Flora's Experience
The Adventures of Justin Credible
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This is the story of a child born into a household full of hate.  A child who knows not of love, but fear.  This is the story of Owen Whatsitworth.  Though he hides under a cape of timidness, he is truly strong, smart, and noble at heart. 
In a small shack, in a small town, just off a small dirt road is the Whatsitworth household.  It’s a place full of booze and beatings.  It’s a place that little kids and stray dogs dare not go, yet it is the home of a 10 year old boy, named Owen.
He is not just an ordinary boy, oh no, he is in fact very special.  By day he disguises himself as a mild mannered fifth grader, but when the sun sets he transforms into ‘JUSTIN CREDIBLE!!’
Justin Credible is an intergalactic super hero who saves lives by being noble, caring, and smart.  He has already had many adventures even though he has only been in existence for 1 decade.  His adventures include, defeating Dr. Killsalot and saving the lives of Princess Little Miss Priss and Kris Tinocent.  He is very modest and loves to help, but manages to have no friends.
One warm summer evening, Justin Credible was out patrolling the streets, looking for a person to help.  As he aimlessly wandered, he came upon the secret headquarters of his late arch nemesis’s son, Nurse Killsalot!  He heard clanging and thumping coming from inside the old warehouse.  As he climbed up to the window to take a peak, what he saw would’ve instantly devastated any normal man’s heart.  What he saw was so amazingly horrible that he could barely stand looking at it.  What he saw was a sea of cute puppies and kittens waiting to be slaughtered due to Nurse Killsalot’s latest fad, selling fur coats on the black market.  Justin Credible turned away from the sight for fear he would be sick.   A million thoughts were racing through his head.  “What’s happening? Why is he doing this? What am I going to do to prevent this evil doing?”
Just then, some of Killsalot’s goons spotted him.  He was taken over by them and awoke in a dark room tied to a chair.  As his eyes weakly began to open he realized Nurse Killsalot was positioned directly in front of him.  
“So you’re tryin’ to bust me operation up are ye? Well ya can’t! Not from here, not from anywheres! My father taught me well enough to be cautious ‘bout you, too bad he couldn’t practice what he preached, the ol’ fool!”
“What kind of a sick man are you Killsalot? How could you do such a nasty thing to those poor animals out there? Don’t you have any morals man? WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU?! FOR GOD SAKES MAN! LET MY POOR PETS GO!” shouted Justin, thinking he could outwit the evil nurse.
“Oh stop your blubbering man! Of course I don’t have any morals! I’m an evil villain, just like me father!” Killsalot replied sharply.
“But are you really? Are you really all that evil? You were always living in your father’s shadow, you don’t have to be like that anymore, GIVE IT UP MAN!”
“No! Stop it! Shut up! I can’t! You won’t!  WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! I can’t do it!  WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!”,  the nurse whined.
Justin had done it. He had broken down the evil crime boss using his wits.  Nurse Killsalot was a blubbering mess and all the puppies and kittens were saved.  Just another day’s work in the life of Justin Credible.
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