To Challenge Fate
FADE IN
EXT. HYPNOTIC MONTAGE - DAY
Dead silence. A jeweled RING on a man's finger twinkles in the sunlight.
An ADOLESCENT FARMBOY, in the middle of an empty field, stands perfectly
still as if in a trance. The hushed, casual voices of MAX and ANATOL can
be heard over the entire montage.
MAX (v.o.)
I am amazed at you, Anatol.
ANATOL (v.o.)
No reason to be.
MAX (v.o.)
No, no... I am astonished. I've always
considered it a sham, a fraud. But there was
the proof, right before my eyes. You put him to
sleep, you tell him to dance, and he dances.
The adolescent boy jerks to life and begins to dance -- like a puppet.
MAX (v.o.)
Then, you tell him his sweetheart is dead, and
he cries.
The jeweled ring glistens. The adolescent boy stands still again --
distraught, tears rolling down his cheeks.
MAX (v.o.)
Then, that he's a judge, and he pardons a
criminal. It's amazing.
The jeweled ring sparkles. The adolescent boy draws himself up solemnly,
bangs an imaginary gavel and mouths a pardon to an invisible criminal.
ANATOL (v.o.)
It is, isn't it?
MAX (v.o.)
It makes you a kind of sorcerer.
FLASH CUTS of other people under hypnosis -- young and old, men and women,
in fields and city streets -- dancing, crying, waving imaginary things in
their hands like so many magic wands.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Everyone is to some degree.
MAX (v.o.)
Still, it's so... difficult to accept.
More sparkling images, not of the ring but of something similar: Orbital
views of the dark side of the EARTH as it rotates, the SUN glimmering on
its horizon.
ANATOL (v.o.)
What isn't? Look at the discoveries of the
past few centuries. Had we been able to prove
to our ancestors that the earth rotates, they
wouldn't have accepted that. It would have
made them dizzy.
MAX (v.o.)
No, no, but... this... this... phenomenon is
stranger than planetary rotation.
Closer to the Earth's surface: a glorious SUNRISE over the ocean.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Strange, because it's unfamiliar. How would
you react to a sunrise having never seen one
before?
The sunlight shines through the leafy branches of a TREE.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Or to trees putting out new leaves in spring?
Under the tree, a YOUNG COUPLE smile at one another. They stroll down
a sidewalk in a late nineteenth century CITY.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Or to... What about to falling in love!? Hah,
there's one! How did you react the first time
you fell in love? Hard to accept?
The montage ends.
CUT TO:
EXT. ANATOL'S BALCONY - DAY
The sun is going down fast. Anatol and Max, sit on the balcony of Anatol's
apartment in the heart of the city. They drink wine, smoke, and watch any
number of young couples pass by on the streets and sidewalks below them.
Anatol is an idle, young bachelor, and like many of his species, is devoted
to material comfort and novelty. Max is Anatol's best friend -- rather less
materialist, less romantic, more level-headed. Their conversation continues
without missing a beat.
MAX
Alright, point made. But the thing with
Mesmerism...
ANATOL
Hypnotism...
MAX
...hypnotism, is, it's so... dangerous. I
don't know how to put it, but I could never
allow myself to be hypnotized.
ANATOL
Why not? What's to be afraid of? You lie down,
I tell you to sleep...
MAX
... and that I'm a chimney sweep, and pretty
soon I'm in the fireplace ruining my clothes.
ANATOL
Those are just parlor tricks. What's exciting
about hypnotism is its enormous untapped
scientific potential.
MAX
Scientific potential?
ANATOL
Absolutely!
Anatol's efficient manservant FRANZ quietly appears on the balcony with a
fresh bottle and a clean ashtray. He sets them on a table between Anatol and
Max.
ANATOL
(to Max)
Why, look -- on the power of my suggestions
alone, Franz here traveled to a dozen different
worlds in the space of an hour.
FRANZ
(helpful)
A hundred.
Anatol gives Max a look of triumph.
ANATOL
(to Max)
A hundred! Imagine if we could do that for
ourselves!?
(to Franz)
Thank you, Franz.
(to Max)
To send ourselves to other worlds.
Franz exits with an empty bottle and a full ashtray. Anatol pours himself
a glass.
MAX
Have you tried?
ANATOL
Mmm. No luck. I'm stuck in this one.
MAX
Poor Anatol.
ANATOL
I wave my hand in front of my face...
On Anatol's hand, we see the jeweled ring.
