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TITLE: A WINTER'S NIGHT

AUTHOR: Mystic

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MAIN CHARACTERs:Lou, Kid & His Jimmyness

WARNING/RATING: This story contains GRAPHIC SEX . It is NOT intended for children. If this type of storyline offends you, please don't read it. Reader's use discretion.

DISCLAIMER: The Young Riders and all characters mentioned in this story are the property of the Ogiens/Kane Company and Ed Spielman. I have utmost respect for their creations and merely write not to degrade these characters but to enhance avenues of their lives that were not explored on the show. Thank You

A Winter's Night

by Mystic

The bunkhouse was at last quiet.  The only sound heard now was the steady whistling of the blustery wind outside.  The first snow of the winter had finally arrived, lightly dusting the field of the homestead with a fine white blanket.  The crackling fire inside filled the bunkhouse with a comfortable, soothing warmth.  Flickering in the darkness were the yellow flames of the fire, the glow of the light touching each figure that slept within...Kid, Lou, Jimmy and Cody.  All seemed to have finally drifted off into that state of deep rest, their tired bodies long urged them to take...all except one.

Kid tossed and turned in is bunk unable to find the comfort of sleep.  He'd tried to fall asleep for hours but wasn't able to.  He tried counting sheep, that didn't help.  He tried clearing his mind of all thoughts, that didn't do any good either.  He sighed to himself for he knew the only remedy that could put him to sleep was...sex.  His penis had been hard all night though he'd attempted getting the idea of sex, the images of Louise out of his mind.  They proved for naught.  He wanted her now.  He needed relief.

Louise had a way of getting to Kid, he still couldn't comprehend.  The way she laughed, the way she stood, the way her eyes seemed to beam when she looked at him, anything she did made her more appealing.  He especially enjoyed watching her when they prepared for bed.  How her feminine form stood like a wall underneath the tightness of the boyish long johns.  It turned him on everytime.  He had come to enjoy and appreciate that she was all woman in every sense of the word.  When he made love to her, he was lost in paradise.  Her honeysuckled breasts, her succulent waterfall, her flowery petals, her fiery warmth...yes, he felt like he lived in paradise and Louise of course made him feel as if he did.

Looking over the edge of his bunk down below, he caught sight of Lou fast asleep.  He pondered for a moment if he should or not, but gave into the desire for he was hot and very bothered.  It would certainly be worth it.  He eased down off his bunk rather quietly looking around at his male friends.  Neither stirred, so he proceeded to kneel down next to Lou and took a moment to admire her.  She looked so peaceful, so beautiful.  She slept on her back, both arms bent above her head, her blanket draping only half her body.  With a gentle finger he moved a few loose strands of her brown hair from her forehead.  Bringing his nose close to her face, he allowed his breath to caress her, taking in her sweet scent.  His eyes soon followed the undone buttons of her long john top, and he could see the small hint of caramel skin revealed underneath.  His stare continued a little further as he found the two mounds of her breasts forming under the heavy top.  Not hesitating, he began to fondle her nipples through her shirt rather softly, trying to perk them up.  He was getting hotter.  His penis began to pulsate, alerting him that its needs required attention right now. 

Kid brought his nose to take in her sweet scent, his lips barely hovering over her neck.  Then as if the next step came so natural, his lips started a series of soft kisses on her face and soon her lips.  They were so inviting, so relaxed as he kissed them.  Lou still didn't stir.  His right hand began journeying under her top, feeling her smooth stomach as he made his way to her small breasts.  This time Lou felt the touch.  Her eyes flew open as Kid's mouth found hers.  It took her only a split second to realize what was happening.

"Kid!" she cried softly.  "What are you doing?" she asked somewhat annoyed at the invasion.

"I want you Lou."

"What?"

"I want to make love." he told her.

"Now?" she asked in disbelief as she felt his fingers pulling on her bare nipple.  His eyes were glazed with the look of hot sex.

"Lou, it's been a whole week." he protested whisperingly.  "I'll be leaving come morning and I want you now.  I'm horny as hell."

"Well we can't." she whispered back.  "It's too cold out in the barn." she argued, trying to dissuade him.

"We don't have to go to the barn.  We can do it right here." he suggested.

"Are you crazy!  We aren't alone.  Jimmy and Cody are in here too." she objected.

