The Coach's Son

by

Tarl N. Telford

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FADE IN:

EXT HANNIGAN HOUSE - ESTABLISHING

The Hannigans live in a clean neighborhood in the middle-sized town of Saltville.

INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - EVENING

CHRIS HANNIGAN (17 yrs) is a determined, hardworking athlete. He plays the second-string tailback position on the football team at school - The Saltville Wolverines.

Chris stalks down the HALL, followed closely by his mother, MARGARET HANNIGAN (39 yrs), an even-tempered and dedicated housewife.

CHRIS

No, I will not watch Mattie again. Get Jen to do it.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

She's busy tonight. Chris, your father and I have been planning this for over a month now.

CHRIS

Then you should have gotten another baby-sitter.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

You said you would do it.

CHRIS

Well I'm busy.

Chris slams the door to his bedroom. Margaret glares at the door for a moment, starts to say something else, thinks better of it, and just walks away.

INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUING

Margaret walks into the living room. Her husband, TODD HANNIGAN (42 yrs), a strong, robust man, slightly graying, but still full of life, reads his newspaper. He sets it down when Margaret walks in.

Margaret sits down on the arm of Todd's recliner.

TODD HANNIGAN

What was that all about?

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Chris won't watch Mattie.

TODD HANNIGAN

I should go talk to him.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

I don't want him to get mad.

TODD HANNIGAN

He's got to realize that I'm the head of this house.

Todd gets up and walks down the hallway.

INT CHRIS' BEDROOM - CONTINUING

Chris' room is decorated in the standard male teenage fashion. Football posters line the walls. Several football trophies lie half-covered in dirty clothing. Sports magazines litter the floor.

Chris lies on his bed, reading a bodybuilding magazine. There is KNOCK at his door. Chris scowls and puts down his magazine.

CHRIS

What do you want?

Todd opens the door and enters.

TODD HANNIGAN

We need to talk.

Todd gestures to the edge of Chris' bed. Chris ignores him, so Todd sits down anyway.

TODD HANNIGAN

Well?

CHRIS

Talk. I'm here.

TODD HANNIGAN

You upset your mother.

CHRIS

So? What about me? What about my plans?

TODD HANNIGAN

You told us you would watch Mattie this evening.

CHRIS

That was a long time ago. Me and Gene were going to get together.

TODD HANNIGAN

You knew about this social. Why did you make other plans?

Chris starts reading his magazine again, rudely ignoring his father.

CHRIS

Maybe I forgot.

TODD HANNIGAN

Yeah, well maybe you can forget taking the car out this weekend.

Todd gets up and closes the door. Chris scowls first, then anger sets in, and he hurls his magazine across the room.

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INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

The doorbell RINGS. Margaret answers the door. There stands LAURA BITTERS (15 yrs). Laura wears baggy jeans and a comic book hero T-shirt. Her hair is pulled back in a ponytail. She carries a backpack slung over one shoulder.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Ah, Laura, I'm glad you could make it.

LAURA

No problem. Is it all right if I leave my bike in front?

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Sure. Mattie's in the rec room.

Laura immediately heads back to the rec room. Todd enters the living room, dressed in a nice shirt and tie.

TODD HANNIGAN

Well, now that she's here, shall we get going?

MARGARET HANNIGAN

What about Chris?

TODD HANNIGAN

He'll leave when he feels like it. I really don't think talking to him again is going to do any good. Not tonight, anyway.

Margaret heads back to the rec room.

INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - REC ROOM - CONTINUING

Toys of all kinds fill boxes and cover shelves. A television in the corner plays a Disney movie. There's no one in the room.

Two large boxes on one side of the room have blankets covering their open tops.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Hmm, where could they be? I know Mattie was in here just a minute ago.

One of the boxes starts giggling.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

And I'm sure I saw Laura come in here, too. Where could they be?

Margaret looks inside the VCR.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

They're not in the VCR. Maybe they're under the couch.

