The Ultimate Tamora Pierce Movie Outakes
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[Jon and Alanna are in the Bazhir tent. Jon takes Alanna’s hand and looks into her eyes.]

Jon: Alanna, I love you.

[Alanna struggles to keep a straight face but starts screwing up her eyes and wrinkling her nose]

Jon: What?

Alanna: Phew! What did YOU have for breakfast that gave you THAT breath?

Director: Cut! Get some Tic-Tacs!



[Alanna, Thom, and Maude are sitting before a roaring fire. Maude takes each twin’s hand and plunges it into the flames. They quickly pull them away.]

Alanna: It’s not SUPPOSED to hurt, dammit!

Thom: WHERE’S THE SPECIAL EFFECTS GUY?!?!

Director: Cut! Get the nurse on here!



[Liam is staving off several attackers trying to get at Jon. He executes a flying jump but sprawls flat on his rear end on landing.]



[Alanna and Ralon are alone in the stable.]

Ralon: You little—!

[Comes at Alanna; she punches him in the nose. Ralon falls and starts bawling.]

Ralon: Owie! She gave me a boo-boo!

Alanna: Suck it up, buddy!

Director: I can’t work like this.



[Alanna is in Chitral Pass, fighting the mountain ape. She catches his ear with her sword and flips the mask off.]

Actor: Yo! Put me face back on!

[Alanna collapses and laughs helplessly.]

Actor: It’s not funny! I’m gettin' paid here!

Director: Cut! Call costumes!



[Jon and Alanna are in the desert after the ordeal with the Ysandir.]

Jon: Alanna of Trebond—I will be honored if you will serve as my squire.

Alanna: [wrinkles nose] My life…and sword…are yours…[starts laughing] Someone had too much of that garlic sauce at the Bazhir feast, hmm?

Jon: Come ON! It’s not THAT bad!



[Alanna is sitting at her campsite after burying the Sorceress of Alois. She holds the two swords, one broken, in front of her and has a cut on her right arm.]

Alanna: One, crystal and whole, unbreakable, strong. One—crystal in the hilt, straight steel, sheared in two. Two—Separate, yet together. Being. Becoming. One! One blade, unbreakable and whole!

[She faints. Coram trots over to her.]

Coram: Of all the crazy, stupid stunts…[Pauses] Hey, there’s still two swords here.

Alanna: [opens an eye] It should have worked…[Springs up] ALL RIGHT, C’MERE, YOU CHEAP EXCUSE FOR A SPECIAL EFFECTS GUY!!!!

Director: Cut!



[Jon and Alanna are facing all of the Ysandir in the Black City.]

Ylon: I am Yuh-yuh-Ylon, chief of the Yah-son…Yuh-sand…Why-soon…

[All the Ysandir, Alanna, and Jon start laughing.]

Ylon: Well YOU try to say it!!!



[Alanna is sitting at a fire with the Goddess and a kitten Faithful.]

Goddess: A goddess can ask no more. Guard her well, Small One.

[The kitten, instead of mewing, burps loudly.]

Goddess: Hey—that was UNCALLED for, bub! You’re talking to a GODDESS here!



[Alanna and Jon are in the tent alone, after Alanna recovers from helping Thor. Jon leans over and kisses her.]

Alanna: [breaks away, sputtering] Hoo boy! That’s some funky breath you’ve got there!

Jon: [aggravated] RRGH!!!

Director: Cut! Take five!



[Alanna is in the woods, looking at the body of Demon Grey. She clutches her ember-stone and the body and Roger are suddenly hot pink.]

Alanna: Isn’t it supposed to be orange…?

Jon: [cracks up] Nice color, Rodge!

Roger: [angrily] LEMME AT THE SPECIAL EFFECTS GUY!!!!


[Daine is walking behind Numair in the royal forest. She spots a tree sprite.]

Sprite: They’re after me Lucky Charms!

Numair: [spins around] Look! A tree sprite…I’ve never seen them wear hats before…

Sprite: [clutches cereal box to his chest] They’re after me Lucky Charms! [disappears]

Director: Cut! What was with that comment about the hats?

Numair: Sorry.



[View of the camera is jogged and full of static. The picture is of several packing crates; the cameraperson is moving around them. Hushed giggles are heard in the background. A view of two Stormwings comes on. They are sitting around a crate having tea.]

Stormwing 1: One lump or two, Rikash?

Rikash: One, if you please, Barzha.

Barzha: [gives Rikash a lump of sugar] And you absolutely have to try these delicious scones. They’re simply divine.

