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I search
among the stars
one with the unique glow
remembering the lives you touched
on earth.
Comments:
Very moving Victor, and quite lovely. "I search.... among
the stars... on earth".... your longing so beautifully depicted,
not just universally, but from emotional heights, to lows...
and such a nice compliment, too. Celebrate the memories,
even when they hurt. You have such wonderful ones,
I can tell. Nice cinquain, too.
- Dina.
This is a lovely tribute. Our pain and sorrow wrapped in words
and shared with others help not just us, but others we share.
You have my heartfelt condolences. Since my father died I learned
that the sense of loss doesn't go away, I just think about it less.
- viki
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