Why use Roseland Pictures for script consulting?
2) Because I'm economical. Agents read scripts, yes, but they only sign ones that are outstanding. Professional readers know this, so they charge $300 and up for good advice. But that still won't guarantee you an agent. I can't guarantee you one either, and I'll only charge you $150 for better advice.
3) Because I'll tell you what you need to hear, not what you want to hear. Many expensive script services blow smoke at you by saying things like "This is great! And it could be even better if you do this . . . (With "this" having to do with purchasing another one of their products or services.) I'm not trying to sell you anything else, so I have no stake in making it pretty.
What do you get?
After two close reads of your screenplay, I'll provide the following critique:
4-7 pages of detailed analysis of both the strengths and weaknesses of your script. Focusing on several key areas, including:
- Character Development
- Story Structure
- Plot
- Dialogue
- Formatting
I'll give you comments written directly on the script, right at the spot where something is good or needs work. Also, you'll get a 15-minute follow-up phone consultation, with recommendations on the revision process, suggestions on marketing possibilities, and a list of films to watch so you can see how somebody else handled a similar theme.
How do you submit a script?
The fee for a feature length (75-120 pages) screenplay analysis & critique is $150.
Send your script along with a check or money order payable to Eric Player.
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Eric Player
Roseland Pictures, LLC
6152 Stanton Ave., G210
Buena Park, CA 90621
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You must include with your submission a SASE large enough to return the script & critique to you, with a minimum of $3 postage.
You must also include a copy of the Contract of Agreement, signed by you. The contract is available to be printed out from your browser if you follow the link below.
The written evaluation will be completed within two weeks of receipt of your screenplay, but please allow up to four weeks for the script to be returned to you.
Shorter scripts (less than 75 pages) will be evaluated for $100.
Longer scripts will be charged at a rate of $150, plus $2 per page over the 120 page limit.
A 3 to 5 page story synopsis will be evaluated for $75.
THE FEEDBACK WILL BE CLEAR, PRECISE, CONSTRUCTIVE, AND BRUTALLY HONEST.
Send questions or comments to playerpage.geo@yahoo.com or call (714) 732-9651.