Name:
Echo
(Though he knows his surname, he doesn’t use it, just for the sake of having
less to write.)
Position:
Bardic Trainee
Age:
14 years old
Physical Description:
Echo is small for his age, and hates it. At 14 years old, he only stands 5’2”
and barely weighs 90 pounds. With a slightly wavy, thick thatch of blond hair
and nearly colorless eyes with just a hint of blue, he has a slight build, fair
coloring, and features that might be delicate if he didn’t have such a direct
way of looking at people. Echo’s eyes are large in his thin face, and he keeps
his hair unfashionably short; just to the middles of his ears, cowlicked on the
right. It sometimes tightens to loose curls when it gets wet or the humidity is
high, and has a tendency to fall in his face, with his right eye peering through
the cowlick.
His rough life is documented all over his body; and if a guess were to be made,
it might be surmised that Echo only has about three square inches of actual skin
left on him that isn’t marred by scar tissue of some type. Everything from old
burns, to long angry scars left by hooked whips, to places stitches once held
together his flesh cross his small frame. There are several places where the
scarring was so deep that internal tissue damage occurred, and in particular,
Echo is missing parts of his calf, thigh, back, and shoulder muscles.
Echo’s normal expression is a frank one, and his gaze isn’t afraid to look
anyone in the eye. The only place not covered by a piece of clothing, his face
is as scarred as the rest of him. The more noticeable ones include the long whip
weal across his face, starting at just under his left ear and stretching across
the bridge of his small nose to end just above his right eyebrow, the bit of
dark pink scarring over the upper left fourth of his face that includes his left
eyelid, and the long parallel rips over his right cheek, almost like jagged
whiskers, some of which nearly come to his nose and cross over the whip weal.
The areas around his eyes are usually dark, making the pale color and blond
eyebrows stand out more than they would have otherwise. They hold a wisdom that
knows the reality of life, and any attempts to lie to those eyes fail miserably.
Echo sort of looks like he’s got his jaws clamped shut behind his lips, giving
his chin a stubbornness. With a soft smile that almost makes him beautiful, it
is little seen in its fullest version.
Echo never speaks unless he’s called to sing for class requirements, and has an
amazing, soaring tenor that has already adjusted to the adolescent voice change.
With at least a four octave range, Echo’s skill is superb and surprising, once
one learns that no one has ever heard him practice. He just opens his mouth and
lets it out, and then is silent again, as if nothing out of the ordinary ever
happened.
Personality/Attitude:
Echo's childhood at the tavern left him with nothing, stripping away and
stealing everything from his self-respect to his mother's life. The only thing
he had for himself was his voice. So he never let anyone hear it, not even his
mother. It was his, and his alone. Echo remained electively mute until he was
twelve years old, and was traveling
with Davin. As a show of trust and gratitude, he chose to sing for him. It was
strangely freeing and made him feel frighteningly vulnerable, but it was a
compromise he was comfortable with. Since then, the only times a person will
hear his voice is when he sings.
Since life with Davin, Echo feels confident enough to be at ease with himself,
but still has a hard time relating to others. He’s an extremely private person,
and doesn’t wish to bother others with any of his troubles, nor does he believe
anyone cares. He’s self-conscious about his scars, but is desensitized enough to
handle taunting and other sundry cruelties. His behavior is based on mutual
respect, only putting out as much as he gets. Echo has a matter-of-fact air
about him, and is quite realistic about things, and displays a remarkable amount
of self-possession. But there remains a lost quality to him, like he’s looking
for something he’s been missing for quite some time, or perhaps for someone to
find *him*.
Echo has a quiet sense of humor that doesn’t get much of a workout, but has been
known to quietly chuckle over some little humorous thing. He’s very independent,
and doesn’t take orders well. His normal mood is an odd ruminating evenness,
basically meaning not upset. Emotional extremes are nearly unheard of, and he
will plow through his tasks with all he has, no matter how difficult, painful,
or upsetting it may be. He has a phobia of Healers, and avoids the House of
Healing and anyone in a green robe at all costs. He has a marked lack of empathy
for others, and anyone looking for a shoulder to cry on won’t find it with him.
