From Reference - Female, angle, with expression

From one of the magazine I use from references I saw this smaller picture of a woman in a Guess advert I think it was. I quite liked the expression she had and tried to draw it. Because of my inexperience with angular views, and inexperience in general, I didn't quite capture the expression as I would have liked too. Also, the strokes are pretty ugly and spoils the picture as a whole. This was however the first non-assigment piece that I did - just like that, out of my own free will - what a great student.