Margaret looks behind the couch. The giggling box shakes even more.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

I hear Mattie, but I don't see him. Where could he be?

MATTIE HANNIGAN (16 yrs), pops up out of his hiding place in the box. Mattie is mentally challenged. He is at the developmental level of a five-year old child. Nevertheless, he is all smiles.

MATTIE

Here I am!

MARGARET HANNIGAN

There you are.

Laura tips her box over. Mattie and Margaret look at each other and point to the box, saying silently, "Let's get her." Mattie sneaks beside the box.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Where's Laura? Mattie, have you seen Laura?

Mattie giggles. He pulls the blanket off Laura's box.

LAURA

You found me, Mattie.

MATTIE

I found you.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Laura, we're going to go now. Julie's asleep already. She shouldn't be any problem. Chris is going out this evening; I don't know when he's leaving. Do you have any questions?

LAURA

No, we should be fine, Mrs. Hannigan.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

You're a life saver, Laura.

LAURA

You can tell by the hole in my head.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

We're at the church if there's any problems. The number is by the phone. We'll be back by eleven.

LAURA

Okay.

Margaret hugs and kisses Mattie.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Bye, Mattie, we'll be back later, okay? I love you.

MATTIE

Okay.

Margaret walks through the house to the living room. Mattie follows her. Laura tags along behind.

INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUING

Todd holds out Margaret's coat and helps her put it on.

TODD HANNIGAN

Thanks for doing this, Laura.

LAURA

No problem. Jen had a date tonight.

MATTIE

What? Where's Jenny?

LAURA

She went out to the movies - with a boy!

Laura and Mattie feign disgust.

LAURA AND MATTIE

Eeew!

TODD HANNIGAN

Be good, Mattie.

Todd yells down the hallway to Chris' room.

TODD HANNIGAN

We're leaving, Chris!

Chris bangs once on the wall in anger.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

He's mad, isn't he?

TODD HANNIGAN

He'll be fine. We've got to go.

MARGARET HANNIGAN

Bye bye, love you.

MATTIE

Bye bye, love you.

LAURA

Have fun, Mr. and Mrs. Hannigan.

Todd and Margaret close the door behind them.

MATTIE

I got a new toy.

LAURA

Ooh, show me.

Mattie takes Laura by the hand and leads her excitedly toward the rec room.

CUT TO:

INT CHRIS' BEDROOM - NIGHT

Chris continues to fume about his parents' "ignorance" of important things - like letting him take the car on Friday.

Chris' friend, GENE, drives up outside and honks the horn.

Chris looks out the window to see who it is. Chris grabs a jacket, his baseball cap, and slams his door behind him as he exits.

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INT HANNIGAN HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUING

Mattie and Laura are in the adjoining kitchen, making peanut butter sandwiches.

Chris opens the front door to leave. Mattie walks into the living room, his face messy with peanut butter.

MATTIE

Bye bye, love you.

Chris stiffens and stops for a moment, then he exits and closes the door behind him.

Laura moves to stand next to Mattie.

MATTIE

He didn't say bye.

LAURA

Maybe he didn't hear you, Mattie. Come one, no eating in the living room.

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EXT HANNIGAN HOUSE - CONTINUING

EUGENE "GENE" COCKERELL (18 yrs) is a stout, but not quite pudgy, offensive lineman. He is laid back and easy going, but has a definite moral code.

Gene waits in his battered pickup truck. He sings to himself, unaware that Chris is watching him.

GENE

(singing)

So tell me what you want, what you really really want.

When Chris gets to the door, Gene quickly pulls a cassette tape out of the tape deck.

GENE

Oh, hi, Chris. How's it going?

Chris climbs in and slams the door.

CHRIS

What were you singing?

Gene hides the cassette behind him.

GENE

Um, nothing. Humming, maybe, but singing...

CHRIS

What's that behind your back?

