Durc's Story

by Christy Crocker © 1999

You are reader number since May 1999!

[ Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 ]

[ Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 ]

[ Chapter 8 | Chapter 9 ]

New Chapter!!! [ Chapter 10 ]

Chapter 1

The Clan Gathering was over! Broud’s clan was still First. Vorn, Uba’s mate, had been chosen for the Bear Festival and had come away with hardly a scratch. The clan who came in close second to Broud’s was lead by another young man, the son of Norg’s mate, Golun. Like Broud’s clan, they had also gone through the transference of power from the older leaders to the younger. But ever since the earthquake that took the life of The Mog-ur, the greatest holy man the Clan could remember, Broud’s clan had been on shaky ground. No one in the clan would ever blame Broud for the earthquake, at least not to his face. Brun’s public scolding of Broud was burned into the memory of all who witnessed it. They would never forget.

The Gathering was very eventful, full of competitions, stories, hunts, and festivals; old friendships were renewed, and now the clans were on their way home. Years ago, after the earthquake that changed the clan’s lives, Broud found a new cave for the clan across the salt marshes, several days’ journey from the ruined cave. Though not as good in physical location as their old home, the new cave was much larger, with several other smaller caves catacombing into the mountainside.

Oga and Uba were introduced to Ura, Durc’s arranged mate, soon after they arrived at the Gathering. Although Ebra, Broud’s mother and mate to the old leader Brun, would be mother to the newcomer until she was old enough to mate Durc, she had been unable to attend the Gathering that year. She was waiting for her family back at the cave.

Uba had been looking forward to meeting the girl after so many years. Remembering the promise Ura’s mother, Oda, made to them seven years ago, Uba wondered what the child would be like. What was she like? Would she look like Durc?

As Uba, carrying her five-month-old daughter Vada, and Oga walked toward the shelter of the clan with whom Ura lived, Uba was trembling with anticipation. Oga sat down in front of Oman, leader of Ura’s clan, her head bowed respectfully. When he tapped her shoulder, she spoke, using the silent formal language of the Clan.

“This woman is looking for Ura, daughter of Oda. This woman is to take her to meet her new clan; she is to come live with us, far to the west, after the Gathering is over,” she said, not looking directly at him. “The child is to mate a boy of our clan.”

Oman grunted and turned toward a woman, motioning to her. The woman nodded her head and scurried away to do his bidding. Uba and Oga waited patiently until the woman returned with a strange-looking girl trailing behind her. That must be her! Uba thought excitedly. The girl looked afraid; as well she should. I couldn’t imagine leaving my family, she thought, clutching Vada to her breast. The disturbing thought triggered a memory of her only sister, Durc’s mother, when she was forced to leave the clan. Oga stood up and spoke to the woman. “This woman is grateful to your clan for keeping this girl with you for so long. This woman will bring her back tonight, when the sun sets.” Ura looked at Uba with brown eyes full of anguish. Uba beckoned to the girl, and followed Oga away from the low shelter.

“How will she understand us?” Uba asked Oga. “Their dialect is so different from ours. I can hardly understand them!”

Oga looked at Uba, then at Ura. “She will have to learn to talk all over again. Until then, we can speak the formal language.” She looked at Ura encouragingly. “You are welcome with us.” Ura looked relieved. She must understand us better than we understand her, Uba thought.

Durc, at seven, was beginning to show a shy interest in the opposite sex, and Ura, to him, was beautiful. She reminded him of his mother, his beautiful mother with golden hair and eyes the color of the sky, whom he lost at such a tender age. Ura looked vaguely like his mother; her hair was a lighter brown than his clan, and it had lightened in the summer sun so that it glinted with golden highlights. She was tall, too, which pleased Durc. All the women in his clan were much shorter that he was.

Over the years, under Uba’s loving care, Durc had grown into a fine young man. Childish precociousness was gently directed toward learning skills he would need as an adult. Verging on manhood, he wanted to learn everything he could about hunting. He practiced hard at every weapon, especially the sling, knowing the sling was the weapon his beloved mother had used. Over the years, Uba had told him many stories about Ayla, so many that he had no problem remembering what she looked like or how she behaved. Uba told many fascinating stories about his mother! Uba had also repeatedly warned him about Broud. Knowing the animosity Broud had toward Ayla and her son, Uba sought to protect the orphaned boy and would continue to do so until she couldn’t any longer.

During the rest of the Gathering and the trek home, Durc and Ura became more acquainted as he helped her learn his language. A true friendship began to form between them. She seemed to see things the way he did, and they had some things in common besides their “deformities.” Like Durc, Ura lost her mother at a young age. Oda had died soon after giving birth to a son, the son her mate, Zord, wanted so much. The boy survived, and they were both given to another woman who had recently borne a healthy baby girl. Ura was only four at the time, just a little older than Durc was when Ayla was killed. Her mother’s mate, who was the leader’s second, was irrational with grief and blamed Oda’s death on the deformed girl, saying she was unlucky, and that the spirits disfavored her. Ura’s life after the death of her mother, up until the time Oga and Uba came to take her away, was miserable. Her clan, believing the second-in-command, didn’t trust the girl, and felt there were unlucky spirits following her. They were happy to be rid of her.

Chapter 2

The weary clan quickened their pace as landmarks became more familiar. And there it was: home! Finally, the journey was over after a moon’s travelling.

They walked up the slope to the cave. The cave’s mouth was an almost perfect arch, having only a pointed irregularity slightly left of center. A stream ran parallel to the mouth of the cave, about 500 feet downslope, then gurgled into a large pond far enough away that the activity at the cave didn’t scare off animals who came to drink there. Durc, ever resourceful when it came to hunting, had set up a blind on the far side of the pond so he could hunt the waterfowl that came to rest there.

The mountain behind the cave rose sharply upward to a height of about 4000 feet. The region was similar to that of their old cave: temperate forest with the plains to the north, Beran Sea and mountains to the south.

Those that stayed behind, Ebra, Brun, and Grod, hurried to meet and welcome them back. Ebra walked up to the young medicine woman, who was carrying her daughter and had her three-year-old son, Korg, trailing behind on foot. The new girl followed close behind them.

“So, you must be Ura!” she exclaimed, drawing the girl near. “Welcome to your new home! You will be staying with me until you are mated. I am Ebra,” she said, leading the girl to the hearth she and Brun shared. Ura stared after Durc as he walked with his sibling to Uba and Vorn’s hearth inside the spacious cave. Ebra looked at her critically, comparing her to Ayla, and to Durc. Her head was similar-looking to Durc’s, only she had the receding chin of the clan, while Durc had a strange bony knob under his mouth. Her forehead bulges out just like Ayla’s, Ebra noticed. She and Durc are perfect for each other! She hoped they would be happy together.

