A Country Rag--Distilled Spirits
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A Country Rag Distilled Spirits







by Gwen Y. Fortune
(retired educator, some of whose poetry and prose previously published are archived in ACR)

Rain, rain, go away



A tree bounces on a

rain battered canopy;

leaves slip like balsa planes

to settle on chlorine blue water, 

confined in white tiles and black numbers-

three feet, four feet, five feet, nine feet six.



I do not hear his footsteps in the quiet after storm.

In street clothes it takes a moment to recognize

the lifeguard I see at water exercise.

   

People ain't treating people right, he says.



Hard hats with muscled arms lift chain saws, 

building sawdust mounds;

frightening birds and drowning sounds of passing cars.

Devastation alternates with upright summer furniture.



The lifeguard shakes his head.

   He's showing people.

   People ain't treating people right.



Detoured by yellow tape struggling to pull free,

dead and working traffic lights,

I chase the morning sun back home.



Around one corner I stop.

A cyclone fence surrounds a cemetery;

red, white, pink, and blue flowers lace the metal web.

Defiant gravestones

remind me of an old Negro spiritual,

     We shall not be moved.



A single black truck unloads a green tent 

for today's solemn ceremony.

The washed, near vacant route awakens a question,

    Is human nature as random

    as the hop, skip, thump of storms?


Graphic: Main Street, watercolor by Gail Rohrer, Jonesborough TN; click for on-line gallery

watercolor by Gail Rohrer

Notes

Saturday afternoon I heard the most sublime rendition of Beethoven's Miss Solemnis I have ever heard. The setting was superb, the Chapel at Duke University, with old-fashioned acoustics, no reverb electronics, just natural rebounds from the high, curved ceiling. The NC Symphony was excellent and the Choral Society of Durham could not have been better. A CD is a CD and a performance in the flesh is heaven.

I don't know if there was anything that the singers and the conductor may have wanted to do differently. I heard one bass hanging on a tad longer after one cutoff. As I watched these beautiful voices offering the results of years of study to produce bel canto-beautiful sound-I drifted into my social scientist mode, marveling at the beauty of natural voices and instrumentation without supersaturated electronic intervention. To me, there is nothing more lovely than the observation and appreciation of artistry honed and displayed by the collaboration such as I was honored to witness. I don't know if anyone in the orchestra was playing a Stradivarius or any instrument by one of the hundreds of skilled craftsmen who lovingly carve or mold instruments. I only know that the effect was profoundly pleasing.

I thought of the years of hard work that, except for the paid quartet, these truly professional musicians have expended. This is an audition chorale. Sight-reading is a must. I am aware that most, if not all, of the musicians earn their sustenance, not by doing what innate ability and passion dictate but by teaching, working in offices, and stores. We, humans, have created a culture that respects and rewards product above talent and service. Beethoven was, as were and are most artists, at the mercy of his patrons. I exclude rock performers with the maze of cords, wires and electronic enhancement. There were recording microphones above, but we heard only what is natural and honed to perfection.

I had arrived at the campus nearly two hours early because finding a parking place is almost impossible. As I approached the entry a couple stood, looking out on the quadrangle. I began talking with them. They were from the midwest, Mr. and Mrs. J.L.

Now, my multi/inter/holistic observation and philosophy takes over. The soprano soloist, one of the professional quartet, was Rochelle Ellis, a woman who looks as if she has just arrived from the Sudan. Her voice is pure diamond. I thought of the editor who has two black writers coming out next year and of a friend's observation that not too long ago one representative of a "minority" group-including women, in some respects-was enough (quota.). Whereas all the soloists were wonderful, Miss Ellis was, in my ears, the most effective-just "loverly."

Afterwards, talking with the J.L. family, Mrs. L. asked why there was only one African American in the 150 voice chorale. (I'm always asked to "explain" racial anomalies.) I happen to know the lone representative of the African, European and American continents. He is Randolph F. R. Rasch (Randy) who teaches in the school of nursing at Duke. Dr. Rasch comes from a middle class family, learned classical music as a child. He said that when he graduated from college he bought a recording of the Missa Solemnis and has waited for years to sing it.

photo by Gail Rohrer The question by Mrs. L. sent my head into automatic. At least a thousand times I've had to give a memorized spiel to counteract ignorance, e.g. "My grandfather was a singing teacher, Dad and an uncle sang. They were 'Irish tenors,' Grandmother played classical piano, etc. etc." When she said, "Oh, it's class not color," I smiled and said, "Yes." She "got it."

Unfortunately, most youths are minimally educated, not just in the basics, but the cultures of the nation and world. The President wants to test each year while teachers "teach to the test." The tests include the questions missed the year before, thus continually "weeding out" without rectification. Learning diminishes exponentially, and not just for "minorities."

Graphic: rocking chair, photo by Gail Rohrer


eavesdropping



        ada lies in a charity bed

        after days of alcoholic numbing

        that could never satisfy

        she stared at the sun

        her brain fried

        didn't recognize me

        or remember her last bath

         tubes in a gator neck      

         asking for "a drag "

    

    I look beyond the greeny-grey walls

    my eyes following a line of trees

    that were stuck deep by humans

    grown fearful of ourselves

    measured repetition cannot shield us from them.



    ada rasps "I will not die this way

    like my ma, dad and sister

    she swallows   a denial of today            





Gwen Fortune's novel Nigger Rich is in publication and will be available through Pelican Books and Amazon.








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text©Gwendoline Y. Fortune; graphics©Jeannette Harris, Gail Rohrer; June 2001. All rights reserved.
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