Faulty transition
Unnecessary:
(1) James went to the resort planning to stay three weeks, but he became disgusted after the first day. Consequently, he packed and went home (Ma,66).
Illogical:
(1) The College of Veterinary Medicine at Glory University is the only one in the state. Therefore, it is an excellent school (Ma,67).
(2) Mary was healthy and robust, and she was born in Cincinnati in 1916 (Ma,67).