ANATOL
...and say to myself, "sleep, sleep, when you
awake all your torment over Cora will seem like
a bad dream..."
MAX
And when you wake up?
ANATOL
I never go to sleep.
Anatol downs his drink.
ANATOL
It's Cora. She's driving me mad.
CUT TO:
EXT. CORA'S MONTAGE - NIGHT
CORA, an irresistably pretty woman dressed in the latest styles, unhurriedly
threads her way down a busy sidewalk in the shopping district. She is in
her early twenties -- though she easily passes for much younger -- and wears
a mild grin on her thoroughly honest face, trying to maintain the air of
unstudied shallowness expected of her. The voices of Anatol and Max continue
over the montage.
MAX (v.o.)
You're too suspicious.
ANATOL (v.o.)
No. it's way beyond suspicion, I'm absolutely
convinced that she's cheating on me.
MAX (v.o.)
You're dreaming.
ANATOL (v.o.)
I have proof.
Cora pauses on the sidewalk and stops smiling -- as if she could somehow
hear what was being said.
MAX (v.o.)
Oh, really?
CUT BACK TO Anatol and Max sitting on the BALCONY. The sun has gone down.
Light from the nearby street lamps bathes them in a warm, fuzzy glow.
ANATOL
I do. If what I fear is the same as what I
feel, and what I feel is the same as what I
believe to be true, then what I fear, is true.
MAX
(confused)
What was that?
ANATOL
Logic.
MAX
Ah, I didn't recognize it.
Anatol scowls at Max. Instantly, we return to CORA, frowning on the sidewalk.
She's been looking in the window of a book shop, unsure whether or not to
enter.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Oh, Max! It logically follows; girls have
affairs, therefore, they are always unfaithful.
I read two or three books at a time. They keep
two or three men at a time.
Cora enters the book shop.
MAX (v.o.)
Alright, if there is another man. Who is he?
Cora thumbs through some books.
ANATOL (v.o.)
How on earth am I supposed to know? It could
be anyone! A prince she met on the street.
One book is called "Fairy Tales": a prince turns into a frog and back again.
ANATOL (v.o.)
A poet she saw from a window -- anyone! And
there's nothing wrong with that. She just
wants to have a good time like... most people,
and when she declares her love -- or her
fidelity -- she means it... because at that
moment she's not thinking about any of the
others. And I understand that.
Another book, whose title is partly obscured, is called: "The Erotic Poetry
of...": Cora lingers over the photograph of a ruggedly handsome POET on the
dust jacket.
ANATOL (v.o.)
Anyway, who in their right mind would announce
to their lover that they're carrying on with
someone else?
A third book is "A History of Polygamy." Cora walks out of the shop with
two or three books, continues down the sidewalk, and disappears into the
crowd.
MAX (v.o.)
But suppose... suppose she actually loves you?
The montage ends.
CUT TO:
EXT. ANATOL'S BALCONY
Franz brings a small oil lamp and places it on the table between Max and
Anatol, then steps back and quietly awaits further orders. But the two men
ignore him, wrapped up in their ongoing conversation.
ANATOL
Why would that make any difference?
MAX
It logically follows; if she loves you,
she'll be faithful.
ANATOL
That's not logical at all. I love her, so how
come I'm not faithful? I can declare my utter
and exclusive love to a girl -- despite the
fact that I've said exactly the same thing to
another girl the night before -- and feel
completely genuine about it. And I seriously
doubt that anyone, male or female, is any
different. So, it logically follows; I could
forgive Cora everything before she uttered a
word, beg her to tell me the truth, and she
would still lie. Girls have begged me and I've
lied, and kept a clear conscience. When lies
make people so happy, why tell the truth and
make them miserable?
Anatol looks at Franz as if expecting an answer but Franz doesn't know what
to say.
MAX
So, why expect Cora to tell you the truth?
ANATOL
Because her lies don't make me happy.
MAX
What would make you happy, then?
ANATOL
To have a way of making a girl honest. That
would make me happy. A way to make women
honest...
A pause.
MAX
Like hypnosis?
ANATOL
What?
MAX
Hypnosis. You put her under a spell and
instruct her to be completely candid.
Anatol stares at the ring on his hand.
ANATOL
Hmm.
MAX
Then you question her: Where have you just
been? Where're you going when you leave here?
Do you love me or someone else? What's his
name? ...
ANATOL
Max! You're a genius! That's it!
Anatol rises, steps to the balcony's railing, and looks out at the city.
