product
tv ad [storyboard]

creative director
boy leuterio
richard yang

original storyboard
art director

bernie asis

writer
boy leuterio (basically the ad concept,
     with a little help from "full metal jacket")
jojo soria de veyra ("ready to quit" ["sympathize?"
     in military jargon] and "give me ten push-ups"
     ending, and comic personality/accent of
     character)
richard yang (serious personality -- and
     uniform -- of character, with a little help
     from "an officer and a gentleman"}

director
angelo madrid

client
camel

 


 

"sgt. rock," tvc 30 seconds

writer's note: the ad's basic idea was outgoing (resigned) CD Boy Leuterio's, inspired by the movie "Full Metal Jacket" he saw on cable the night previous. But being Boy's new writer at copy, I guess I had a few basic contributions to this ad. One was collaborating on the ending "ready to quit" which was partly inspired by what I remember from ROTC -- when a commandant there asks us to do twenty push-ups and soon follows it up with the classic question "what, sympathize?" (sic). [Actually they pronounce it as "simpatise"]. Our team's art director, Bernie, probably initiated it with the notion that it might be best to have the man falling off from standing instead of from the outgoing (resigned) CD Boy's original idea of the sarge sitting in front of the fan on a table, his head falling down on the table.
     Also, I thought casting must consider comicality as crucial to the ad. This somehow conflicted with Catalytx president Richard's favor for the American drill sergeant's uniform (which I initially thought was for comical impact). I thought this lessened the desire for a comical face. Later I concurred, after discussing with Boy and production head Robert Harn and arriving at the comic virtue of combining serious/"pogi" personality and a flaw. I thought the flaw must be in the accent. Somewhere along the way, the accent was again lessened, purportedly for clarity's sake. I threw in the towel.
     Finally, I thought the slogan too competition-taunting, so I turned it into the merely self-aware but strongly-claiming final slogan "Tibay-Tested" (which incidentally aptly rhymed with the thought "torture-tested").

 



 

 

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