Rikash: [accepts tea in claws and takes a scone] Thank you, Barzha. [sips tea daintily] Have you heard about Tillie’s croquet party on the twenty- first? It’s going to be smashing fun!

Barzha: Oh, I can’t make it—I’m dreadfully sorry. Martha and I are going into the city that day to do some hat shopping.

Cameraperson: Haha…SHH!!

Barzha: What was that? [stares at camera] Oh CRAP!!!!!!

Rikash: [flies at camera] Get AWAY from here, you *CENSORED* *CENSOREDS*!

[Camera blacks out]



[Daine is kneeling among the wolves at Dunlath.]

Daine: Here goes…[she shape-shifts into a fluffy white lamb]

Daine: [baaing] Whaaat…[looks at herself] Wheeere’s thaat daaamn speecial effects guuy? Baaa!

Brokefang: Isn’t she supposed to be a wolf?

Frostfur: Who cares? Dinnertime!

[The wolves leap at Daine, who canters around baaing.]

Daine: Heeelp meee! Baaa!

Director: Cut! Get the animal handlers on here!



[Daine and Numair run through the woods at Dunlath. They burst into a clearing.]

Daine: Cloud! Iakoju! Kitten! Stormwings are abroad!

[An ogre, a dragon, and a donkey stand in the clearing.]

Numair: Kitten…you got bigger…

Ogre: Hold the phone. Who’s Kitten and what are we doing here?

Daine: [walks over to the donkey] Cloud…?

Donkey: Man, who’s this Cloud you keep talking about?

Ogre: And who’s Ee-ay-joe-coo?

Director: Cut! Who are you?

Ogre: I think we’re on the wrong set.

Donkey: Hey, we’re looking for the Shrek set. Know where that is?

Director: Oh, you want the Dreamworks building. Over there to the left.

Ogre: Thanks. [They exit]

Numair: [puzzled] What’s a Shrek? Some kind of rural dialect phrase?

[Director smacks his head against the movie-flapper thingie.]



[Jon has Inkblot the darking on his shoulder.]

Jon: [turns to the darking] Very good, Inkblot.

Inkblot: Breath…powerful! [faints]

[Everyone laughs]

Jon: I CAN’T TAKE THIS ANY MORE!!!!!



[Daine is on the barge at the feast in Carthak. The mages yell out a word and the boat begins to rise. Kitten shrieks.]

Daine: No, Kit, stop. Be quiet, understand?

[Boat in midair pauses then jogs up and down. People scream.]

Chioke: Hey! We’re STUCK!

Mage 1: We can’t get down!

Alanna: NO!! THE SPECIAL EFFECTS GUY IS AT IT AGAIN!!!

Director: Cut! Get a ladder!



[Daine, Numair, George, and others are watching the kraken destroy ships.]

Numair: Friend of yours?

Daine: Not exactly. I guess he moves faster than I thought.

[Kraken destroys more ships.]

Daine: Oh, dear—I think he’s going to be nasty.

George: How big did you say it was?

Daine: I didn’t—hey, what’s he doing?

[Kraken tentacle reaches in the direction of the camera.]

Daine: No! Stop! Eat THEM, not him! THEM!!!!!

[Tentacle picks up camera guy]

Camera guy: AAAAH!!!

[View swirls wildly in the air]

Daine: NO!! BAD KRAKEN!! PUT THE CAMERA DUDE DOWN!!

[Camera falls into the grass; a groan is heard from the camera guy.]

Director: Cut! Daine, if you can’t control that kraken, he’s gonna go!

Daine: Sorry, sir…he’s just a baby…

Director: [aggravated] Take eleven.



[Daine is sitting with King Jon, Numair, and Onua.]

Jon: [takes Daine’s hands] Will you let Numair help you study your…[stops at the expression on Daine’s face] What is it THIS time?

Daine: [takes shallow breaths] That’s the most major case of halitosis I’ve ever smelled!

[Everyone except Jon laughs. Jon grits his teeth and runs offstage.]



[Lindhall is in front of his door.]

Lindhall: Let me in, dolt.

Door: [in tinny voice] Not on your life, buster!

[Lindhall is confused, and Kaddar struggles to keep a straight face]

Lindhall: Hey…[whirls about and dives at Kaddar, picking him up by the collar] You! What did you do!

Kaddar: Ventriloquism…it’s an ancient art!

Director: Cut!


[Kel is fighting Joren at morning sword practice. Joren forces her out of line.]

Joren: You’re going down.

Kel: Not on your life, scum.

[They get into a body-to-body lock. Something falls from the sky and lands on Joren’s head.]

Joren: Ah crap! [breaks off fighting and touches head] Bird s***!