ANATOL
That's the untapped scientific potential --
power over women.
Behind Anatol's back, Max and Franz exchange uneasy glances.
MAX
(to Anatol)
Well. It'll be an interesting experiment.
Anatol looks down at the sidewalk below, sees Cora -- carrying books, just
as in her montage -- walking toward his apartment, and breaks into a broad
grin.
CUT TO:
INT. ANATOL'S SITTING-ROOM - NIGHT
Moments later. The room is dark. But from the Persian carpets, the heavy
curtains, the abundance of unlit candles and lamps shaded in colored glass,
it is obvious that Anatol is a romantic, possibly a hedonist. His paintings
are just ahead of fashion, and the latest books which cram his shelves leave
the impression that he craves... a fuller life. Franz brings in the table
and chairs from the adjacent balcony. Max sits on the sofa calmly watching
as a tense, expectant Anatol paces the room, hands in pockets. He stops.
ANATOL
(sharply, to Max)
You don't think she actually has anything to
hide, do you?
Max is about to answer when Cora abruptly enters. There is an instantaneous
transformation in Anatol's demeanor.
ANATOL
Cora, darling.
CORA
Anatol.
Cora goes to kiss him but stops when she sees Max.
ANATOL
What? Oh, it's only Max.
CORA
(relieved)
Hi, Max.
Cora and Anatol kiss deeply and stay in each other's arms.
CORA
(to Anatol)
Why are you sitting around in the dark?
ANATOL
You know how I revel in the twilight.
CORA
Every word you breathe is poetry.
ANATOL
You're all my inspiration.
They kiss again and she breaks away.
CORA
But I'm going to light some lights anyway. You
won't mind, will you?
ANATOL
(to Max)
Isn't she... beyond description?
Max smiles and nods. Cora busily lights a particularly garish lamp with a
red and green globe and a candle or two.
CORA
So you boys have been having a nice little
chat? Anything interesting?
ANATOL
Oh, science. A scientific discussion.
MAX
Hypnotism.
CORA
Not again! I'm so sick of hypnotism. Hypnotism,
hypnotism! I don't understand what all the fuss
is about...
ANATOL
Yes, but...
CORA
Maybe if I'd been hypnotized myself it'd mean
something to me, but as it is...
ANATOL
You? Well...
(to Max, as if he'd
just thought of it)
That's an idea...
CORA
Then I'd know what it's like. But, of course,
I'd trust no one but you to do it.
ANATOL
I'm flattered.
CORA
Well, who else am I intimate with? No one!
At least not to where I'd let them go messing
around with my brain like that.
Max grins at Anatol who frowns back at him while Cora lights some more lamps.
ANATOL
(to Cora)
It's not something I'd do casually, but if you
really want me to...
CORA
Well, just so I know what people are talking
about. And why not? It could be fun. When
shall we do it?
ANATOL
Now.
CORA
Now?
Anatol flashes a dazzling grin.
CUT TO:
INT. ANATOL'S SITTING-ROOM - NIGHT
Minutes later. The lamps are out and only the candles are lit, making for
an eerie atmosphere. Cora, eyes shut, breathing deeply, sits in a comfortable
chair. Anatol stands in front of her.
ANATOL
Alright. Cora. Cora, you will answer whatever
I ask you. What is your name?
CORA
Cora.
A beaming Anatol turns to Max who remains seated on the sofa -- a moment of
great satisfaction for Anatol. He turns back to Cora.
ANATOL
Cora, you're in the forest.
CUT TO:
EXT. IN THE FOREST - DAY
Cora opens her eyes and sees that she is, indeed, alone in the forest.
Sunlight shines through the leaves of tall trees, rather like in the film's
opening montage. A lark SINGS. It's all quite breathtaking.
CORA
How lovely...
Cora turns to see Anatol standing before her just as he was in the
sitting-room.
ANATOL
Cora, you will always tell me the truth. What
will you do?
CORA
I will always tell you the truth.
ANATOL
You will answer all my questions, and you will
answer them truthfully and when you wake, you
will have forgotten everything. Do you
understand?
CORA
I understand.
Anatol turns to see Max seated as he was in the sitting-room but on a fallen
tree trunk rather than a sofa.
ANATOL
(to Max)
So, where do we start?
MAX
How old is she?
ANATOL
Nineteen. Ah, good idea!
Anatol turns to Cora.
ANATOL
Cora, how old are you?
CORA
Twenty-two.
Max laughs. A grinning Anatol turns to him.
