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Writing Tips and Tricks

In addition to all of the help you can find on our Help Files, we have decided to publish articles written by writers for writers.


Please choose from the following list.

Writing For Children And Teenagers
Ten Do's And Don'ts For Beginning Writers
Hints For Writing Free Verse
Basic Poetry Devices


WRITING FOR CHILDREN AND TEENAGERS

The rules for writing for the children"s market are sublty different than writing for an adult market. Here are a few hints to help you:

   1.  POV (Point of View): The main character maintains pov throughout the story. Do not change POV to secondary or minor characters.

   2.  Limit the number of characters. The hero/heroine and one or two others is fine. Too many characters confuse kids. They need to know who they are rooting for. (Young children also need to know who is speaking, so each line of dialogue must be followed by the character"s name and action:
   eg: "I know," Jeffrey said with a smile.

   3.  Adults may play a role in the story -- ensure that the role is a minor one. (Kids live with their parents, they want stories that focus on other children, not ones that make an adult the hero; the adult, however, can be the "bad guy".)

   4.  Kids relate to conflict. Create a situation, the more impossible the better, then solve it, without adult intervention. Kids have to know that they can solve their own problems.

   5.  Utilize descriptive words that beguile the senses. The more kids can see, smell, and hear, the better they will appreciate the story.

   6.  Your main character must be one that most kids will identify with. For example: Jennifer was angry. "You will pay for that," she said. (Boooooring) "Y - y - y - you will p - p- pay for that!" Jennifer stuttered angrily.

   7.  Your story may contain a morale, but do not make the mistake of preaching. Kids know what you are trying to say. (You do not have to make your story another Aesop"s Fable for them to catch on. In other words, do not underestimate the intelligence of your readers!)

   In essence, I guess what I am trying to say is that when it comes to writing for children, keep it simple but highly descriptive. Your story does not have to have an "and they lived happily ever after" ending, but make sure that whatever resolution you come to is "real" The other major point is do not get too carried away with description. He said, she said, he said, she said, is more than acceptable. Most people do not read the "he said she said" parts of a story. We see who is speaking, and ignore the rest. It is more than acceptable to say he said a hundred times; as long as the young reader understands who is speaking, it doesn"t matter much how you write it.
   The only other point I feel must be emphasized is that you must use language that the readers of your story will understand. It is OK to use one or two words they will not comprehend, but do not get too carried away with language. Keep it simple. (This also helps keep the word count down believe it or not) eg:; A girl caught shoplifting nail polish:
   She stood there, her teeth clenched; her face beet red, as she denied the accusation. OR:
   "I did not take the nail polish," she said, grinding her teeth.

   As a rule of thumb, the more dialogue in a kids story, the better. Make your descriptive phrases as complete as possible, in as few words as possible. Kids don"t care if it is a "wonderous day, filled with the promise of spring". Tell them that spring has arrived, then tell them the story:
   Spring had come early, and Jim was hard at work cleaning the barn. GOOD
   Winter had finally released its grip on the prairie, and Jim was occupied clearing the stalls of the stale straw that had accumulated since the leaves had changed their colors. OK, BUT WORDY -- More suited for adults than children.

   Good Writing, and Good Luck. (If you really need a hint on how to write for children: Pretend you are 10 years old, or whatever age you are targeting; then read what you have written. If it doesn"t make sense, then re-write until it does).
   Kids are interested in stories about all kinds of things these days-- true life, fantasy, horror, adventure, and, yes, even love. Have fun!!)

Copyright © KASPERKATZ

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TEN DO'S AND DON'TS FOR BEGINNING WRITERS
by H. Carlton Hobbs.

   So you want to be a writer. Maybe there is a story that possesses you and will not let you rest . It hounds you night and day to "write me". You sit at the keyboard and type the title followed by your name. You revel at seeing your name in print. You say to yourself "I am a writer:" You fantasize about the finished product. Possibly a story or an article in a magazine. Or your first novel. You see yourself signing autographed copies for hundreds of adoring fans. Your family is proud of you- even the relatives who said you couldn"t do it. Then of course comes the fat cheque from the publisher.......
   These are the dreams of would-be writers. Making these dreams a reality takes plenty of hard work. To quote an old cliche writing takes "1% inspiration and 99% perspiration". For those of you who are aspiring writers here are some "do"s and don"ts" to make the perspiration part just a little easier.