Kel: [laughing] That’s—what you get—for messing—with me!

Director: [amid laughs offstage] Cut! Let’s get a towel over here!



[Kel is doing a glaive practice dance in her room. She does a wide swing and accidentally chops the legs off her desk chair.]

Kel: Whoops. Sorry.

Director: Cut! Call Props!



[Kel and Raoul are sitting together at a table. Raoul is finishing up his speech about the the types of warriors.]

Raoul: [finishing up] We’re too desperate for good commanders to let one slip away, even a female one. Now, finish that and you can stop for tonight. [He sits back and pants a bit.]

[Kel sits in silence for a bit, Raoul looking at her expectantly.]

Kel: Um…what’s my line again?

Raoul: I am gonna KILL you if I have to repeat that again!!!! [Chases Kel, who is laughing, offstage.]

Director: I think it’s time for a coffee break.



[Neal and Kel are standing in the dining hall.]

Kel: Oh, look, here comes Cleon.

[Silence.]

Kel: I SAID, oh, look, here comes CLEON!

Cleon: [voice is heard offstage] Sunny days, sweeping the clouds away, on my way, to where the air is sweeeet!

Neal: Oh, gods. He’s watching PBS again.

Cleon: Can you tell me how to get, how to get to Sesame Street!

Director: Cleon, get on here! You can watch TV later!

Cleon: [appears in frame from offstage] But this episode features the number NINE and the letter B!

Kel: LATER, CLEON!



[Kel is on the bank of the river, facing a spidren. The spidren grins and sticks out a leg which falls off and dangles by a wire.]

Director: Cut! John, what happened?

[Camera shoots up to a puppeteer above the set, waving a set of wires.]

John: Sorry. The Superglue didn’t dry yet.

Director: Can we get Jim Henson on here please?



[Neal and Kel are walking out of Sir Myles’ classroom.]

Myles: Keladry? Might I have a word?

Neal: He probably wants to know what the Yamani emperor has for breakfast.

Myles: Actually, I don’t. I know what dear Chuckie has for breakfast.

Kel: Chuckie…?

Neal: Hey, that’s not in the script.

Myles: He has toast with raspberry jam, hot chocolate with ten little marshmallows, a peach cut into seven diagonal sections, and three strips of bacon with one egg sunny-side up.

Director: Cut! Myles, what the hell was that?

[Everyone is looking at Myles oddly.]

Myles: [embarrassed] I just wanted to be funny, Mr. Director.

Neal: Don’t make jokes, Myles. You’re awful at it. Leave it to moi. [Clears throat] Hey, a funny thing happened on the turnpike the other day…

All: SHUT UP NEAL!!!!!!



[Kel, Neal, Vinson, Joren, and Garvey were fighting but trapped in Numair’s spell. They can’t move.]

Numair: Run along, please.

Neal: Spell…

Numair: Spell? Oh, yes, of course. How careless.

[Nothing happens]

Numair: Hey…

Kel: Special…Effects…dude…

Alanna: [comes running on, brandishing sword] NO! The EVIL SPECIAL EFFECTS GUY is at it again!!!! He RUINED MY MOVIE!!!! RUN while you STILL CAN!!!

Director: CUT! SOMEONE calm that crazy woman down!!



[Kel is at the top of Balor’s Needle with King Jon.]

Jon: I can arrange it so your body will take you down without your mind being any the wiser…[stops at look on Kel’s face] Of course, if you don’t want to…

Kel: No, sire…it’s just that the wind blows the smell of your breath over here…WOW that’s strong! [coughs]

Jon: LOOK, maybe it would make EVERYONE happier if I just jumped off this thing!

[He jumps of the edge of the Needle and there’s a dull thud.]

Alanna: [offstage] It’s a wooden set, Jon, it’s barely three feet tall.

Jon’s Voice: [slightly muffled] I knew that.



[Kel is standing in the Chamber, looking at the little man, his eleven machines, and the pile of dolls.]

Kel: [thinking, a voice in the background] They’re dead children…

[A twelfth monster appears and tosses a Barney doll onto the pile.]

Kel: [puzzled, speaking now] Wait…what’s that?

Cleon: [offstage] BARNEY!! SOMEONE took my Talkin’ n’ Laughin’ BARNEY!!

Barney Doll: [in fake recorded voice] And remember, I love you.

Director: CUT!! That’s the wrong prop!

[Little man looks exasperated; monsters take off their masks and laugh.]

Actor 1: Nice one, Bill!

Actor 2: Well, the dolls feel the same as the Barney one…

[Director crawls under his director chair and starts crying.]
~ TTV ~