Sojourn 36's Original Script by Robert Taylor
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We are at the ruins of Mordath's castle. Bohr and Gareth and searching through the rubble.
PANEL 1
Big panel and establishing shot. Gareth is standing while Bohr is throwing some rubble to the side. We can't see the landscape around the castle.
NARRATION BOX 1 (Gareth): The funny thing is, Arwyn started off on a simple quest for vengeance agains ta man who murdered her family.
NARRATION BOX 2 (Gareth): As she shot the final arrow, she said it was for her daughter, but in reality is was for all of Quin.
DIALOGUE BOX 1 (Bohr): If she is here, she would have been reduced to dust.
DIALOGUE BOX 2 (Gareth): Neven told me what happened in the throne room during Mordath's final moment, and she told me where to find her.
PANEL 2
Gareth throws a piece of rubble away and finds something underneath it.
NARRATION BOX 3 (Gareth): Arwyn had turned into something she never thought she would become...
NARRATION BOX 4 (Gareth):...a hero.
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Full page splash. Arwyn's body lies under that piece of rubble. She is cleaned and healed. Her clothes are neat and on top of her chest lay the bow and arrow. She has never looked more beautiful than here. Bohr and Gareth are not in the panel. It is God's POV as he looks down to thank her.
NARRATION BOX 1 (Gareth):  She changed the face of our planet.
NARRATION BOX 2 (Gareth): Our history.
NARRATION BOX 3 (Gareth): She touched my life in a way I could never have imagined.
NARRATION BOX 4 (Gareth): And brought to an end the first chapter in our sojourn.

The End.
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