1.   WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW.
   We all have romantic visions of far off lands and places we would love to visit. But don"t write a romance novel about a South Seas Island unless you have visited one (or are prepared to do a lot of library research). It doesn"t matter where you live or what you do for a livilhood. Your particular perspective on a subject is unique and capturing that point of view can bring a fresh approach to anything you write.

2.   SHOW DON"T TELL
   Don"t tell us how your character feels or what he or she thinks. Create actions that bring that person and their feelings to life. A favourite example comes from a creative writing class I took over twenty years ago:
   "I love to cook", she said, slamming the pot lid on the stove."
   This is much more effective than describing the characters feelings about cooking.

3.   READ READ READ
   Can you imagine trying to build a house without ever studying a blueprint? Writing works the same way. If you want to write mystery stories, read as many as you can. Read critically, looking at how the author has handled setting, plot and characterization. The idea is not to copy someone else"s writing style. But rather examine the structure of the particular genre so that you understand just how it is written.

4.   JOIN A SUPPORT GROUP
   One of the greatest myths about writers is that they work in isolation. Worse yet is for writers to accept judgements from family members who make comments like: "that"s nice dear" or "it stinks". Family members and friends might be particularly rough on you if you are writing a fiction story and they think you have shown them in an unfavourable light. Or they may expect to appear in your work and will be disappointed if they cannot see themselves portrayed in the way they want to be shown.
   To avoid this response, find a writers group where you can meet with other writers to share ideas or even get your manuscript critiqued. If you can"t find an organization close to home, you might want to even consider starting one. Writers groups can be very well structured with scheduled meetings and elected officers. Or they can simply be a gathering of a few people on a regular basis who wish to share writing and offer each other empathy and support.

5.   LEARN TO ACCEPT CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
   Show me a writer who is successful and I will show you someone who has done many rewrites. No one gets it perfect the first time. The purpose of good constructive criticism is not to tear apart your writing. Rather it is an effort to point out ways in which the writing might be improved.
   Learn to think of suggestions about your writing as just that and not as personal attacks. Good writers will consider all comments made on their work. Some suggestions may be worthwhile others may not. It is your choice to incorporate those you like and reject those you feel are not appropriate. If your work is being critiqued, try to listen to the comments without being defensive. There are guidelines for critiquing that suggest the person being critiqued should sit in silence until all comments on the work have been made. Remember, if several writers make the same observation then the passage in question may well need reworking.

6.   WRITE WRITE WRITE
   The best way to become a writer is to write. An oversimplication? Too often beginning writers are overly critical of their own work.. They feel that every word has to lead to an end result rather than just allowing the ideas to flow. Some things you write you will want to discard. But you may discover flashes of brilliance in your work or ideas that you can use. No writing exercise is wasted even if it is only gets something off your chest. To quote Dr. Maara Haas, an early creative writing teacher and mentor of mine: "Write your guts out". Some writers keep journals or just scribble ideas in a notebook. You might want to make observations about people eating in a restaurant or the particular way sunshine hits the waters of the lake. You just never know when these ideas might prove useful.

7.   BE SINCERE
   If you create scenes or characters that you feel are unbelievable then likely these will not covince a reader. Even a fantasy novel has to ring true or else your reader (and probably the publisher) will reject it. The best fiction comes from some inner truth or true experience that has happened to you. Sometimes fiction is an appropriate vehicle to vent emotions too difficult to otherwise share. For example it might be too painful to write about a loved one dying of cancer where it would be easier to write about a fictional character. Fiction allows distance from the event while maintaining the essence of reality needed to make your writing convincing.

8.   USE A VARIETY OF WRITING TECHNIQUES
   Keep your writing lively by using varied techniques. Intersperse narrative with dialogue to change the pace and keep readers interested. Use a variety of sentence structures. Follow lengthy sentences with very short ones. Use only details that move the piece forward. Avoid flowery language and pretenious words unless they serve a specific purpose. Study the techniques of other writers and see if they are appropriate to your writing style.