He doesn’t feel sorry for himself, and so doesn’t feel the need to feel sorry
for others. Zero tolerance for whining and complaining, also for tears. He’s
often lost in thought, and it can also be hard to get his attention unless in
class. Echo has a terrifyingly sharp auditory and eidetic memory. If one had the
inclination and the parchment, he could write out, down to the throat clearings,
entire hours-long lectures weeks after hearing them, along with accurate
drawings of the lecturer, the surroundings, and at least 20 of the audience.
Brief History:
Lady Elsara Kentalianthal of Rethwellan was unceremoniously raped and
consequently disowned by her noble family, her father the main assistant to the
Royal Archivist, and the Archivist being the one who had actually done the
raping. But she refused to let out that secret, knowing the pain and scandal it
would bring her father and their family, and allowed herself to be cast out.
With no useable skills, only the clothes on her back, and pregnant to boot, the
seventeen-year-old found refuge working in the only place that would have her.
She gave birth in the back of a filthy tavern so decrepit that it didn’t even
merit a name, in the worst part of Haven that could still conceivably host one,
two months premature. The labor was blessedly short but brutally painful, and
when the busty tavern owner’s wife, Dena, who oversaw the birth, had the baby in
her arms, he simply coughed a few times and was fine. Even when Dena slapped the
infant on the rump, he still didn’t cry. Sara, who had by then dropped the
“Lady”, her last name, and the “El”, had only time to feed him before she had to
finish the nightly chores. She had to admit though, that he had been lucky to
have been born at all in the squalid conditions of the tavern, with her so thin
on the poor scraps that were her meals. The baby was nearly devoid of
significant body weight and had a paleness to him that seemed unhealthy, but he
was hers, and won her instantly. Sara recalled a poem she’d read in her father’s
library about a warrior so battle weary that he was but a shadow of himself, and
echo of a man. So she named her skinny little son with the huge eyes Echo.
The rough tavern took its toll on both of them as Echo grew up. Neither of them
was safe from the wandering hands of the customers, and both experienced
forcings many times over, Echo even before he was three years old. The hardened
criminals and assorted riffraff that patroned the tavern were brazenly abusive
to the boy, whose mother could do nothing. If Sara was turned out, she and her
son would most likely be dead before the day was over, and she hadn’t the heart
to kill them both.
After the deep blue of the newborn had left his eyes, the color left was so
washed out that Sara could hardly tell what it was. He was a stubborn baby, and
a passive toddler, never gaining the weight even his poor height merited. He
also never spoke. He didn’t make any noise, in fact. Sara wondered if something
was wrong, and finally gave up, believing the later conditions of her pregnancy
had taken his voice. Echo never showed any signs of inflammation around his
throat or neck, and never made any attempts to form words or imitate sounds. But
he understood well enough, and it was obvious he could hear. Echo lived out his
blurry existence content enough to live through the day and be comforted by his
mother at night, as she washed out their wounds and sang little songs quietly
until he fell asleep in her arms. He didn’t know any other way of life, and
somehow understood that he was expected to take the whippings and rape without
question. And he also knew that he loved his mother deeply, and she did him.
By the time Echo was seven, he was working in the tavern himself, running empty
tankards and dishes, pumping water, wiping tables, helping in the kitchen. All
between the usual ministrations of the customers. Temple schooling wasn’t even
considered, and he’d never been, despite the law. Besides, the nearest temple
was almost a mile from the tavern, and the chores to keep the run-down place
going were endless. He’d had three broken bones by then, all inexpertly mended,
and had around 80 percent of the scar tissue he’d carry for the rest of his life
already. His hair was kept short to give the patrons less to grab, and his
clothes were worn thin, filled with holes, and couldn’t even keep him warm in
the summer. Sara was still pretty at 24, but had most of the life drained from
her body by rough liaisons of all kinds. She’d also gotten smarter; if a man
began to come on, she quickly named her price before she could be taken,
sometimes right there on the table or floor.
Sometimes at night, after clean up, Sara would take a burnt stick from the
fireplace and write their names on the stone hearth. It wasn’t long before he
could copy them exactly, and it pleased his mother to no end that her son could
write out his long Rethwellan surname. Hers, not his father’s. She taught him no
more words past those, but gave him all the numbers she knew, and figuring
lessons too, tickled that her son displayed such an intelligent mind as he
picked up her teachings with ease.