GENE

It's nothing. Hey, what do you say we get going? The guys are waiting.

Chris snatches the cassette from behind Gene. He looks at it.

CHRIS

Spice Girls? Come on, Gene.

GENE

It's my sister's.

CHRIS

She's two.

GENE

Okay, you found me out. I admit, I like the Spice Girls.

CHRIS

What's up with that? Gene, you're like the biggest guy on the team. You can't be listening to this stuff.

GENE

Why? You think it'll make me look like a wuss? Well, if liking the music of five gorgeous girls makes me a wimp, then sign me up.

CHRIS

There's only four of them now.

GENE

In my heart, there's always five.

CHRIS

Whatever. What are we doing tonight?

Gene pulls out into the street.

GENE

We thought we'd do something fun before school starts again.

CUT TO:

EXT DRIVE IN THEATER - NIGHT

Gene's truck pulls into the drive in. Several cars are parked along the back row. Gene pulls in right next to them.

CHRIS

The movie doesn't start for an hour.

GENE

Relax, Chris. We're just going to hang out.

Gene gets out and walks to another pickup truck. Two other big linemen, PUDGE and VINCENT chug lemon-lime sodas. Pudge's real name is Francis Jackson, but everyone has called him Pudge since childhood.

GENE

Vincent, Pudge, we made it.

VINCENT

It's about time, Gene. We were about to drink these last two.

Pudge hands the last two sodas to Gene.

GENE

Lemon lime? What, couldn't handle caffeine tonight?

PUDGE

Nah, man, keeps me awake. We'll stick with the good stuff.

Gene calls back to Chris. He holds up the sodas.

GENE

Come on, Chris, we've got the good stuff!

Chris takes one of the sodas.

CHRIS

Pudge. Vincent. Hey, where's everyone else?

Pudge gestures to the other cars.

PUDGE

Phillip's sleeping there. Guess he had a big day at work.

VINCENT

Like bagging groceries is hard work.

PUDGE

Everyone else went to get some grub for this movie.

CHRIS

So, you guys ready to start practice tomorrow?

GENE

Practice, yes. School, no. We're gonna have a great season. Us on the line, you in the backfield. It's gonna be great.

VINCENT

There's still Scott to think about.

GENE

Chris can take him.

PUDGE

I don't know. He's been in the weight room every day this summer. I saw him last week benching three fifty!

CHRIS

He probably had a strong spotter.

VINCENT

Nah, man, he was alone. And he was doing it for reps!

GENE

Get out. Nobody's that strong.

PUDGE

I heard from some of the guys that he's been juicing up.

Pudge pantomimes sticking a needle in his arm.

CHRIS

Steroids?

PUDGE

I haven't seen it. That's just what I've heard.

GENE

You can take him, Chris. You've got the talent.

Several more cars pull into the drive in. They all park by the group. More greetings are called. Sodas are tossed to empty hands. This is the last night before school starts again.

CUT TO:

EXT SALTVILLE HIGH SCHOOL - MORNING

Students pour in for the first day of school. Gene pulls up in his pickup. Chris is waiting for him in the parking lot.

EXT SALTVILLE HIGH SCHOOL - PARKING LOT - CONTINUING

Gene stifles a yawn as he pulls his backpack out of the truck.

CHRIS

What time did you get to bed, Gene?

GENE

I stayed up for another couple of hours after we got done. There was this really cheesy movie on cable.

Chris gestures to Gene's backpack.

CHRIS

You're not actually taking Senior year seriously, are you?

GENE

No way. This is my lunch.

Gene pulls a pencil from his back pocket.

GENE

Got everything I need right here.

Chris and Gene walk toward the buildings.

GENE

So is your dad still making you ride with him?

CHRIS

Yeah. He says it's some family bonding thing. But he's too busy keeping Mattie buckled in to talk to me.

Laura walks up to Chris. Her older sister, JEN (18 yrs), a gorgeous redhead, follows close behind. Jen is one of the managers for the football team. She's a friend to everyone who needs one.

