in depth look at poem: This poem was written one day when I was in chat talking to Beck and then all of the sudden I was cut off. My connection went dead and I couldn't get reconnected (I know...I tried). This poem goes in to how I felt because of it.


        Locked out

        my acid tears burn a path
        down my face.
        I'm sad, I'm sad.
        I want to talk to you.

        my jagged pain rips a hole
        into my heart.
        I'm lonely, I'm lonely.
        I can't believe I've been cut off.

        my acid tears burn a path
        upon my cheeks.
        I'm sad, I'm sad.
        I want to be your friend.

        my jagged pain rips a hole
        through my mind.
        I'm lonely, I'm lonely.
        I can't believe this killed me.

        -Jon Johnston


        © Copyright 1997 Jonathan Johnston


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