It was the summer of Echo’s ninth year when his mother died. Dena threw the door
of their little closet open one morning when neither of them reported to the
kitchen to discover the skinny boy weeping noiselessly over Sara’s corpse.
Disgusted, she kicked him away and dragged the body out to the street to be
picked up by death carts. Echo followed awkwardly after his mother, and when
Dena tried to haul him back inside for chores, he bit her hand. That hand gave
him a resounding slap, and Dena cursed at him, effectively firing the boy and
slammed the door of the tavern behind herself. The shock of his mother’s death
and loss of home didn’t register until Sara’s body was loaded onto the cart, and
Echo blinked a few times before realizing he was completely alone. Sara had
never bonded him to anyone, with no relatives in Valdemar, or in Rethwellan who
would recognize him if she was his mother.
Naked fear clutched him that first day, and he spent the subsequent night
huddled in an alley a few blocks away, tears streaming down his dirty face.
Waking the next morning with a clearer head, but still unsure and afraid, Echo
made his way to the Southern Gate of Haven. By chance, or perhaps something
more, he bumped into a minstrel, just re-leaving Haven for his travels. The
minstrel’s name was Davin, and something about the filthy, stubborn boy with the
bad haircut and the big colorless eyes caught his heart. Not old enough to be a
father, in his own eyes at least, 17-year-old Davin gave the child a wordless
option to follow him. Echo did, and their relationship began.
Davin kept a slower pace than his usual as he set down the South Trade Route,
and Echo followed him. The older boy had seen the younger’s strange uneven walk,
and silently allowed for the handicap. His lute encased and slung across his
back, Davin sang to himself as he walked, to an enraptured audience of one. In
the twelve days it took to reach Horn, the two reached a mutual understanding
and found one another to quite satisfactory. It was a strange relationship, at
least in the beginning. Davin discovered his traveling companion’s silence the
first night, and limited his first queries to the yes-or-no variety. A cold bath
in the Terilee removed years of accumulated dirt and grime, and Davin had to
swallow hard as he re-dressed the boy in one of his own old tunics. He saved his
tears for after Echo had gone to sleep. Davin learned the boy’s name after he’d
written it the dirt at their first campsite with his finger. He also learned
that he was an orphan, unbonded, and when he asked Echo what else he could
write, he got a happy surprise.
Being of the right-brained, numbers had never been Davin’s strong point. Most of
the skills learned at temple school had long since dissolved, and when Echo
proved that he could go even further in math than most of the priests taught,
Davin knew the kid was worth keeping around. So poor with numbers was he, that
most merchants and tavern keepers didn’t mind stiffing him from time to time.
Well, now he had a better defense. Davin taught Echo monetary units, and by the
end of that night, he knew he’d never be taken again. A deal was struck. Echo
agreed to be Davin’s accountant, and Davin kept him clothed and fed, with a
small percentage of the takings he might get beyond that as a minstrel.
They spent that summer in Horn, with Davin serenading newlyweds and entertaining
travelers. At night, he taught Echo the lute, and in a month, the boy was good
enough to accompany Davin while he sang. They left Horn that fall, Echo’s new
clothes worn in nicely, with Davin ecstatic that he’d come out on top in his
dealings with the merchants for the first time in his life. Echo also had a
slate to write on, about a foot by ten inches, framed in dark wood. Three long
lengths of twine held slate pencils on their ends, cheaper and easier to erase
than chalk. Another long loop of twine formed a handle to hang the slate over
his shoulder, and Echo agreeably took his “voice” with him wherever they went.
With provisions and change to spare, the two traveled on, to the West this time.
Over the course of the next five years, Davin and Echo saw everything from the
Forest of Sorrows, to Lake Evendim, to Three Rivers, to Trevale. They played for
anyone, anywhere. It was a happy life, and the two boys became like brothers to
each other in their closeness, with one’s talents making up for the other’s
lacks. Davin, at home, had no siblings, and parents who frowned on music. He
found a kindred spirit in Echo, who drank it thirstily and reveled in making it.