“Do you need any help getting settled?” Ebra asked, wanting to make the transition as easy as possible for the strange girl.

Ura shook her head, not really sure what was expected of her, and looked nervously toward Durc’s hearth.

“Don’t worry. You will be just fine here,” Ebra said kindly, trying to make the girl feel at ease.

Ura nodded and looked relieved. “Can I do anything for you?” she asked. “I can gather wood, make food, anything you want,” she said anxiously. She so wanted to fit in and be liked! Already, things were much better than they were at her previous home. She wanted to make a good impression on her new family.

“Yes, you can gather some wood for me, and I’ll start water boiling for tea.” Ebra was glad for the company, even from this strange girl! The summer was so lonely with everyone away at the gathering.

Ura left quickly, meeting a few of the other young girls from Broud’s clan. Naga, Oga’s five-year-old daughter, was mature for her age; living with the unpredictable leader made her wise beyond her years. Dara was also five, and had inherited the open friendliness that her mother, Ika, radiated. They headed down the slope, into the forest, and started hauling deadfall for the fires.

Ebra went to visit Broud and his mate, Oga. Broud, as usual, was in a foul mood. So, what’s bothering him today? Ebra wondered. It didn’t take her long to find out.

“Did you see that deformed girl Uba brought back?” Broud asked imperiously. “Now there are two of them here! I knew that deformed brat would bring bad luck. What are the other clans going to think of us now?” He stomped around the hearth, kicking his sleeping furs.

Ebra sighed to herself. It amazed her that Broud could have this much energy after such a long journey. “Yes, of course I saw her. She’s staying with me.” She studied the fuming man. “You agreed to this mating at the last Clan Gathering, remember? Why are you having second thoughts now?”

Broud glared at Ebra. Yes, he remembered agreeing seven years ago, but he also remembered the circumstances in which he gave his assent. But it was too late now; she was here, and there was nothing he could do about it. The reality infuriated him. Well, he thought maliciously, I got even with the strange one eventually. He was confident that he could do it again.

Chapter 3

Grev and Durc, inseparable as always, followed the trail to the pond. The weather getting colder- winter was coming! That morning, Broud and Vorn had gone to the plains to scout for a hunt, and were expected back that evening. The last hunt before winter closed in on them, it was to be Brac’s manhood hunt. At twelve, the heir apparent had a lot to offer the clan. They looked forward to adding another skilled hunter to their ranks.

Arriving at the pond, Durc crouched behind the screen of cattails and long grass that sheltered his blind. This was the perfect time of year for hunting the migrating waterfowl. He hoped to bring down a few birds for fresh meat that night. He knew how much Uba loved the birds, and he was hoping to impress Ura with his hunting skill. Although Durc hadn’t had his manhood hunt yet, he was already a productive member of his family. His skill with the sling was well known throughout his clan. He thought about the next Clan Gathering, seven years away. I will be the best sling hunter the clan has ever seen! he thought to himself.

“Have you spoken to Ura?” Durc asked Grev.

“No. Broud told us to stay away from her,” he said. “Naga gathers wood with her every once and a while when Broud is gone, though. Naga said she’s nice,” Grev looked at Durc slyly. “Why?”

“I just wanted to know,” Durc evaded. “Uba says she’s quiet around the men. I wondered if you’d heard anything.” Durc hesitated. “Has Broud done anything to her, or said anything to her?”

“Not that I know of.” Grev was well aware of his mother’s mate’s dislike of his closest friend. Ever since he could remember, Durc had been the thorn in Broud’s side, but he just couldn’t fathom the reason for it. As a result, Grev did not have as close a relationship with Broud that his brother Brac did. Grev didn’t resent the favoritism, it was just the way things were. In Broud’s clan, you either accepted your position in life or learned to live with the consequences. Grev realized this when he was very young; his deep perception of everything he observed was one of the reasons why Goov chose him as an acolyte.

“But who knows?” Grev said. “I’m not around all the time, and neither are you.”

“I know. It’s just that, well, I have a… feeling. I think something bad is going to happen. Maybe not today or tomorrow, but someday soon… I don’t know,” he signed. “I just get these feelings sometimes.” He sighed inwardly. If Grev didn’t suspect anything, he had a hard time justifying his instincts.

“I wouldn’t worry too much,” Grev reassured Durc. “Everything is going so well! We were First at the Gathering, Broud seems to be in a good mood, there were no illnesses or deaths in the last year, and Brac’s manhood hunt is tomorrow, so there will be a feast and a ceremony in a few days, if they are successful.”

Durc nodded, his head full of thoughts of the future. He still couldn’t shake the feeling that something was going to happen. He sent a silent thought to his totem, the Gray Wolf, asking him to warn him of anything he might think of as dangerous or threatening, if it was possible for him to do so.

Durc froze, motioning silently to Grev. A couple of drakes had just landed within Durc’s range, and he prepared to throw his stone. Standing up slowly so as not to frighten the birds away, he whipped the stone out of the sling, hitting a duck squarely. As the other birds fled from the splash, he tried for a second bird, winding up and throwing quickly. His stone connected with the second bird in mid-flight. The other birds, startled by the movement, flew to the opposite side of the pond, away from the sudden activity.

“All I need now is a good way to get the ducks out of the pond once they’re dead,” Durc said wryly as he removed his warm outer wrap and foot coverings, preparing to swim to the floating birds. He had learned from Uba that swimming was one of the gifts he inherited from his mother. Durc had taught himself how to swim in this very pond when he was only five.

Stepping down into the pond, he took an involuntary deep breath as the shock of the coldness hit him. He shivered. “This water is cold!” he motioned. But he was used to cold water, and the pride he would see in Ura’s eyes would more than make up for the chilling dip. Grev just looked on as he made his way to the limp ducks and swam back, pulling them along with him. He took the birds from Durc as he reached the shore and helped him up onto the bank. Durc pushed the water from his naked body with his hands and put his wrap and foot coverings back on, his teeth chattering with cold. He beckoned to Grev, motioning for him to lead the way back home.

Chapter 4

The hunters and a few of the women left early the next morning, heading for the plains and the herd of aurochs Broud and Vorn had scouted the previous day. As fate would have it, the aurochs was Brac’s totem. Broud took this as an omen that things would go well.

This time Goov, the mog-ur, had stayed behind to prepare for Brac’s manhood ceremony. He hoped that everything went well during the hunt. Currently there were only four hunters, excluding Goov. Thankfully, there were several other boys on the verge of manhood and they needed Brac’s strong, young legs and brash courage in order to hunt enough meat to survive the next year.

