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Thag enters the Consortium | Thag
enters the Merchants hall | Thag's Apprenticeship
Thag enters the Consortium
Thag nodded his head up and down, vigorously agreeing to the deal.
"Oh, yes yes Thag thank you for trade. Thank you, sir. Thag
needed that. Good man is kind to Thag." He repeated his obeisances
over and over, making sure that the merchant whom he was dealing
with got the full Thull experience. Then, Thag walked away - about
thirty silver less wealthy according to the Murgo's perceptions
anyway - with about two more gold than he had had in his pocket
that very morning. The half-Nadrak's appearance as a full-blooded
Thull gave him a significant advantage over either of his bloods.
Speaking in broken English put any other merchant at ease, thinking
Thag to be an idiot and an easy con, and making them overlook Thag's
sharp Nadrak mind. He had become a modestly wealthy independent
merchant in only a couple years by exploiting stereotypes in this
way.
He turned around, with a large grin on his face and a coin rolling
between his fingers, to come face to face with an intimidating-looking
Mallorean. He immediately resumed his look of stupidity. "Sir,
can I help you sir?"
"Hah! You may fool those two-bit shysters that you're an idiot,
but your accounts can't long fool those who are in a real business."
"Sir, what do you mean, sir?" Thag asked, and was met
with a sudden slap. As a Thull, it was less to hurt him than to
provoke. "What the hell was that for?!" Thag slipped in
his anger. The Mallorean replied,
"Thag, do not assume that I am an idiot. I already told you,
we know that you are not an idiot, so kindly give me the same courtesy.
You're a rising merchant, and we have a use for you."
"Who the hell is 'we'? And why in hell should I give you any
of my time? If this scene goes on any longer, you'll ruin my racket."
Thag looked around with anger at the staring eyes.
"You should give us your time, because you don't want to play
this game anymore. You don't want your racial appearance to keep
you down any longer. Come with us, Thag. We care not for the color
of your skin, merely the yellow of the gold you reap. We can free
you from your need for verbal chicanery and instead we will respect
for the mind you have, not rewarded for the show."
"So who the hell is 'we'?"
"Come, let me introduce you to some members of the Consortium."
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Thag enters the Merchants clan
hall
Rolling along in the back of a cart headed for Boktor, Thag was
moderately surprised by the lack of evil looks he received from
the Drasnian peasants in the countryside. He knew enough, and had
had enough practice, to look like a normal thick-witted Thull, his
gaze holding onto nothing and hands blindly working, in order to
keep people from noticing him. He was still surprised, though, at
how fully invisible his race was to these Alorns, by how much those
considered disabled were invisible to all people regardless of race.
Thag had perhaps betrayed himself by slipping too wholly into his
role, as startled as he was when, just inside the gate to the Merchants
clan hall, the driver had to snap in his face to pull him out of
his reverie. "We're here, we are. Get out." Thag wordlessly
removed himself from the cart and walked through the gate of the
Merchants clan hall. He supposed that other people might be impressed
by the ostentatious presentation of riches, but Thag had early learned
that appearances could be deceiving. People could inherit the fruits
of their parents and then be rotten mentally inside, an inverse
parellel to Thag, who had received only a blunt exterior from his
parents, belying a keen mind inside.
So he walked in and a Nadrak porter led him into the lounge to await
whom- ever would come to interview him, and to set him up with a
mentor. As he waited, carefully evaluating his surroundings, a Sendarian
Lady came into the room, and he quickly averted his eyes in order
to play dumb again, to be humble in her presence. Footsteps padded
over to him, however, and she placed a hand on his chin to lift
it to look at her. Suddenly, Thag was truly afraid for the first
time in his life, as one person looked through his disguise so quickly.
Then, she spoke -
She said, 'Thag, I take it, I'm Chyre.' She looked him up and down.
'Yes, well, I was told you were coming. Follow me and I’ll
show you to your quarters.' He wordlessly followed her, his angst
showing clearly on his face. Lady Chyre said, 'and don’t look
so surprised. We're used to clever ones here.' she said, smiling.
'I'm sorry, mad-... mistr-... Lady. I just... please forgive my
insubordination.' Thag mentally kicked himself for getting caught
up again in his Thullish acting... perhaps he'd played the part
one too many times, he began to think. Perhaps this truly was auspicious
for him to come here, and stop having to act. 'Lady, it's just that
you surprised me... I'm not used to being picked out like that.'
She replied, 'It was no real trick Thag, We don't get many Thulls
through here and I knew you'd be here around this time.' Her eyes
glittered as she continued, 'plus the description I got from your
recruiter included a sketch.' She chuckled. 'Of course, I should
have known. So what do you people plan to do with me, anyway?' She
ignored his question, and instead answered, 'Come, let me show you
around, you'll soon settle in, we have plenty of room for a young
man of your talent.'
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Thag's Apprenticeship
In Boktor, Thag began to learn things. Real merchant things, none
of this mere shyster crap. His days of being a con-man were soon
to be over. He took classes on how to properly appraise gems, and
learned how to verify weights of metals against their purity and
worth. Endless days were spent being sent into the markets of Boktor
and told to come back at the end of day a certain amount of money
richer. Thag took it all in stride, knowing in his mind that this
was the training which he required, which would raise him above
being a petty wares dealer to being true merchant amassing true
riches and prestige, but still it chafed at his heart and festered
in his soul to have to do such menial tasks, day in and day out.
"Thag, this rug is not of the quality which was requested."
"Excuse me? You requested a rug worth approximately seventy
silver." "And you failed to get it." "Excuse
me? That is worth at least seventy-fi-" Thag burst out, when
his mentor interrupted him, "it's not about the worth, it's
about the color! You failed, Thag! I requested a maroon and gold
rug, and this is cherry and canary." "Have you turned
into a woman overnight," Thag asked the elder merchant, "the
colors will work fine for whatever you intend, they're close enough,
they're just colors! Stop sending me on stupid errands to memorize
colors! Stop treating me as a slave Thull to be sent about on your
tasks. I am no such Thull, and I'm sick of your tasks and your mindless
memorization. I'm going to leave here and pack up my belongings.
I'm through." "Stop! It isn't about the colors, and you
know it! It's about getting your customer a product, a product which
they requested, and doing it right." Thag did stop in the doorway,
listening. "You walk out that door, you aren't coming back.
You stay here, and you'll get the skills you need to become a real
merchant. You leave, and you'll never amount to anything more than
a petty peddler, an evader of the Grolims, just delaying your time
before the knife."
Thag straightened up, ramrod straight, and said, "I’ll
have you that maroon and gold rug tomorrow. Don't worry about the
cost, it won't net me a loss." He then turned and bowed a challenge
while making a quick rude hand gesture, and stalked out of the room.
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