9.   TAKE WRITING COURSES
   There is no correct way to write. But writing courses can expose you to different techniques and ideas that would be difficult to learn on your own. Good creative writing courses will encourage you to experiment and try out new ideas. Possibly you might want to try a prose passage as a poem, or tell a story from a nontraditional point of view.
   Courses may be available in your community, through correspondence, or through the Internet such as Fiction 98 and Fiction 401. Always be prepared to try new ideas or methods to see which work best.

10.   NEVER GIVE UP
   Don"t listen to free advice about your writing. Ignore well meaning relatives and friends if they say you are wasting your time. There is a standing joke in the writing field about beginning authors who have enough rejection slips to wallpaper a room. Try to look at each writing adventure as a new experience and one from which you can profit. A positive attitude will keep you on the road to success.

   Good luck. Who knows? One day the author signing autographs in my local book store may be you!

Copyright © H. CARLETON HOBBS


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HINTS FOR WRITING FREE VERSE
by Carole Shukle (Seesaw)

   The first thing I do when writing free verse is to decide the meaning and purpose of my poem. I need to understand what emotions I want my readers to feel. Then, I write the poem with that goal in mind.

   I always write in complete sentences and punctuate normally. I study each sentence separately and eliminate any unnecessary words. Conciseness makes a sentence more powerful. I try to use strong nouns and verbs and avoid the overuse of adjectives. I eliminate any clichés I have used, because I want to say ordinary things in an unusual or fresh manner.

   The poetry devices I use most often are imagery, simile, and metaphor. The imagery, hopefully, paints a picture in the mind of my reader. The simile and metaphor allow for comparisons that are three dimensional descriptions, which in turn create more imagery.

   The next step is to decide where to break my lines. That depends on several factors. I choose my line lengths according to the meaning of the poem, and according to the emotion I want my reader to feel. If I want intense emotion, I will choose shorter line lengths, which create a faster rhythm. Longer lines will slow the rhythm and allow for softer emotions. Medium lines are ideal for exploring thoughts and ideas. I try to end all the lines with strong nouns or verbs to maintain the power of the poem. I don’t want to lose the reader at the end of a line. The use of enjambment creates intensity, because it kind of jerks you around the corner to the next line while maintaining the unity of thought. It also acts as a transition to the next thought. Combining different line lengths in alternating patterns can create some musical intensity.

   I think musical appeal is very important to free verse. A portion of this is the rhythm you create, but the other part are the sounds you create for the ear. The words you choose and the proximity of words to each other create certain sounds. It is kind of like playing the piano by ear. You know when it sounds right. I always read my poetry aloud to hear the music I have, hopefully, created.

Lastly, I rewrite. I may rewrite a poem (usually small changes here and there) 10 or 15 times. I rewrite until I feel it is the best I can do, or until that little voice says, “You’re done.”

Copyright © CAROLE SHUKLE (SEESAW)


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BASIC POETRY DEVICES
by Carole Shukle (Seesaw)

Here are the definitions and examples of the poetic devices. This list is designed to be used along with the Poetry Feedback Forms.

ALLITERATION:   The repition of the sound of an initial consonant or consonant cluster close enough to each other for the ear to be affected.

      Sally sold a seashell.

METAPHOR:   Comparing two things without using words of comparison (like or as).

      Life is a stage.

SIMILE:   Comparing two unlike thinks using (like or as).

      Life is like a stage.

IMAGERY:   Painting pictures using words. It appeals to one or more of the five senses...smell, taste, touch, sight, and sound.

      The dusty brown book fell to the floor creating a mushroom shaped cloud.

HYPERBOLE:   An exaggeration or an overstatement.

      I could have died laughing.

PERSONIFICATION:   Giving non-human objects, abstractions, or creatures human characteristics.

      “Or jealousy with rankling tooth, that inlay gnaws the secret heart. . .(Milton)

SYMBOL:   A word used to represent an idea or emotion.

      black = death, sorrow
      white = purity, innocence, good
      rose = love
      flag = patriotism

Copyright © CAROLE SHUKLE (SEESAW)

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