The excitement was evident at the cave. Oga’s pride that her son was becoming a man showed in her every action. She and Ebra started a fire in the huge roasting pit located down the slope near the stream, in preparation for the meat the hunters would bring back the next day. The other women were also busy, preparing their special food dishes. Ura decided to make herself useful and made a special dish of her own, a favorite of her old clan. Wheat grains, cracked with mortar and pestle and soaked in warm water until soft, were mixed with crushed hazelnuts, fat, dried blueberries, and dried crumbled rose petals she got from Uba. Baked on hot rocks and then sprinkled with maple sugar, they made a tasty, sweet cake. The treat was somewhat different from the clan’s usual dishes, and Ura was pleased at how well they turned out. She hoped she was making a good impression on her new family. She couldn’t wait until she became a woman, mated Durc, and established a hearth of her own.

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The next morning, out on the plains, the hunters waited patiently. After the previous day’s activities, which included digging a pit trap, they were ready for the chase to begin. The men were inwardly anxious; they knew that if this hunt wasn’t successful they might be in for a difficult winter. Being gone for the majority of the summer at the Clan Gathering had limited their hunting time, and stockpiled provisions from previous years could not be kept from spoiling indefinitely.

Brac was outwardly anxious, this being his first major hunt, his manhood hunt, a hunt the clan desperately needed to succeed to make sure they would survive the long, cold winter. Of course, Brac had killed many small animals, but this was his first time stalking an animal that was at least five times the weight of the biggest man in the clan. In addition to the burden of this being his manhood hunt, he was also hunting the embodiment of his totem. It was a little intimidating, and he was feeling the pressure.

The herd moved slowly, travelling northeast past the waiting men, toward a small river with steep banks. Broud waited impatiently for them to move into a good position. The pit trap was located between his hunters, who were hidden in the long grass in front of a small stand of trees, and the river, in the hopes that the herd might move in the same direction. His predictions were right; the aurochs were slowly grazing their way towards the river, towards the trap. They were almost in position.

Broud signaled his men to get ready. He waited another few minutes, then gave another signal. The chase was on! Broud jumped out of the long grass, waving a club and yelling at the top of his lungs. The huge cattle-like beasts all raised their heads in unison, the bull bellowing an alarm. They were on the move! The other men fanned out along the rear of the herd, waving their arms and yelling, trying to herd the aurochs toward the pit. Running, yelling, screaming, the men chased the animals toward the river where the leading edge of the herd had just leaped down the high bank into the rushing water. The cattle ran in panic, blindly trying to escape the crazed men. The large beasts were stampeding toward the trap, but they were not agile enough to jump over the hole. One beast was sure to fall into the trap. All they needed was one!

They followed the rear of the herd over to the pit to find a young female trapped inside, struggling to get to her feet, her right foreleg broken. The men yelled and screamed, this time in triumph. It worked!

Broud motioned for Brac to come to the side of the pit. “This kill is yours,” he signed, still breathing hard. Brac went and retrieved his spear from the hiding place where the hunters had stashed them before the chase began. He walked back to the pit, his heart pounding. This was it! All he had to do was kill the beast, and he would be a man, destined to be leader of these hunters. The import of it all suddenly struck him, and he stumbled, nearly falling. He looked around at the other men, embarrassed, hoping no one saw him.

He aimed carefully at the plunging neck, hoping to hit the large vessel cleanly. This being his totem, he didn’t want to make the aurochs suffer any more than was necessary. He lunged back and stabbed, striking a solid blow deep into the neck. The cow jerked in reflex, bellowing, and struggled to get away from the pain. Brac pulled the spear back, expecting it to come loose right away, and pulled again, and pulled even harder, putting his entire weight into it, but still he was unable to dislodge the spear. He glanced around at the amused looks of the hunters. They had seen this before-- the wound sometimes held so fast to the weapon that it took two men to dislodge it. Broud took hold of the spear behind Brac, and together they pulled as hard as they could. With a sucking noise and a spray of bright red blood, the spear finally came loose. The cow collapsed into the bottom of the pit, no longer struggling.

Brac was stunned. He stood there next to the dying aurochs, watching the cow’s blood drain away into the dirt. He didn’t realize before how susceptible he and these men were. A simple stab wound to the neck and the aurochs was dead! The cow was so huge it dwarfed him, the herd had outnumbered the hunters by at least a hundred to one, yet they managed to trap and kill this mighty beast. His great totem, the one he prayed to on a daily basis, was brought down by one thrust of his fire-hardened spear. The realization of his vulnerability shook him to his core. He didn’t notice when the other men left the side of the pit.

The hoarse men, tired but exhilarated, followed the path of churned-up soil to the river, hoping to find a few young stragglers trapped in the river, unable to climb up the steep banks to safety. Sure enough, two small calves were bleating for help, trying in vain to climb their way up the bank while being swept quickly downriver. Broud waved the men over, telling Borg and Vorn to run down to the bend in the river a few hundred yards downstream. The steep bank receded into a sandy beach there, and the hunters would be able to kill the calves as they came out of the water, wet and tired from the effort of fighting the current. The three animals would provide the clan with plenty of meat, enough meat to last the long winter and well into spring. They would not go hungry!

Broud, coming back to the pit trap, jumped into the hole and opened up the belly of the young cow, removing the liver and cutting it into pieces for his men. He gave the first slice to Brac, the son of his mate, the future leader of this clan. He was proud to share this first taste of manhood with him.

Chapter 5

Mid-afternoon that same day, the men and women returned from the victorious hunt. They trudged up the slope to the cave, burdened with heavy baskets of fresh aurochs meat. After the chase and subsequent killing of the three animals, the men had lead the waiting women to the pit where they proceeded to skin the cow and two calves, cutting the meat into manageable pieces for the journey back. There was so much meat that the men had to help the women carry it all.

Oga and Uba, who had stayed behind with the other women and children, took the baskets of meat from the men, unpacking them and choosing the best pieces to be cooked for the manhood feast that night. When the men had settled around their respective fires with soothing cups of tea in their hands, the women got to work cutting the remaining meat into strips for drying. Lighting several smoky fires with a coal from Ebra’s hearth, Ura helped the women string the meat up on racks around the front entrance of the cave.

After that messy but necessary job was finished, the women went down to the stream to wash the blood and dirt from their hands, then got everything ready for the feast. Last minute food preparations were finished, plates, cups, and bowls were set out, and dirty wraps were replaced with clean, fresh ones. Brac walked to the platters of aurochs meat, choosing the best slice, and proceeded to the rest of the dishes, signaling the beginning of the feasting. The rest of the clan followed in order of rank, each person taking a sampling of everything. Uba commented to Ura on her dish, asking how it was made. To Ura’s surprise, the hungry clan ate all of her special cakes, making her feel welcome. Uba was impressed with the girl’s ability. She seemed young to have a woman’s skills.

As the sun set upon the hills, Broud motioned the clan out of the cave. The ceremony was about to begin!