Davin taught Echo to read and write, and Echo was soon teaching Davin tricks on
the lute. They each had life lessons to give the other, Echo’s about pain,
Davin’s about friendship. Sometime during the start of their second year
together, after Davin had defended them against a few town bullies, they made
their way back to a camping spot to lick their wounds. That Davin had injuries
bothered him, and he tossed restlessly, unable to sleep.
Out of the silence of the night came an incredible sound. Davin had to turn
around to see it. Echo was singing to him, to comfort him as he’d done so often
at night for the other boy. His voice was soft and sweet, perfectly pitched and
lulling. Davin felt his pain melt away, and drifted to sleep in amazement,
smiling. His lonely heart swelled with Echo’s implied trust and warmth.
After that night, Echo sang to Davin whenever the older boy began to feel down,
or had hurts that plagued his body. Somehow, he never felt his own aches lessen,
but seeing Davin feel better more than made up for it. Echo wouldn’t sing for
anyone but Davin, even thought the older boy begged him to share his wonderful
voice with the world. He also still didn’t talk, which Davin found very odd. He
had to wonder at what could keep someone silent for over a decade, and believed
Echo when he shook his head “no” at the question of if he’d ever vocalized
before. But rather than question further, Davin left it at that. The same year
Echo started to sing, he made the purchase of his life, giving up every coin
he’d earned for a long silver flute, with a waterproofed hard case. It was
beautiful, soundly made, and a bargain to boot. He protected it with a
guard-dog-like force of will, and kept it clean, even the case was spotless.
Echo lost no time in acquainting himself with his new instrument, and in less
than a week sweet, intricate music was flowing from it whenever he lifted it to
his lips.
About a week ago, the two happened across an actual Bard. It was pure chance, at
an inn they’d stopped at. Davin was more dazzled by the array of scarlet than
Echo, because he knew better what it meant. Davin hadn’t gone to the Collegium
himself, but had learned from the local musicians. He felt duly humbled and knew
he’d have to get Echo to sing for him. The boy's voice, at 14, had already adjusted to the adolescent voice change, but still had the amazing flexibilty of his previous soprano. Echo, who wasn’t impressed by things like clothing, was still
entranced when the man began to speak. Even ordering a glass of water, the
Bard’s voice was a rich baritone that made a song out of everything he said.
Echo was transfixed. The two of them stayed in the common room of the inn that
evening, listening to the Bard perform to a full house, his fingers flying over
his gittern as he sang.
Davin knew he had to get Echo to sing for the Bard. After the man left, the two
bickered a bit, Davin pleading, Echo refusing. Finally, Davin gave up, knowing
that Echo would stand by his refusal and that there would be other Bards. They
left for their little camp outside town and went to bed.
Early that morning, the two were attacked by a few of the local drunks and
rowdies, and Davin was stabbed through the throat during the scuffle. Their
purse of money was stolen, as were their traveling packs, and the only reason
Echo’s flute wasn’t in amongst the loot was that he always slept with his arm
curled tightly around it. After the raid, Echo built a cairn over his friend’s
body, not noticing the streams of tears running down his face as he laid Davin
to rest. Feeling numb and alone, his only thought was to do the last thing Davin
had asked of him; to sing for the Bard. Finding his slate as he walked away,
fallen out of the packs as the raiders had run off, plus a couple pairs of
socks, and the remains of Davin’s wrecked lute, he picked up the slate, left the
rest, and walked away to find the Bard, his flute held in a vise-like grip by
his side.
With only the clothes on his back, his instrument and slate, Echo managed to
find the Bard on the road in three days, and sang for him.
Bardic Immunity did the rest.
Goals:
To be happy.
Gifts:
All three Bardic Gifts. Talent, or skill with an instrument, is the strongest.
The Bardic Gift is second, but manifests itself only in the wild talent to sing
or play away pain. His Creativity is tiny, just enough to pen music. Echo will
never write lyrics with any success.
Companion/Bondbird:
N/A
Your name:
Kerri
Your Email/YahooID:
daysleeper37@yahoo.com/none
Author's Comments:
Just for the record, I do have all the names and ages for Elsara's family and
the Archivist's family written up and stored.