The two of them left by the big main doors at the front of the building, and then made their way down the dark street, which was lit by only dim streetlights.
“So how long are you staying for?”
“I’m not sure, maybe a couple of weeks or so, it depends, and I mean I have a lot of college work to concentrate on. But with being your dancer and everything I’ll have to work my school work round that now!”
“What are you studying?”
“Fashion design, I’ve always been interested in designing, I love it at the college it’s great, I couldn’t believe it when I got in!”
“So you’re a very successful person then, I mean you’re a dancer, a model and in a top art and design college and are aiming for higher things!”
“Yeah I guess, but look at you! You’re in a boy band, that’s pretty big, I’d say.”
“Yeah it’s great, well we’re here, no one is back yet though.”
“That’s ok. Do you want to come in and have a cup of tea?” Marie asked, whilst opening the door to her sister’s house.
“Yeah sure, thank you,” both of them made their way into the dark house, Marie switched on the light then made her way into the kitchen. Once the tea was made they both sat comfortably on the sofa, there was no sign of the others yet, ‘Maybe they’ve gone next door?’ Marie thought to herself, ‘ah well I’m not complaining, more time alone with Mark, YEY!!!’
“I wonder where the others are,” Mark said as if reading Marie’s mind.
"I dunno, doesn’t matter though does it?” She smiled at Mark, hoping he would take the hint!  
“No, not at all!” At that moment he leaned in and started to kiss Marie, it was as if they were in heaven, but then the heavens were broken and so was the kiss, and also sounded like a few ornaments upstairs had also been broken!
“What was that?” Marie asked surprised and scared at the same time. Then there was another bang this time on the floor.
“I don’t know, I’ll go and see you wait here, it could be dangerous.” Mark made his way up the stairs, Marie waited for a few minutes for Mark to return, then suddenly there was a loud crash, even bigger and louder than before, at that, she jumped up and ran upstairs shouting “MARK, MARK ARE YOU OK?” But there was no answer, “MARK,” she called again this time louder than before, once again there was no answer, Marie was quickly across the landing checking all the room as she went, up to now there was nothing, the only room that hadn’t been checked was, BECKI’S ROOM, that’s when she heard the scurrying coming from it, “Mark is that you in there,” she said at a normal tone, once again no answer. She slowly pushed open the door, she was shocked at the sight she saw, everything in the room was turned upside down, clothes were strewn across the place, and the mirror on the desk was smashed into millions of pieces. Then she heard it, a very quiet groaning sound from the other side of the bed, she walked over slowly, feeling weary, there lying on the floor was a nearly lifeless Mark, she went down to comfort him then suddenly a great force grabbed her from behind and grabbed her round the waist.
“LET ME GO. LET ME go….” Her voice became muffled as the guy put his hand over her mouth, then, said in a sharp, evil sounding voice, which was in no more than a whisper.
“Where is she?”
“Where’s who???” Marie was confused and very, very scared, what was going on she was thinking as the man tightened his grip around her tiny waist, making it hard for her to breath.
“BECKI YOU IDIOT, BECKI!!!” The man shouted, it was at that moment she realised the evil guy was Duncan.
“LET HER GO IT’S ME YOU WANT!” Becki shouted from the doorway of her room. Straight away Duncan let Marie go, she dropped to the floor next to Mark, hurting her side, but she ignored it and climbed to her feet, ready to pounce on Duncan if he even tried to hurt Becki. Suddenly Duncan charged at Becki, Marie went to jump on his back to pull him away but missed and dropped down onto the bed. Duncan then grabbed Becki and dragged her kicking and screaming down the stairs, Marie chased after them but it was too late they’d gone out the house, she fell to the floor and began to cry, a hand came round her waist which made her jump, then she noticed it was Mark, she turned to him and hugged him as tightly as she could which he then comforted her.

“LET ME GO DUNCAN, IT’S OVER, LEAVE ME ALONE, YOU BROKE UP WITH ME REMEMBER!” Duncan just ignored her and carried on dragging her down the street, suddenly Shane and Amy walked round the corner hand in hand, Shane saw Duncan and Duncan saw Shane, he still kept tight hold onto Becki but stood his ground, to guard himself.
“Duncan let Becki go,” Shane said in a calm voice
“NEVER!” He shouted back, spitting out the word in the same evil voice he’d used on Marie.
“LET HER GO!” He said again this time in a much louder tone, just then Duncan dropped Becki to the floor who, ran to Shane and Amy for protection, suddenly Duncan charged at Shane, Shane dodged his violent attack and put up his fists ready to protect himself and the girls who stood scared behind him. Duncan took a few more charges at Shane who dodged them all getting in some hits on Duncan himself in self-defence. Duncan had fallen to the ground at Shane’s last hit; he climbed up slowly and wiped the blood from his nose and upper lip. Then pointed at Becki and said harshly. “I’ll be back for you baby, you know how much I love you, I will be back don’t you worry, these losers won’t be with you all the time, I’LL GET YOUUUUUUU,” he screamed before running off down the street, with a slight hobble were Nicky had kicked him hard in the leg. At that moment Marie and Mark walked out the house, Marie crying just not as hard as before, but when she saw Becki the crying came back, but this time she was happy, happy to see her sister was OK. Mark was OK, he had a bruise on his head were Duncan had hit him with whatever weapon he had, but other than that he was fine.
“Oh my god, I’m so glad you are OK, I tried to follow him, I really did, but I couldn’t catch up,” Marie said through her cries and sobs.
“It’s OK Marie you did what you could I’m OK, for now, he will be back. We better make sure we’re always with someone from now on Marie!”
“I’ll make sure we are sis, don’t worry, I’ll protect us!” Marie said she was shacking and even though on the outside she was trying to sound as if she was fine, but really everything was brewing up inside of her, all the fear, all the anger and hate, HATE was the strongest feeling she had of them all, which brought out a new feeling, a feeling of revenge!