Goov stepped out of the ceremonial cave where he had been meditating and calling the totem spirits’ attention. This simple ceremony was more important than usual tonight; this boy was going to be leader someday. Goov wanted to make sure nothing went wrong.

He walked into the firelight, Grev, his acolyte, standing next to him. Goov was cloaked in the fur of the great cave bear, his face painted red with ochre, and Grev carried a bowl filled with black salve made with cave bear fat and the antiseptic ashes from the wood of the ash tree. Together, they stood behind the standing men who already encircled the fire. Brac lead the group in an intricate dance, reenacting the chase for the other members of the clan and infecting the younger boys with the excitement of the hunt.

Brac crouched, leaped and yelled, eyes half-closed, seeing not the fire and the people surrounding it but the stampeding cattle, smelling the dust in his nostrils, tasting the fresh, raw liver, feeling the blood pounding in his ears as he chased the panicked aurochs, and stabbed with an imaginary spear into the neck of the dying beast. It was magnificent! The entire clan breathed with his every breath, moved with his every lunge, seeing the hunt through his movements as if they were really there.

Brac’s final cry of victory faded as he turned to face the mog-ur. Goov motioned to the spirits, asking for their attention with fluid, silent movements. He reached into a fold of his wrap, pulling out the ceremonial knife with which he was to carve the symbol of Brac’s totem, the aurochs, into the boy’s flesh. He made one careful cut, then a second, on Brac’s chest in the shape of the curving horn of the aurochs. Reaching into the bowl Grev held, Goov smeared the antiseptic salve into the wound, creating a black mark for everyone to see, proclaiming his manhood to all.

Chapter 6

The long winter was monotonously uneventful. There were no illnesses, no children were born, and the snowstorms were not as severe as they had been in past years. Durc and Ura continued to get to know one another and their friendship grew into a true fondness. Being around the medicine woman so often, Ura became fascinated with the healing arts. Uba, appreciating her interest, taught her some of the special healing knowledge to help pass the time throughout the long, cold winter. She wouldn’t be teaching her own daughter for several years, and it wouldn’t hurt the clan to have someone else with knowledge of what to do in a medical emergency. The training also assisted the medicine woman; during Ura’s training, going through treatments and illnesses, herbal mixtures, teas, infusions, decoctions and poultices with the girl kept Uba’s skills sharpened. When, after several months of teaching, Ura started to show real talent for it, Uba went to her mate, Vorn, and asked him if she could train her in earnest. Vorn, who helped Uba raise Durc since Ayla left, felt sympathy for the deformed boy and therefore felt a similar kindness toward the strange girl. He told his mate that it didn’t matter to him, it was her decision. Uba, knowing Vorn wouldn’t interfere, continued the training without Broud’s knowledge throughout the rest of the winter. Uba thought the skills might come in handy for the girl someday.

That following spring, Uba often left her son Korg with the other women and took Ura and her young daughter, Vada, out to gather the fresh plants used for the healing magic. The two enjoyed the outings together. It allowed them to get away from the demanding presence of the men, and also let them speak freely of Ura’s past, and Durc’s mother. Ura was very curious about Ayla because she was one of the Others, and her old clan had been afraid of them. Uba was the only person who would speak about Ayla, except Durc, and she would speak of her only in private. Ura learned many things about Ayla that Durc either didn’t know or couldn’t remember.

The first hunt of spring went well and the hunters brought back fresh meat for the spring ceremony, where Brac, son of Oga and the future leader, and Igra, daughter of Ika, were mated. Summer promised to be bountiful, and the women were busy gathering spring plants to supplement the lean meat. The men went out daily to the practice field, and life went on as usual.

As spring progressed into summer, Uba continued Ura’s training, showing her how to dry the healing herbs properly and other ways of preparing the different plants. Their almost-daily excursions out into the forest and meadows around the cave were very educational for them both. Uba found the girl amazingly intelligent and she caught on quickly to instruction, soaking up the knowledge like a dry sea sponge, always asking for more. It seemed as though Ura had been waiting so long for someone to take an interest in her, and when Uba finally did, she couldn’t get enough.

Durc went with the men to the practice fields every day the men weren’t hunting, and Brun, the old leader, trained him in the various hunting skills. Since he had mastered the sling at such an early age, Brun decided to teach him how to use the bola next. Brun prided himself on his skill with the difficult weapon, but the throwing techniques were similar to those used with the sling and the old leader thought Durc would be able to master it quickly. The spear, which is the main hunting weapon of the hunters, took more strength to wield but significantly less skill and accuracy. Since Durc inherited his mother’s straighter limbs, which allowed the more free-swinging arm movements required for both the sling and bola, he far surpassed the skill of the other clan men when it came to throwing weapons. Brun knew there was something special about Durc, and he trained him differently than the other men he had trained before. In his own way, he tried to do his best for him, not only because of his promise to Ayla but because deep down inside, he knew Durc was unique. He just couldn’t put his finger on exactly what made him different.

When the men were out on the plains hunting, Durc and Ura would arrange to meet secretly and they would walk to the pond and talk of their future together. Sometimes Grev would join them when his acolyte duties didn’t interfere. Durc also began teaching Ura how to swim. Her old clan, like Durc’s, had a fear of water which they impressed on her, but she managed to overcome her anxieties with Durc’s encouragement. They soon were frolicking in the water together, splashing each other and having a good time, much to Grev’s amusement.

Chapter 7

The summer of her tenth year, while harvesting sun-ripened grains with the other members of the clan, Ura became a woman. She was excited-- she knew this was just the beginning of her future as a woman of the clan. Finally, she was coming into her own. Soon she would be mated to Durc and have a hearth of her own inside the spacious cave.

Although she would never be acknowledged as a medicine woman by the clan, over the years she had learned a significant amount of skills from Uba; enough skills to actually become a member of the select group. Broud eventually found out about Ura’s training and soon after, although he was not pleased about it, Ura began assisting Uba with colds, coughs, and other minor ailments the clan routinely suffered. She also learned from the medicine woman how to treat Brun’s arthritis, which especially troubled him in wintertime. Watching Ura treat Brun’s aches the way Ayla used to treat Creb made Uba’s heart ache, missing them both so much.

During the required isolation period, Ura camped out, alone, near the pond where she and Durc spent so many summer days together. It was a relaxing time for her, out from underneath the watchful eyes of the men, and both Uba and Ebra came to visit her every day. She kept a fire going to ward off any predators and slept underneath the stars during the short summer nights. During the daytime, she would take a morning swim in the pond before spending the afternoons gathering healing plants. Uba, who was pregnant again, explained to her those things she needed to know as a fully functioning woman of the clan. As a gift to the new young woman, she presented Ura with an otter skin medicine bag.

