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Misplaced sentence elements
Correct the following:
- This simple operation can be learned by anyone who has
had high school algebra in eight hours (W,117).
- A mother wants to know what her daughter's plans are for
her own satisfaction (W,117).
- People worry from the time they get up until they go to
bed about many things (W,117).
- I learned that my father was sick in a letter (W,117).
- He saw an accident which he reported yesterday (B,446).
- She was the kind of girl who could accept the fact that
she was pigeon-toed with a smile (B,446).
- He was born while the Korean War was in progress in the
United States (B,446).
- It was necessary to notify the fans that because of a
bomb threat the stands would have to be cleared and
searched in the fourth inning (M,121).
- Road maps, I discovered, cost a quarter, but I was used
to the old days and took only one (H,85).
- Being from San Diego, I wear only half my pajamas (H,85).
- Maturing faster because of parent's divorcing does not
hold true in all cases. The child may become timid and
insecure (H,85).
- After locking the house, I left the key with the real
estate agent, and I hope you will soon find another
tenant (H,85).
- Bothered by minor injuries, Manski is rugged on both
offense and defense (W,168).
- Born in Austria, Schildraut became famous as the youngest
scientist ever to receive a Nobel Prize (W,168).
- Five feet three inches tall and weighing 126 pounds, he
relaxes by tinkering with hi-fi sets and reading murder
mysteries (W,168).