5)      general to specific

A new paragraph is needed whenever you make a shift or change in the essay. Consider the possibilities:

1)      a change in ideas or emphasis

2)      a change in time

3)      a change in action

4)      a change in speakers (dialogue)

5)      a change in place or setting

6)      the need to break up an exceptionally long paragraph

Transitions: Begin new paragraphs with a sentence that works as a transition or communicates a new or additional step in the

development of your thesis.

Paragraphs must be linked to provide strength and unity. Each paragraph should be a natural extension of the previous one. Making

logical connections in your writing relies on effective use of transitional words and phrases. Consider the possibilities for transitions:

1)      repeat a key word or phrase from the previous paragraph

2)      use pronouns to refer to words or ideas in the preceding paragraph

3)      use connectives such as:  also, meanwhile, since, eventually, however,

in spite of, consequently, nevertheless, etc.

4)      refer directly to a word or idea in the preceding paragraph

Tone: An informal tone is best for a personal essay. Focus on your natural conversational voice by using:

1)      first person pronouns

2)      everyday vocabulary, colloquialisms, or dialect

3)      a direct address to the reader (ie. second person pronoun: you)

4)      vivid colourful words

5 - CLOSE! Now you close by summarizing what you have said. A powerful essay will make sure that all of your paragraphs are working

together as a team, with the closing restating, if different words, what you have said. You are concluding your essay. The closing

paragraph is also known as "the end" of your essay.

Conclusion:

Your conclusion should bring together all of the crucial points of the essay. It should leave your reader with a clear understanding of the

subject: you! The goal is to ensure that your theme is clearly understood. Consider the possibilities for concluding:

1)      an intriguing question

2)      a compelling exclamation

3)      a definitive quotation

4)      a final significant idea

First Term Language Program