That summer Brun stepped up the pace of his training of Durc, knowing that before long he and Ura must mate and settle down together. He preferred to have the matter settled while he was still alive, and he knew he wasn’t getting any younger. Durc, almost eleven years, was fully capable of caring for a mate and any child she might bring to his hearth. Brun made a vow to himself that he would try to subtly encourage Broud to have Durc’s manhood hunt by the end of the summer.

Meanwhile, the rest of the clan was thriving. Brac’s mate, Igra, was pregnant and due to give birth any day. Uba was healthy in the second trimester of her third pregnancy. Groob, the toolmaker, had a successful manhood hunt, which raised the number of available hunters to six.

As a woman of the clan with significant healing skills, Ura was often taken along to hunts out on the plains. She didn’t enjoy the trips because of the forced proximity to Broud. He never actually did anything to her, but the sensitive girl was well aware of his intense dislike.

A few days after Igra gave birth to a healthy baby girl, Broud took the men out for Grev’s manhood hunt. If the hunt was successful, the manhood ceremony would coincide with the baby’s naming day. Broud and Vorn scouted, tracked, and then chased a herd of onagers to the same pit trap near the river where Brac had had his manhood hunt several years before. Because of the astounding success of past hunts, the pit had been continually re-dug and re-used throughout the years.

The naming ceremony was held at dawn on the seventh day after the baby’s birth, and the manhood ceremony was later that night. Grev danced the hunt dance and stood stoic and unmoving for the clan’s ritual scarification that transported him to the rank of man.

As summer drew to a close and the leaves started falling from the trees, Brun still had not succeeded in convincing Broud to have a manhood hunt for Durc.

Chapter 8

Early the next summer, the men went out to the plains for the first large hunt of the season. From a vantage point above the plains, Broud had spotted a herd of bison moving toward his pit trap. He wanted to take advantage of the prime situation and arranged a hunt for the next morning.

The men, with a few of the women to help carry back the proceeds of the hunt, left the cave at daybreak and went to the familiar site. Leaving the women at the campsite, the men dug out the extra dirt that partially filled the old pit trap, then positioned themselves in the small stand of trees located near the trap. They settled down to wait for the bison to move their way.

Unbeknownst to the hunters, a pack of hungry gray wolves were also hunting the bison just out of sight from the men. Spreading out along the far side of the large herd, they stalked the massive animals. Carefully choosing a particularly weak-looking young calf, they made their charge! The bison, knowing instinctually that one of their own was in danger, stampeded erratically-- directly toward the clan men camouflaged in the stand of trees.

The hunters, startled and knowing they would be unable to outrun the crazed beasts, darted for whatever meager shelter they could find. Brac, cut off from the rest of the group by the charging bison, fled on swift feet toward the steep riverbank. But before he could get there, the panicked herd was upon him!

When the thundering sound of galloping hooves had quieted and the dust settled, the men climbed out from their respective shelters and gathered together. Noticing that Brac hadn’t emerged from whatever safe haven he had found, Broud jumped into a large willow tree near the river to look around. Spotting him, unmoving, near the bank of the river, Broud rushed to his side, the rest of the men following behind the leader. Brac lay there quietly, his body bruised and broken, mere feet from the safety of a large boulder.

Broud kneeled next to Brac, pulling on his arm, trying to get him to wake up, shouting his name over and over, his anguish apparent in every line of his face. The young man groaned in response but did not move, did not wake up. Broud sent Vorn back to the campsite for the women, his abrupt motions adding impetus to his words. Luckily for Brac, this time they had brought Ura with them to help carry back the bison meat. Now she would help carry back something much more precious.

Vorn came running into the campsite, motioning frantically. “Ura, you must come now! Brac is injured!” he said, eyes wide with fear.

She immediately got up and quickly gathered her medicine bag and bowls together, packing them into a basket and slinging it to her back. She and Vorn set off toward the hunting site, moving quickly. The rest of the women packed up the camp and followed as fast as they could.

“Vorn, what happened to Brac?” she asked, wanting to get as much information as she could before they arrived at the accident scene.

“There was a stampede and he got trapped in front of the bison. We think he was trampled, but I don’t know how badly he is hurt,” he cried. He knew this was a desperate situation. The rest of the journey back to the pit trap was made in silence, the tension screaming.

When she got to the men, who were clustered around the prone body of the future leader, only a little time had passed. Grev, Brac’s brother and the future mog-ur, sat next to him. He was motioning in the silent formal language, pleading with the totem spirits, asking for their assistance in making him well. Ura knew Brac’s best chance for survival lay in getting him stabilized as quickly as possible and transported back to the cave, where both she and Uba could work on him. She knew her healing skills were not enough to save him out here in the middle of nowhere.

She pushed her way through the knot of people, kneeling at his side like Broud had done. She felt for a pulse in his neck and found it, throbbing weakly but regularly. Next, she checked to make sure he was still breathing, putting her ear close to his nose and mouth. Feeling as well as hearing the shallow breaths, she knew he still lived, but also knew his hold onto this world was thin at best.

She straightened his body, feeling each bone for fractures, and knew his injuries were much more serious than they looked. On the outside, he looked only bruised and scraped from being tossed along the ground by hard hooves, but underneath the bruised skin he was an assortment of broken bones. His right hand was crushed and swollen completely out of proportion, looking almost like a baseball mitt. There was a large purple swollen bruise on his temple, and she wondered that his skull wasn’t crushed as well. He had a large hoof-shaped indentation on his right side where he’d been kicked, and there were several broken ribs and possibly a punctured lung. His left leg was obviously fractured at the femur and it lay at an awkward angle. She moved him carefully, trying not to do more damage to his already broken body. There were so many things wrong with him, she hardly knew where to start!

She sat back, took a deep breath, and glanced over at Grev who sat opposite her next to Brac, still talking silently to the spirits. His familiar presence was reassuring, and she looked back at her patient with new purpose. She rummaged in her medicine bag for datura, wanting to sedate him for the journey back to the cave. It was going to be rough for him, and she wanted him to be as comfortable as possible.

After force-feeding him the sedative, she looked around, trying to think of the best way to get him back to the cave. Thinking hard, she spied the long, pointed spears held by the men and was inspired! She visualized a contraption that would transport Brac back to the cave with a minimum of effort on the part of the men. She hurriedly gathered up the women’s extra hides, originally brought along to ease the chafing of heavy baskets of meat. Ignoring the protests of the men, she grabbed two of the fire-hardened spears. Binding the hides hammock-like between the two spears with long lengths of thong, she quickly created a sling for carrying the injured man. After carefully maneuvering his drugged body onto the soft hides, she loosely tied him so he would not slide off.

Ignoring the scowling look Broud gave her, she motioned to Grev and Groob. “Come here and hold these ends up.” They nodded in understanding. “You drag it like this,” she motioned, showing them how to drag the travois over the ground. “It’s the fastest way we can get him back to the cave, where I can treat him better.”

