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The "You're Too Loose" Test |
The following lame little story has some mistakes in it.
Your task is to correct them.
Send your corrected version to
jon.o.nicholas@gmail.com with
"YTL" in the subject line.
If your version is acceptable, you're in
the club!
If your version falls
short of the goal, you're among the legion of writers who
are members of the
less prestigious "You're To Lose" club.
Don't fret though, you can always
retake the test!
This club sincerely hopes you will try again until you get
it right.
| Louise was a lose lady. She wood let men go
all the way after a date or two. Some how, she always managed to loose her bra
and panty's after a wild night of lewd behavior. This was'nt you're basic
run-of-the-meal, wild behavior neither; no, were talking about serious, kinky
conduct! Your probably wandering how I, a man of sexual restraint, met such a women. Well, it was at a party held at the Smith's house. There party's we're the stuff of legends. I had ben invited bye Geoff, a guy I new from Tulane University. When I arived their, a sexy brunnette was dancing on a table to a band called Toto. The most intresting part was that she was'nt wearing any close! Geoff said, "Your going to half too excuse her. Thats just Louise. She's had to much to drink all ready which makes her loser then normal." I told him I did'nt mind at all, really. It was'nt everyday a man got to see a gorgious women dancing in the buff. Two hours later, I found my self in a bed room, to drunk to remember my name, with Louise laying right beside me in bed. To make along story short, I never expected to loose my virginety while past out! The ideal of not knowing what it had felt like was all most to much four me. Fortunitely though, and I have a feeling your not going to believe this part, she's now married to me! My lovely wife still has a tendency to loose her bra and panty's after a night of lewd behavior, but I have fun helping her acomplish it! I half too say, Louise get's to no the reel me, now that, thank's to her, my libido has bean loosed to! |