"I just want a quickie Lou.  Damn, my balls are heavy and I'm dying to come." he informed her as he cupped his crotch.  "I'll be real quiet okay?  Besides they're fast asleep." he said glancing at the two sleeping boys.

"It's too risky Kid.  What about if one of them wakes up?"

"As loud as Cody's snoring you know he ain't waking up and Jimmy...well Jimmy just got in from a long run, he's exhausted.  Look at him." he said, as he encouraged her to take a look.  Jimmy was indeed asleep and she could hear Cody snoring all the way from the other side of the bunkhouse.

"Don't worry.  It's like we're by ourselves." he asserted, whispering gently in her ear.  His hot breath caressed her neck as he continued to seduce her.

"Are you sure?" she asked weakly, giving in to his sexual urgings, his kisses being carefully placed in all the right spots of her delicate neck.

"Yeah." he assured her with another kiss, this one penetrating into her mouth.  "Please Lou." he begged.  "I need you."

"Okay but promise to be quiet."  He agreed readily.

They kissed fully and deeply.  Lou sat up on her bunk as Kid said, "Let's take this off."  He lifted her shirt as she raised her arms and he rid her of her top.  At the sight of her breasts, he took them in his hands, ravenously sucking her nipples.  "God I missed your tits." he voiced.  Lou only smiled as she enjoyed looking at Kid reveling in the softness of her breasts.  He pulled her nipples with his teeth causing her to whimper as he made her so hot and wet.  She eased back on the bunk as he kissed her down to her stomach and pulled down the bottoms of her long johns.  He took them off and soon she felt his warm hand caress her inner thighs slowly traveling unto the precious field of her forest as she opened her legs.  His middle finger searched for her clitoris and found it at once.  He fondled her button making her quiver with excitement.  He watched at how excited she was getting and it turned him the hell on.  Kid kissed Lou as he played with her and her juices began to flow.  He felt the increased wetness he was producing and stuck his middle finger inside.  She gasped as she felt his exploration.  He withdrew his finger as he made his way south and immediately opened her wet pussy with two fingers bringing his full tongue to lick her spot.  Lou was in heaven.  Kid ate her like a starved animal.  Grabbing his curled locks she couldn't help to move her hips to his oral stimulations.  "Damn." she whispered ecstatically, as her body began to tremble, releasing a flood of sweet nectar into his mouth.  She had to stop him for she felt like screaming. 

Kid took her blanket and laid it on the floor next to her bunk.  He pulled off his shirt as Lou pulled down his bottom half.  He stepped out of them and laid on the blanket.  His cock was hard, standing erect as he laid down.  Lou took his cock in her hand and softly took him in her mouth.  She loved the taste of Kid.  She loved giving him head.  Lou stroked him with awesome authority as Kid tried not to grunt from the pleasure he felt.  Her head moved up and down on his rod, damn she hadn't realized how long it had truly been since she'd given him a blowjob.  It felt good now.  As she sucked on his cock, Lou turned her head towards Jimmy's bunk and as she opened her eyes from her bliss, she saw him looking at them.  He lay there on his upper bunk, right across from theirs, looking down at them.  His stare made her miss a beat but she didn't let it deter her.  Kid was feeling too good in her mouth and seeing Jimmy looking down at her blowing Kid made her hornier.  She asked herself, "Do you like what you see Jimmy?"  Turning her attention back to Kid, she took her fingers and started to jerk him too.  She hoped this would turn Jimmy on too.  At this point, she was brazen and being very naughty.

After the wonderful blowjob she stood over Kid, her legs spread wide as she straddled him, her back facing him.  She squatted down, holding his rock hard penis in her hand and eased her wetness on him.  Kid let out a low sigh as the heat of Lou's vagina met his hard rod.  Lou moved up and down on Kid's stiff cock as he pumped it into her.  He held on tight to her waist guiding her along and the view she gave him was awesome.  The light from the fireplace gave him a good view of his penis sliding in and out of her pussy.  After several strokes, Lou turned to look at Jimmy again.  He was raised on one elbow now, and he looked as if he was enjoying watching them.  She blew him a small kiss making him crack a slight smile.  Lou, wanting to change positions got on her hands and knees and told Kid to fuck her from behind.  Kid knelt behind her and entered her roughly.  Lou whinced from the pain but the pain felt sooo good. 

