Megan Williams

I'd first like to thank Megan for submitting this song, hopefully she'll send more in the future(hint,hint). I've seen many songs and this one is a great example of how a verse should be structured, I'll tell you why:

Each verse relates back to the main focus of the thought, My Angel. There's coherence from one verse to the next(something you'd see in poetry) and it's done in a very simple manner. That's right I said simple ;-)

Simple is sometimes the best option. Megans use of generalization makes it not only easier to understand, but leaves room for personal interpretation. You don't have to cloud cover a thought, just because you think it needs to be done. Just make your point, in a simple, coherent, well thought out process. Megan knows this, and she shows it off very well.

Give us some feedback, enjoy ;-)

My Angel

Megan Williams

My angel

Come out and play

It's not cruel outside

In the world today

My angel

Won't you smile for once

You're suppose to be this great role model

Instead you turn our smiles to dust

Making us want to cry

My angel

What you want to be real

Is only pretend

And what you hope to pretend

Is just way too real

Wha ho ho hoa hoa

oo oo ooo oo, oo oo oo ooo

Please come back

My angel please don't shed a tear

Everything

Is going

To be

Alright

(copyright 1999 Angelmuzic Music)

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