LAURA

Hey, Chris, we missed you last night.

CHRIS

Oh, yeah, I had something to do. Hi, Jen.

JEN

Hey, Chris. I stopped by your house last night, but Laura said you'd gone out.

CHRIS

Yeah, me and some of the guys got together.

GENE

Real manly hair-on-the-chest kind of stuff.

LAURA

I heard they went to the drive in and had a burping contest.

CHRIS

No, of course not. We're not that shallow.

GENE

Yes we are.

JEN

It's all right. I was going to ask you if you and Mattie wanted to go with us to Sunny's this weekend.

Shouts ring out from inside the building. People rush inside. The crowds are chanting, "Fight, fight".

Police cars and an ambulance pull up outside the school.

CHRIS

What's going on?

GENE

Excuse us.

Gene and Chris push their way through the crowd.

INT SALTVILLE HIGH SCHOOL - HALLWAY - CONTINUING

SCOTT POWERS (18 yrs), a mountain of muscle and athleticism, is going berserk. He swings at everyone that comes within arm's length.

Todd Hannigan pushes his way through the crowd on the other side. He tries vainly to calm Scott down.

TODD HANNIGAN

Scott, now just settle down.

SCOTT POWERS

Who told him! WHO TOLD HIM!

TODD HANNIGAN

Once you settle down, we can discuss this rationally.

Scott charges at Todd, knocking him back against the wall. He punches Todd in the face.

Gene jumps out into the fray.

GENE

Coach!

Gene pulls Scott off of Todd Hannigan. Gene throws Scott back into the wall. Scott glares at Gene with a mix of hatred and rage.

SCOTT POWERS

You're in on this, too, aren't you EUGENE?

GENE

Just settle down, Scott. I don't know what's going on, but I'm sure there's a logical explanation.

SCOTT POWERS

They cut me from the team!

Chris steps out to try to help. Scott turns to glare at Chris.

SCOTT POWERS

It was you, wasn't it, Hannigan? You wanted my position, so you told them.

CHRIS

I didn't tell them anything, Scott.

SCOTT POWERS

You told them I was using steroids, didn't you? I'll kill you!

Scott lunges at Chris, but Gene steps in the way and completely wraps Scott up in a confining bear hug.

SCOTT POWERS

I'll kill you!

Todd rushes in to help wrestle Scott to the ground.

TODD HANNIGAN

Get him down on the ground.

SCOTT POWERS

Get off me!

Todd, Chris, and Gene pin Scott to the ground. Two police officers push their way through the crowd. Paramedics are right behind them. Todd points the paramedics to Coach Williamson.

TODD HANNIGAN

Back there, in the athletic office. Coach Williams is down. I think he might have a broken jaw.

The paramedics head for the athletic office. The police slap handcuffs on Scott Powers. They pull him to his feet. Scott lashes out and kicks Chris in the stomach. Chris doubles over in pain.

SCOTT POWERS

I'll get you, Hannigan. You and your whole family!

Chris slowly gets up. Todd helps his son to his feet.

TODD HANNIGAN

Are you okay, Son?

CHRIS

I'm fine.

GENE

That's a nasty cut there, Coach.

TODD HANNIGAN

I'll be fine, Gene. I can't say the same for Coach Williams, though.

GENE

What happened?

The crowd begins dispersing.

TODD HANNIGAN

Coach Williamson caught Scott in the weight room popping some pills - steroids. They went back to the athletic office, and I guess Scott just snapped.

The paramedics push their way through the thinning crowd. COACH TOM WILLIAMSON (50's), a slim, graying man, lies unconscious on the stretcher. His face is puffy and swollen.

PARAMEDIC

Out of the way! We need room!

TODD HANNIGAN

Is he going to be all right?

PARAMEDIC

I hope so.

The paramedics push Coach Williamson out the door and to the ambulance.

GENE

I hope so, too.

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