The excursion back to the cave was an ordeal not only for the injured man, but also for Ura. Unsure if the constant movement was causing more damage, she made the men stop often so she could check his pulse and breathing. He seemed to be holding his own, although he never regained consciousness.

The men traded off dragging the travois along the uneven ground. The hardest part was when they started the gradual uphill climb toward the cave. As the cave’s opening came into sight, they quickened their step, knowing that in a few more paces they could finally take a much-needed rest.

Ura ran ahead to get Uba, telling her in quick, abrupt motions what had happened. The medicine woman hurried to the injured man, ordering Ura to start water boiling. Oga, hearing the commotion outside, emerged from the cave to the sight of her son’s battered body being eased off the leather sling. During the long trip, his bruises had blossomed to the color of ripe plums. She gasped in horror at the sight and stared at Broud’s anguished face. The leader had spent the journey close to Brac’s side, his eyes never leaving the man’s face, afraid that if he looked away for a moment Brac would die.

Uba worked over Brac feverishly throughout the rest of the day and on into the long night. Goov came and went from the young man’s bedside frequently while she labored, talking constantly to the spirits that the clan held in such high esteem. Broud paced outside the cave, coming in to visit only when he couldn’t stand it any longer. The entire clan avoided him and walked silently around the area he moved so restlessly in, not wanting to be the recipient of any frustrated anger. Oga could hardly stand to look at him because his face was so full of a mixture of fear, anger, and grief. However, looking at Brac was worse. Her baby! Her son. She couldn’t imagine life without him. She bemoaned to herself, thinking dismally, what would happen to them? What would happen to the clan?

When the sun rose in the first light of morning, Uba came out of the cave, looking for Broud. She knew that her news was not good and she was hesitant about confronting Broud with it, but she had no choice. He had a right to know what was happening with the son of his mate, the clan’s future leader.

She knelt down in front of Broud’s restless feet, head bowed. He stopped and looked down at her, composing his features. The rest of the clan gathered nearby, watching the two out of the corners of their eyes, not wanting to miss anything but not ready to risk Broud’s anger. Broud tapped Uba’s shoulder.

She looked up at him, her eyes full of sorrow. “This woman is grieved to report that Brac is not well. This woman has used all the skills she has as a medicine woman, but he still does not wake up.” Broud flinched, as though he were the one who was injured. Uba noticed the movement, and paused. When she saw that he had regained his composure, she continued. “This woman must wait until he regains consciousness before she knows more.”

Broud looked up at the rising sun, staring blindly at it. He blinked, hard, as if to rid himself of some distasteful vision, then shook himself. He looked back down at the medicine woman and motioned abruptly, “Very well.” He turned an about-face and stalked off down the slope, not looking at anyone, not speaking to anyone. He needed to be alone with his thoughts.

Oga rushed to Uba’s side, wanting to know details. Uba explained that Brac had sustained an injury to the side of his head, his leg, and his hand. The crushed ribcage was especially worrying to the medicine woman. There was not much she could do about internal bleeding, but she had repaired his other broken bones as best she could. All they could do was wait and see. What she didn’t tell Oga was that if Brac didn’t wake up soon, he probably wouldn’t wake up at all.

Goov, knowing instinctually the seriousness of the clan’s situation, went to seek out Broud and discuss possible alternatives to Brac’s leadership. Grev was the natural and obvious choice, but Grev couldn’t be leader and mog-ur at the same time. Another man would have to be chosen as acolyte, and Goov knew Broud wouldn’t like his choice. He would have to convince Broud that his choice was the best thing for the clan. It would not be easy.


Chapter 9

After many days of fighting the spirits, Brac’s totem, the Aurochs, finally won the battle and took with him the spirit of Brac to the next world. His leaving was peaceful; he merely slipped from his deep sleep into the deeper sleep of death.

The clan was reeling with the impact of the future leader’s death. Never before had things been so disorganized! Hunts were postponed and the women were reduced to doing mundane tasks to fill the empty time. Broud’s temper would flare at the slightest insult, be it actual or imagined. Everyone in the clan, most especially Durc and Ura, learned to avoid him whenever possible.

No one was more devastated by Brac’s death than Igra, his mate. They had been a happy young couple, full of life, and had been very fond of each other. Despite Brac’s close relationship with the volatile Broud, he had been a gentle man with deep feelings and compassion. He would have been an excellent leader, which made his loss felt all the more deeply. Igra couldn’t imagine life without Brac, yet she knew she would be given to another man. She couldn’t live at her mother’s hearth for the rest of her life! She needed a man to support her and her newborn daughter. And the clan, after reflecting on this huge disaster, had heaved a silent sigh of relief that Igra’s child was a girl.

After much discussion between Broud, Goov and Vorn, the clan’s second in command, Grev was promoted to the rank of heir apparent. With Igra having birthed a daughter and not a son, at least there wouldn’t be any question about who would succeed Grev: the son of Grev’s mate would be the next leader. However, the decision of who to replace Grev as acolyte was still unresolved. Broud wanted a younger boy to step into the acolyte’s empty position, but Goov kept pushing for Durc. He knew there was a battle ahead of him, for he and Broud had discussed this very same subject years before, after the leadership had been turned over to them and the time had come to choose another acolyte. Durc had already shown some promise and was Goov’s first choice, but Broud adamantly refused to even consider him, stating that the boy was most likely retarded. He questioned whether or not Durc would be able to learn all the necessary ceremonies and complete the extensive training. Goov, knowing of Broud’s dislike of Durc, decided not to press the issue and suggested Grev instead. He, like his best friend, showed some promise as a future mog-ur, and Goov was satisfied with his second choice. Now they were in the same situation as they were several years previously, but this time Goov was going to argue his points and do his best to win this one fight with Broud. For once in his life, he wanted to do something because he knew it was right, not because he had to. Goov was looking out for the best interests of the clan even if Broud, with his blind spot in regards to Durc, wasn’t.

“What about Korg, Uba’s son?” Broud was speaking to the men, who had gathered to discuss the situation. “He is old enough to hold the responsibilities of acolyte. The training needs to be started when they are young,” he stated matter-of-factly.

Goov shook his head, a pained expression on his face. Goov knew that there wasn’t much time to train a new mog-ur before he died. Both he and Broud were approaching 30, and he could feel himself slowing down physically, if not mentally. He figured Broud had similar feelings, though it was doubtful Broud would ever admit it. The time was fast approaching when leader and magician would pass their power over to the next generation. Goov wanted to be comfortable in his retirement, and all that rested with the choices they made now, here, today!

