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Those of you who know me will know that I broke my ankle in October and had to have my leg in plaster for four weeks. Al though now I was exaggerating the situation at the time I thought that it was a major problem.
I could walk properly, never mind play football! At the hospital I had a fairly long wait so I wrote a story while I was there. I did have this page with a white background to give you the feel of a hospital but it was getting to depressing so I changed it back.

Waiting
George was bored. He'd been here for about two and half hours and was still waiting for the doctor.
Everyone had been very helpful. The paramedics who had come in the ambulance and took him to hospital. One was a tall thin man with a bushy moustache wearing a bright green luminous coat. The other man who was the driver was a short bulky man with little hair which was grey.
People had gathered around wondering what had happened and were relieved when they found out what had happened wasn't very serious.
The porter who had been pushing him around the hospital from place to place. First to X-ray then back to the main corridor where he lay in his bed. The porter was a big bulky man with a small amount of teeth and a bald head.
The nurse who had attended to him. She was tall and very slim. She had long blond hair which was tied in a ponytail and crystal blue eyes. She had taken his blood pressure and checked his pulse. Luckily everything was normal.
The hospital was experiencing difficult times. With a lot of patients and very little doctors and nurses the patients were being made to wait roughly five hours before their treatment was finished and made to go home.
A tall black man had walked into the hospital. George didn't know what was going on but he threatened a nurse and pushed her out of the way when she wouldn't move. Thankfully the nurse was OK and security pushed the man out of the hospital.
George recalled the incident which had got him into this situation in the first place. His ankle was throbbing. A razor sharp pain was running through his ankle every now and again. He grinded his teeth to try and stop the pain. It didn't work as the pain continued to persist. He closed his eyes and within a couple of minutes the pain was relinquished. For now.
He looked around him at the other patients. A man had come in and vomited violently all over the floor. George had closed his eyes to try and block out the noise of the man. He stomach felt like it was in knots and he thought he was going to throw up for a minute but managed to keep it in somehow. A man in a neck brace was talking to a couple of people, he couldn't look at them because all he could look at was the ceiling.
"Can I just move you into a room?" George looked up. He looked up at the woman who had interrupted his thoughts. It was another nurse. She had short black hair which was combed to one side and dark brown eyes. George nodded his head slowly and the nurse carefully pushed his bed into a private room which had a blue curtain draped around it.
He hated the hospital. Not because it reminded him of death or agony. It was just the colour everywhere he looked all he could see was white. The walls were white, the ceiling was white, the floor was white. Even most of the nurses were wearing white. It was such a boring colour and there was the smell. The awful antiseptic smell which plagued his nose. He was getting sick of that smell and wished he could somehow block it out.
He didn't know how they did it. The nurses, the porters, the doctors. He looked around once more and saw people vomiting, coughing and heaving. There were people moaning and groaning in pain and distress. This was not a career George wanted to pursue. He wouldn't be able to take it. He'd only been here a day and he wanted out. To get out. Leave. Break free. He just wished they'd attend to his ankle and then he'd go. Never come back. Hopefully.
He recalled the incident that had brought him here again. He'd kill him. It was all his fault. George was faultless. If he hadn't... If he'd been more careful... If....
He glanced around again and realised how lucky he was. It was only his ankle. It wasn't anything too serious. He saw a man with a very bloody leg. Another man looked as though his face had been crushed. There were bruises all over him.
The paramedic had guessed that his ankle was fractured . His right ankle had swelled up it was as if someone had inflated a balloon from the inside of his ankle.
The incident had happened almost four hours ago at 6:30pm. It was all his fault. When George got out of here he vowed he would kick his ass.
George had gone in for the cross. He had kicked the ball with his left foot before the flying foot had come in and smashed up his right ankle. He'd barely limped home and after his mum had examined his leg she'd decided to call the ambulance. It came within twenty minutes and in another twenty minutes he had been admitted to hospital.
George was still bored. The sixteen year old boy looked in the mirror. His thick black hair was ruffled and he felt very tired. He was also hungry but at 10:30pm the hospital shop was closed. The doctor still hadn't arrived.
"I must be patient." muttered George. He laughed at his bad joke. How many times had he heard that before?
George closed his eyes and fell asleep, hoping then when he awoke, none of this had ever happened.

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