ANATOL
(to Max)
Shh! This is phenomenal.
MAX
She's apparently a very good subject.
Anatol takes a deep breath.
ANATOL
(to Cora)
Cora. Cora, do you love me?
Cora looks confused. Max stifles his laughter. Anatol inches closer to Cora.
ANATOL
Do you love me?
A long pause. Birds CHIRP and WHISTLE.
CORA
Yes.
Anatol smiles happily at Max. Max smiles back.
MAX
Fine, but how about the big question? Is she
faithful?
Anatol turns back to Cora and looks her right in the eye.
ANATOL
Cora...
Another, longer, pause. Somehow, Anatol can't bring himself to ask the
question.
ANATOL
(to Cora)
Would you excuse me for a minute?
A suddenly uncomfortable Anatol quickly crosses to Max and joins him on THE
TREE TRUNK. Max and Anatol speak rapidly to one another in relatively low
voices with a motionless Cora visible behind them.
ANATOL
I don't think that's an appropriate question.
MAX
It isn't?
ANATOL
No. You can't ask it right out like that.
MAX
Why not?
ANATOL
It's vague, we need to phrase it differently.
MAX
Seems precise to me.
ANATOL
No, that's just the problem. It's not precise.
MAX
It isn't?
ANATOL
"Are you faithful?" It could mean anything!
MAX
For instance?
ANATOL
When are we talking about? She might have been
in love with someone before she met me, and
since I don't specify exactly when she was
unfaithful, she'd answer no.
MAX
How about, "Cora, have you been faithful since
we've known each other?"
ANATOL
Um... No. That's wrong too.
MAX
Why?
ANATOL
How could we have possibly known those first
few days that our love would grow to such
profound depths? At that point we both thought
it was just a fling.
MAX
So?
ANATOL
So, she may have been in love with someone else
at the time. Who knows what she was up to the
day before we met? Maybe she had something else
going that she couldn't break off, and maybe it
went on like that for weeks, and how could I
blame her for that?
MAX
That's very liberal of you. How about this,
"Cora, have you been unfaithful to me since
we've been in love?"
ANATOL
Well... We need to define "faithful". So, for
example... Picture her on a train, just
yesterday, and imagine that a man across from
her happened to let his foot touch hers...
Cora overhears this and cocks her head slightly.
CUT TO:
INT. ON A TRAIN - DAY
A crowded, fast-moving commuter train where Cora's foot is accidentally
touched by a man across from her -- a dead ringer for the ruggedly handsome
POET on the book jacket. They make eye contact and smile at one another.
Anatol and Max, seated just as they were on the tree trunk but now in wooden
seats at the rear of the car, watch from a distance, and carry on their
conversation as if the change of scene had never happened.
ANATOL
Now, normally that would count for nothing, but
she is not in a normal state, the trance has
made her mind subtler than either of us can
imagine, so who's to say that she wouldn't
interpret what happened on the train as being
"unfaithful"?
MAX
That's ridiculous.
ANATOL
And she knows that if she so much as looks at
another man I view that as infidelity. I admit,
it's a little extreme on my part, but it leaves
the whole question wide open to interpretation.
MAX
What did she say when you told her that?
ANATOL
About her looking at another man? Oh, I don't
know...
Max calls out to Cora who is engaged in deep conversation with the poet.
MAX
Cora?
CORA
(pleasantly, to Max)
Yes, Max?
MAX
What was your reaction when Anatol told you
that if you so much as looked at another man he
would view that as infidelity?
A glum Anatol and an amused Max watch as Cora starts laughing her head off.
She can barely answer Max's question.
CORA
(giddy)
I laughed my head off.
Giggling, Cora resumes her conversation with the poet. Max grins at a
sour-faced Anatol.
ANATOL
(to Max)
Under certain external and artificial stimuli,
one can fall prey to a host of uncontrollable
and deeply buried urges that will surface in
spite of any efforts to maintain integrity or
control over the conscious personality.
MAX
Could you make yourself a little more obscure?
ANATOL
All right. Try this. Imagine a room, dimly
lit and full of romantic atmosphere.
CUT TO:
INT. ANATOL'S SITTING-ROOM - NIGHT
The candle-lit room as before except that Anatol and Max sit on the sofa.
ANATOL
There she is, sitting with another man.
Cora and the ruggedly handsome poet snuggle in the comfortable chair.
MAX
How'd she get there?
ANATOL
Don't worry about that, these things can happen.