Goov motioned slowly yet firmly, as if to a young child, his every movement and nuance speaking much more eloquently than his words. “No, Korg is too young, only a few years past his weaning year. An older boy will learn faster and be more dedicated. We don’t have many years left in us, Broud,” he said, his eyes pleading with the leader. “You know I favor Durc. He is the best candidate: he is intelligent and will learn the duties and ceremonies quickly. Surely you must see that he isn’t retarded, or even slow. He hunts as well as any man. He is old enough to have his manhood hunt if you would just allow it.”

“Well then, what about Groob? He is older and should learn as quickly,” Broud motioned, ignoring any mention of Durc, as was his habit in regards to anything pertaining to the young man.

Goov shook his head quickly in the negative. “Since Droog left us to walk in the next world, Groob is the clan’s toolmaker. He can’t take on the duties of mog-ur on top of those of toolmaker. And he will be mated with Igra soon, and Igra has her infant daughter, Umbra. He will be too busy with the duties of toolmaker and man of his hearth to be my acolyte.” Goov felt his frustration deeply; he just wished Broud weren’t so hardheaded! Goov jumped to his feet, pacing back and forth in front of the men. “There isn’t anyone else, Broud! The other boys are only babies. There is no one who can do the job. Except Durc!” The men were surprised; they had never seen the usually reticent mog-ur so agitated. Goov spoke passionately to Broud.

“And what about Ura? She is a woman now. She is ready for a man, ready for children and ready to tend a hearth of her own. Durc will be a good mate for her, and he will be a good mog-ur if you would just give him a chance.” He narrowed his eyes, looking directly at Broud. “Ura needs to be mated, and she needs to have a man’s protection. Brun agreed to the match between them at the gathering those many years ago, and so did you! If Durc doesn’t have his manhood hunt soon, she will have to be given to someone else. You know that as the leader you are responsible for her. If you refuse to let Durc become a man and take Ura as his mate, you will have to take her as your second mate, Broud.”

Goov was still looking directly at Broud, his eyes prying and hawklike, piercing Broud to his soul. It made the leader realize, with some surprise, how much power the mog-ur actually held. He hadn’t really thought of Goov as a powerful mog-ur, for he wasn’t, by far, as powerful as The Mog-ur had been, but there was a certain aura of mysticism amongst all mog-urs that Broud couldn’t duplicate, no matter how hard he tried. Until this very moment, Broud hadn’t been aware of how determined Goov really was. It made him all the more determined to make someone else, anyone else, the new acolyte, no matter who it was! He would never allow Durc, that deformed spawn of his nemesis, to hold that much power in his clan. Never! His face clouded with anger. How dare he speak to me this way, he thought. I am the leader!

He looked coldly at Goov, his face stony with rage. “I am the leader, Goov. I know my duty! But I refuse to acknowledge Durc as a man, just as I refuse to acknowledge Ura as a woman. They are not part of my clan and never will be! And there is no way I will ever take that deformed woman into my hearth! I will curse her first!”

Goov’s eyes widened with surprise at Broud’s words. He would put the clan into danger, again, just for his own means! I will not allow that! “I will refuse to curse her, Broud. She is an innocent girl and has done nothing wrong!” he said calmly, but inwardly he was seething. I won’t curse an innocent woman again! he thought, amazed at himself for this deliberate act of defiance. What can he possibly do to me? Goov contemplated apprehensively. He certainly can’t curse me; I’m the only one who knows how to lay out the bones and summon the spirits. He can force me to leave, but who will be his mog-ur then? It would take several moons to find a mog-ur who would be willing to come all the way here from another cave.

Broud’s face was flushed with fury. “How dare you defy me! I am your leader and you will do as I say! If I tell you to curse her, you will curse her!”

“What happens then, Broud? Will you have me curse Durc as well? He would not let me send Ura to the next world alone; he would insist on going with her, to protect her. And what about the son of your mate? Grev will no doubt be very angry if you curse Durc, for they are like brothers, and Grev is going to be the next leader. Would you have me curse him, too, so he won’t try to stop you? Oga wouldn’t allow you to do that. Who else, Broud? Who else would you have me get rid of for you? Only I can carry out the curse, no matter how many times you command it!”

The men were shifting uncomfortably, watching the two men arguing stubbornly with each other. They had never seen anything like this before in their whole lives, and probably never would again. Goov, the mog-ur, was also a friendly, gentle man, and had gained the respect of his peers through kindness. Broud, however, commanded a different kind of respect, demanding ultimate obedience and unswerving loyalty from his men. To see the two men fighting over this, the status of a child, was beyond their comprehension. This battle between leader and mog-ur was causing concern among the men, but there didn’t seem to be a solution to the matter. Both men had power, albeit different kinds of power, and one of them would have to yield.

Broud sat there, fuming, knowing that anything else he said in his defense would make him look worse than the picture Goov had already painted of him. He stood up slowly, not looking directly at any of the men seated around him. He motioned slowly, “I can see that this situation is not going to be resolved today. Let us all think on it, and we will meet back here in the morning.”

The next morning, however, several of the men were missing, including Durc, Goov and Brun. Goov decided to take matters into his own hands and confided in the old leader, hoping Brun would help him. Brun was happy to do anything he could for Durc. After all, he did promise the boy's mother.

Chapter 10

Goov and Brun sat in the shade of an old oak tree, discussing their situation. They knew that the position they had placed themselves in was precarious at best. They needed to organize the hunt, make a kill, and return to the cave as quickly as possible. The women who had accompanied them had packed enough food for several days and they were well enough into the gathering season to be able to collect enough fresh vegetables to round out the lean meals, but they couldn’t stay out on the plains indefinitely.

Brun was feeling very alive! After so many years of inactivity, being out on the plains revived him, bringing back the days when he led the clan. He and Goov were discussing the hunt, a manhood hunt for Durc. He, Goov and Vorn, along with Grev and Durc, should have no difficulty bringing down an animal worthy of the Gray Wolf, Durc’s totem. After the successful hunt, while still alone out on the plains, Goov would perform the manhood ceremony with Grev acting as acolyte. After Durc became a man, he and Ura would be free to mate. If forced, Goov and Brun would also perform the mating ceremony in secret, at a later date. After all, Durc and Ura were meant to be together. To Brun, it seemed cruel to keep them apart.

Goov knew Broud would not send anyone after them, which was one reason why he risked sneaking away. Broud couldn’t leave the cave unguarded, nor would he search for the runaways by himself. Goov and Brun were free to hold the hunt and perform the manhood ceremony alone, without fear of being discovered. Now all that remained was to find a good herd that was in the right place at the right time.

Grev and Durc were out scouting the surrounding area. They both decided together that they didn’t want to use the old pit trap. Not only was it too risky, just in case Broud did decide to send a party after them, but Durc remembered stories from when he was a child about exciting chases and more traditional kills. He wanted his manhood hunt to be special.

