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Send any reviews to rebornflame@hotmail.com and I will post them here.
Reviews for 'The Monkeys Paw'
ror: Brilliant!
I love the paragraphing too.
Reviews for 'Heroes of Might and Magic'
Wanting But Not Knowing: wow i like it a lot!! and i definitely admire you for using the rhyme scheme you did, cuz i can't rhyme that well. the only thing i would say is watch how many syllables you use in each line. if you want to rhyme a poem, then i think the syllables should be close in number so it sounds like it should rhyme when you're reading it. i have yet to perfect that talent, so i completely understand. all in all, i really like it though.
Reviews for 'Rain'
Punky Monkey: Good poem, the comparison betweem a rainstorm and your life works well. Keep writing :) .
Reviews for 'I Dreamed'.
Punky Monkey: Either im not a depressed person *cough* or this wasnt THAT depressing i dont think you needa public health warning on it anyway. On to the review... This is a really good poem i enjoyed reading it (- now im sure u didnt think people would ENJOY reading it) hehe it flows well and i like the way you start off with long lines then finish with single words its asthough you're fading away. Very well written.. :D Do what you do and do it always..
Just a note to Punky Monkey, the warning was suposedly a joke and it was one of my friends who wanted me to put it on.
Also I would like to thank everyone who has sent in reviews.
Don't forget, if you want your work posted on the site then send it to phoenixrising@rebornflames.tk or to rebornflame@hotmail.com
Well thats all for now.
Ttyl, Phoenix.
