 

 

 

 

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