Lou turned to look at Jimmy again who was still watching.  He was watching as Kid fucked her.  Lou loved it.  Jimmy was very hard now.  He wished he could have a piece of her ass too.  Jimmy stared at Lou and Lou at Jimmy as her body jerked with Kid's every thrust.  Unbeknownst to Kid, he didn't realize they were being watched for he reveled in his own ecstasy, everything around him becoming non-existant as his slippery cock penetrated Lou again and again giving him the pleasure he wanted.  But Louise was alive, alert to what was going on and was totally turned on by it.  She soon felt Kid thrust hard in her, she knew he was coming.  He emptied himself deep inside her as he grabbed her butt tight.  After Kid's climax and her own orgasm, she opened her eyes to look at Jimmy but now his eyes were closed.  She knew he wasn't asleep and reserved not to say anything about it to Kid.  But at the moment she felt like they both had fucked her at once and she came hard just from the experience.

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The following evening as they readied for bed, she approached Jimmy as he fluffed his pillows.  She hadn't spoken to him all day, actually he seemed to be avoiding her as usual but she had to know.  Standing next to him she looked at him with seduction in her eyes and quietly asked, "So, did you like what you saw last night?"

He turned to her and asked, "What was that?"

She only smiled at him.  "Right." and left it at that.  She turned to her bunk, sitting there thinking of how evasive Jimmy tended to be and she felt he liked to tease her that way.  Would he ever confess to it?  Maybe not, but she wouldn't mind giving him a reminder.  She wondered if he ever thought about fucking her.  The way she caught him at times staring in her direction, gave her no doubts that Jimmy Hickok stored many naughty thoughts about her in that head of his.  She liked to think so anyway.  Lou's craving increased as she thought of having a piece of Jimmy as she sat there looking at his body, draped in those long johns and how the bulge between his legs made her think something sexually sinful.

The bunkhouse was at last quiet.  The wind outside still whistled wildly just as it did the previous evening while the crackling fire shed its warmth upon the sleeping riders, all except one...Lou.  She kept tossing and turning unable to fall asleep.  Staring at Jimmy as he slept wasn't helping her any.  She kept wondering how affected he'd been by the sexual show he was privy to witness last night.  Her naughtiness moved her to want him.  She wanted him to get off that bunk and come to her and seduce her.  Her body called for him as sexual pulses teased her clitoris.  But she knew he wouldn't.  She knew that much.

"Well if he won't come to me, I guess I'll have to go to him." she whispered to herself.  Rising from her bunk she silently walked across the small area to his bunk.  She stepped up on Noah's empty bunk so she could reach him.  She stood on the edge of Noah's bunk looking at the peacefulness that draped Jimmy's face.  She smiled at it.  He wasn't usually this way, she liked him like this.  Kissing him sensually on the lips not once but twice, she finally roused him from sleep.  He opened his eyes.  He thought at first it might've been a dream but as she greeted him with a "Hi handsome.", realized that he definitely was not in la-la land.

"Lou?" he asked, still half-groggy.

"In the flesh." she confirmed as she lay another sultry kiss on him.

"What're you doing?" he asked as she climbed up top with him. 

"No questions." she cut him off, straddling on him.  "Just lay back and let me take care of you okay?" she said devilishly.

"What?"

"I said, no more questions Jimmy." she commanded, pressing her finger against his lips.  Louise was in such a state of sexual arousal, such raw intensity that she herself didn't even comprehend.  She loved Kid but Jimmy was also too damn hot.  She had never contemplated a sexual escapade with the gunfighter but after last night she wanted to know what Jimmy had to offer.  She took off her top and showing off her mounds asked, "Do you like these?"  Jimmy didn't respond.  He could see she was hot as hell.  He had never seen her like this.  Not even last night with Kid.  He was too taken aback to utter any sort of words.  She licked her lips with her tongue seducing him even more and asked him, "Want to suck them?"  Jimmy swallowed hard.  He still couldn't believe Lou was doing this.  She leaned her chest to his face, her nipples to his lips.  She began to graze them across his lips.  Jimmy felt the hardness of her large nipples against his tender lips.  He tried using all his strength to resist.  "Don't be like that Jimmy.  I want you to taste them." she urged as she continued moving them across his soft lips.  He took them eagerly, giving in to the temptation.  Lou sighed with excitement as he sucked her hard, and she loved his assault.  "I knew you'd like that." she whispered, looking at his wet tongue twirling her nipples around.  He held her breasts as he sucked on her perkiness, pulling on them.  Her nipples turned him on.  He never imagined them to be so large.  He had a good lock on them as she pulled back, breaking the hold he had on her nipple as she sat on his bulged cock.