Now, imagine a glass of absinthe, the aroma of
spiced cigarettes, a crystal chandelier with a
golden glow, crimson curtains. Everywhere,
loneliness and silence. Words are whispered
gently into the shell of her ear.
The poet whispers to Cora as the glass, the cigarettes, the chandelier, and
the curtains materialize. Cora tries to resist but the poet is silently
breaking down her defenses. Things are getting steamy.
MAX
Oh really...
ANATOL
Stronger women than Cora have succumbed to such
things.
MAX
Well, you would know, I'm sure... One thing
doesn't make sense. If she's so in love with
you, how did she get into a room like that with
another man in the first place?
ANATOL
Life is full of enigmas.
Cora and the poet kiss. Max abruptly rises from the sofa and crosses to
Cora. By the time he reaches her, the poet is gone, Cora is in a trance,
and the room -- and everything in it -- is as it was before the hypnotic
suggestions.
MAX
(to Anatol)
You're the enigma. You've got the key to the
greatest puzzle of all time. You only have to
ask one little question. You're being invited
to challenge fate, and you won't do it. Fine.
Torture yourself. Delude yourself. Wallow in
your romantic fantasies. Wake her up, pass up
a chance to know the truth. ... What all this
comes down to is that you're not going to ask
her at all, am I right?
Anatol takes a long look at Cora.
ANATOL
No, no, I'll ask her, I just have to...
MAX
...dream up another objection?
(crosses to Anatol, sympathetic)
Listen, if you ask, kindly, lovingly, if she is
faithful to you, she's not going to think about
feet on the train or kisses under a crystal
chandelier. Besides, if her answer's not clear,
we can have her go into detail.
Anatol flinches.
ANATOL
You're dead set on my asking her, is that it?
MAX
Me? You're the one who wants to know!
ANATOL
I really want to ask her. Just not in front of
you. It's not that I'm trying to hide anything
from you. You'll know if she's been unfaithful
because you'll never see her here again. But
for you to find out now, at the same time as I
do, I couldn't stand that. If I have to hear
an ugly truth, I want to be alone.
A pause. Max heads for the apartment's front room.
MAX
I'll wait in there.
ANATOL
It'll only be a minute.
Max exits through a door to the front room and shuts it behind him. Anatol
takes a deep breath, rises, and crosses to Cora, still in her trance. His
face is mere inches from hers.
ANATOL
Cora, do you... Cora, have you... Cora, are
you...?
Anatol shuts his eyes.
ANATOL
Oh, God! Cora... wake up and kiss me...
Cora wakes up. She immediately kisses Anatol.
CORA
Oh, my. How long was I asleep?
They stare into each other's eyes for a long moment before she looks around.
CORA
Where's Max?
ANATOL
(yells to Max)
Max!
(to Cora)
You went into a deep trance. You said things,
too.
CORA
Nothing I shouldn't have, I hope.
Max returns.
MAX
(to Cora, half-apologetic)
He just asked you some questions.
CORA
Did he?
ANATOL
I did.
CORA
Did I answer them?
ANATOL
Every one.
CORA
Tell me!
Anatol shakes his head.
ANATOL
We'll try again tomorrow.
CORA
Oh, no, we won't try again tomorrow. I don't
like answering questions I can't remember. I
probably said a lot of silly things that aren't
true.
ANATOL
Well, you did say you loved me.
CORA
Did I?
MAX
Amazing the silly things you say in your sleep.
CORA
But it's not silly at all when I say it awake.
Cora rises and kisses Anatol. Max takes the hint.
MAX
It's getting late. I think I'll be going.
ANATOL
Going?
MAX
Yes, I...
ANATOL
Do you mind if I don't see you out?
MAX
Of course not.
CORA
Goodbye, Max!
Cora winks at Max as he leaves the sitting-room.
CUT TO:
INT. THE FRONT ROOM - NIGHT
A moment later. Max crosses the tasteful little room to the front door.
Franz helps Max on with his coat.
MAX
What do you think, Franz?
FRANZ
About what, sir?
MAX
Lies told under hypnosis. Are they any better
than the usual ones? Anatol says lies make
people happy. So does it really matter at all?
Franz and Max look at each other a moment, then observe Anatol and Cora
kissing in the next room.
MAX
I guess it doesn't.
Max and Franz exchange smiles.
MAX
Good night.
Max exits. Franz shuts the door behind him and walks off. On a little table
by the door lie the books that Cora bought earlier that evening. The book
on top is the one called "Fairy Tales".
FADE OUT
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