anatolia0702

Key:
<< >> represents a character's thoughts
< > represents a character's action
( ) my comments
(( )) represents a specific scene
*** represents notes of the story from me
Summary:
Natia: Your Highness!<rushes up and blocks for both of them with her back>
Natia: Ah~!(second...actually the third time someone said that...first it was the messanger...then it was Yuuri...and now it's Natia...doesn't that kinda get on your nerves?)
Dark Prince: Natia?
Yuuri: Natia! (uh...ok...one person saying her name is enough...no repeats are needed...did you notice how Shinohara sensei always have people repeating each other?)
<Dark Prince draws up his sword and slashes the arm of a soldier>
<Yuuri quickly puts her clothes on>
<Dark Prince glances at Natia and whirls around just in time to see a guy wield a sword and charging up at him>
Yuuri: Dark Prince!
<Yuuri knocks the sword out of the soldier's hand and scraps soldier's arm>
Dark Prince: Yuuri! (Notice how this name calling game kinda goes...)
Yuuri: Dark Prince! There are still people who love and care about you! No matter what happens they'll still be by your side!
Yuuri: She was by your side all the time! Just that you didn't notice her!
<Dark Prince turns and looks at Natia>
Natia: Your highness! Are you alright?
Dark Prince: ...
Natia: We must hurry up and leave this place, your highness!(I know you're very loyal and all...but just kinda quit this name-calling or "your highness" thing...)As long as you're alive then it's fine, even if you don't have a country anymore! Let's go to Bablyon! That's where I came from and I can ensure your safety there!
Dark Prince: What are you talking about...?
Natia: Or do you still...you still like your sister...you still can't forget Princess Tandola?
Dark Prince: <<Sister->>
((scene changes to a flashback of the Dark Prince's past with a setting of Princess Tandola on a chariot procession))
Dark Prince: Sister! Sister!(this sounds kinda weird...but it was a part I stumbled upon in translation)
Princess Tandola: Marty!
Dark Prince: Sister, don't go to Egypt! Father, I refuse to let you trade Tandola for gold!
King Sholada: Wasite, shut up! You should wish your sister happiness on her marriage!
Dark Prince: Father, don't you have the pride of being a Mittanian?
King Sholada: I told you to shut up!
<King Sholad whips the Dark Prince on his face, blood trickles out of the cut>
*** the cut is the scar that you see on the Dark Prince face ar the present moment
Princess Tandola: Marty!<tears stream out her eyes>
Princess Tandola: Marty...here..catch!<She takes off her right earring and throws it to the Dark Prince>
Dark Prince: Sister!
Princess Tandola: Marty! I love you! Take care!
<Dark Prince catches the earring and holds it with both hands>
Dark Prince: Sister! Sister-!
((scene returns to the Dark Prince's room))
*** the earring is what the Dark Prince wears on his forehead
Dark Prince: ...
Natia: Your highness!
Dark Prince: Natia...even though I've lost my country and status, would you still stay with me?
Natia: Of course!I'll go wherever you go!
Dark Prince: Yuuri I can't travel with two women. So you can go wherever you want, take this!<he removes the earring that his sister gave him and hands it to Yuuri>The city is a mess, this can be your pass! Tell Kail Mursili...I'll give him Mittani!
Yuuri: <<I'll give him Mittani...? King Sholada is dead, and the Dark Prince is abandoning the country...that means Mittani is destroyed->>