Climbing to the top of a small bluff, Durc and Grev looked around, the added advantage of the height allowing them to survey a large area surrounding the bluff. They noticed a medium-sized herd of grazing beasts coming in their direction. The herd was too far away for them to be able to clearly recognize exactly what kind of beast they were, but they were moving in the right direction and would be in their immediate vicinity in a day or so, ripe for the hunting.

They headed back to the campsite, excited that it was finally going to happen! Hunts were always exciting; that it was Durc’s manhood hunt made it all the more thrilling, especially for Durc himself. He was finally going to be a man! Uba would be so proud!

The next morning, the men and Durc hiked back to the bluff, climbing to the top to scout the herd. They were still moving in the appropriate direction, almost directly toward the clan campsite. The next morning they would be in an excellent position for a hunt. The hunters sat down to enjoy the warm, sunny weather, the waiting made easier by companionship. Brun, Vorn and Durc discussed and planned the hunt while Goov and Grev planned the manhood ceremony that would be held the next night, if the hunt was successful, of course. Not once did anyone mention Broud or the fact that they were all openly defying the leader. Nor did they discuss the repercussions of them leaving and performing this manhood hunt and ceremony without the permission of the leader.

When the sun started to lower towards the horizon, they headed back to the campsite to prepare for the following days’ hunt. Durc, turning to take one last look from the top of the bluff, made a silent plea to his totem. Spirit of Gray Wolf, please make this hunt lucky. With Brun, Goov, Vorn and Grev as my pack, we will not fail you. I promise. Taking one last long look at the herd, he turned and followed the men who were headed back down the slope.

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The men hunkered down in the grass, watching the herd of horses as they passed within a few hundred paces of where they lay, their human scent masked by the horse dung they had rubbed on their bodies. The women sat nearby, completely hidden in the tall grass, patiently waiting for the hunt to end so they could prepare the meat for cooking and drying. Brun scrutinized the slowly moving animals, waiting for the right moment when the hunters could begin their attack. They didn’t need a large animal, or more than one animal for that matter, but Brun wanted this particular hunt to be memorable for Durc. Not as if this, his manhood hunt, would ever be forgotten by the boy! But even so, Brun felt he owed it to Durc, as well as to Ayla.

After the herd had almost completely passed them, the perfect opportunity finally arose. A young female, her coat the color of dry grass, came towards them, seeking the tender shoots among the tall grass. As she continued to separate herself from the herd, Brun gave the signal for them to get ready. The men, alert and ready to go, quietly gathered up spears and slowly got to their feet, watching the horse move past them, grazing all the while, her ears flicking back and forth.

Brun gave the men another signal, a quick movement of the hand: it was time! Trying not to alert the horse to his presence, Durc moved slowly through the grass, trying to get around the animal. As she began to move back towards the herd, he made his leap! Coming out of the concealing grasses with a primal yell, he surprised the young female into rearing, exposing her vulnerable underside! Taking the opportunity, he jumped to the side, avoiding the flailing hooves, and lunged! His spear pierced her soft belly, the fire-hardened tip ripping a jagged hole in her abdomen, causing her intestines to spill out onto the ground underneath her as she came down. Screaming in pain and in fright, she ran toward the herd, Durc’s spear falling to the hard earth with a clatter.

Goov sprang out of the grass, running after the panicked, injured beast. She was bleeding heavily and her hard hooves were trampling her trailing intestines. Goov caught up with her easily, prodding at her with his spear, chasing her back towards the tall grass and the men concealed there. Durc stood watching, panting slightly with adrenaline and excitement. The horse, eyes rolling frantically, ran up and past the gathered men, trying to run away from the pain in her belly. Grev took his turn chasing the injured beast but it was obvious to the men that she wasn’t going to last much longer. She was bleeding too heavily from Durc’s stomach wound.

Grev drove the mare, easing her closer to the men with each circle. Finally, she stood still near the gathered men, her head hanging between her legs, blood dripping from her gaping underbelly. Durc approached the exhausted animal, spear in hand, watching her sway with the effort of staying upright. He drew back and let loose a mighty lunge, sliding the spear between her ribs to her heart. The injured mare let out a squeal, her head jerking up despite her exhaustion, a gush of bright red blood coming from her nostrils as she sank slowly to the ground, heaving with the effort to breathe. Durc took his knife and pulled her head up to expose her throat. In one quick, humane motion, he slit her throat and relieved her of all pain.

The men gathered around the fallen horse, thanking their totem spirits for such a lucky hunt. Brun knelt next to the mare and enlarged the belly wound. Reaching into the cavity, he cut out a piece of liver and removed it, then cut it into smaller pieces for the men. He spoke for everyone when he said to the gathered men, “We now have among us a great hunter, one to be proud of.” It was Durc’s first taste of manhood, in more ways than one. He now knew that he could take care of himself and his mate under any circumstances. It was a great moment for him, a great victory. He had finally come into his own, despite all the obstacles.

The women were called to the side of the dead horse, where they quickly started fires and gutted the animal. Luckily, there was a stream close by where they could wash the remains of the intestines, the stomach, and the bladder. Preparing a pit for roasting, Uba seasoned a fresh rump roast and the tongue for the manhood celebration that night. The other women were kept busy cutting up the rest of the meat for drying and gathering fresh plants for the feast. Since there wasn’t much time, the women were unable to prepare a lot of the special dishes that would usually be present at a manhood feast. But these were unusual circumstances and just eating the meat of the young man’s kill would be satisfactory to the totem spirits.

Ura, knowing the power of a man’s first kill, took the head of the mare aside and managed to pry out one of the horse’s teeth without damaging it. She planned on giving it to Durc as a reminder of this special day. Now that he was a man, she knew it wouldn’t be long before she was his mate. Ura looked forward to their mating more and more with each passing day. She knew her life would be different the moment she and Durc mated, and she could hardly wait!

Later that night, in front of the fire, Goov called the spirits to attend the manhood ceremony. With Grev beside him as acolyte, surrounded by the protective totem spirits, Goov raised the ceremonial knife and looked Durc directly in the face. It was time for him to carve the totem mark into the young man’s flesh. Durc looked at the mog-ur without fear. He had seen this many times in his young life; he knew what was coming. Standing tall, he waited for the cut.

Moving Durc’s wrap aside, Goov made the four curved cuts into his thigh that symbolized the strong teeth of the Gray Wolf. He was forever marked as being protected by that fearless animal. Grev held out the bowl of salve made from the antiseptic ashes of the ash tree, which Goov smeared into the wounds, blackening the marks.

The men quietly sat down after the conclusion of the ceremony to eat the celebratory food, their usually ebullient mood made more somber by the fact that they were out on the plains, alone, away from the rest of the clan. They ate the delicious food their women had made for them with half a heart, knowing that in a day they would be heading back to the cave and to whatever punishment may come.



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