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Murderous Criminal Enterprise Belle's favorite weapon is her weight!

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A meddlesome computer programmer battles a murderous criminal enterprise!
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A Funny Legal Thriller by BG
But will it be enough when everyone else has guns?


RUTGER'S DREAM


Rutger was lying on the camera blanket inside a cave, watching through the cave entrance. Bobbing on the surface of the sea outside was a small round object. It was getting bigger. He thought it must be approaching the cave entrance.

The sea had penetrated into the cave, forming a lagoon that looked like a large indoor pool and left only a narrow pebbly edge by the gray, jagged rock walls. In his small corner across from the cave entrance, Rutger's head pushed against a large boulder and his legs stuck halfway out of the short blanket, almost touching the water. Every so often, a small ridge of water traveled over the smooth, dark-green surface of the lagoon, rolled up the pebbles, and splashed his feet.

It was quiet except for swishing sounds of water. A droplet of condensation fell from the ceiling into the lagoon, making a tiny splatter on the surface, and concentric circles rippled out. Then another one. He wondered how he could see so clearly in the dark and decided there must be a light source under the lagoon. Yes, that must be it. Occasionally, bright green lights flashed under the surface.

He tried to keep his eyes on the cave entrance as he rearranged his aching body. The pebbles he lay on were jabbing through the thin blanket into his back, jabbing, jabbing into his shoulder blades.

Then the bobbing object reached the cave entrance and became the head of a person swimming. The shape swam into the lagoon. He couldn't see the face, but he thought it was a woman. She was doing a methodical free-style, her feet beating the water with swift narrow kicks. Every two crawls, she turned her head to breathe and short hair fell all over her face.

When the swimmer reached the shallows, she rose out of the water, crystal droplets draining down her hair and face, and stood for a moment with the water at her chest level, her wide swimmer's shoulders and the tops of her breasts shining like white marble in the eerie light. Then she started walking toward him and her body came out of the water with each step, revealing the round breasts that gently moved up and down as she moved, the narrow waist, full round hips, powerful swimmer's legs. She was wearing a small, black two-piece bathing suit, and he could see the strength in her body, covered all over with a smooth layer of muscle that moved with tiny, almost imperceptible ripples under her soft, white skin.

Only when the strange light from the lagoon illuminated her face, did he recognize Belle. He stared, surprised, because he had never seen Belle without her clothes on. But her body looked as he had, countless times, imagined it would look.

Unsmiling, she approached, her feet in the shallow water up to her ankles, creating v-shaped wakes, and water droplets rolling down her body, making detours around rounded hills of flesh they encountered, trying to go down in a straight line.

She stood above him and looked down and he couldn't move or get up. His arms and legs felt like lead. He could hear his own blood rushing through his veins. He tried to speak, but had no voice. Helpless, he lay looking up at her, searching for a sign of recognition in her face.

And then she was out of her bathing suit and on top of him, gripping his hips with her powerful legs and bending over him, her face close to his. He tried to ignore his heart trying to burst out of his chest and buried his face into her neck, inhaling her skin and forgetting the time and the place. As violent explosions cascaded through his body, he was thrown into the lagoon, seeing, as he slowly submerged, a whole underwater cityscape of crystal buildings and emerald lights streaming by, until there was blissful nothingness.

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I have posted this excerpt from my upcoming legal thriller, Squeezing Belle, in the hopes of getting feedback and criticism from fellow readers and writers. Help shape a work in progress! Send me a note. Be brutal! BG.
 
 

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