Lou began moving her hips back and forth, rubbing her pulsating clitoris against his hardened cock.  "I love the feel of that." she told him, grabbing his hips as she massaged herself.  Jimmy could feel the heat between her legs, the moisture of her pussy that began to soak through his own clothes.  He was now beginning to relax as he merely laid back and allowed her to control the situation.  He was hot, she was damn hot and he wanted her now.

She began easing herself off his penis, sitting down on his thighs and with both hands took a hold of his longjohn bottoms by the waist line and started pulling them down.  He eased up so she could take them off, anticipating how she was going to satisfy the want she'd so effortlessly conjured in him.  She sighed once she exposed his large pulsating cock.  "I can't wait to suck that." she said salaciouly. 

Taking a hold of his penis, she journeyed from the tip of his swollen head, down to his waiting balls.  He was stiff and very inviting.  Lou's own wetness, her own excitement urged her to carry on.  Soon he felt her warm mouth surround him making him sigh unwittingly.  He loved getting blown but it was ten times better with Lou doing the blowing.  He couldn't help feel his temperature rise as he closed his eyes feeling her hot mouth sucking on his cock.  He eased up on his elbows so he could see her at work and she gave him the grand view:  her tongue sliding up and down his shaft, licking his slick head, how she held his penis taut so she could get at his balls.  She began to realize his balls were very sensitive down there, twitching often at her ball fondling.  A few more cock suckings and she thought she'd be able to break him in just fine.

Then she looked up at him, his penis pressed against the side of her mouth and asked just before devouring him again, "Do you like what you see now?"  She sucked his long shaft good and hard.  He began to wonder where the hell did she learn to give head like that?  "Do you like it Jimmy?  Do you like to see me sucking your big, juicy cock?" she asked forthright.  He couldn't believe she was being so forward, the words coming out of her mouth so brazenly!  Jimmy trembled.  He was in shock but at the same time it felt like heavenly bliss.  Lou was being so naughty he had to concede. 

"Damn Lou...that feels damn good!"  He loved it. 

"Good, because I love sucking your cock Jimmy.  I really love it.  It makes me so wet and so hot."  Jimmy's heartbeat was almost out of control.  He felt that if she said anything else he'd probably pass out and that's the last thing he sought to do.  Lou had really lost all sense of reality.  She was into her cock-sucking giving him all she had, wrapping her entire hand around his shaft, moving it along as she sucked hard.  A minute later she leaned up to him and as she jerked him, whispered in his ear, "I want to taste your cum Jimmy.  I want you to come right in my mouth." she demanded rather sweetly.  Her big eyes looked into his as she made her way back down.  Jimmy's mouth fell open at how slutty she could be.  He liked that.  He wanted to give her a mouth-full of his creamy, delicious cum. 

She continued on, strokes unbroken, and he became very sensitive as she carried on.  He felt his cum begin to bubble through his balls, up his shaft.  "I'm coming Lou." he whispered and she pulled off of him and jerked him close to his tender head, egging him to let loose all of his precious seed.  Lou opened her mouth wide, ready to receive her reward.  Jimmy let go of his prized cum, one long shot after the next.

Jimmy felt mental and physical satisfaction as he shot his cum straight into Lou's sweet mouth.  He grabbed the sheets on his bunk as the wild shivers of his climax traveled to every part of his body.  He had to close his eyes, feeling relief along with blissful ecstasy that she'd made him come so hard.  He saw he had bathed her with his releases, her small mouth, dripped with his essence.  Lou licked all the cum he gave her, every last bit, none went to waste.  After savoring all he so willingly shared, she whispered, "Delicious."  He fell back in disbelief.  She finally laid one last kiss on the head of his softened penis, pulled his bottoms up and returned to her bed.

She crawled in satisfied, the taste of Jimmy's cum still fresh in her mouth.  All tucked in and ready for a good night's sleep, a big smile appeared on her face when she opened her eyes and saw Jimmy kneeling by her bed.  "Your turn now." he smiled.  "I thought you'd never offer."  And with those last words Lou laid back, still wet and getting hornier by the second as Jimmy caressed her body, pulling off her pajama bottoms, his hands feeling her hot legs for he knew he would give her the best pussy-eating she'd ever had.  And he couldn't wait.

THE END

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